ARTICLE O ARTICULO

the funniest performance you have ever seen and explaining why it made you laugh.

la actuación más divertida que hayas visto y explica por qué te hizo reír.

 Informal language (ya que estará dirigido al director de un centro a un

supervisor o aun grupo u organización)
 Usar contracciones
 Idioms
 phrases verbs
 140-190 words
 Texto enganchador
 Usar connectors o conectores

Introduction(objetivo de tu reporte+ información Fuente (opcional)

The aim/purpose of this report is to outline/explain…. And to make
recommendations for improvements in the future.
I conducted a survey among students and parents to find out what
their needs are.
Current situation/ facilities (descripción objetiva, fuerzas, puntos
fuertes positivos y negativos o ventajas y el problema principal)
 Long lessons
 No Exams preparations provided
 WIFI
Firstly/ To begin with, (several students/ clients have pointed out
that) muchos estudiantes o clientes han señalado que…
It is (believed/thought) that(se piensa que)
Regarding…(respecto a)
As a result (students are more ..
Consequently
Therefore
For this reason
Secondly/ Moreover
Finally
 Recommendations(sugerencias y posibles resultados, ofrece una
solución)
To begin with,
Furthermore,
As far as (internet connection) is concerned
I would strongly suggest/ recommend + (doing) ING
I would strongly advise to + infinitive
It would be advisable to + infinitive
It would be beneficial to students to + infinitive
If the academy were to consider these suggestions..+ would be
happier
https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0098800/reviews

The series stars Will Smith as a fictionalized version of himself, a street-smart

teenager from West Philadelphia who is sent to move in with his wealthy uncle
and aunt in their Bel Air mansion. However, his lifestyle often clashes with the
lifestyle of his upper-class relatives. This sitcom is filled to the brim with so
many witty puns and sarcastic quips, that it'll leave you wondering how they
where able to think up such creative jokes.

THE BEST COMEDY- TV SHOW

“The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air” is one of the funniest TV programmes I've ever
seen. Even though it has been on television for years and I watch the same
episodes over and over again it still is amusing. It's a hilarious family comedy
show full of laugh-out-loud humour and plenty of heartfelt dramatic moments
that anyone can enjoy.
This sitcom is brimming with so many witty puns and sarcastic quips, that it'll
leave you wondering how they were able to think up such creative jokes. One
might even say it manages to subvert your expectations in a way you'd have
never thought of before. Some of the more mature jokes like the innuendos and
double entendre will go over younger viewers' heads and keep adults laughing
their heads off. Moreover, the opening is accompanied by an upbeat jingle
which lasts throughout the duration of its very addictive theme song.
It's certainly not just one element, every part of this show is magic, the
wonderful acting from all involved; the witty one-liners and banter between
characters, the cool atmosphere; the soundtrack, it all perfectly fits into what has
to be one of the most remarkable and well-made sitcoms of the 90's.

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This has real potential as you have covered all the points requested in clearly organised
paragraphs; however, the fourth paragraph would benefit from a second suggestion and
your concluding paragraph could be better structured to be more formal.
 
Main heading Report on Shopping Facilities in Lima

Introduction
The purpose of this report is to make recommendations about the main
shopping facilities based on the best value for money in Lima. (lacks detail)
Food
I would highly recommend doing a Lima food tour, especially in "Huariques".
Huariques refers to the best traditionally gr traditional small, family-run
restaurants where the menu is based on recipes passed down through the
generations. Moreover, another choice gr In addition, there is “La Bistecca”,
which offers a varied buffet service the best of wo service of the best Peruvian
food. (cost?)
Study materials
In Lima’s gr center centre of Lima, “El Virrey” bookshop, they gr bookstore,
it will find a good range of dictionaries ww items in stock. For those ww on a
tight budget, For students on a tight budget, there is a huge stationery shop in
the main square, where you st students can buy everything from files and pens
to software.
Souvenirs
Mw The “Indian Market” is one of the best artisan markets in Lima, considering
it has the best price-quality ratio (put this at the start of the sentence)
Considering it has the best price-quality ratio, the “Indian Market” is one of the
best artisan markets in Lima. There are a wide variety of artisan craftworks,
silver jewelry and other silverware, clothes made of Peru's famous alpaca,
pottery, paintings, wooden pieces, and much more from all over Peru. (avoid
long lists)
Conclusion
I expect ww students toww I hope students have the best of the
experiences gr experience throughout their stay, and hence they will find this
information helpful.
 
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vf             =              verb form
ww          =              wrong word
wp           =              wrong phrase
wo           =              word order
mw          =              missing word
P              =              punctuation/capitalization
st             =              style
R              =              repetition