上海新东方雅思名师 张驰新上课笔记（V2.

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张驰新
雅思写作互动及欣赏区

50% 25% 75% 60%

a/the majority of >50%
a large portion/percentage/proportion/margin of
97% a lion’s share >80%
43.7% comparatively a majority of
comparatively a minority of
先特征，后数据
2、1、3
Food and drink, Other items covered comparatively a majority of the average weekly expenditure,
with 26% and 24% respectively.
minority
In 1980, the percentage of Coal increased by 4%// to 51%.
There was an increase of 4% in Coal.
We can witness an …
The year of 1980 witnessed an …
A outnumber/outpercentage B by___
A: Coal in 1980
B: its counterpart
increase by ten times
11 times that of

Oil almost remained stable (at nearly 11%).

3+5
2+2+1
Social , ad, edu, scii cover comparatively a majority of while 2.24%, 1.84% and 2.10 are shared
by . The remaining percentages are in moderation ,with 5.53% for , 7.4% and 9.35%
respectively.
increase max:
min Social Science
>=3 line chart
整数单位 100，200
rise sharply=soar
rise gently=boom
rise moderately=surge
实义副词
A: soar
B: surge
C: boom
D: creep up
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绝对描述系统
相对描述系统
A: rise maximally
B: rise comparatively gently
D: rise minimally
C: rise comparatively sharply

B: rise sharply
A: rise comparatively sharply

accrue= rise gradually and gently

leap= rise gradually and sharply
起落同幅

All trends(动态)/statistics（静态）/charts（多图） can be categorized into ____ stages（时间）/groups

（无时间）/types（多图） with (general trends or characteristics).
Fluctuating in Holiday, Vists, other, and TOTAL and rising in Business.
23, 35, 43, 52, 63
45, 49, 53, 57, 51
This is true of …
So does …
Technical Table
Strategic Table (screen)

With falling in items such as Food, rising in items including Housing, fluctuating in Household goods
and services,and stablilizing in Other items.
with fluctuating from Jan to Jun, rising from Jun to Aug, Oct to Dec, falling from Aug to Oct.

with fluctuating gently from Jan to Jun and fluctuating sharply from Jun to Dec.
rise and fall evenly
peak/rush hours whose trend is rising and falling sharply and off-the-peak hours whose trend is
rising and falling evenly.

先看横轴找共性，
再看纵轴定名称。
大起大落 sharply
小起小落 gently
起落同幅 evenly

finalized classification
popularity of
predominance of
preference to

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with the popularity of listening to radio from about 6 am to 1 pm and the popularity of watching TV
during the rest of the day.

Transport and communications rose

sharply, reaching an apex at 16 in 1996 and hitting a trough at 9 in 1967. Household goods and
services was volatile dramatically with the vertex in 1996 and the nadir in 1977. Furthermore, there
was a subsiding in Other goods and services, ranging from 8 to 14. Food abated, averaging out at
nearly 20. Similarly, the trend of Housing accrued from 1967 to 1996 with an average of 14 in 1977.
This was almost the similar case with the trend of Recreation, entertainment and education, which
was the opposite
with that of Tobacco.

What is worth mentioning is that Other items, not making its debut until 1977, remained constant
from 1977 to 1996.

Britain China
Extreme ml ci
Range F
A
Average A ml
Similar x
x
Opposit ml ml
e
From the perspective of employment,

Booming industry
Deteriorating industry
Wavering industry

Dynamic Table
Static Table

With fluctuating in bus, rising in car and falling in bike and foot.

How to seek HC?

issue of percentage

>100%
<100%
there exist some other reasons/factors unlisted/unmentioned.
Avocation
Some people were engaged in several industries.

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Moonlight
Some people were engaged in//took to other industries unmentioned.
“abnormal” statistics

compare and contrast to locate situations

contrary to social belief and common sense
肄业生 肆

Since the gap of salary between graduates and non-graduates becomes wider and wider upon age,
it indicates the fact that qualifications are important for people’s career development.

“debut” statistics
make one’s debut
Future trends
people’s living standard has been greatly improved
better-off life

The new source of energy, especially nuclear was given full play while the traditional ones, still
dominant, reached the bottleneck/ceiling.

