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English Independent Study Booklet Sum2
English Independent Study Booklet Sum2
English Independent Study Booklet Sum2
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The will to win, the desire to succeed, the urge to reach your full potential... these are the
keys that will unlock the door to personal excellence.
2014-2015 IGCSE Timetable
*There will be Literature intervention for students who did not sit the exam in May 2014
Vocabulary used to write about thoughts and feelings.
Task: Tick the words that you know. Use the grid at the bottom to create a table of new words. Think of headings
for each column
Feeling Metaphor
Feeling Metaphor
Feeling Metaphor
Feeling Metaphor
Feeling Metaphor
The event:
Emotion 1 Emotion 3
Emotion 2
Emotion 4 Emotion 5
Writing about a rollercoaster of emotions based on the clip
Lashin’ Techs by Courttia Newland
It was all so smooth. Travis and Mikey spotted the handbag dangling from
the women's shoulder like a pendant - loose, unheeded, yet valued.
Mikey pointed this out to Stern, who confirmed she was the one.
They followed her up Kensington High street in a tight v formation, rubbing their hands
together; this would be easy.
From behind, they could see the woman was white, and quite old, though not too old. None of
them wanted a heart attack victim on their hands.
Travis always wondered if Stern, being mixed-race, felt a way that all their victims were white,
but he'd never had the balls to ask outright.
Judging by his friend's actions, he didn't give a toss, and neither did they.
No more time for idle thoughts. They nodded at each other.
Stern made the move, quick as a greyhound. One quick tug and she was on the floor.
Another and the strap broke with a thin crack. They ran as fast as they could, until her voice
penetrated Stern's ears.
It stopped him as surely as a brick wall, while the others fled.
"Nicholas? Nicholas that can't be you, can it?" she cried from the floor.
Stern turned around to face her and dropped the bag. Ice cold fear dissolved in his belly. He
managed to utter one word before some hero rushed in.
"Gran?"
Task: Choose a devices that the writer has used. Write an extended PEE/PEA
paragraph to explain why it is effective.
Extract from Oliver Twist
Great Expectations and Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens The Scholar and Society Within by Courttia Newland
Extended Writing: Write about an emotional rollercoaster
Vocabulary to describe a place
London
Semantic circles
Research Project: Telling Stories
My journey to London
Interview your parent/carer to discuss how they feel about living in
London.
Possible questions to ask?
Have you always lived in this part of London? If not where else have
you lived? Why did you come to London? What were your hopes for
living in London? What do you like about it? What would you
change? Describe what life is like for you in London. If you could
sum London up in one word what would it be?
Task: Annotate these two poems
Poems about London
London by William Blake
I wandered through each chartered street,
Near where the chartered Thames does flow,
A mark in every face I meet,
Marks of weakness, marks of woe.
Morning
and island man wakes up
to the sound of blue surf
in his head
the steady breaking and wombing
wild seabirds
and fishermen pushing out to sea
the sun surfacing defiantly
from the east
of his small emerald island
he always comes back groggily groggily
muffling muffling
his crumpled pillow waves
island man heaves himself
William Wordsworth
I just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. You don’t think that something like
this will ever happen to you, do you? How wrong I was…
BANG! The flare whizzed past my head. It was like I was in a war zone! All around me, people
were yelling and throwing bricks, stones, anything they could get their hands on. Some kid had
a graffiti can and was spraying ‘Death to pigs’ in blood red paint across the front of a shop’s
shutters, ignoring the wall of police that were advancing from behind.
To my left, a wall of riot shields. To my right, several shops that were just begging me to enter.
Perspectives
I am writing from the point of view of the protesters/ the police/ the residents (circle)
Eyes
Complexion
Lips Build
Shape of face
Make notes of interesting words or phrases from the model descriptions
Notes
Writing about a person from a picture
Task: what do you learn about the people in the following texts? Make notes underneath each one.
It was the middle of the day. Nazneen had finished the housework. Soonshe
would start preparing the evening meal, but for a while she would let the time pass.
