To highlight: It is evident that you make a future prediction in your activity using your own

words and the auxiliary “will”, you also considered the grammatical structure, vocabulary
and context required.

Corrections: Dr, Claus is absolutely right that in 10 years technology will be so advanced
that it will go from being science fiction to becoming a reality in our lives, because of
demographic changes and globalization.
A few years ago one thought that the GPS was science fiction and now see in our decade
it is part of our routine and because with the arrival of robots, it would help us with time
since by working we lose time with our families, and even in first world countries they are
already creating robots in Japan they built a pilotable robot like the Robocop movie, of
course there is no doubt that we humans are always better for certain tasks, It is also very
good about clean technologies for our environment since, as this is in 2020, it is very bad,
with these advances they seek to reduce environmental pollution and waste, because with
these technologies it causes less environmental damage than other types of technologies
and It would be good for companies and industries to invest and focus on sustainable
development and continuous improvement. and it´s good that Dr. Claus predicts the
impact of future technologies, It has never been easier, but if we start to think about the
future and begin to understand the risks and challenges that await us, we will avoid
crashing into them when they become a reality.

El comentario de alguna persona

I agree with what the colleague says and as such, and that is that the world is
being updated more and more and even we want to be up to date with technology
and that makes it progress more quickly.