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Eng 1050A Sept 28 Essay - 1 Workshop SAMPLE
Eng 1050A Sept 28 Essay - 1 Workshop SAMPLE
Eng 1050A Sept 28 Essay - 1 Workshop SAMPLE
Cameron Smith
Eng 107
Ms. Cole
February 1, 2018
Essay #1 Draft #1
Lies in a Bottle
Today, advertisement is thrown in our faces. With the $17 billion dollars spent on
advertising a year in America, it’s no secret that companies will do whatever it takes to get you
napkins, and even on cars. With the invention of the smartphone and online pop-culture,
advertisers are now attaching the online culture with a bombardment of ads. We see them before
every video, on Snapchat, Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, and pretty much every website you go
to is making money off of the ads that it runs on their site. Facebook had acquired $9.16 billion
in ad revenue in the second quarter of 2017, that says a lot. Advertisers are willing to invade our
privacy to get the information that they need to provide their consumers with worthwhile ads.
Facebook has been caught listening in on people’s conversations. Google is keeping track of
everything you search, and so is every other app on your phone. Although they invade our
privacy, on the other hand, they do it so that the ads are relevant to us and out lives. The
alternative to keeping our privacy, is dumb ads that do not relate to what we want. If you’re a
college student, you don’t want and ad for diapers, it’s just not relevant to you and your life.
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Other than getting to know us on the internet, another tactic advertisers use to get us to
buy their product is manipulation, Advertisers will try to impress you with promises they can’t
keep, pretty colors. And celebrities that tempt you/ Companies are motivated to do this in efforts
to get you to buy something that you did not originally need. The influence that advertising has
on America and pop-culture is at an all time high. Famous Rap star Tyler The Creator syas in an
interview that one of the things that scares him the most are “people who don’t like what they
like.” Tyler goes on to explain that what he means is, people follow trends and thus lose
themselves and their own interests by doing so. People mindlessly follow the crowd, advertisers
do this with their attractive and manipulating ads. A Best-selling author by the name of Seth
Godin says, “Facts are irrelevant. What matters is what consumer believes: (Godin). Godin is
implying that companies will tell lies if they believe they will benefit the company. The only
thing the y are about is making money. This is the attitude that many companies take towards
their customers. It we look at Coca-Cola, we see a long history ads that are far from the truth.
The following is an examination of the Coca-Cola Company’s persuasive strategies and the
misleading information through words and images to persuade their audience to buy their
product. In addition, companies like Coca-Cola are manipulative and mislead the audience into
thinking their product will provide them with good health, attractive romantic partners, and a
Coca-Cola has been around since 1892, that’s over one hundred years. They have a big
reputations, and many ads that we can look back on and realize that they portray less than the
truth. It we take a look at our first ad here, Coca-Cola is portraying a nurse drinking Coca=Cola.
The nurse is dressed in white. White is commonly associated with goodness, purity, and
coolness. White is also associated with low-fat food, low weights, and dairy products. Nurses are
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in the healthcare profession, which implies that they have extensive knowledge about the foods
and drinks that would be beneficial to one’s health. Using the nurse could persuade the
consumers that she knows what is healthy, so why would a nurse drink something that is
unhealthy, thus soda, specifically Coca-Cola must be beneficial to one’s health in some way.
At the bottom of the ad it says Coke on the job keeps workers refreshed. This implies that
Coca-Cola is not only good while you work, but it is good for you. This, however, as we all
know, is the furthest thing from the truth seeing as how we all know good and well that soda is
not good for you at all. Coca-Cola is trying to appeal to the consumers need to feel safe, which is
Basic Appeal #12. Nobody wants to be unhealthy, and in this case, nobody wants to be unhealthy
on the job. Many Americans take their health seriously and would use Coke’s wording as an
excuse to drink soda. Daniel G. Aaron and Michael B. Siegel agree as the state, “One factor
behind the American obesity epidemic is soda consumption. The average American consumed
46 gallons of soda in 2009, giving the U.S. one of the highest rates of per capita soda
consumption of any country. About half of Americans drink sugary drink every day. Recently, it
has been estimated that today consumption caused one fifth of weight gain in the U.S. between
1977 and 2007. Therefore, finding ways to reduce soda consumption is important” (Aaron,
Siegel). With many Americans drinking soda every day, we have found a direct correlation
between soda and obesity. Soda has been associated with weights gain, and has even been a
known factor in America’s obesity epidemic. The Google definition of an epidemic is: A
say that Coca-Cola is spreading a disease as they spread their advertisements all over the world.
Coca-cola is misleading people into thinking that soda is good for people’s health. Although
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many Americans are aware that this is not the case, many children are very susceptible to this
false advertising. Some may say advertising to kids is immoral. Some may it is even more
immoral to give a false picture of health to kids for the sake of money. This is just another
example of what Coca-Cola will do to persuade you to drink Coca-Cola. Their tactics are
We can take a look at another ad by Coca=Cola and see more use of manipulative tactics that are
less than realistic. We see Marilyn Monroe in a red dress and high heels drinking a Coca-Cola.