Opening 四要素
图的类型 eg. pie chart and bar chart repectively(不同类型的图;没有关联的图) 4 pie charts
图的单位 number/amount/percentage(ratio)/figure
图的主要趋势
曲线图：fluctuate
动态图（趋势大于一种）：vary
静态图（无趋势）：differ
图的时间
from to
during and
in 1976
P36
Task 1x40% + Task 2x60%
6.5
7

How far
Discuss both opinions/statements
What’s your opinion toward

Agree
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Disagree
Impartial towards

Argumentation depth
6:4
1+2reasons+at least 1recom+1ending=5 para

Illustration paraphrasing supporting width

AIE 4 5 6
CQ 5 6
VSS 6 7 8

Versatility
Difficulty

________ high/huge expense

extravagant
exorbitant
extortionate

Outline
redundancy
sequence disorder
From physical to mental
Body
Material
parallelism

solution
brainstorming 1.5min >5
combination 0.5 min
reorganization 0.5min
safasfafasfafafafafafafffffffffffffffffffffffffffaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Opinion ----Specific topic

Topic
St
Broad topic
socializing

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Ygygygyguyuhuhuihuuiuihiuhjii
Hhuhihiojoijiojiojjijjojojj

Discursive/Agree or Disagree
unavoidable
irresistible
irreversible
irrefutable
unassailable
incontrovertible
indispensable

controversial
thorny
荆棘
There ｃｒｏｐｓ ｕｐ／arises a social dilemma/ambivalence over the issue of ______.
Ｐａｎｄｏｒａ＇ｓ ｂｏｘ
Ｊｕｄａｓ ｋｉｓｓ

Roghet’s 罗热同义词词典

ｆｅａｓｉｂｉｌｉｔｙ

should
2. PRR
topic
Despite the versatility and intricacy of the instruments, I would put forward/ pose/ pore over/
demonstrate/ analyze/ excavate some of the most striking/ superficial ones and offer the alternatives
afterwards.

3. A&D—impartial discursive
1) soft tone
I am impartial toward _____.
2) hard tone
advocate/assert the co-existence of ☺ and of _______.
can hold water loophole
benefits and dangers/drawbacks
merits and demerits
pros and cons
positive and negative

Achill’s heel

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3) simile and metaphor
two-sided thing
a double-edged sword x
a concave-and-convex-sided nutshell
an immortal-and-perishing-sided spell
a real-and-virtual-sided life
Each dog has its day.
what strikes us most is
what’s is of top priority is
No 1 on my priority list is

On second thoughts
As a (two-sided thing)

Saving last for best, what’s neglected but worthy of being mentioned is that 10……
10
Life is like a box of chocolates.

Although [the opposite opinion] seems reasonable to some extent, the feasibility of my opinion
outweighs that of [the opposite one].

should
strength
creativity

123569
intelligent robot
translation software
industrial automation
motorized flight
computerized library
processed food
SOHO working
Computer-based learning
Epidemics SARS
…

piracy
anthrax
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Common advantages of S&T:

Labor-saving money-saving time-saving esp. for the perilous and repetitive work, which is
monotonous and tedious. This will increase the efficiency and productivity of work.
___ can push back the frontier of science and technology through innovation and ingenuity as an
avant-garde. Each generation of product acts as the stereotype for their later innovations--
descendents.

Common disadvantages of S&T

Relying on ____ too heavily will deteriorate the creativity, flexibility and self-motivation of humans,
thus leading to the degradation of human progress.
Since ____ is manipulated by human beings, once it malfunctions or breaks down, it will cause
disastrous consequence or aftermath.
2+2
extravagant expenditure
high-tech media
versatile
instant update and upgrade
Stimulate the appetite of readers for reading, thus enhancing the utility of libraries
Transplant implant
Alternatives to natural food

Should (government) support/ subsidize/ give grants to ______?

Is it necessary to

space technology
weapon
musician or artist
sports professional
artistic projects
costume 成衣 and beauty salon x
theatre, gym, medical center and education

Hierarchy of Needs
The importance of physiological needs and the necessity of improving people’s living standard
Small and middle powers
Superpower
Convert
Original purpose contrary current purpose

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Weapon
O.P. national defense and security
C.P. armament=arms threat
Hegemony
Ask for equal treatment

Musician//sports professional
Simple, devoted, conscientious
Commercialization profitability sponsors

Beauty salon

Most profitable industry

Profuse, abundant
Artificial beauty

Since most countries have settled the physiological needs, it is natural and indispensable for them
to seek higher needs such as arts______.

Specific Education—the functions of teacher Medium-importance

task: a big outline 2x3
Knowledge Vs Experience 2+2
“away”, “abroad” and “leave”
innovation
1. A good teacher can impart or input knowledge into your mind rather than cram it, which is the
basic function of teachers.

2. A qualified teacher can act as a bridge between students and their dilemmas. By referring to
teachers can you solve your problems more efficiently and effectively. You can even make friends
with teachers, which can encourage your studying motivation and initiative. (interactivity)

3. A superlative teacher can be a facilitator or mentor who will enlighten students as a

beacon/torch/compass, paving the road/way for your development in the society. guidance
orientation
spiritual friend and soul mate

Innovation
You have to lay a solid foundation of knowledge to keep up with the Joneses, without which you will
be deprived of your core competence and feel disadvantageous to your peer, thus eliminated by the
society. It cannot be denied that accumulation of knowledge or qualifications is conducive to your
career development and path. Foundation
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Knowledge entails updating and upgrading, lack of which your “cheese” will be moved easily and for
all. Once you are satisfied with your current situation or achievements, you are bound to lose
zeal/drive for further development, thus encaged in the pyramids of achievement you have owned.

