Letters Full Draft Questions (FPR)

Reviewer: Kaelin Foreman 

Does the total body text (excluding headings and addresses etc.) appear to be

about 1100 words? (2.25 pages single spaced) 

yes

For any quotes or paraphrases, does the author make COMPLETE reference to the source, in the text?

 yes

Is the call to action at the end of the opening paragraph?

yes

Does the call to action say specifically what the person or entity should do and for what reasons? 

yes

DO the body paragraphs follow the map outlined in the call to action? 

yes

Name three things that could be done to improve this letter.

- under your name, replace "police brutality" with your personal title (shadow creek high school

student, alvin isd student)

- in your 3rd paragraph, maybe consider changing "an innocent person" to "innocent people”?

- nothing else, this is a great topic!!

Are there any grammar or mechanics mistakes? Discuss them below.

yes
Reviewer: Jasmine Hatter 

Does the total body text (excluding headings and addresses etc.) appear to be about 1100 words? (2.25

pages single spaced)

yes

For any quotes or paraphrases, does the author make COMPLETE reference to the source, in the text?

yes

Is the call to action at the end of the opening paragraph?

yes

Does the call to action say specifically what the person or entity should do and for what reasons?

yes

DO the body paragraphs follow the map outlined in the call to action?

yes

Name three things that could be done to improve this letter.

some more hard facts, be specific on the factors, and more academic language

Are there any grammar or mechanics mistakes? Discuss them below.

none