Red is associated with passion, desire, and love. Dark red is often times associated with will
power, leadership, courage, and longing, Marilyn Monroe is a symbol of sex and is a
pop=culture icon. This is a classic example of an advertisers appeal to our need pf sex, as well as
our need for association. The ad reads I’ve kissed Marilyn. Most guys want to kiss Marilyn, and
what the ad is implying is that if you want to kiss beautiful women, then you should drink Coca-
Cola. It is indirect, but the message is there. Coca-Cola appeals to our need for sex by showing
Marilyn Monroe using the product. Marilyn Monroe is so relevant in pop-culture that it appeals
to our need to be associated with her. Who doesn’t want to know Marilyn Monroe? However, it
is not hard to discover that soda has nothing to do with your romantic or even sexual
relationships. Marilyn Monroe is here to tease you with her red dress and smooth legs in order to
get you to use the product. She is becoming a part of the product and playing a character, a sexy
character, who loves Coca-Cola. Companies don’t need facts o persuade you, they simply need
to appeal to your human way of being. They use it all against you for the sage of making money.
Kaufmann agrees when he says, “Knauer (1873) mentioned that Public Interest Representation, a
public interest law group at Georgetown University Law center, analyzed the documentation for
59 television ads and found that 41 were not substantiated by data submitted to the Federal Trade
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Commission (FTC)” (Knauer). Knaufman states that many television ads are not substantiated by
data. In other words, ads don’t need to be backed up by facts. Marilyn Monroe doesn’t need to
persuade you with facts, she can easily persuade you with sex. Coca-Cola is really good at
appealing to our need for sex (Basic Appeal #1) and association.
The last ad we will be analyzing attempts to convince us that it will quench our thirst.
The ad presents a female pilot holding a Coca-Cola, and the ad reads Send thirst flying and below
it, Pause…go refreshed. The words are written in yellow, which in face is a color used by most
fast fod companies to grab your attention and appeal to your sense of freshness, joy, and
happiness. The ad presents the pilot wearing white, and as stated before, white is associated with
purity, goodness, and coolness, as well as low-fat food, low weight, and dairy products. The ad
also has a green background. Green is a color that represents growth, endurance, stability, and
hope. Coca-Cola would like you to believe that their product can provide you with the endurance
to get through your day without being thirsty. Coca-Cola once again is trying to appeal to our
need to feel safe. Nobody wants to be thirsty, so Coca-Cola will try to provide you with a nice
cold beverage to quench your thirst. This, however, could not be further from the truth. The
airplane puns are cure, but dehydration is not. Holland supports this when she writes, “Water
cooler advice tells us today is off limits because it’s dehydrating. The logic goes that soda, with
its caffein and sugar, doesn’t replace any of the fluids you’re losing while you sweat. The
caffeine, which is a diuretic, will actually make you need to urinate more quickly, and you’ll lose
more fluid” (Holland). Holland clearly stated that soda will make you lose fluid, and will not
replace the fluids that you are using. Soda will dehydrate, and do the opposite of what Coca-Cola
wants you to believe. Although it is a drink, an although you may feel like you are elimindating
your thirst, you are actually doing yourself a disservice by drinking Coca-Cola, or any soda at
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that matter. Your body becomes dehydrated when you are losing more fluids that you are taking
in. you are dehydrated when your body does not contain enough of the water that it needs to
carry out its bodily functions. Coca-Cola may seem to be helping your thirst, but in the end, it
Coca-Cola wants you to believe that it’s such a great thing. Coca=Cola doesn’t want you
to be aware of all the down sides to its product. It will shove their ads in your face anywhere you
are, in efforts to get you to but their product. They don’t’ care about your health. They don’t care
about your needs. They don’t care about your safety. All they care about is your money. Coca-
Cola should not be allowed to falsely advertise to billions of people all across the globe with
their manipulative tactics and lies. Don’t let your kids drink Coca-Cola, its not healthy. Don’t let
your kids watch the advertisement, it will disappoint them, educate your children about the lies
that they serve us in a bottle. Arm yourselves with knowledge as you continue your journey in
this bid world of false advertisement. Think about what a company wants you to beoieve. What
does the company think of you? Do they take your for a fool? Do they thin kyou’ll give your
money to just anyone? How does all of that make you feel? It is important think about the rrue
meaning behind advertisements because they are all around us, influencing us to buy things that
we don’t need. Ultimately these poor misguided decisions will negatively affect your health and
well-being. Coca-Cola and tis lies should not be tolerated today in America. It’s time we use the
knowledge and experience that we have from using their product and say no more lies,
The next time you feel like drinking Coca-Cola, or any soda for that matter, remember
what it does to your body. Remember the tactics that they’re using to fool you, and actively take
part in the change by deinking water. Gandhi always said, “you have to be the change that you
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want to see in the world” (Gandhi). Help make a change fight false advertising by simply
drinking water. Fighting the system has never been so easy. The Nest time you’re thirsty, put that
soda down and drink some water. Make an investment in your health today by saying no to soda.
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Works Cited
www.cooklight.com/eating-smart.
Suggett, Paul. “Honesty, Content, and Creativity.” The Balance, 22 Mar. 2013,
www.thebalance.com/inspirational-advertising.
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