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Matrix of Correction

Rachel Ann G. Garcia


Ma. Nessalyn U. Peralta
Aldrin P. Sagao
Lherisse Joy B. Valdez
Bachelor of Science in Agricultural Engineering

PANNEL MEMBER COMMENTS DESCRIPTION PAGE


Dr. Armando D. Diga The commodity Changed commodity Front page
including the title and the title to
should change from “AEROPONICS
onion bulb to onion SYSTEM FOR ONION
leek. LEEK PRODUCTION”

The objective has Page 7


The objective been removed.
number 2 should be
removed. The parameters in Page 17
the manuscript as
In data to be per the comments
gathered, it should was followed.
eliminate the
parameters that is
not appropriate for Page 18
onion leeks. The statistical
design of the study
The “statistical was placed before
design” should be the cultural
placed before the management. Page 18
cultural
management. The design and
replication of the
In the statistical study was improved.
design, additional
replication should be
considered for the F-
test.
Dr. Francisco N. The objective It should be included Page 8
Divina number 4 is not in the data to be
included in the data gathered.
to be gathered.
Page 8
In the Operational It is replaced with
Definition of Terms, another
“Aeroponic System” terminologies.
is removed.
Page 11
In the input-process-
output “Application The Application for
for Utility Model” utility model is
removed in the
input-process-output Page 16
“Harvesting” is
already done. It was then changed
to future tense.
Mr. Robert S. Ablog Base on propose Title Page
title the study seems
to investigate the
efficiency of
Aeroponic System
design in onion leek
production.

However, the Which is which? Page 8


purpose or objective Try to focus mainly
of the study tend to on Engineering
evaluate the effects, aspects secondary
or influence of blue on agricultural crop
light in onion leek’s aspects.
growth and
development.

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