It was hot and the sun fell flat on the metal window frames and glared off the glass.
A red and gold sari hung out of a top-floor flat in Rosemead block. A baby's bib
and miniature dungarees lower down. The sign screwed to the brickwork
was in stiff English capitals and the curlicues beneath were Bengali. No dumping.
No parking. No ball games. Two old men in white panjabi-pyjama and skullcaps
walked along the path, slowly, as if they did not want to go where they were going.
A thin brown dog sniffed along to the middle of the grass and defecated.
The breeze on Nazneen's face was thick with the smell from the
overflowing communal bins.
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“It have people living in London who don’t know what happening in the
room next to them, far more the street, or how other people living. London is a
place like that.
It divide up in little worlds, and you stay in the world you belong to and you don’t
know anything about what happening in the other ones except what you read in
the papers.”
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Squeezed between an almighty concrete cinema complex at one end and a giant intersection at the
other, Cricklewood was no kind of place. It was not a place a man came to die. It was a place a man
came in order to go other places via the A41. But Archie Jones didn't want to die in some pleasant,
distant woodland, or on a cliff edge fringed with delicate heather. The way Archie saw it, country
people should die in the country and city people should die in the city. Only proper. In death as he
was in life and all that. It made sense that Archibald should die on this nasty urban street where
he had ended up, living alone at the age of forty-seven, in a one-bedroom flat above a deserted
chip shop. He wasn't the type to make elaborate plans -- suicide notes and funeral instructions --
he wasn't the type for anything fancy. All he asked for was a bit of silence, a bit of shush so he could
concentrate. He wanted it to be perfectly quiet and still, like the inside of an empty confessional
box or the moment in the brain between thought and speech. He wanted to do it before the
shops opened.
Overhead, a gang of the local flying vermin took off from some unseen perch, swooped, and
seemed to be zeroing in on Archie's car roof -- only to perform, at the last moment, an
impressive U-turn, moving as one with the elegance of a curve ball and landing on the
Hussein-Ishmael, a celebrated halal butchers. Archie was too far gone to make a big noise
about it, but he watched them with a warm internal smile as they deposited their load, streaking
white walls purple. He watched them stretch their peering bird heads over the Hussein-Ishmael
gutter; he watched them watch the slow and steady draining of blood from the dead things --
chickens, cows, sheep -- hanging on their hooks like coats around the shop. The Unlucky.
These pigeons had an instinct for the Unlucky, and so they passed Archie by. For, though he
did not know it, and despite the Hoover tube that lay on the passenger seat pumping from the
exhaust pipe into his lungs, luck was with him that morning. The thinnest covering of luck was
on him like fresh dew. Whilst he slipped in and out of consciousness, the position of the planets,
the music of the spheres, the flap of a tiger-moth's diaphanous wings in Central Africa, and a whole
bunch of other stuff that Makes Shit Happen had decided it was second-chance time for Archie.
Somewhere, somehow, by somebody, it had been decided that he would live.
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He had risen from his chair and was standing between the parted blinds
gazing down into the dull neutral-tinted London street. Looking over his
shoulder, I saw that on the pavement opposite there stood a large
woman with a heavy fur boa round her neck, and a large curling red
feather in a broad-brimmed hat which was tilted in a coquettish Duchess
of Devonshire fashion over her ear. From under this great panoply she
peeped up in a nervous, hesitating fashion at our windows, while her
body oscillated backward and forward, and her fingers fidgeted with her
glove buttons. Suddenly, with a plunge, as of the swimmer who leaves
the bank, she hurried across the road, and we heard the sharp clang of
the bell.
"I have seen those symptoms before," said Holmes, throwing his
cigarette into the fire. "Oscillation upon the pavement always means an
affaire de coeur. She would like advice, but is not sure that the matter is
not too delicate for communication. And yet even here we may
discriminate. When a woman has been seriously wronged by a man she
no longer oscillates, and the usual symptom is a broken bell wire. Here
we may take it that there is a love matter, but that the maiden is not so
much angry as perplexed, or grieved. But here she comes in person to
resolve our doubts."
