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Peralta's Paper (Chap. V To Chap, XII
Peralta's Paper (Chap. V To Chap, XII
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33 Don’t you think Figure 5.1 should be placed in The Human Evolution on page 38
with the following introduction to serve as opening paragraph for that section.
34 1 5 ... show the improvement of traits inherited by the succeeding generation to make
(not)
(are for) the improvement of traits (which are) inherited by the succeeding
generation
Note: Use show instead of are for and delete which are
34 3 3 in those parts of the world.. (not) in these parts of the world..
5 territory that was not affected (not) territory that were not affected
4 6 Weismann’s and other studies, however, debunked this (not the} theory
8-9 changes in the organism. Nevertheless the hypothesis that species could
transform, still influences the study of evolution
35 line 2 the fittest can have more offprings ... (not) more offspring
1 Note: You need not enumerate all the sources that say the same thing The
latest will do
36 last paragraph 12 ... in the right environment, it can have (not) ... in the right environment,
can have
38 2 NOTE: Put Figure 5.1 with its introductory para graph in the section The Human
Evolution (See page 33)
46 revised attachment
1 4 ... tools resulted in (not shifted in)the use of food producing technology in farming
5-6 ... Farming was the most significant factor that led to the Neolithic revolution
4 1 ... when humans built (not build) societies
3 craftsmanship, and which were used in long and short distance trade
(not)
craftsmanship, and long and short distance trade
4 agricultural villages which gave rise to life in urban areas
(not)
agricultural villages to life in urban areas
5 3 ...societies which are (not is)densely populated
47 line 1 ...smelting copper and (not) smelting , of copper and
NOTE: Delete the comma and of
Line 3 ... which facilitated the rapid spread
NOTE: Put the article the
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47 1 6 animal-driven dependence technology to fossil-run machine
NOTE Put a hyphen in animal-driven and fossil-run
2 7 ... and the development of markets (NOTE: Put the article the)
3 1 ... has to do with cultural needs (not) posits on the cultural needs
3 13 less adopted a democratic form of governance NOTE: Put the article a)
4 2 noted that it is this period (not)noted that it is during this
period
NOTE: Delete during
48 last paragraph 15 ... a global society which depends on
(not)
... a global society that depended on
17 ... and which is governed by an economic political ideology that subscribes to
(not)
... and governed by an economic political ideology that subscribed to
49 NOTE: Won’t you add items in the Mastery Test of Chapter V to cover the new texts you added bringing
the evolutionary period up to the present age?
69 2 14-15 Note the recast of the last two lines of the second item marked *
When these feelings become intense, When these feelings become intense,
they develop intimacy resulting in self- (Not) they are transformed into intimacy and
disclosure with their peer group. self-disclosure to their peer group.
69 last paragraph line 7 Mass media has provided (Not) Mass media provided
Note: Use the present perfect tense not the past tense
70 opening line ... capable of making independent decisions (Not) decision
Note: Use the plural form not the singular
1 1-2 Mass media exerts a powerful influence on... affects how people think and act, and
contributes to role entrapment
NOTE: Delete the source after Mass media since you indicate it at the end of the
paragraph and Use the “-s” form of the verb
5 Mass media studies indicate that... (Not) Mass media studies reported that...
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70 1 9-15 Note the recast of lines 9-15
Schools develop and enhance social consciousness in students by using Schools socialize students by
Philippine symbols and myths (the flags, pledge and singing of the national invoking Philippine symbols
(not)
anthem); by encouraging obedient behavior to the rules and regulations of and myths...
the school, the laws of the government and the norms of society; and by
inculcating nationalistic ideals and values through a nationalistic curriculum. ...obedient behavior to rules
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regulations and conduct of
school, government and
society...
3 4 NOTE: Move the source to the end of the paragraph and limit it only to
(Hughes & Kroehler, 2008; Durkheim, 1961).
5 ... while a strong social control results in a low incidence of deviancy
NOTE: Put “results in” before “a low incidence...”
4 4 models of behaviors (not) model of behaviors
NOTE: Remove the source in lines 4 and 6. They are already indicated at the
end of the paragraph
9 ... that have and endorse criminal values... (not) ...that teach criminal
values...
5 1 ... becomes deviant only when it is... (not) ... becomes deviant only once
it is...
