EXPANDING & ELABORATING THE CONTENT POINTS

Complete the outline below:

DISADVANTAGES OF E-SPORTS

CONTENT POINT SAMPLE SENTENCE DETAIL

(Solution)
causes addiction The 1) first disadvantage of E-sport Teenagers should not spend too
is it causes addiction. much 2) time on the online games.

increases violence The second 3) disadvantage is it Games should have age-related

may increases violence among ratings to 4) control the
teenagers. aggressive contents.

exposes to verbal The other disadvantage is a 5) You can avoid 6) cyber bullying by
abuse teenager may exposes to verbal choosing your own teammates.
abuse while playing with the others.

risks health Set time 8) before you start

Another disadvantage is e-sport playing the game to avoid
can risks health especially your 7) continuous eyes exposure to the
eyes screen.

9) less family time Lastly, e-sport causes a teenager Play the games with your family
get less family time. members.