As he spoke there was a tap at the door, and the boy in buttons. entered
to announce Miss Mary Sutherland, while the lady herself loomed behind
his small black figure like a full-sailed merchant-man behind a tiny pilot
boat. Sherlock Holmes welcomed her with the easy courtesy for which he
was remarkable, and, having closed the door and bowed her into an
armchair, he looked her over in the minute and yet abstracted fashion
which was peculiar to him.
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• Learn, finally, those little things you’ve always got wrong and never bothered to work out why e.g. the difference between it’s (it
is/it has) and its (belonging to it); who’s (who is/who has) and whose (belonging to who); continuous (without stopping) and
continual (with stops); uninterested (without interest) and disinterested (without prejudice); lay (with object) and lie (without
object).
• Remind yourself of any punctuation marks of which you have never been sure.
• You could revise the rules for the use of the apostrophe (missing letter or possession) or the hyphen (using two words as one) or starting a
new paragraph (change of time, place or topic). Lack ofparagraphing is particularly detrimental to your mark as it is evidence of lack of
planning and/or inability to sequence material.
• Even if you’ve always had trouble knowing where to put full-stops, it’s never too late to learn and now is the time, as your writing marks will
be seriously reduced if you are unable to form proper sentences use commas where you should use full-stops. If there is no connective you
must use either a full-stop or a semi-colon at the end of a group of words containing a verb, before starting another one.
Practise joining simple sentences into complex sentences, using a range of connectives and participles. Above all avoid using ‘and’, ‘but’ and
‘so’.
• Practise varying your sentences to develop your own style. You don’t want your sentences all to follow the same formula and start in the
same way. Try writing some of the sentence types here:
i) main clause followed by one or more subordinate clauses e.g. ‘The cat fell asleep, after it had eaten, although someone had switched on
loud music.’
ii) subordinate clause(s) followed by main clause e.g. ‘After it had eaten, the cat fell asleep.’
iii) subordinate clause followed by main clause followed by another subordinate clause e.g. ‘After it had eaten, the cat fell asleep, although
someone had switched on loud music.’
iv) main clause containing embedded subordinate clause e.g. ‘The cat, which had been sleeping all day, fell asleep again.’
v) main clause containing embedded subordinate clause, followed by another subordinate clause e.g. ‘The cat, which had been sleeping all
day, fell asleep again, even though there was loud music playing.’
• Learn the correct version of commonly misspelt words which you know you are likely to need to use
e.g. separate, definitely, business, opportunity, surprise, privilege. The best way to learn them is to:
i) stare at them and try to ‘photograph’ them; cover them while you write them from the imprint on your memory; check back to see if you
were correct. This is the Look, Cover, Write, Check method. Copying words letter by letter does not fix the ‘letter-strings’ in your mind
successfully.
ii) remember the rule: ‘i’ before ‘e’ except after ‘c’, if the sound you are making is long double ‘ee’.
iii) if in doubt whether a word has a single or double consonant apply the generally sound rule that if the vowel is short the consonant is
double, but if the vowel is long the consonant is single e.g. ‘hopping and hoping’, ‘sitting and siting’, ‘dinner and diner’, ‘writing and written’.
Create mnemonics, little sayings and rhymes which, however silly, actually work e.g. ‘necessary’ is spelt with one c and two s because ‘one
coat has two sleeves’; ‘possesses’ possesses five eases
v) be aware of prefixes, so that you can work out which words have double letters and which
don’t e.g. ‘dis-satisfied’ as opposed to ‘dismay’, and the spelling of words like ‘extra-ordinary’ and ‘con-science’.
vi) be aware of suffixes, so that you can work out which adverbs end in ‘ly’and which in ‘lly’ (i.e. only those which already have an ‘l’ at the
end of the adjective, like ‘beautiful – beautifully’).vii) think about how the word is spelt in other languages you know e.g. the French verb
‘separer’ will remind you of how ‘separate’ is spelt in English.
viii) break difficult words down into syllables in your mind, so that you can hear how ‘in-ter- est-ing’ must be spelt
IGCSE Assessment criteria
Band 1 (36–40): Confident and stylistic completion of challenging tasks throughout the
Portfolio.
