Story #2 (Descriptive Writing Picture Prompts)

Language Targets: Story Structure; Dialogue; Show vs. Tell; Conventions

Name: ________________________________

Areas that need Criteria for this How is this Areas that are
revision to meet assignment meeting criteria exceeding
criteria

Story is clear and logical

 Beginning introduces
characters, setting,
problem; tries to
engage the reader
 Story is generally
predictable
 Events are believable
in the context of the
story
 Dialogue adds to plot
and characterization

 Uses detail and

description to develop
setting, characters,
events, images
 Descriptive language
is used to enhance the
story, create mood
etc.

 Variety of sentences
are used (errors in
complex structures
may occur)
 Sentences are
complete
 Punctuation, Spelling,
Grammar all accurate
 Clear evidence of
editing
Story #1 – Peer Feedback

Your Name: ________________________________

Areas that need Criteria for this How is this Areas that are
revision to meet assignment meeting criteria exceeding
criteria

Story is clear and logical

 Beginning introduces
characters, setting,
problem; tries to
engage the reader
 Story is generally
predictable
 Events are believable
in the context of the
story
 Dialogue adds to plot
and characterization

 Uses detail and

description to develop
setting, characters,
events, images
 Descriptive language
is used to enhance the
story, create mood
etc.

 Variety of sentences
are used (errors in
complex structures
may occur)
 Sentences are
complete
 Punctuation, Spelling,
Grammar all accurate
 Clear evidence of
editing

Peer #1 Name: _______________________ Colour commented in _______________________

Peer #2 Name: _______________________ Colour commented in ______________________