84 1-2 The label makes the person commit acts (not) ... makes the person to commit
acts
NOTE: Delete “to”
... plan their criminal acts (what they ... plan their criminal acts so that they
will do) such that they can anticipate (not) can anticipate their actions, and the
the consequences of their crimes and consequences of their crimes and the
the reactions of their potential victims reactions of their potential victims
85-86 Note the recast of the last sentence with the opening word on page 85 and continued on page 86
There are two kinds of white (not) White collar crimes are of two
collar crimes: the corporate kinds:: the corporate and the
and the organized crimes. organized crimes.
86 1 3 ... selling faulty or dangerous products, inside stock trading, unfair labor practices.
(not)
... selling faulty or dangerous products, or inside stock trading, or unfair labor practices;
and
NOTE: Delete the second and the third “or”. End the sentence deleting “ ; and”
2 2 ... like a business enterprise that sells drugs, (not) to sell drugs
3 3 money laundering, the invasion of a NOTE: Put “the” before “invasion”
3 5-6 NOTE: Retain only the source indicated at the end of the paragraph. You may
delete those in lines 5and 6
7 ... the Internet user, and different kinds of fraud: non-delivery of merchandise, ...
(not)
... the Internet user, advance free fraud, identification theft, non-delivery of
merchandise,
NOTE: identity of the internet user was mentioned earlier so you may delete
identification theft
4 3 NOTE: Rearrange the sequencing of the enumerated crimes such that the related
crimes come one after another
marital rape, incest, sibling violence, child abuse, abuse of elderly and disabled...
5 ... neglect of their spouses (not) ... neglect against their spouses
5 11-12 ...weak social attachments ... (not) ...weak social attachment...
NOTE: Add “s” to “attachment” to make it plural
13 ...personality adaptable in a capitalistic society
(not)
...personality that is adaptable to a capitalistic society
87 1 6 And it is responsible for (not) And is responsible for Note: Put “it” before “is”
88 1 4-6 Note the recast of lines 4-6
1 10 ... but was actually ... (not) but is actually Note: Use the past tense
3 7 implementation of the said program . Note: Add “of the said program”
In addition, the inmates hoped that
the government would take charge (not) the government should be responsible
of facilitating an inmate-centered in facilitating
rehabilitation program
Note: Put a hyphen in “inmate-centered”
89 1 8 informal social-control Note: Put a hyphen in “social-control”
10 community “formal social-control” Note: Enclose “formal social-control”
In quotation marks and
hyphenate social-control
SUGGESTED READINGS
Alampay, L.P. (2006). Risk factors and causal processes in juvenile delinquency: Research and implication for
prevention. Philippine Journal of Psychology, 39.
Chapter / page HOW SOCIAL GROUPS AND SOCIETY ARE ORGANIZED (pages 91 - 108)
IX 91 After reading this chapter, you should be able to:
A. Enumerate the advantages of group life and describe the factors that influence group
selection and group functioning
B. Distinguish between the different kinds of groups: (primary vs. secondary; large vs. small;
in-group vs. out-group; membership vs. reference; instrumental vs. expressive)
C. Compare and contrast the different types of social processes (communal-sharing, authority-
ranking, equality-matching) and cite examples of conjunctive and disjunctive
interactions among groups
D. Describe and give examples of different social structures in groups – social institutions and
social organizations (formal as well as informal) and the norms that the groups follow
(counterculture or conservative)
E. Indicate the different classifications of human society based on spatial location (rural vs.
urban); social relationship (personal, intimate, kinship related vs. those who do not
share a common culture); social bonds (mechanical vs. organic solidarity); orientation
idealistic, ideational, sensate) and economic factors ( Pre-industrial, Industrial, Post-
industrial/Deindustrialized societies
F. Review and react to the findings of research on Filipino social groups
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99 1 13-14 Important is the ability of people
(not)
What is important in the group is the ability of people
100 5 4 lines that differentiate them... (not) lines differentiates them...
NOTE: Make it a “that” phrase and delete “s” from “differentiate”
101 3 5 ... a flat organizational form (not) ... a flat organizational forms
11 ...made possible by social media (not) ...made possible by the social media
NOTE: Delete “the”
102 3 9 ... or school and who are personally... (not) ... or school are personally...
