GROUP 1

Debby Rizky Kurnia Sianturi

Desi Ramadani Karina Suheri
Elvina Ratih Virda. R
Elvita Yusnida Sisnawati br Sitepu
Graciela Haraito. T Wida Yanti

No Indonesian Text English Text Problem Revision

1 Meskipun kamu sudah sembuh, tapi obat Even though you have recovered. You still No problem
itu harus terus kamu minum setiap hari. have to take the medicine everyday. That's
Itu penting, supaya virusnya tidak important, so that the virus no longer appears
muncul lagi di dalam tubuhmu. Jangan in your body. Don't ever get bored taking the
pernah bosan minum obat ya. medicine.
2 Saya sudah terlalu bosan untuk merasa I'm already too bored to feel bored, Dad. I No problem
bosan ayah. Saya hanya ingin tahu, just want to know why did God create
kenapa tuhan menciptakan manusia humans in the first place if He would only
kalau hanya membuatnya menderita. make them suffer.
3 Tuhan tidak pernah salah menciptakan, God never creates wrong, only humans Readability God never wrongs for creating. It just
hanya manusia yang terkadang berburuk sometimes prejudice to him. God is always humans that sometimes prejudice him.
sangka kepadanya. Tuhan itu sendiri loving, but we have not been able to
maha mencintai, kita saja yang belum understand the breadth of God's love.
mampu memahami keluasan cintanya.
4 Nah, uang jula jula ku bulan ini. Bulan There you go, this is my savings for this Readability There you go, this is my savings for
depan aku yang narek kan dek? Oy! month. Next month will be my time to have this month. Next month will be my
the money, right? Hey! turn to accept the money, right? Hey!
5 Hah, apatuh kak? Huh, what is it sis? No problem
6 Bulan depan aku kan yang narek jula Next month will be my time to have the Readability Next month will be my turn to accept
jula itu se? money, seis? that money, right seis?
7 Bukan bukan, itu ibuk yang rumahnya No no. That lady in that house number 5? No problem
nomer 5 itu?
8 Kok dia pulak yang menarek sekarang?, Wait. Why will she have the money first ? I Accuracy Wait. Why will she accept the money
kemarin waktu kita ngocok itu, kan aku thought when i drew my name yesterday, it first ? I thought it was me. Do you
kakak kau ini yang narek, bukan dia. will be my time to have the money, not her?! remember that when we drew it
 yesterday? it supposed to be me.
9 Dia mau pindah rumah lo. Come on, she's moving out. No problem
10 Ah urusan dia lah mau pindah rumah, Ah, that's her business for moving out, and No problem
urusan aku mau pakek uang lima puluh it's my bussiness is to have the money first,
juta nih, jalan jalan aku ke eropa dan this is 50 million, i want to travel Europe and
bawak oleh oleh, untuk kau jugaknya buys some souvenirs, which i'll give some to
nanti ku kasih. you too, come on...!
11 Kurang seratus ini Sis, this is one hundred thousand less .. Naturalness This money is less one hundred
thousand sist
12 Ahhhh Ahhhh No Problem
13 Eh kak kakk Sist, sist, sist No Problem
14 hmmm hmm, what ? No Problem
15 Itu yang lewat itu, itu yang kena AIDS was the one who passed just now is the child Accuracy The guy who passed just now, isn’t he
itu kan ? with AIDS an AIDS patient?
16 Iya memang Yes indeed. Accuracy Yes, indeed.
Biar kau tau siska, Mamak sama By the way, rumor has it that his father and By the way, the rumour said that the
Bapaknya meninggal dunia gara-gara mother died from that disease. is it horrible ? death of his mother and father caused
penyakit itu. Ngerikan ? of that disease. It is horrible right ?
17 Ngeri kali la kak. Kalau gitu, kakak If so, we must be careful. Do not get close to Naturalness If it’s so, we must be careful.
jangan dekat dekat dia lah him Do not get close to him

18 Iya ngapain pulak aku dekat dekat sama Why I must close to him? ewww Accuracy Of course. I won’t do it.
dia
19 nanti bisa ketularan kau you might get infected too later. No Problem
20 Tau kakak, penyakit itu belum ada That trrible disease, there is no cure for it Naturalness Let me tell you an issue about that
obatnya now. Let me tell you that. disease, there’s no cure for it now.
