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Chapter 7 - Planning Shows and Writing Scripts
Chapter 7 - Planning Shows and Writing Scripts
Planning your show to the nth detail is not necessary. In general, the value of
detailed planning increases with the scale and scope of the project as well as
the number of people involved. For example, with a show of only moderate
length and complexity but a loosely organized team of collaborators—say a
class project—planning and the clear communication of the plan help to focus
the objective, lay out the process, and divide up the work.
This chapter offers some general tips on how to prepare a video project. While
none of these suggestions are specific to Visual Communicator, we hope they’ll
help you polish your process and produce better videos with less work—and
with more hair remaining when it’s all done.
1. Opening music
2. Opening Title Slate and image
3. Live video of the person announcing product
4. Product photo
5. Video clip of someone using the product
6. PowerPoint slide listing benefits of the product
7. Closing comments from salesperson
8. Closing image and music
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Here is an example of an outline for the Gravity Demo project, one of the VC shows in the
Demos folder of the Projects Library.
Keep It Simple
Always be clear and concise when delivering your presentation. Write your script so that
your information flows smoothly from one topic to the next. Try not to over embellish your
script. If you spend too much time on a topic you may lose your audience. The average
TV news story is about a minute long. Watch some network television newscasts, paying
particular attention to the way the newscasters convey the information. Everything they say
is scripted, clear, and to the point. You’ll also notice that the news shows try to avoid being
stuck on a “talking head” for too long. They insert graphics, video effects, and over-the-
shoulder visual elements to illustrate what’s being said and keep things interesting.
Resist the temptation to cut and paste the text of your entire employee manual into the
Teleprompter to make an employee orientation video. You would be wasting the most
powerful aspects of the medium now at your disposal (as well as possibly boring your
audience into a deep coma). Video can have much more intellectual and emotional impact
than text, but to gain this impact you must distill your message to its most essential
points. If you don’t keep your audience interested, they will tune you out and your
message will not get through. The biggest mistake in many videos, especially corporate
and educational videos, is that they contain too much detail. If you want your audience to
digest a lot of technical information, better to feed it to them in written form. If your goal is
to communicate the essentials, convey a feeling, generate support, and inspire action, then
make a video.
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Remember, while your audience may have varying levels of knowledge, education, and
sophistication regarding your subject, almost everyone is an expert at watching TV. We all
have expectations about how it should look. A good exercise is to watch some television
shows and analyze the content and pacing. Notice how they are put together scene by
scene. You will see that the best television programming usually has a lot of visual action
and that the messages are kept fairly simple and easy to understand. Now try to create a
script or outline on your subject or message that has similar pacing and content.
Ease of Reading and Comprehension – It’s All in the Flow & Rhythm
Where two words are equally effective, the shorter one is generally preferable. Consider
that in the Gettysburg Address, only 19 of 278 words (6.8%) were three or more syllables. In
John F. Kennedy’s inaugural address, the ratio was 108 out of 1372 words (7.9%). You can
do worse than to follow the lead of these two enthralling orators.
Bite-Sized Chunks: If you have a very long video, break the content up into chapters or
segments. Delivering too much information in an unbroken stretch can turn your audience
off. If you have VC Studio, you can use Chapter Markers (page 109) to provide easy access
to the sections.
Sending the Script Through Your Team’s Approval Process: If you are writing a
script for your company, it’s easy to distribute scripts via email or other electronic means
for final approval from management, marketing, and other groups.