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Assessment 1 - 17456933 2
Assessment 1 - 17456933 2
Both qualitative and quantitative studies have been undertaken in the article “How do
secondary school English teachers score NAPLAN? A Snapshot of English teachers’ views”
(Carter, Manuel and Dutton, 2018), aiming to gather views of secondary English teachers on
the National Assessment Program – Literacy and Numeracy (NAPLAN). The study focuses on
teachers’ voices and perspectives which are not often recognised and addressed in public
debates or research regarding NAPLAN. A discussion on the background and context of the
testing as well as previous research findings regarding the impacts and perspectives of
standardised testing programs are presented and create a general idea of the direction of
the study. The study utilises a questionnaire to question the principle, validity and purpose
of the testing from NSW secondary English teachers across three sectors including
government, non-government and Catholic schools. This Critical review will scrutinize the
“Present Study”, “Results” and “Conclusion” from the research paper around the
The research adopts a mixed-mode design of a qualitative and quantitative method allowing
the study to integrate the strengths of both approaches increasing the depth and reliability
of the study. The interpretation of the findings are carried out using thematical coding
where findings are segmented, and summarised capturing the significant notions (Given,
2008, p.2). The qualitative approach has been welcomed by educators due its strength in
providing rich and diverse insights into educational contexts and allowing for exploration,
resulting in findings that will have an impact on educational practices (Kerrvin, Viale,
Howard, Herrington and Okely, 2016, p.34). Conversely, the quantitative research approach
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allows for the examination of the causes and trends behind the effects that are observed
which is vital in an educational context where there are dynamic aspects of improvement
continuously being encouraged (Kerrvin, Viale, Howard, Herrington and Okely, 2016, p.35).
The research method was clearly identified, adopted rating scales for the purpose of
gathering qualitative data with a degree of sensitivity and differentiation and open-ended
questions to catch authenticity, richness, honesty and depth of responses. However, the
researchers chose to compile data using the non-random sampling method. Such an
approach limits the generalisation of the findings making them susceptible to criticism. The
researchers have mentioned that participants were NSW Secondary English teachers from
the three schooling sectors, however, they have not identified the requirements which were
used to select the participants leading to an assumption of researcher bias (Ames, Glenton
The findings of the research have been clearly structured and have provided some depth
into the data obtained. A strength of the article is that is utilises thematic coding to present
the research findings. The results are segmented in question and answer format
summarising the data collected per question, providing some direct quotations from the
respondents and portraying the significant notions from the views shared by the
participants allowing for a deeper and realistic understanding of their perceptions. However,
the data presented gives utmost emphases on the negative views regarding NAPLAN
obtained through qualitative methods. The positive responses are slightly mentioned using
only quantitative data and no emphasis or discussion on these findings nor any mention of
the positive qualitative data gained is presented, thus making the research subject to being
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“bias or unbalanced” (Bishop, Oldendick, Tuchfarber, 1982, p.81). The inclusion of positive
qualitative data to provide some discussion and an understanding of teachers views to the
positive quantitative data presented could have allowed the researchers to shape more
The conclusion sees the researchers tie up the study by confirming that the research
findings are consistent with previous studies surrounding standardised testing. An overview
of the research findings focusing only on negative views regarding NAPLAN gained
throughout the study is presented, neglecting any in-depth discussion of positive views
The researchers also mention that “the present offers additional empirical evidence to
inform debate and policy reform” (Carter, Manuel and Dutton, 2018, p.152) which is a
generalised statement with no statistical evidence to support the claim. As the study has
In addition, the researchers fail to reflect on their study to recognise any areas of
consider their practise and plan using diagnostic and unbiassed thinking to enhance their
learnings for future study (Waring and Evans, 2014, p.18) as well as support the credibility of
The researchers, however have presented overall findings in the conclusion which
contribute to adequately answering the research question and purpose which can generally
qualitative and quantitative questionnaire generates a depth and reliability in the data
obtained. The data is well presented and structured in segments where findings are
summarised, and direct quotations are used to create a realistic impression of perceptions.
Despite the study’s strength, it does lack credibility in various ways. These include; the use
of non-random sampling which limits the generalisation of findings and makes the research
susceptible to researcher bias, the in-depth presentation and discussion of the negative
views obtained from the study whilst very briefly presenting positive responses utilising only
quantitative data without the support of quantitative data, a generalised statement of the
findings with no statistical evidence as well as a lack of disclosing any weaknesses in the
study. Had the researchers adopted a random sampling method for obtaining data,
presented un-biased findings, and presented and reflection, the study would have obtained
greater creditability and balance with regard to this significant educational topic.
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Carter, D., Manuel, J., & Dutton, J. (2018). How do secondary school English teachers
score NAPLAN? A snapshot of English teachers' views. Australian Journal of
Language and Literacy, 41(3), 144-154.
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and Okely, Tony, Author. Research for Educators. Second ed. 2016. Print.
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