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TED TALK VIDEO : PAIR 1

Name : MUHAMMAD WAFIQ AZIZI BIN MOHD YASIN (AP180113)

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Introduction
Good communication skills are among the essential soft skills to achieve success
in our life. Without efficient and effective communication, an information could
turn into a massive error, frustration, misunderstanding, or even disaster by being
giving out poorly delivered message or misinterpretation. In this modern era,
numerous fields of jobs require individuals to have high competency in
communication skills. People whom acquired the ability of remarkable
communication skills would enjoy better interpersonal relationships with
acquaintances, community, friends, and family. Based on the extract from two ted
talks video that are ‘How to speak so that people want to listen’ by Julian Treasure
and ‘How I overcome my fear of public speaking’ by Danish Dhamani you would
discover new tips and tricks for you to master the art of communication skills. The
comparisons, contrast, details and content of the two splendid talks would be
further discussed below.
Name : MUHAMMAD NURHARFIZZIE BIN MOHD HARFIZZAN (DB180007)

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The title for first video is how to overcome my fear of public speaking by
Danish Dhamani. Communication is the most important skill for personal and
professional success. In this talk, Danish Dhamani discusses how overcoming your
fear of public speaking is key to leading a fulfilling life and unlocking your true
potential. Danish’s vision is to empower everyone around the world to overcome
their fear of public speaking and to become a better communicator. As a first-
generation immigrant, for whom English is a second language, the fear of public
speaking haunted Danish throughout his early life. By constant practicing and
coaching, he soon realized that people are not born public speakers; instead public
speaking is a learnable skill. Besides, Danish Dhamani also shares a few tips to
overcome our fear of public speaking which speech couch, online courses, practice
in front of the mirror, and join toastmaster club. This is what inspired Danish to
create Orai, a mobile app that uses artificial intelligence to improve your speaking
ability.
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Name : NUR AFIQAH BINTI MD SOHOD (DB180096)

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Conclusion
In conclusion, based on the two videos of ted talk. The first video has
shown to us about how I overcome my fear of public speaking by Danish Dhamani.
So, we know that public speaking is a form of communication to share one thought
to influence others. A very well preparation can overcome one’s fear and increase
their confident level towards a success performance. We must believe that each of
us can always become a good speaker if we keep on practising the tips that Danish
Dhamani share to us. While other videos are how to speak so that people want to
listen by Julian Treasure. We can learn for effective communication; the listeners
must avoid any interference to get the right message. By following the guidelines
from Julian Treasure, it can help individuals drive conversations in ways that are
meaningful, thoughtful and attract the audience to listen on our speech. Both
videos are sharing the content that will help us to make a self-transformation and
improvement on our speech. Indirectly we are actively engaged with the audience.