Grade and Comment

KEY
Green - Very good analysis.
Yellow - Please see comments/queries
Red - Incorrect. Please review concept

Research 5/5
Organization 4/5
Analysis 6/10

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The final score on your project is 15/20

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Introduction -
● “...a masterfully strategic Jamaican business success story” — brilliant.
● “A number of recommendations have also been made to enhance the company’s
competitiveness in the future.” — How did you determine this?

Strategies - Corporate strategies are also denoted by whether the company decides to grow,
stabilize and or retrench. Please review this concept.
Your Functional Strategy is incomplete.
Porter’s Five Forces was very well done
VRIO Framework was very well done
Value Chain Analysis - “The operations of JMMB is to help their clients achieve their life goals
by providing world class financial advice, expertise and assistance” This is a mission statement
rather than an analysis/indication of its operational standard.

IFAS, EFAS and SFAS Tables - Very good

No evidence of the TOWS Matrix which informs your recommendations.

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November 4, 2019