NOTE: Add “who are” to make it a clause
104 1 3 ... importance of personal freedom (not) ...importance personal freedom
NOTE : Put the preposition “of” before “personal freedom”
105 1 2 the social bonds that prevail in those societies (not) ... prevailed in societies
NOTE: Use the base form “prevail” not the past tense “prevailed”
and add “those” before “societies”
NOTE ALSO: Please double-check . You might have interchanged the specifics of Mechanical solidarity and
Organic solidarity Shouldn’t the social bonds in Organic solidarity
result from “ common sentiments and shared moral values ... (Lines 4-7)”
whereas
Mechanical solidarity is based on based ”the differences, division of
labor and specialization... (Lines 8-12)
SUGGESTED READINGS
Garo-Santiago, M.A, Resurrection, R., & Tan-Mansukhani, R. (2009). Adolescent identity in the context of the
Filipino family. Philippine Journal of Psychology, 42 (2), 175-193.
Lajom, J.A., Canoy,N., Amarnani, R., Parcon, A.M., & Valera, P.M. (2009). Barkadahan: A study of peer group
norms and values among Filipino adolescents. Philippine Journal of Psychology, 44 (2)
SOCIAL INSTITUTIONS
Chapter / page THE MARRIAGE INSTITUTION (pages 109 - 121)
X 91 After reading this chapter, you should be able to:
A. Discuss and explain the general characteristics and group functions of marriage
B. Distinguish between monogamy and polygamy; polygyny vs polyandry; exogamy vs.
endogamy; sororate vs levirate secondary marriage
C. Compare and contrast legal separation and annulment of marriage
D. Describe the different types of marital exchanges
E. Enumerate the seven characteristics of a Philippine marriage and Indicate the legal
requirements of marriage in the Philippines
F. Evaluate the law on concubinage
SUGGESTED ACTIVITES AND OUTPUT
*View and write a reaction paper on any of these films: “Dalawang Ama” and “The Womb”
*Form groups and express and justify your opinion on the following issues:
- Young marriages are bound to fail.
- Divorce and same sex marriages should be legalized.
- Querida involved with men of power enjoys some prestige.
*Produce a video clip of a marriage ceremony or a Power Point presentation showing how to marry in the
Philippines
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111 1 1 Delete the word INTRODUCTION but retain the entire paragraph. As it is, the paragraph
itself serves as the introduction and there is no need to mark it out as such
112 2 1 ... society specifies as to the persons... (not) ... society specifies to the persons...
NOTE: Use “as to”
116 2 2 ...allowed to marry at 15 for males and ... (not) ...allowed to marry at
15formalesand
NOTE: Put a space between the words
7 NOTE: Hyphenate common-child in Number 1. Line 2 and Number 3 Line 1
118 3 6&8 common-law marriage (not) common law marriage
NOTE: Hyphenate common-law
120 2 2 ...and this pattern was different (not) ...and this pattern were different
5 sector employment. However, this finding was only partly supported by the Williams
(not)
sector employment however this finding was partly supported by the Williams
NOTE: *Make “However, this finding...” the start of another sentence
*Put “only” before “partly supported”
11 declined but is still greater than... (not) declined but still greater than...
NOTE: Put “is” before “still”
3 1 ... education, and who had less stable.... (not) ... education, had less stable....
NOTE: Put “and who” before “had less”
3 2-4 Note the recast of lines 2-4
They observed that men employed in They observed that men employed in the
the formal sector in many blue collar formal sector were most likely as the
jobs were most likely to remain single. many blue collar jobs to remain single.
Furthermore men working in any sector (not) Furthermore men working in any sector
of either blue or white collar jobs were of either blue or white collar jobs were
more prone to get married than those more prone to have been married than
men who were unemployed. those men who were unemployed.
SUGGESTED READINGS
Alano, M. (1994) Infidelity: The querida system in the Philippines. Philippine Journal of Psychology, 27 (2).
Kabalanan, M. (2004). New path to marriage: The significance of increasing cohabitation in the Philippines.
Philippine Population Review, 3 (1)
Williams, L.B. & Arguillas, M.J. (2012). Correlates of non-marriage in the Philippines. Philippine Population
Review, 11 (1)
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125 4 4-8 Note the recast of lines 4-8
129 3 6-7 provide their children with information they should know
(not)
socialize their children regarding information they are expected to know
5 3-5 The activities and location of family members can be monitored in places covered by
GPS
(not)
Family members can monitor the activities and movement of their members in any
place covered by GPS, which otherwise concern only a particular family member.
SUGGESTED READINGS
Carandang, M.L. & Lee-Chua, Q. (2008). The Filipino family: Surviving the world: Psychological essays on the
Filipino family. Pasig City: Anvil Publishing
Ochoa, D. (2014). Parental socialization of moral behavior in the context of poverty. Philippine Journal of
Psychology, 47 (1).