Endurance

T scope of ko
T module

Only after acquiring certain experience can you know clearly which aspect of knowledge you are in
urgent need of. clear purpose

Only after converted into experience can knowledge yield social value and utility.

You can absorb knowledge more efficiently with some experience acquired. MBA study

As the superlative form of knowledge, experience is the terminal of knowledge.

2+2 >10 sentences

Broaden/widen their mind/vision/horizons/perspective/scope/periscope

Intelligence
Endurance
Laboriousness
Tactfulness
Adaptability to fit in with the local community

language proficiency

milestone/land mark for their break

homesick
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It is difficult for you to get harmonious with the new environment and community
pre-homo culture
identity

enlarge and enhance your personal network by socializing with your classmates and workmates.
Character orientation and location by more exposure to yourself in a strange environment SWOT
introvert
extrovert
introvert
extrovert

Since character has a say in choosing career, the fate rests upon the situation of career
development

What is even worse, some of the young adults may commit crimes, leading to the high rate of
juvenile delinquency

sophisticated.
naive
What is lost can never be regained.
opportunity cost
High

Disparity/gap between your dream and reality

solid infrastructure(natural or social issue)

soft infrastructure (social evil)
PR®
traffic
E.P. (environmental protection)
City development (urban planning)
Lawn establishment
Abolishing the old but historical architecture
Water resource
Family planning (birth control)
Gap between the poor and rich (countries)
Green house effect
……

Women crimes
Juvenile delinquency
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Littering
Noise
Theft
Killing or eating wild animals
Physical punishment to children
Watching violent films for children
Public insecurity
Plagiarism
Selfishness or greed among people
Policeman carrying the gun
Physical punishment
….

Government
Individual
GOV=Authorities
Infrastructure construction (solid)
www.answers.com stress
E.P. facilities
sorting facilities
recyclable
other waste
harmful waste

Education, supervision, caring, affection, understanding, emphasy 同理心

(soft)

Laws and regulations (both)

media lacks censorship

A&C
traffic security
E.P
Self-discipline
Sustainable development

Frugality
sustainable utilization
eco-balance

awkward
censorship screen
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characteristic paragraph

allocate/allot
issue some relevant laws and regulations for prevention

nip it in the bud

propaganda

Examples:

establish some festivals or anniversaries to remind people of the importance of _______

WORLD Animal’s DAY
do some voluntary work
set up a museum/preservatlory for visiting

The underprivileged/underdeveloped countries lack necessities and prerequisites for development

such as convenient transportation and communication network, sophisticated technology,
investment and capital, and high-leveled talents and elites, which hampers them from rapid and
sustainable development.
crux

The underprivileged countries lack sustainable and comprehensive awareness and consciousness
for development. Most developing countries progress and “prosper” at the cost of natural resources
and ecological loss, thus slowing the pace of development in the long run.

Characteristic reason
Historical perspective
The happiness of the developed countries is based on the misery of developing countries. So, they
develop at different starting levels.

Since the essence of globalization is centralization, which means wealth is in the hand of a few
groups/minorities, this shows that as long as globalization exists, it will widen the gap between the
minorities and the mass.

allocate / allot
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the environmentally friendly nations can provide experience and facilities to the environmentally
hostile nations while learning lessons from the latter.

Political perspective
Hegemony sanctions

Stress
Happiness
Fashion
Character
Attitude
Shopping
Selfishness
Advertising
Equal treatment of salary
sexual treatment (women joining army)
…..

From physical to mental

Feeble, fragile
Unhealthy life styles such as smoking, alcoholism, staying-up, unbalanced diet, lack of physical
exercise is detrimental to your physical health, which makes you vulnerable to stress.
restlessness
tension
save it for a rainy day 未雨绸缪
nutrition fact
perfect
修葺
diversion of attention
work therapy

wealth condition
health
mental edification hobby-example lofty
characteristic para
family
friends/lover
society

release their pressure

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a sense of satisfaction
keep up with the joneses conformism
seasonal concession

In some definite requirement such as the transitional period of social development or in the
underprivileged society, people attach more importance to the physiological needs or materialism
rather than morality, which physically accounts for the appearance of selfishness.

When Egoism prevails over Altruism, there emerges a social etiquette of selfishness, which makes
people hard to break.

Save it 未雨绸缪

wealth
health
mental edification
your own opinion unique

Mark Morgan

Writing Skills for the IELTS test

Lofty
release their pressure
keep up with the Joneses
seasonal concession
stimulated by ads

IELTSzhang@hotmail.com

雅友大联盟 Y 132

4+6
1+6
15 minutes

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