Cách kéo dài một câu trong IELTS Writing Task 2

1. Mệnh đề quan hệ

2. Ví dụ

3. Instead of/ rather than

4. Paraphrase

 Nguyên nhân
 Giải pháp
 Một số paraphrase khác

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1. MỆNH ĐỀ QUAN HỆ

Ex1: Take Hoi An as an example. (6 words)

 Take Hoi An, which is one of the most ancient cities in Vietnam, as an example.

Ex2: A student has to devote a lot of time and effort to his or her study in order to get a
university qualification.

làm đa dạng hơn về ngữ pháp A student has to devote a lot of time and effort to his or her
study in order to get a university qualification, which can somehow prove that this student is a
hard-working and persevering person /ˌpɜː.sɪˈvɪə.rɪŋ/ . (kiên trì)

2. THÊM VÍ DỤ (để cụ thể hóa)

Ex1: Advances in science have beneficial impacts on the development of other areas.  làm cụ
thể ra là lĩnh vực gì.

 Advances in science have beneficial impacts on the development of other areas such as
agriculture, education or health care.

Ex2: Children can learn valuable life lessons from their parents.

 Children can learn valuable life lessons, (such as)/ including how to distinguish right from
wrong or how to show respect from the elderly, from their parents.

3. THÊM INSTEAD (thay vì) / RATHER THAN (hơn là)

Ex1: These days, due to busy work schedules, parents often take their offspring to KFC or
McDonald’s.
 These days, due to busy work schedules, parents often take their offspring to KFC or
McDonald’s instead of preparing healthy meals at home for them. (nhớ V_ing)

Ex2: Many of today’s teenagers tend to devote a large amount of time to screen-time leisure
activities, which adversely affects their health.

 Many of today’s teenagers tend to devote a large amount of time to screen-time leisure
activities rather than outdoor sports such as football, which adversely affects their health.

4. PARAPHRASE (viết lại câu bằng cách khác nhưng vẫn giữ nghĩa gốc)

A. Nguyên nhân

 The first reason for… One of the primary reasons for…(1)

Ex: The first reason for global warming is deforestation.

 One of the primary reasons for global warming is deforestation

 The first reason for… One of the primary reasons why…(2)

Chú ý ngữ pháp (1) + N/ NP; (2) + S+V

 One of the primary reasons why the earth is getting warmer is deforestation.

B. Giải pháp

 Sb should… It is necessary for sb to V…

Ex: Governments should encourage people to take public transport.

 It is necessary for governments to encourage people to take public transport (có thể thêm
instead of using their own cars.)

C. Một số paraphrase khác

Ex1: Many children are not mature enough to decide which subject they like.

 Many children are not mature enough to decide which subject they are genuinely passionate
about. / are really interested in.

Ex2: Some primary school children in my town have to walk more than 5 km to school each
day.

 Some primary school children in my town have to walk more than 5 km to school on a daily
basis. (on a weekly basis/ on an annual basis)
 Ex3: Teachers can help children develop many social skills which are essential for their
future.

 Teachers can help children develop a range of social skills which play an important role in
their future.