Ortega, R.A. & Hechanova, R.M. (2010) Work-family conflict stress and satisfaction among dual earning
couples Philippine Journal of Psychology, 43 (2).
Parcon, A.M. The prediction of adult attachment orientation from perceived from maternal and fraternal
parenting characteristics. Philippine Journal of Psychology, 44 (2).
From the beginning of time, humans have Humans, from the beginning of time of their
viewed the world as composed of reality and ascendency, humans have created a world
the unknown, of seen and unseen realities and composed of reality and the unknown, of seen
(not)
forces. They regarded the unknown as that and unseen realities and forces. Humans
which controls the events of the world of connect these two components by regarding
(not)
reality. Hence they practiced religious rituals the unknown as that which controls the events
based on those beliefs to invoke help from the of the world of reality and by practicing rituals
powers-that-be (the gods, forces and entities) based on their beliefs. Religion reconciles the
who control the destiny of man. (Hendry, powers of the gods, forces and entities with
1999) the destiny of humans. (Hendry, 1999)
139 2 2 ...and has two basic components: (not) ...and has two basic parts:
4 ... reality hence they instill awe,... (not) ... reality that instill awe,...
6 and sacrifices. The profane, on the other hand, consists of the common,...
(not)
and sacrifices; while the profane is the common, ...
4 4 ... to respect others who perform their own peoples’ roles
(not)
... to respect others and perform their peoples’ roles
141 line 7 NOTE: Start a new sentence after (Keesing & Strathern, (1998). They can...
2 4 ... but, unlike the creeds, religious doctrines are formally written in religious scriptures
(not)
... but, unlike the creeds, are formally written in religious scriptures
NOTE: Indicate religious doctrines after “creeds”
145 1 1 A theistic religion is mainly a belief in the (not) A theistic religion consists of a belief in the
2 4-6 Note the recast of Introduction lines 4-6
“televangelists,” who did not have “televangelists,” The televangelists are
formal religious training but who are charismatic and effective speakers who
legitimized by organized churches or (not) attract listeners and contributions, and
denominations because they are who do not have formal religious training
charismatic and effective speakers but are legitimized by organized churches
who can attract listeners and raise or denominations.
monetary contributions.
147 2 6 ...practices and doctrines that instill (not) ...practices and doctrines that in still
NOTE: “instill” is one word not “in still”
148 5 4 ... “provides cognitive material ... (not) ... “provides a cognitive material
NOTE: Delete the article “a”
149 line 1 the University of the Philippines because of secularization – a process of de-religionization in
(not)
University of the Philippines because of secularization-a process of de-religionization in
NOTE: Put “the” before University of the Philippines and put a dash not a hyphen after
“secularization”
149 2 7 state controls or restricts religion (not) state control or restrict religion
NOTE: Use the “s” form of “controls” and “restricts“
9 ... religious peace-making , but (not) ... religious peace making building, but
NOTE: Put a hyphen in “peace-making” and delete “building“
3 3 Muslim residing in a democratic state (not) 3 Muslim residing in democratic state
NOTE: Put the article “a” before “democratic state”
150 2 3 Muslims have aligned themselves to (not) Muslims have aligned to
The frequency of attending religious and one’s sexual attitudes...
3 2 -3 The frequency of attending religious and one’s sexual attitudes...
(not)
The frequency of attending religious and sexual attitudes...
NOTE: Put “one’s” before “sexxual attitudes”...
5-7 Note the recast of lines 5-7
Women with strong religious beliefs will Women with strong religious beliefs are
most likely disapprove of premarital and most likely to disapprove of premarital and
extramarital sex while married people (not) extramarital sex, and ever-married people
will most likely express disapproval of are most likely to express disapproval of
extramarital sex extramarital sex
SUGGESTED READINGS
Abad, R. Filipino religiosity: Some international comparison. Philippine Studies, 43, 195 - 221
Ocampo, A.C., Mansukhani, R., Mangrobang, B. & Juan, A.M. (2013). Influences and perceived impact of
spirituality on Filipino adolescents. Philippine Journal of Psychology, 46 (1).
Rivera, R. (2010) Philippine Catholicism as disruptive public religion: A sociological analysis of Philippine
Catholic bishops’ statements, 1946 to 2000 Philippine Sociological Review, 58.