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Introduction
In today’s world, as the modern technology had advanced, more and more devices were
being introduced to the society as a result for convenience use and for the purpose of
communication process. Both the culture and globalization could have positive effects and
negative effects on the society as well. Culture (Daniel, 2014) can be defined as race or religion
of different people in different countries. It is also the way of different lifestyles in different
countries in where they adapt to the nearby areas. It can also be depending what your interests
are and it is also assumed that there are also no homogenous religion. Culture can sometimes
be good because different people living in different countries can also be used to observe each
other’s country’s culture to know the changes and the way and lifestyles they are living or
adapting to the surroundings they are in. Hence, on the other hand, culture can be observed in-
depth within the society as well as also outside the world while globalisation can only be
observed just outside the world. Culture can be observed such as anthropology and
ethnography which means the study of groups of people such as religion, ethnicity and dilect
group as well as the study of methods within the community. Globalisation can also be viewed
as cosmopolitan which means familiar with and at ease in many different countries and cultures.
Globalisation
Globalisation is the changing of technologies and methods (Art Carden, 2008) which are
being influenced to the world. The tools and methods are influencing in everyday daily routine
(Daniel, 2014). It includes dealing with the public relations while culture does not include dealing
with the public relations. Globalisation means, it is like living in a small village of the world. It
also makes connection with the reality world to let the society know what is happening in which
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the communities, management of businesses and association, states of variety of population. It
is also a system directed by global commerce and supported by many different types of
technology as in today’s world whereas culture is the process of belief, customs and communal
attitude in the group of community. Globalisation can reach the information within a short period
of time to the target audience because networks could quickly captured the images and send to
the media on time. Comparing between culture and globalisation, it is like two step flow theory
which means that the information are directly being sent to mass media for analyzing and then
to the opinion leaders and finally to the target audiences. By having more and more new
advanced technology, people are able to get to know the unknown information by obtaining from
different places. For culture, there can be arguments between person to person (Daniel, 2014).
Globalisation is better than culture because people tend to know things easily within a
short limited period of time. Both the globalisation and culture, gives us more about in-depth
analysis of the information as well as to the community. One of the effects which is related
between globalisation and the culture is the transmission of schooling in different countries. For
example, if the society in Singapore prefers to go to another country for gaining new skills, it is
better that these people can learn new experiences and cultures in which they may find it
different in his or her local country. If the person is interested, he or she can even receive a field
in discussions that is not primitive to his or her own country as well as also the transmission of
knowledge to the home country. Globalisation is necessary for the community (Mondal, 2012)
because it gives community the aid in receiving global acceptance, impact as well as
transaction. The positive effects of globalisation is the rising of media analysis aids in
persuading against other countries where the civil rights are disrupted for the advantages of the
affluent and energetic people. This could head towards to changes in the civil rights (Panos,
2011). The negative effects of globalisation is that the society possessing to different skills and
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countries getting an opportunity to connect with each other, it could lead to a catastrophe in
would not have known the information on time as well as the reaching of the information could
be delayed. People also would not have greater awareness (Mehdi, 2013) on their surroundings
as well. Globalisation is used to know about how our world is changing day by day and to be
able to know and get along well with the surroundings changes.
Globalisation can make the world change (Rick Wartzman, 2013) into a small village due
to the development of new devices. Advances in the telecommunications infrastructure, from the
rise of the telegraph and its modern offspring, the Internet, and mobile phones, have been major
factors in globalisation. The world is becoming interconnected (Pagel, 2014) day by day. The
term globalisation can sometimes be not an opportunity but also a challenge. The world is also
connected every day by the internet, by pop culture media and by international travel.
Culture
For the culture, the positive effects (Rahim, 2012) are it is mainly comprised of four main
components which are creativity, respect, communication and participation. This is because
without these components, we might not be able to know each other’s culture effectively. These
four main components lead to a good culture to different society in different countries. For the
creatively. This is because without that the generations would not have remained. For respect, it
is the way to express ideas, thoughts and education because it is probable to escape the
repetition of fault and gives more education to the society. Communication is the most important
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process for the culture because it allows the society to notice what is necessary, to pass on
knowledge, ideas and thoughts and to carry out the responsibility. Participation is necessary
The negative effects of these four components are resignation or rejection could reduce
the level of participation. Higher level of defensiveness could also lead to lower level of
communication process. Irrelevant judgment also put an end on creativity. Open defiance wipe
out the level of respectivity. Culture has never been stationary in a state of immobility or unusual
even in older times. Sometimes, culture can also have the competition of racism from person to
person and it should be carefully controlled. For example, the culture such as water pot in other
countries remaining in the olden days now had already vanished due to the replacement and
Negative effects of globalisation on culture is the factor of language used in the public.
For culture, language (Josh, 2015) plays a major basic role. By looking from the side of
globalisation, it marginalizes some languages and could even cause some languages to vanish
out. For instance, English Language is the most commonly widely used language which helps it
out to communicate between person to person effectively and efficiently. So, it is very important
that culture should not loose the opportunity of maintaining some usage of the languages.
Conclusion
The relationship between culture and globalisation (Mehdi, 2013) are developmental
agreement, customization and transformation which means culture faces globalisation and
accepts new culture and loses its own. In conclusion, both the globalisation and culture are
essential to the society because these two factors contribute convenience for the community as
well as the surroundings as well. Globalisation also makes the society keeping to stay in touch
with the current information to keep alert and have awareness on our environment what is
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happening these days. It also makes the society keeping with up to date information in order to
live in equality with new era. The same also applies in culture as well. People should try to
maintain (Art Carden, 2008) only for culture because it is necessary that if the culture is not
maintain carefully, people would not have known what culture had been carried out in the olden
days and this culture should also be passing out to generations by generations. Culture and
globalisation should also be modernized as they are always changing among the society and
they likely need to be informed to the society to live in equality with new age.
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