21 Ih iyanya ? What ? really ? No Problem
22 Iyaa Yeah, I am Naturalness I’m pretty sure.
23 Alahmakk Oh my God No Problem
24 ada 5 cairan tubuh yang berpotensi There are five body fluids with HIV that have Accuracy There are five body fluids that have the
menularakan virus HIV kepada orang the potential to transmit the HIV virus itself potential to transmit the HIV itself to
yang sehat to healthy people healthy people
25 Yang pertama adalah darah The first is blood Accuracy The first is the blood
26 Yang kedua adalah cairan sperma pada The second is sperm in men Accuracy The second is the sperm in men
 laki-laki
27 Yang ketiga adalah cairan vagina pada The third is vaginal fluid in women Accuracy The third is the vaginal fluid in women
perempuan
28 Yang ke empat cairan rektal The fourth is rectal fluid Accuracy The fourth is the rectal fluid
29 Dan yang kelima adalah air susu ibu And the fifth, is HIV infected breast milk Accuracy And the fifth is, breast milk that has
yang mengidap HIV HIV
30 Penularan bisa terjadi yang pertama Transmission can be through transfusions Accuracy Transmission can be accour. The first
adalah transfusi darah komponen darah and blood components through transfusions and blood
components
31 Yang kedua adalah jarum suntik yang The second through syringes that are Naturalness The second through syringes that are
terkontaminasi oleh darah yang contaminated with the blood of people with contaminated with the blood of people
mengidap HIV HIV that has HIV
32 Yang ketiga adalah hubungan sexual. The third through sexual intercourse both No Problem
Baik itu heteroseksual maupun homo hetero sexual and homosexual
seksual
33 Dan yang terakhir adalah, melalui air And finally is through breast milk that is Accuracy And the last is through breast milk that
susu ibu. Yang diberikan oleh ibu given by mothers with HIV to theirs babies is given by mothers with HIV to theirs
pengidap HIV kepada bayinya babies
34 Dokter, Saya ingin bertanya Sir, I want to ask Naturalness Sir, I have a question
35 Ya silahkan Yes, Please No Problem
36 Apakah AIDS itu bisa disembuhkan Can be AIDS be cured? Readability Do you think AIDS can be cured ?
dokter?
37 Menurut kamu ? Do you think it can ? Naturalness Do you think it will?
38 Tidak Dokter Can not Sir Accuracy I dont think so, sir.
39 Bisa, Sekarang AIDS sudah bisa di Now, AIDS can be cured. Because there is Accuracy AIDS can be cured. Because now there
sembuhkan. Karena sudah ada obat yang already a drug called antiretroviral. is antiretroviral as the cure.
disebut anti retroviral.
40 Hasil penelitian menunjukkan bahwa The results showed that HIV sufferers who Accuracy The result of the study showed that
pengidap HIV yang mengonsumsi consume antiretrovirals regularly and in the HIV sufferers who consume
antiretrovirals secara teratur dan dalam right combination, in a “viral loud” in their Antiretrovirals regularly in the right
kombinasi yang tepat, pada suatu saat blood were not detected or the amount of combination, then at one time when
“viral loud” atau jumlah “virus” didalam “virus” in their blood was undetectable. the “viral loud” or “the virus” in the
darahnya tidak terdeteksi. Ketika jumlah People with HIV no longer transmit it to their blood was undetected. When the virus
virus tidak terdeteksi maka pengidap sexual partners. This is known as prevention. was undetected, so that the AIDS
HIV tidak lagi menularkan kepada patient will no longer transmit it to
 pasangan seksualnya. Ini yang dikenal
sebagai treatment as prevention.
41 Yang diharap tidak ada, yang ada tidak
diharapkan, kesadaran hidup adalah
pemberontakan, Hidup bukan hanya
untuk hidup, kita hidup untuk menerima
kehidupan, Kita harus belajar berdamai
dengan mimpi-mimpi kita, kita harus
berkaca dalam sepi.