• W1: Candidates describe and reflect effectively upon experience, give detail and analyse
thoughtfully what is felt and imagined. Arguments are cogent and developed in mature,
persuasive thought.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): Facts, ideas and opinions are ordered logically, each stage in the
argument or narrative carefully linked to the next. Paragraphing is a strength, and candidates are
confident in experimenting where appropriate in the structure of expressive writing.
• W3/5 (sentence structures): Candidates write with assurance, using a wide range of effective
vocabulary and varied, well-constructed sentences.
• W4: Candidates vary their style with assurance to suit audience and context in all three
assignments.
• W5 (spelling, punctuation and grammar): Candidates write accurately. They use punctuation
and grammatical structures to define shades of meaning. They spell simple, complex and
technical words with precision.
Band 2 (31–35): Frequent merit and interest in the choice of content and the manner
of writing.
• W1: Candidates describe and reflect upon experience and analyse with occasional success what
is felt and imagined. Some argument is well developed and interesting, although the explanation
may not always be consistent.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): Facts, ideas and opinions are often well ordered so that the construction
of the writing is clear to the reader. Sentences within paragraphs are mostly well sequenced,
although some paragraphs may finish less effectively than they begin.
• W4: Candidates give evidence of understanding the need to write appropriately to audience
and context even if there is not complete consistency in the three assignments.
• W5 (spelling, punctuation and grammar): Candidates show some signs of understanding how
punctuation and grammatical structures can be used to aid communication. Errors of spelling,
punctuation and grammar are minor, and rare at the top of this band.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): A clear attempt is made to present facts, ideas and opinions in an orderly
way, although there may be some insecurity in the overall structure.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): There is evidence of overall structure, but the writing may be presented
more carefully in some sections than in others. There may be examples of repetition and the
sequence of sentences within paragraphs may be insecure in places.
• W3/5 (sentence structures): Candidates write with occasional competence, using a mixture of
effective and straightforward vocabulary and some complex and some simple sentences.
• W4: Candidates show occasional evidence of writing with some understanding of audience and
context, but this is not sustained.
• W5 (spelling, punctuation and grammar): They use a limited range of punctuation and
grammatical structure with some care, although occasionally grammatical error will cause the
reader some difficulty. There may be quite numerous errors, particularly of sentence separation
and the misuse of commas.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): Facts, ideas and opinions are presented in paragraphs which may be
inconsistent. The overall structure is unsound in places.
• W4: Candidates make slight variations of style according to audience and context, although this
does not seem deliberate.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): Facts, ideas and opinions may appear in partially formed paragraphs of
inappropriate length and some attempt is made to provide a beginning and an end.
• W3/5 (sentence structures): Candidates use simple, mainly accurate vocabulary. Attempts to
write complex sentences may involve repetition of conjunctions and some blurring.
• W4: Candidates may show occasional, brief acknowledgement of the possibility of writing for
different audiences and contexts, but overall there is little variation of style.
• W2/5 (paragraphing): Inadequate presentation of facts, ideas and opinions creates blurring,
although there may be some signs of an overall structure.
• W3/5 (sentence structures): Candidates demonstrate a narrow vocabulary and there are
unlikely to be more than a few accurate sentences.
• W4: Candidates occasionally write inappropriately or their command of language is not strong
enough to acknowledge audience or context.
• W3/5 (sentence structures): Very simple meanings are attempted, but the candidate’s
knowledge of vocabulary and sentence structures is too slight to make adequate sense.
• W5 (spelling, punctuation and grammar): The amount and breadth of error prevents sufficient
communication of meaning.