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Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 Summary
Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 Summary
Shakespeare's Sonnet 18 Summary
Sonnet 18
Sonnet 18 Summary
The speaker begins by asking whether he should or will compare "thee" to a summer day. He says that his beloved
i more lovely and more even-tempered. He then runs off a list of reasons why summer isn’t all that great: winds
shake the buds that emerged in Spring, summer ends too quickly, and the sun can get too hot or be obscured by
clouds.
He goes on, saying that everything beautiful eventually fades by chance or by nature’s inevitable changes. Coming
back to the beloved, though, he argues that his or her summer (or happy, beautiful years) won’t go away, nor will
his or her beauty fade away. Moreover, death will never be able to take the beloved, since the beloved exists in
eternal lines (meaning poetry). The speaker concludes that as long as humans exist and can see (so as to read), the
poem he’s writing will live on, allowing the beloved to keep living as well.
Lines 5-6
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm’d;
Here comes the major personification of nature. Put simply, the speaker’s saying sometimes
the sun is too hot, and other times you can’t even see it at all (hidden, we assume, by
clouds).
But instead of being boring, he calls the sun the "eye of heaven," refers to it using the word
"his," and gives it a "complexion," which generally means refers to the skin of the face.
Check out how much more information about the summer we’re getting than we are about
the beloved. Indeed, the speaker is carefully describing the summer individually, and even
in human terms, while he only describes "thee" in one line and only relative to the summer.
"Complexion," in particular, is especially interesting, as it brings back the whole "humours"
theme we saw in "temperate."
"Complexion" used to be used to describe someone’s health, specifically with regard to their balance of
humours. Thus, we see here again that the speaker is combining descriptions of external weather
phenomena with internal balance.
Lines 7-8
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature’s changing course
untrimm’d;
With these lines, the speaker gets even broader in his philosophy, declaring that everything
beautiful must eventually fade away and lose its charm, either by chance or by the natural
flow of time. Kind of like teen pop stars.
Now what exactly does "untrimm’d" refer to?
We might read it as what happens to "fair" or beautiful things. By that reading, things that
are beautiful eventually lose their trimmings, or their decorations, and thus fade from
beauty.
Lines 11-12
Nor shall death brag thou wander’st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow’st;
In another bit of personification (so far we’ve had summer and the sun), the speaker
introduces death. Death, the speaker claims, won’t get a chance to claim the beloved in the
valley of the shadow of death (this death’s shadow idea is from Psalm 23:4), since he/she is
immortal.
The general meaning of line 12 (you’re eternal) is actually easier to see if you read the line
as a metaphor. As a metaphor, "lines to time" definitely refers to a poem, since they are
lines set to a meter, or time.
Here, then, the poet is making two bold claims: first, that his poem is "eternal," and second,
that it nourishes and develops "thee," as it is where he/she is able to "grow."
Now this willingness to discuss the fact that he’s writing a poem within the poem itself is
pretty cool stuff.
One fancy way of describing this kind of artistic tactic is called "breaking the fourth wall." That’s a
metaphor itself, and you can think of it as a stage: in a normal play, any indoor action goes on as if the
front edge of the stage were an imaginary wall. The actors, in other words, are supposed to pretend
they’re in a real world with four walls and no audience watching them. If the actors, however, recogniz
that there’s an audience out there, they’re considered to be "breaking" through that fourth wall, as they
try to do away with the artificiality of pretending they’re just living out a normal life up there on stage.
Well that’s exactly what’s starting to go on here. If you were thinking this poem was a love letter to a
beloved, you can forget it. This is a poem written to be read by an audience, and that audience, by
continuing to read the poem, will try to make the beloved grow into a character, and in turn make
him/her immortal.
Lines 13-14
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
The couplet, in the end, is really just a fuller admission of what the speaker points toward
in line 12. He has completely shattered the fourth wall, and (successfully, we should add)
predicted that this poem will continue to be read, and the beloved will continue to be
analyzed and re-analyzed for all time. In other words, by allowing us to try to give life to
"thee" (figuring out who he/she was), the speaker and the poem itself give "thee" life.
In other words: as long as men live and can read, this poem will continue to live, and so
keep "thee" alive.
But let's examine the language more closely. First of all, we’ve got some more
personification: technically, eyes don’t really "see," and poems certainly don’t "live."
Also, it’s worth noting the incredible arrogance here: why should we believe that as long as humankind
exists, this poem will continue to live? Can’t we imagine a world in which every copy of this poem were
burned, and so "thee" would stop living?
And even if people are still reading the poem, what kind of "life" is it that the beloved will
be leading? This definitely doesn’t sound like heaven. The beloved can’t make any choices
for his or her self, isn’t conscious, and can only be recognized as the poet described him or
her.
In fact, we ought to wonder whether it is "thee" who will be alive, or rather the poet’s (very
limited) representation of "thee."
Plus, remember how in line 9 we noted that summer could also be eternal? Well, the end of this poem
kind of makes you wonder. So why, again, is the beloved eternal but not summer? Just like summer, the
beloved is going to fade away in real life, and just like summer, the beloved has been written about and
preserved in a poem. How come, by the end of the poem, it’s only "thee" who lives on and
not nature? Finally, remember how back in line 1 we were already wondering if "thee"
might not just be the speaker’s lover, but also us readers? Well now the speaker has broken
through the fourth wall, and revealed himself as not just a lover, but also as a writer of
poetry.
So check this out (this should be fun for you math kids out there): the speaker is talking to
"thee," and that speaker is actually the poet. Now who do poets write for? That’s right, for
us readers.
So we have three conditions here: the speaker speaks only to "thee," the writer speaks only
to us, and the speaker and writer are the same thing. Doesn’t that mean, then, that "thee," is
the same as "us"?
Trippy.
Frankly, we think that’s a pretty cool reading. Basically, the speaker here is speaking to all
of mankind. All of us feel this pressure of mortality, but here Shakespeare crystallizes that anxiety in a
poem, so that this idea of mankind will live on forever.
The last lines, then, can be read as circular: "so long as mankind lives, mankind will continue to live."
Cool? Too weird? You decide.
In any case, these last two lines hammer home something we suspected from those very first pronouns:
this speaker seems more interested in himself and his abilities as a poet than the qualities of his
addresses.
A Shakespearean Sonnet in Iambic Pentameter
This is a classic Shakespearean sonnet with fourteen lines in very regular iambic pentameter. With the
exception of a couple relatively strong first syllables (and even these are debatable), there are basically
no deviations from the meter. There aren’t even any lines that flow over into the next line – every
single line is end-stopped. There are two quatrains (groups of four lines), followed by a third quatrain
in which the tone of the poem shifts a bit, which is in turn followed by a rhyming couplet (two lines)
that wraps the poem up. The rhyme scheme is ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
Sonnet 18 Themes
Love