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Paper1 Final Profolio
Paper1 Final Profolio
Paper1 Final Profolio
Shiyin Wang
Writing 2
These cells lose their function but continue to grow they from tumor, which cause
multiple health problems and death. Oncologist aimed to extend the life expediency
and rise the life quality of the patients. They study and develop better treatments for
cancer through series of researches. Unlike other STEM research, oncology research
involve testing with human. It has a strict research sequence to protect the patients
and minimize the risks. This unique type of research has strong impact on the use of
Clinical research is an important step of the oncology research because therapy work
for animal model may not work for human. Therefore, clinical trials are unavoidable
steps to tests the toxicity and effectiveness of the therapy. Generally, one therapy must
go through three clinical trials to get approvement from FDA. For each clinical trial,
must have notable result in the previous clinical trial to go to the next one. If there are
sever side effect or the effectiveness of the treatment is not notable, the research
cannot proceed. Compare to other experiments clinical trials are much difficult to
perform. Phase one and two take one year while phase three clinical trial takes around
five years to go to completion. According to the research, “the median time to develop
a drug was 7.3 years (range, 5.8-15.2 years) and the median cost of development of a
methodology. They have the subtitles to improve the clarity of its structure and they
include every aspects of the research. For example, for the research “Phase 1b study
of pembrolizumab (MK-3475; anti-PD-1 monoclonal antibody) in Japanese patients
paragraphs, with subtitle “Patient eligibility”, “Study design and evaluation” and
“Statistical analysis” these subtitles are the summary of the content, they divided the
Researchers write in such detail with consider of ethic problem. Clinical trials are
testing on human which have much more ethic concern than just laboratory animals.
The purpose of oncology research is to help the patients, but if the researches are not
performed properly, it will lead to the opposite result. Therefore, researchers must
write a detailed research purpose to NCI to show they have efficient methodology that
consider every single aspects of research. For example, in the research “Phase 1b
provided informed consent, and the study was conducted in accordance with current
as NCT02180061.” 2 This sentence shows researchers are concerned about the health
The clinical trials in the oncology also have huge impact on the way researchers
present their evidence. Oncologists usually includes the processed statistical data in
their analysis and conclusion rather than the row data they collected during the
with a diagram. Oncology researches require large amount of data to determine the
certain types of people, there is risk that the therapy may induce health problem in the
others. Which contradict to the purpose of improving life quality. Therefore, the
researchers purposely involve large number of patients covering large range of age
and both gender in clinical trail 2 and 3. For example the clinical trial includes 1783
participants for five years to test the effectiveness of the medicine ipilimumab. 4 It
creates a lot of raw data. If the authors include raw data in their articles. It will
overwhelm the structure of the articles and blur the difference between analysis and
data. This would influence the convention of information and confuse other
researchers. To make the article readable oncologists only represent the statistical data
As demonstrated before, the oncology research does not stand on its own. It
usually belongs to series of researches. These researches have their order and purpose.
Phase 1 clinical trial focus on the toxicity and side effects. Phase 2 focus on the best
dose. Phase 3 focus on the comparison with current therapy. The new following
research is based on the previous research For instance, the phase 3 study it says
ipilimumab 3 mg/kg every 3 weeks for four doses (ipilimumab only).” 5 This is most
the introduction or the conclusion of the paper. Also, oncology articles are usually
explaining a research and it develop conclusion using the data from this research.
They generally do not have much citations in the methodology and data analysis. This
quotation arrangement works the best with the CSE style citation. This type of citation
when addressed to a source, and reference list corresponds to them at the end of
article. This type of citation creates references lists according to the order of its first
appear in the article and reduce the number of foot notes in the articles. This make the
CSE citation style are useful for the oncology citations because the result from
one clinical trial could contribute to multiple researches. For example, the data from
researches.5 As demonstrated in the second paragraph, the clinical trials are expensive
and take a lot of time. Therefore, some researches do not have physical experiment,
they perform further analysis with the data from previous clinical trials. In this
circumstance CSE citation eliminate the repetitive citations by putting them at the end
of the articles.
The third reason is the intern reports. Clinical trials usually take a long time so
the researchers share the progress of research by periodical reports before the
completion. This process could be done by different members of the research team. T
effects. This experiment is not complete but it has published articles to reports the
results. The interim cause different authors to produce similar articles. CSE citation
have a benefit that the research is listed according to their first appearance in the
article and the cited article with similar content are placed together. This help the
oncology and decreasing risks on patients. They also hugely influence the concern on
methodology, the use of statistic data and make the oncologists to use a different type
of citation.
Reference list
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doi:10.1007/s00280-016-3237-x
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4. Hodi FS, O'Day SJ, McDermott DF, et al. Improved survival with ipilimumab in
doi:10.1056/NEJMoa1003466
doi:10.1016/S0140-6736(17)31601-X