42 Oke, yang barusan yang saya bacakan
tadi,adalah cuplikan puisi ws rendra dari
bukunya yang berjudul disebabkan oleh
angin
43 Nah siapa diantar kalian yng besedia
memberikan pemahamanya tentang
puisi tersebut ?
44 Saya pak
45 Ya,tegar silakan
46 Dalam hidup tidak semuanya berjalan
seperti yang kita harapkan,
kadang ingin yang begini malah dapat
yang begitu,kadang ingin yang begitu
malah dapat yang begini,kita harus
elajar membongkar pikiran kita
sendiri,brlajar menerima dan berdamai
dengan kenyataan yang sering kali tak
sesui dengan keinginan.Dan saya malah
curiga bahwa jangan-jangan puncak
pemberontakan bukanlah kerena
perlawanantapi penerimaan yang se
utuh-utuh nya terimaksih
47 Mantap mantap ,pemahaman yang
Something expected does not exist,
Something exist is not expected, life
conciousness is a rebellion, life is not just to
live, we must learn to make peace with our
dreams, we must look in the mirror quiet.
Oke was a quote from WS Rendra’s poem
from his book caused by the Wind
Any of you can give an understanding of the
poem ?
Iam sir
Yes please tegar
In life,not everything goes as we expect
.sometimes you want something lke
that,sometimes you want something like
this,sometimes you want something like
that,you get something like this innstead.we
must learn to dismantle our own thoughts
learning to accept and make peace with
reality that is often not in accordance with the
wishes and i was suspicious that perhaps,the
height of the rebellion was not resistance but
the whole acceptance
Thankyou
Very good,interesting thoughts,very exciting!
their sexual partners. This is known as
treatment as prevention
Accuracy Something that is expected does not
exist,
Something exist is not expected,
life conciousness is a rebellion,
life is not just to live,
we must learn to make peace with our
dreams,
we must look in the mirror with
silence.
Accuracy What i’m showing is a trailer by WS
Rendra’s poem the book title is “By
the wind”
Naturalness Who is willing to give a response
about the poem
Readability I’am sir
Readability yes please Tegar
Accuracy In life,not everything goes as we
expect. Sometimes we want something
like this, but it’s not like that.
Sometimes we want something like
that, but it’s not like this. We have to
learn to explore our own mind. We
have to learn how to accept and make
peace with the reality which
sometimes out of our expectation. And
I was suspicious about the reason of
the rebellion was not resistance, it is
about the acceptance, thank you.
Naturalness Excellent, is there anyone want to give
 menarik sekali ,sangat menarik.Ada lagi
yang lainya
48 Ini surat dari ibumu,bacalah
49 Kurasa suadah saat nya engkau
mengetahui apa yang sebenarnya terjadi
pada mu
50 Tegar,anakku.
Saat kau membaca surat ini,itu artinya
aku sudah tak ada.
Dan kau dengan izin Tuhan telah
berhasil hidup dengan selamat,sejauh
usiamu saat ini.
51 Penyakit yang di bawa oleh ayahmu
telah membuat hidup keluarga kita jadi
hancur berantakan seperti kiamat yang
datang sebelum waktunya.
52 Setelah ayahmu meninggal kare
penyakitnya yang mengerikan itu,yang
kemudian ditularkannya kepadaku dan
juga kepadamu.
53 Orang-orang membakar rumah kita dan
mengusirku dari desa itu,desa kelahiran
kita sendiri.
54 Aku yang saat itu sedang
mengandungmu berlari meninggalkan
desa itu tanpa tujuan.
55 Tak ada tempat yang bisa didatangi,tak
ada orang yang bisa dimintai tolong.
56 Semua memandangku seolah aku adalah
monster yang mengerikan yang harus di
jauhi dan di enyahkan.
57 Aku merasa ditolak oleh dunia dan
seluruh isi.
58 Aku hanya bisa berlari mengikuti
langkah kakiku tanpa tau harus kemana
Anyone else? an opinion?
