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Wind Turbine Revision
Wind Turbine Revision
Wind Turbine Revision
Rian Johns
Ms. Woelke
AP English Language
3 December 2019
There are many sources of energy including oil, solar, water, natural gas and wind. Wind
can be transformed into energy through a turbine. Wind turbines are an environmentally friendly
source of energy that can be used to power homes and businesses. Wind power is clean and safe
for the environment. However, before establishing a wind farm, companies should consider
where the farm can be built, how the farm could affect people and the amount of energy the farm
will be able to provide. These factors are most important to consider because they determine if
Where a wind farm is built is the most important factor to consider because they need an
ideal area with lots of space. Without these conditions a wind farm most likely would not be
built. Wind farms consist of many turbines. These turbines are large and have to be somewhat
spread apart so they do not hit each other. Therefore, wind farms take up lots of space. In Source
A, there is a photo of a large wind farm. It shows what seems to be hundreds of wind turbines
placed upon many miles of desert land. If a big area is not available, a wind farm mostly likely
would not be made, or if it is made, the turbines would be spread out among a larger area. With
the turbines in the same area it would make maintenance easier and quicker, but without a larger
area maintenance would become more difficult. Also, the type of land is important to consider.
For example, “in hard-packed desert areas there is a risk of land erosion” when the ground is dug
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up for the installation of the wind turbines (Source B). This is harmful to both the land and the
turbines. The type of land has to be ideal because problems are created if it is damaged by the
building of wind turbines. Companions have to choose an area that is both big enough and the
Wind farms shouldn't be built near residential areas because the development of wind
turbines can affect the people living around them. The wellbeing of the community is important
because wind farms could cause people to be in harmful positions or become upset therefore, this
Technology found that “sleep interference gets worse the” closer a person lives “to turbines.”
These interferences, that causes sleep deprivation, are a “direct health effect” (Source C). The
noise caused by wind farms could keep people from being able to sleep at night. Without sleep a
person could have a harder time functioning throughout the day. Sleep deprivation is also shown
to cause health problems and sickness. To keep people healthy, wind farms have to be built far
away from any houses or neighborhoods so people will not be affected. People living near wind
farms also might be upset by the obstruction of the landscape. They can cause a problem by
“disrupting territorial views for” people living near them, “who may have grown attached to an
area’s” natural view (Source E). By changing the look of an area, a wind farm could make
people upset because they are so used to an area looking a certain way. These changes can block
or disturbe the beauty of a place. Before a wind farm is built, a company should consider
The last factor to consider is how much energy a wind farm will provide. This is
important because after finding a place for a wind farm, away from people, a company has to
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decide whether or not their farm will produce the amount of energy needed. A “larger turbine
can generate” about “5.2 million KWh” of electricity each year. This is “enough to power nearly
600 households” (Source B). If a wind farm has many large wind turbines it could create enough
energy to power a whole town. This is a great way to bring power to homes. Wind energy is also
the most efficient energy form. It costs $97 to produce 1 MWh of electricity, which is a median
price compared to other forms of energy (Source F). Compared to other sources of energy, wind
power is the most efficient while still being cost effective. That means that the amount of energy
formed from a wind farm is great and will be worth it. A factor to consider before building a
wind farm is how much energy will be formed and how useful it will be.
A wind farm can be very useful. It creates energy that people can use at home or any
other place that needs it. However, before a company decides to build a wind farm, they should
take a few things into consideration. Where a farm is built is an important factor. Wind turbines
take up space and could harm the land where they are built. Also, turbines can affect people. Not
only can they affect a person's health, they can create a sense of sadness when a landscape, that
once was an amazing view, is then covered in turbines. On the other hand, a company may
consider how useful a wind farm may be to improve many people’s lives by providing them with
electricity.