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First Act
Screenwriting II Final Assignment
Will Mun
william_mun@fitnyc.edu
FADE IN:
PASTOR LEE
Girls, stop running or else!
PATOR LEE
Stop squirming.
CINDY
Sorry, Papa.
CHURCHGOER
Are you alright, sweetheart?
JEANNIE
The devil is behind you.
JEANNIE
The devil's behind you! The devil's
behind you! The devil's behind you!
Cindy and Sylvia are pulled aside from the scene by the
elderly churchgoer. Sylvia protests, reaching for Jeannie.
Cindy stares at her eldest sister's face as she starts
foaming from the mouth on the floor.
CINDY
(speaking into radio)
606 to dispatch, 10-51s by Lake
Serena, suspects are Caucasian teens,
probably 14 to 19.
CINDY
Suspects include Wilkes' kid.
DISPATCHER
Copy, 606. And go easy on him.
CINDY
I always do.
Cindy gets out of the car and strides towards the boys.
TEEN 1
Oh shit it's Cindy! Cindy! Cindy!
ALL
Cindy! Cindy! Cindy!
CINDY
C'mon boys, let's get this wrapped up.
TEEN 2
Still don't trust us?
TEEN 1
C'mon, have a swig with us. I bet
you're not as much of a prude as you
let on.
CINDY
And you're as much of a dumbass as I
thought you were. Guess we just love
disappointing each other. Alright,
everyone get outta here.
(to Patrick)
And you, you're coming with me.
As the boys get up and leave, they tease and shoulder punch a
still expressionless Patrick trudging his way to Cindy.
CINDY
You're really scraping the bottom of
the barrel by hanging out with them.
CINDY
You know it's not safe to be out this
late... Your uncle's been worried
about you.
PATRICK
Please. Don't mention him.
CINDY
It's been hard for him too, y'know.
Everyone's been missing them-
PATRICK
You really suck at trying to make
people feel better, so just stop. Just
please.
(beat)
You don't get it anyway.
CINDY
Trust me, kid. I do.
CINDY
He wasn't doing anything stupid. He
was probably the smartest one there.
GERRY
(sighing)
Come in, I'll fetch you some coffee.
CINDY
Thanks.
GERRY
Have you heard from Monte what Mrs.
Jung reported today?
CINDY
No.
GERRY
She said she saw her daughter again.
Not like how we found her. She said
she saw her in her white nursing
uniform by her house.
Beat.
GERRY (CONT'D.)
She said she was as real as me or you.
Looked perfectly fine. Jung tried to
reach for her but she ran off. Poor
woman tripped on her cane just trying
to grab her.
CINDY
Well what do you think?
GERRY
I think she's in the deep end. We all
grieve differently. Pat found out
about Jung's girl pretty much right
after us.
CINDY
What?
GERRY
Rumors spread fast in Starborne, Lee.
People love sharing what's none of
their business.
GERRY
I shouldn't remind that poor kid of
her. It hurts me enough, I can't
imagine what it's like for him.
CINDY
We'll find her.
GERRY
She's either dead or alive. Barely.
Barely alive.
CINDY
Steph's a fighter. She can handle
anything. I mean, she dealt with you
her entire life, right?
GERRY
(smirking)
Watch it, Lee... I just wish I
remembered what I said to her the last
time. Just in case it's something that
I want to remember. You never
know...you never know what the last
thing you'll say to a person is.
Cindy looks down and grabs Gerry's hand. She gives him a
conflicted smile.
From the corner of her eye, she sees her phone tempting her.
Her fixed gaze on the road falters as she lowers the radio
and plays two voicemails left by Jeannie.
JEANNIE (V.O.)
(softly)
I heard you found her! I didn't see
her dead, so. I'm sorry. I got a new
fortune for you. I dreamt that Sylvie
and I were on those old fighter planes
again. Except you were there too. You
were finally flying! Except...you were
a goose, and Sylvie was shooting at
you. I hope this can help you at work,
Cindy, I at least want to do that.
Sylvie doesn't like it when I call
you, but-
Cindy rolls her eyes. She plays the next one, but Sylvia's
faint arguing in the background can be heard.
JEANNIE (V.O.)
...I messed up today, Cindy. I swear I
was doing good, but there was this
fucking client and-
Beat.
Now 50mph.
70mph.
Cindy jumps awake. She groggily leans over to see her alarm
clock: 4:44 AM. She turns back and stares at the ceiling.
She walks over to a window and sees an overcast sky and wet
concrete. She turns on a playlist of daily affirmations on
her phone as she begins her morning routine.