His letter is from your mother ,read it Accuracy This letter is from your mother,reat it
I think it’s time for you to know what was Naturalness I think It’s time for you to know what
really happening to you happened to you.
Tegar,my son. Accuracy Tegar my son.
When you’re reading this letter it means I’m When you are reading this letter it
already long gone. means I have already gone.
And you by the Grace of God have managed And with the mercy of the Almighty
to live safely for as your age today. God you can be live safely until now.
The illness brought by your father had made Accuracy The diseases which brought by your
our family life mess like the doomsday that father has made our family life fall
came before its time. apart like the doomsday that came
before it’s time.
After your father died of his terrible Naturalness After your father died of the disease
illness,which he also transmitted to me and to which he transmitted to you and me.
you.
People burned our house and evicted me No problem
from that village,our own village.
I was pregnant with you run away from the Accuracy I was pregnant while run away from
village aimlessly. the village aimlessly.
There is no place to go,no one to ask for help. Accuracy There is no place to go, no one exist to
asked for help.
All eyes looked at me as if was a terrible Naturalness All the people looked at me as I was
monster that had to be shunned and pushed terrible monster that must be shunned
aside. and pushed aside.
I felt rejected by the world and all beings in Readability I feel rejected by the world .
it.
I could only run following my own footstep No problem
without knowing where to go.
59 Aku terus berlari dan berlari sampai aku
jatuh dan tak sadarkan.
60 Lalu dalam keputus asaan yang pekat itu
Dokter Umar menemukanku dan
menolongku
61 Lalu, dalam keputusasaan yang pekat
itu, dokter Umar menemukanku dan
menolongku
62 Meskipun aku tahu bahwa sebenarnya
hidupku saat itu sudah tak tertolong lagi
63 Tetapi, aku sangat berterima kasih
kepadanya
64 Ia merawatku dengan sabar sampai aku
melahirkanmu
65 Suster : Iya bu, iya bu. Bagus dah lahir
bayinya. Sudah lahir bayinya ya bu
66 Aku sadar bahwa hidupku tak akan lama
lagi
67 Namun, tak ada keinginan yang lebih
membahagiakanku saat itu selain
melihatmu lahir dengan selamat
68 Harapan itulah yang memeberikanku
daya hidup meski penyakit itu telah
menggerogoti tubuhku dengan keji dan
tanpa ampun.
69 Orang-orang bilang kalau penyakit
AIDS ini adalah penyakit yang tak ada
obatnya dan karena itu tak bisa
disembuhkan
70 Tapi dokter Umar menyakinkanku
bahwa penyakit ini bisa disembuhkan
bila ia ditangani dan dirawat dengan
cara yang tepat
71 Tentu saja, aku sudah terlalu terlambat
untuk bisa disembuhkan
I continued to run and run until I fell and was Accuracy I kept running and running until I fall
uncoscious. down and uncoscious.
Then in that desparate desperation doctor Naturalness Then in the depth of desperation,
Umar found me and helped me. Doctor Umar found me and helped me.
Then, in that desperate desperation, Doctor no problem -
Umar found me and helped me
Even though I know that my life at that time Naturalness Although at the time, I knew that my
way beyond help life was beyond of help
I am very grateful to him Readability However, I am very grateful to him.
He took care of me patiently until I gave no problem -
birth to you
Good, the baby is born Accuracy Good ma’am, ya the baby is already
born.
