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Devin Jimenez
25 April 2020
Imagine planet Earth is no longer inhabitable. Our species can no longer survive the
conditions on it. How could we make sure the human species can continue to survive? This idea
was once a plot for a sci-fi movie, but with new research and technology, a possible destination
for us would be Mars. Traveling to Mars would provide many benefits. Some of these benefits
include ensuring the survival of humanity, discovering new life, improving our quality of life on
earth, and it would give a huge political, economic advantage to whoever gets there first (Orwig).
Ensuring the survival of humanity is a necessity. One day the earth is going to be
unhabitable or overpopulated so we will need to find a way to make sure our species can survive.
Throughout history, there have been many events that happened that made multiple species go
extinct. The dinosaurs are a perfect example of this. They could not survive the catastrophe that
happened. Something similar could happen to the human species and we would need a plan to
make sure we could survive. That plan would be making Mars a place for humans to live on. If it
were possible to colonize Mars, we would be able to extend our survival for many years to come.
Mars has been chosen because the atmosphere is very similar to Earth’s. We would be able to
adapt easier because one day on Mars is equal to one day on Earth. Scientists have found traces
of water on the surface which makes them believe Mars is more identical to Earth that what was
originally thought. For these reasons, Mars is the top candidate that would help us survive. The
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faster we can study how humans could live there; the better chance we would be able to make
Mars habitual.
getting to Mars would help us learn how to save Earth. Once we got there it would be easier for
us to study the surface and atmosphere. In doing so, we could discover what happened to Mars
and use that information to make sure the same doesn’t happen to Earth. Some of that
information would drastically change life on Earth. It could be anything from helping us stop
pollution or global warming to giving us access to new agriculture and medication resources. It
has been suggested by scientists that these new resources would change our everyday life. In
recent years, NASA has sent automated robots to Mars so they can harvest some of the resources
and to prepare for the arrival of humans. By using this technology, it has been discovered that
Mars already has an abundance of useful resources. One of these resources that was discovered
was silicon dioxide which is used for making glass products such as fiber glass. There have also
been a lot of mineral resources such as iron, titanium, aluminum, sulfur, and calcium that were
discovered. The automated robots sent back information suggesting that food can be produced on
the surface by using an artificial light source. The resources for survival on Mars are there, and
Another benefit of traveling to Mars would be to discover new life forms. Doing this
could answer one of humanities biggest questions about being the only species in space. With the
discovery of water, it is believed that there was life on Mars. According to scientists, the best
place to discover new life would be in water that is underground. Potential life forms could be
there because the underground water would protect them from radiation (Lambright). Another
theory is that the life forms found on Mars could be very similar to what we have on Earth. In
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1996, there was a meteorite that was found in Antarctica that was proven to be from Mars. On
this meteorite scientists claimed that there were traces of life on it. The rock had contained
structures that resembled bacteria-like lifeforms. Finding new life would be a revolutionary
discovery and it would change how we think. It would also open a new set of scientific
questions. Some of these questions would be, is that life similar and related to human species?
The only way to make these revolutionary discoveries is to get on the surface of Mars.
During the Cold War, multiple countries were racing to get to the moon and explore
space. The country that got there first, proved to be more technological advanced than the others.
The same goes for Mars. If a country can get to Mars, it would provide national prosperity and
raise the moral of its citizens. This would make a huge statement that the country is capable of
great things, arguably the greatest achievement in human history. More importantly, it would
dramatically improve the nations outlook and economy. New resources would be introduced
which would provide a numerous amount of benefits for the economy. New and promising
industries would help bring revenue and jobs into the country. It would open the door for new
trades between countries. Even though the country that got to Mars first receives all the praise, it
would help the global economy. Multiple countries would work together and find a way to get
there with the new resources they received. The economic benefits would be never ending.
As with any other expedition, traveling to Mars comes with many risks. Some of these
risks include making sure humans can survive the trip, having precise instruments that will never
malfunction, and most importantly, the cost of the trip. All these risks would vary and be
difficult to prepare for. Even with simulations and multiple exercises, this trip would be very
unpredictable. Many people would argue that the risks are to great for this journey, but there are
The most important thing for this mission to work, would be the survival of the
astronauts. Space travel is compared to hiking Mt Everest. It would be dangerous and very
unpredictable because Mars and space both have unforgivable environments. Every component
of the equipment must function correctly. If something malfunctioned, the consequences would
be deadly. A good example of this would be the Space Shuttle Columbia that disintegrated in the
atmosphere in 2003. Foam insulation on the space craft broke off and caused hot gases to get
inside and destroy the internal wing structure. This made the Columbia unstable and break apart.
In order to avoid fatal catastrophes, properly trained individuals need to be prepared for any
situation. These reasons will make the astronaut selection very difficult. They will need to
undergo multiple tests and simulation exercises. Along with these tests, the individuals will need
need to have at least three years of professional experience or at least one thousand hours of pilot
in command time in a jet aircraft. On top of that the candidate will need to be in excellent shape
and be able to pass NASA’s physical examination. However, even with these requirements, there
are many other skills that can be an asset for being selected. Scuba diving, wilderness and
leadership experience, and being able to speak multiple languages are skills that would be taken
into consideration. Once candidates are selected, they will need to undergo an intense process
before they will be ready for space travel. Some of these processes will include learning how to
spacewalk, how to do robotics, flying airplanes, and operating the International Space Station.
Along with required training, there would be many legal issues as well. The astronauts would
need to sign multiple documents that explain all the risks expected on this journey. They would
not be able to sue the company for any consequence that can happen. For these reasons, finding
the right candidates for this mission will be a big factor for this to be successful.
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Another big factor in going to Mars is the cost. Since 1998, NASA’s budget has
increased by more than fifty two percent (Amadeo). They are funded by the government, but
their budget provides incentives for businesses that partner and support their projects such as,
deep space exploration. A lot of the major projects and missions that NASA has accomplished
have all came from private business funds (Clark). A big supporter of a Mars mission is Space X
founder Elon Musk. He is currently building a spacecraft that will travel to Mars multiple times
so he can send one million people there by 2050. Musk announced that the funds needed for this
will be from a huge public-private partnership, including using his own personal profits. In 2019,
President Trump announced a budget increase of an additional 1.6-billion-dollar fund for NASA
to find ways to travel into deep space (Foust). It is estimated that the cost of sending four people
on a one-way trip to Mars would be roughly 6 billion US dollars (Chang). For every mission
after that, it would cost about 4 billion. All these costs can increase if there are malfunctions or
issues. The costs would always be changing due to the unpredictability of this mission. In order
to get the funds for this, the public will need to be persuaded into supporting a journey to Mars
(Steinburg). The pubic will need convinced that the funds are worth it and that the possibility of
In summary, if you look into the future at all the possibilities from a scientific standpoint,
the pros of going to Mars outweigh the cons. The discoveries that can be found would change
every aspect of life dramatically. It would be the biggest discovery and achievement of all human
history. In history, a lot of the biggest achievements have all included big risks. There are
numerous individuals who are willing to risk in all for the good of mankind. A good example is
there have been two hundred thousand people that have volunteered to join Elon Musk in his
expedition to Mars. These volunteers know the risks, but it isn’t stopping them from signing up
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to go. More recently, getting to Mars has been considered a necessity for the human species to
survive due to the condition Earth is currently headed for. No one has made it to Mars yet, but
with the advancements that have been made in recent years, getting there is very possible within
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