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RESEARCH ESSAY OUTLINE 2
Introduction
public health care issue mainly reported among children at an alarming rate.
Summary: In Scott Kaufman’s (2014) article on The Creative Gifts’ of ADHD, he discusses the
abilities and talents of children who are diagnosed with Attention Deficit Hyperactive Disorder
(ADHD). Kaufman provides several case studies that support the argument that individuals with
ADHD characteristics mostly attain higher levels of creative thought and fulfillment than
Thesis Statement: However, there is a great need for a wide discussion on how the talents and
abilities of the individuals with ADHD can be recognized, developed, and mentored., as his
discussion of the creative traits and thoughts of the ADHD individuals is too shallow to be used
in their development.
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Topic Sentence (1st supporting point): Baseless claim by Kaufman on the ADHD individuals’
desirable traits such as creative thought and are far much better in creativity than normal people.
This claim is juxtaposed on a baseless front. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention
improving the knowledge that will help in resource development to help ADHD people.
RESEARCH ESSAY OUTLINE 3
There are different symptoms for children with ADHD. CDC says, “ADHD can cause
problems in how well children do in school, in their ability to make and keep friends,
An individual who is not attentive and a poor listener cannot be very creative.
Topic Sentence (2nd supporting point): Poor correlation between ADHD individuals’ common
traits and normal individuals without first defining and explaining what is ADHD, its symptoms,
and signs.
Discussing several signs of ADHD would have helped in bringing out the common traits
“To compare and contrast between ADHD traits with the normal traits of people,
Focusing on these symptoms, it will be wrong for Kaufman to compare them with
creative thoughts.
Topic Sentence (3rd supporting point): More packaged and already concluded study that does
not portray any kind of open discussion and free flow of ideas portraying poor research
approaches.
The idea has no evidence-based research since the National Institute of Mental Health
ADHD individuals can maintain inner imagination, fantasies, and daydreams which
According to Ahmann, (2017), “there are better intervention and treatment mechanisms
that can be adopted for individuals with ADHD if at all each patient is observed at a
personal stance".
Though there are common symptoms for people with ADHD but might not be reported
Conclusion
Generally, Kaufman’s sentiments have some instances of truth but his overgeneralization
without presenting the right premises for his argument makes the study flop and lacks
compelling abilities to the readers. To identify the abilities of ADHD individuals, detailed
research is required to analyze the common traits and the best activity that suits them with little
or no struggle. The treatment process is not based on classwork alone but it focuses on other
Memorable Statement
Since Kaufman's discussion does not capture the common symptoms of ADHD, then his
research is a mere critique of the treatment processes adopted by health care providers and other
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