I realized that my life wouldn’t not be long Readability I realized that my life was not being
anymore long anymore
But, there is no desire that is make me full of Readability However, there is no desire that make
joy at that time than seeing you born safely me happy at the time than seeing you
born safely
That hope gave me life force even though the Readability That hope gave me power to life
disease had gnawed at my body viciously and although, that disease had gnawed in
mercilessly my body viciously and mercilessly
People said that AIDS is a disease that has no Readability People said that AIDS is a disease that
cure and therefore can’t be cure has no cure and therefore can’t be
cured
But, Doctor Umar said that this disease could Naturalness But, Doctor Umar said that this disease
be cured if it was handled and treated in the could be cured if it was treated in the
right way right way
Of course,I was too late to be cured Naturalness Indeed,I was too late to be cured
72 Ajalku sudah di depan mata
73 Aku sudah bisa mencium bau
kematianku sendiri
74 Tapi kamu tidak anakku
75 Kau masih bisa diselamatkan
76 Kau masih bisa membuat hidupmu
berguna bagi orang lain
77 Setelah kelahiranmu, aku meminta
dokter Umar untuk merawat dan
membesarkanmu
78 Karena aku tau, aku sudah tidak lagi
memiliki cukup waktu dan kemampuan
untuk merawatmu dan tidak ada sanak
saudara yang perduli pada kita
79 Hanya dokter Umarlah satu-satunya
harapanku, karena hanya ia yang
mengerti bagaimana cara merawatmu
dan mengobati penyakit yang ada di
tubuhmu
80 Hormati dan sayangi dia seperti kau
menghormati dan menyayangi Ayah
kandungmu sendiri
81 Aku beri kau nama Tegar, agar kakimu
bisa berpijak di tanah dengan kuat dan
kokoh.
82 Aku beri kau nama Tegar, karena kau
butuh ketegaran untuk menjalani
hidupmu yang keras dan penuh
tantangan
83 Aku beri kau nama Tegar, agar kau tak
mudah goyah dan patah oleh nasip
buruk
84 Maafkan Ibumu yang tak pernah bisa
mendampingimu dan membesarkanmu,
I will be pushing up daisier soon Naturalness
I have seen death knocking my door no problem
But you are not, my dear son no problem
You are still be saved Readability
You can still make your life useful for others Naturalness
After your birth, I asked doctor Umar to raise no problem
and take care of you
Because I know, I no longer have enough Accuracy
time and ability to do what a mother should
do for her child and no relatives care about us
Only Doctor Umar is my one hope, because Naturalness
only he who understands how to treat you
and treat diseases that are within you
Respect him and care for him like you Naturalness
respect and love your own biological father
I give you the name Tegar, so that your feet Accuracy
can stand firmly on the ground, strong and
sturdy.
I give you the name Tegar, because you need Accuracy
a strength to live your hard and challenging
life
I give you the name Tegar, so you will not Accuracy
easily swayed and broken by bad luck
Forgive your mother who could never Naturalness
accompany you and raise you, my baby.
My life isn’t long anymore
-
-
You are still can be saved
You still can make your life useful for
others
-
Because I know that, I don’t have time
anymore and power to take care of
you, and our family do not care with
us.
Doctor Umar is the only one of my
hope, because only he knows how to
take care of you and how to treat your
disease.
Please, respect and love him, like you
respect and love your biological father
I give you the name of Tegar, so that
your feet can stand strongly and
sturdly on the ground
I give you the name of Tegar, because
you need a patience to face your hard
and challenging life
I give you the name of Tegar, so that
you will not be easily given up and lost
by bad luck
I am sorry, because I could never at
your side and grow up with you, my
 anakku
85 Aku mencintaimu selalu, selalu
86 “Lelah sekali kelihatan kau, Umar?”
87 “Banyak yang dipikirkan ya?”
88 “Yah begitulah, Pak Dekan.”
89 “Suntuk juga rasanya memikirkan nasib
anak kita si Tegar”
90 Mengingat beberapa hari yang lewat,
saya telah memberikan surat wasiat
emaknya itu
91 Oh, bagaiamana reaksi Tegar setelah
membaca surat dari ibunya itu?
92 Dia pastinya butuh waktu untuk
menerima kenyataan yang sebenarnya
93 Selama ini Tegar menganggapku
sebagai ayahnya sendiri
94 Persoalan yang paling besar, yang paling
menggangunya adalah kenyataan nasib
buruk yang telah menimpa ayah dan
ibunya
95 Yah, kenyataan itu tidak mudah baginya.
Tapi si Tegar anak yang kuat. Dia lebih
kuat dari apapun yang pernah saya
temui. Dia pasti bisa melewatinya
96 Cobalah bayangkan, dijaman seperti ini,
masih ada orang orang yang belum
memahami tentang penyakit AIDS,
pengidap HIV dianggap orang yang
harus dijauhi dan diasingkan, seolah
penyakitnya membahayakan bagi
masyarakat, seolah mereka tidak
memiliki hak untuk hidup didunia
97 Permisi pak
98 Bahkan, masih ada perusahaan yang
memecat karyawannya jika terbukti
son.
