wlete this evaluation and STAPLE it to the top of vour final copy. MASTERY level; no need for any further revision ALMOST THERE; still could use some attention and tweaking. SOME EVIDENCE of skill; needs another revisioa, first draft quality SKILL NOT EVIDENT IN PAPER; cannot be scored 1. Introductions grabs attention; obvious use of strategy © >>> Write the HOOK stategy here: QUEEN a Thesis is well defined, clear statement of essay's purpose 4 uf Necessary background /significance/content given in introduction 4 ‘VALID research support provided, explained, connected ® ~ atleast two per Body Paragraph 2 complete “research sadwiches” per Body Paragraph Essay contains appropriate logical, ethical appeals! 4 minimal emotional appeals >>>>On your final paper, identify/LABEL ALL appeal types in the margin Yes, LABEL “logical”, “ethieal”, “emotional” next to each correspon research appeal ‘The essay presents AND clearly refutes the opposition 4 Organization is logical, clear, and effective @ Transitional words/phrases/sentences are purposefully placed Sentences are varied to avoid repetition Atleast TWO Rhetorical Devices are purposefully use. NOW: On you final paper, Identify and Label the TWO most eff clusion strategy is obvious and effective @ cad = Call toaeno Write the strategy used All research is correctly cited ~ Complete & Patil Lead Ins & tags signal the research; Works Cited correct and complete 10. Surface ers are minimum: Grammer, punctuation, spelling; @ “Wall of Shame” OMITTED ~ Elevated Word Choice instead 6g i Essay Title Nature Of SOCrE 14 LUTTLE EVIDENCE of sill; needs a great deal of atention and revision; rough draft quality @ topic / underline the Claim’ number the 3 features 8