PLAYLIST (V.O.)
Good morning. It's another beautiful
day. The sun is shining for you. Now
13 MONTAGE - VARIOUS 13
PLAYLIST (V.O.)
I respect myself and my body.
PLAYLIST (V.O.)
I have self discipline and self
confidence.
PLAYLIST (V.O.)
I am happy, healthy, and secure.
PLAYLIST (V.O.)
The little things in life bring me
great joy.
PLAYLIST (V.O.)
I love helping others. Today I will
make it a goal to help someone in some
way.
The trees down this street become much more lush, a dark,
verdant look against a hazy, blue sky.
END OF MONTAGE.
She's dug random holes across her front yard, a sight for
sore eyes.
Cindy stops in her tracks and looks at Mrs. Jung from afar.
She hesitates but walks up to her.
CINDY
(approaching her)
Hi, Mrs. Jung. Guess it's never too
early for some yard work, huh?
MRS. JUNG
Eh? Go, go. Leave me alone.
CINDY
Sorry... I guess, I just wanted to
give my condolences. I promise that
we'll find-
CINDY
(hesitant)
Where did you get those flowers?
No reply.
Cindy turns to see JOSHUA JUNG (35) emerging from his house.
He's got bedhead and is dressed in plaid pajama pants, but
that doesn't take away from his handsome face and height.
JOSHUA (CONT'D.)
(in Korean)
Mom, what are you doing?
(to Cindy)
Sorry, hope she wasn't bothering you.
CINDY
No, not at all. Actually, I think I
might've been bothering her.
(chuckling)
I was just wondering what she was
planting.
JOSHUA
Do I know you?
CINDY
Oh, no. I'm Cynthia Lee. Officer
Cynthia Lee.
JOSHUA
Oh yeah, I heard of you. You're the
rookie who found my sister. Thank you.
CINDY
I'm very sorry for your loss.
JOSHUA
I'm sorry that you're the one who
found her... It's been hard for all of
us, especially her.
JOSHUA (CONT'D.)
(in Korean)
Mom, go back to bed. Stop with these
damn flowers!
MRS. JUNG
(in Korean)
Son, it's okay. Your sister must find
these!
JOSHUA
Wait, Officer! Are you religious?
Beat.
CINDY
No.. Sorry, can't say that I am.
JOSHUA
Well, my mother and I are holding a
CINDY
...Of course.
JOSHUA
(smiling)
I'll see you then.
Cindy grabs a few and puts them behind other magazines, but
comes across a magazine with Jeannie and Sylvia's eyes
bleeding.
She reacts in fear but looks back at the magazine, and it's
completely normal. Two passersby notice.
PASSERBY 1
Scared of them? I don't blame ya.
Those quacks are on some other level.
PASSERBY 2
I've seen crackheads who look better
than them.
They laugh as they leave the aisle. Cindy firmly grips her
bouquet but releases.
CINDY
(to herself)
You are strong... You love helping
others.
PATRICK (O.S.)
Jesus, you look worse than usual.
CINDY
What're you-?! Gimme that!
CINDY (CONT'D.)
Smoking too, are you actually stupid?
What if Wilkes caught you?
PATRICK
"Wilkes" would go on about his
nicotine addiction and how he got
pressured when he was a stupid teen
like me.
CINDY
Where's your uncle?
PATRICK
Somewhere with the other officers.
CINDY
Well why aren't you with him?
PATRICK (CONT'D.)
I really don't need everyone telling
me how "sorry" they are and how "we'll
get through this...together." I hear
it enough at school.
CINDY
Look, your uncle's the only one who
really gets how you feel. And
everyone's gonna say the exact same
stuff to him too. You really gonna let
him suffer alone?
PATRICK
But he doesn't! He doesn't know what I
feel, he doesn't care how I feel-
CINDY
Well, what do you feel?
CINDY (CONT'D.)
I feel crazy too, kid. Everyone does.
But the things you see, the weird
things you feel, you have to ignore
that to move on. It's hard, and I know
how that feels. But you're smart,
Patrick. Your uncle, the officers, and
I are gonna find Steph. We're gonna
find your mom, okay?
PATRICK
But Cindy, I-
GERRY (O.S.)
There you are!
GERRY (CONT'D.)
Glad you came, Lee. The reverend's
almost ready. I'm going to issue a
statement after his prayer, and you
could say some things if you want
after.
CINDY
Oh, I..I don't have anything prepared.
GERRY
You found the body, Lee. You're a
source of hope. Just come up with
anything.