I love you forever, always Readability I love you, always
“You look so tired, Mr. Umar?” No Problem
“Do you have a lot of things in your mind?” No Problem
“Yeah, well kind of, sir.” Readability “Yeah, I think so, sir.”
“I fell short sighted about the fate of my son Naturalness “I feel so sad thinking about our son,
Tegar” Tegar.”
Given the past few days I have given a letter Readability A few days ago, I had given a letter
from his mother from his mother
Oh, how did Tegar cope with with it after Naturalness how was his reaction after reading the
reading the letter from his mom? letter?
He certainly needs time to accept the truth Naturalness He must need time to accept the truth
All this time, Tegar regarded me as his own Naturalness During this time, Tegar has regarded
father me as his own father
The biggest problem that bothered him the Readability The problem that bothers him most is
most was the fact of the bad luck that had the fact of the bad luck that has
befallen his father and mother befallen his father and mother
Well, that truth is certainly not easy for him. Naturalness The fact was not easy for him. But
But, Tegar is a tough boy. He’s stronger than Tegar is a strong kid. He is stronger
anyone I’ve ever met. I believe he’ll manage than anyone I have ever met. He can
definitely pass it
Try to imagine, nowadays there are still Readability Just imagine, today, there are still
many people who do not really understand many people who do not understand
AIDS. As if the people with HIV are people about AIDS, people with HIV are
who should be shunned and exiled because considered people who should be
the disease is considered harmful to the shunned and alienated, as if the disease
community, as if they have no right to live in is harmful to society, as if they do not
this world have the right to live in the world
Excuse me sir No Problem
In fact, there are still companies, both private Naturalness In fact, there are still companies that
and state-owned, that fire their employees if fire their employees if they have HIV.
 pengidap HIV. Nah, inikan bentuk
deskriminasi. Mereka melakukan
tindakan yang semena mena tanpa
pengetahuan yang cukup. Saya rasa kita
harus bekerjasama untuk menghentikan
stigma terhadap penderita HIV, agar apa
yang terjadi pada si Tegar tidak terjadi
lagi pada siapapun
99 Aku beri kau nama Tegar, agar kakimu
bisa berpijak di tanah dengan kuat dan
kokoh.
100 Aku beri kau nama Tegar, karena kau
butuh ketegaran untuk menjalani
hidupmu yang keras dan penuh
tantangan
101 Aku beri kau nama Tegar, agar kau tak
mudah goyah dan patah oleh nasip
buruk
102 Maafkan Ibumu yang tak pernah bisa
mendampingimu dan membesarkanmu,
anakku
103 Aku mencintaimu selalu, selalu
they prove positive with HIV, this is already
a form of discrimination, you know? They
act arbitrarily without being based on
sufficient knowledge. Now, I think it is our
duty together to stop the stigma of people
with HIV. So that what happens to Tegar,
does not happen to anyone anymore
I give you the name Tegar, so that your feet
can stand firmly on the ground, strong and
sturdy.
I give you the name Tegar, because you need
a strength to live your hard and challenging
life
I give you the name Tegar, so you will not
easily swayed and broken by bad luck
Forgive your mother who could never
accompany you and raise you, my baby.
I love you forever, always
Well, it’s such a discrimination. They
do things that they shouldn't do
without enough knowledge. I think we
have to work together to stop the
community's stigma against HIV
sufferers, so that what happens to the
Tegar does not happen again to
anyone.
Accuracy I give you a name called Tegar, so
that your feet can stand strongly and
sturdly on the ground.
Accuracy I give you a name called Tegar,
because you need a strength to live
your hard life and full of challanges
Accuracy I give you a named called Tegar, so
that you will not be easily given up and
lost by bad luck
Naturalness I am sorry, because I could never at
your side and raise up with you, my
son.
Readibility I love you, always.