Meeting 7

Finalyzing an Argumentative Essay (Argument for and against)

My dear students, you have got
1. The outline of your Argumentative Essay focusing on arguments for and against (meeting 5)
2. The draft of your Argumentative Essay that focuses on arguments for and against (meeting
6)
3. Now please do the finalizing (meeting 7).

The draft of Argumentative Essay that focuses on arguments for and against (meeting 6)
‘If children are never exposed to risk, they will never be able to cope with risk.’
Everyone knows that vulnerability provides a good opportunity for them to grow into better
people. The problem is only a few people who are willing to take risks. It is our nature as
humans who want to continue to be in the comfort zone. As a result, to avoid prospects, people
are more likely to play safe. Only when there is pressure and coercion from outside makes us
take risks. Even the environment also teaches us to play safe.
There is some logic for parents to encourage their children to expose themselves to take risks.
One of the points is that children can know their best potential. Children naturally have a very
high curiosity; thus, they will try to do something new that they want and like. Through
experiencing many trials and mistakes, children will be able to determine what they want, and
then, will feel that they have talent in a particular field. After that, children will get the
opportunity to grow and develop their character.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why parents often avoid their children who are at
risk of exposure. One of them is some parents worry about the dangers that can harm their
children. Parents cannot stand seeing their children hurt, which makes parents more protective of
their children. We know that children are naturally awkward; therefore exposing them to danger
can put them in danger.
In conclusion, we can see that fear of failure is the most significant cause why many people don't
want to take risks. If you want to succeed, you will most likely have to take and overcome the
threat. There is no other way to reach the peak of success without taking risks.

The outline of Argumentative Essay focusing on arguments for and against

Topic / Essay Question: If children are never exposed to risk, they will never be able to cope
with risk.
Thesis Statement: How important it is for children to face risk or not?
Body Paragraph:
 Some logic for parents to encourage their children to expose themselves to take risks
a. The children can know their best potential.
b. Through experiencing many trials and mistakes, children will be able to determine what
they want, and then, will feel that they have talent in a particular field.
c. The children will get the opportunity to grow and develop their character.
 There are several reasons why parents often avoid their children who are at risk of
exposure.
a. Some parents worry about the dangers that can harm their children.
b. Parents cannot stand seeing their children hurt, which makes parents more protective of
their children.
c. The children are naturally awkward; therefore exposing them to danger can put them in
danger.
Concluding Sentence: In conclusion, we can see that fear of failure is the most significant cause
why many people don't want to take risks. If you want to succeed, you will most likely have to
take and overcome the threat. There is no other way to reach the peak of success without taking
risks.