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Article of Atikah Aprilliani (A1bp18065)
Article of Atikah Aprilliani (A1bp18065)
PICTURE SERIES
(An English Action Classroom Research at The Eleventh Grade Students of SMAN 8
Bengkulu in the Academic Year of 2018 / 2019)
N
Mean: x= ∑ fx
In
N which:
x = Mean of Pre-
y=∑ fy Test
y = Mean of Post- Test The result of the pre-test showed that
∑ fx = The sum of Pre-test score the writing skills of the students were
∑ fx = The sum of Pre-test score still low. Students writing scores of pre-
N = The Number of Students test were between 45 – 70. It is still lower
than the minimum standard score. The
The reflection was useful to show the minimum standard score of English is 75.
effectiveness of the action conducted in the None student who got score more than
teaching and learning processes. The 70. It means that all of the students got
influences of the implementation on the scores under the minimum standard. The
student’s involvement were identified. The highest score in pre-test was 70, and the
results of the identification were lowest score was 45. So, the result of pre-
determined as successful or unsuccessful test above showed that the students
ones. The successful actions were used and writing skills were needed to be
reapplied in the next cycle, but those improved. The researcher decided to
which were unsuccessful would be improve it by using picture series.
changed or improved into the suitable one. A. Cycle 1
The first cycle was conducted on
FINDING AND DISCUSSION Monday, March 11th 2019 at 09.45 a.m.
1. Finding There were 29 students in the XI science
The researcher conducts the action 1 class, consisting of 13 male and 16
research into two steps. First, the female students. In this cycle, the
researcher does the observation and researcher played a role as a teacher. The
conducts the preliminary data (pre-test). teacher did the teaching-learning process
Then, the second, the researcher conducts in three phases; pre-activity, main-
the action research. The test was activity, and post activity. The pre-
conducted on Monday, March 04th 2019. activity phase covered all the thing done
There were 31 students in the XI science as the openinng such as greeting, cheking
1 class, consisting of 12 male and 19 the student’s attendance, and giving
female students. Pre-test was given in the motivation for students to learn English
first meeting to know the student’s and practice more. Then, the researcher
writing skill before giving the treatment. did the brainstorrning or give some
This test took 30 minutes long before the questions to simulate students
meeting ends. The researcher asked the participation in the lesson.
students to write an explanation text. In The result of this cycle, the researcher
this case, they wrote an explanation text concluded that implementing picture
by choosing the topic that they interested series could improve the students’
about. writing skill based on comparison
between pre test and 1st post test. During
the observation in teaching and learning
process, the researcher did not only teach
the students writing skill but also the
researcher gave a motivation. They got
motivation to be better in writing class,
and they had braveness to make
explanation text. The result of the first
post-test also showed that the students’
writing skill score had improved.
Students writing scores of first post-test
were between 55 – 85. By comparing the
writing pre – test mean score with the
writing first post – test mean score, the the very good category increased from 0
researcher concluded that the students’ student to 9 students. On the good category,
writing score increased because of the the frequencies increased from
use of picture series. The frequencies on
2 students to `17 students. Meanwhile, on this cycle activities. The researcher
the frequencies on the fair decreased used Three Phase Technique. It is a
from 21 students to 1 student. On the technique or a method that uses three
very poor category also decreased from 3 processes in teaching that are before,
students to 0 student. Moreover, the while and after do the activities. It is used
mean score in the class increased from 55 to improve the all of the studnts skills in
to 69,7. English learning. In this case, the
However, the researcher and the researcher focused on listening and
teacher still found some problems in writing skills. There are three phases that
class, as follow: the students would do; pre-listening
1. Although most of students were phase, whilst-listening phase, and post-
active, some of them were still listening phase (Nunan:2003).
passive. Some students did not write After giving a treatment in second
anything about the material given by cycle to resolve the problems of the first
the researcher. cycle, there were some improvements
2. There were not good cooperation in that can be explained as follows:
between the students. Some students 1.The students’ attention increased, it
did not do the exercises well in the could be seen when the researcher
writing class. They only copied from discussed the first post test the students did
others or from book. not make noises. Besides, when the
3. Some students got difficulties in the researcher gave a scond post-test, the
sentence structure and vocabulary students also paid attention and focused
choice. on their tasks.
4. There were many students who made 2. The students’ motivation and self-
noises, and the class was not confidence increased; it could be seen
conductive. from the enthusiasms of the students
5. There are three students who still got when they made an explanation text
lower than the minimum standard based on the picture series.
score. 3. There was an improvement of the
Based on the result of the reflection students’ writing skill. It was shown from
above, the researcher decided to make yhe result of the second post-test that
second cycle in order to make better 87,2 it was higher than the mean score of
results and better improvements in
the first post-test that was 69,7.
students’ writing skill.
B. Cycle 2 2. Discussion
The researcher implemented the action In the discussion, the researcher
of second cycle on Monday, April 15th, presented the implementation of picture
2019 at 09.45 a.m. There were 31 series in improving students’ writing skill
students in the XI science 1 class, in explanation text, the students’
consisting of 12 male and 19 female responses on the teaching writing and the
students. In the second cycle, The improvement of students’ writing skill
researcher used different technique and after the implementation of picture series,
topic to make students be more focused for the eleventh grade students at SMA N
8 Bengkulu in academic year 2018/2019,
especially at XI science 1 class.
The researcher also conducted
interview with one of the students after
the implementation of picture series
technique to know their responses about
the implementation of picture series. The
result of the interview was that they
enjoyed the writing class. The students them to make a explanation text because
also said their self-confidence built and the sequenced explanation was clear.
increased and that pictures could help Based on the findings of the research,
the first improvement was related to the
content. Picture series which were The improvement of the students’
provided during the process of teaching writing score from the mean score of pre-
and learning of writing could stimulate test / post-test in 1st cycle and 2nd cycle
the students to generate the ideas. It and the percentage can be seen below:
could help them to brainstorm the The Mean and Percentage
important ideas that they had to write. By Comparation of The Tests
looking at the pictures, the students could Pre- 1st 2nd
organize the ideas that they had in mind test Post- Post-
into a good sequence. They could arrange test test
them regarding to the generic structure of Mean 55 69,7 87,2
explanation text and in a chronological Percentage 0% 26,7% 25,1%
order. By providing some exercises about
grammar which were related to the text, Based on the data above, the
the students could have better percentage showed that based on the
understanding about the concept of mean of preliminary test result, the first
simple past tense. By looking at the action research that had been conducted
pictures and looking up at the dictionary, increased up to 26,7%. The second mean
the students could use more appropriate score based on last action research post-
words in writing. They could choose the test also showed the improvement up to
words based on the context that they 25,1%.
needed to be used. It means that the first action could
Based on the analysis of the mean improve students’ writing skill than
score of the writing ability test, it can be without treatment. In the preliminary
concluded that the use of picture series in stage, the mean of the students’ writing
explanation text did improve the skill were still low, but after the action
students’ writing skill. The improvement the students’ writing skill be better and
of the writing skill can be seen from the higher. It can be seen that after the
students’ writing composition. The second action research had been
improvements were in the skill of making conducted, the scores of the tests were
content, choosing the appropriate words improved from preliminary test, first
in vocabulary, and making sentence in cycle post-test, and second cycle post-
correct structure of grammatical use. The test.
result can be seen below: It also happens to the composition of
Mean Score Result of Writing writing such as content, text
Composition organization, vocabulary, language use
Writing Pre- 1st 2nd and also mechanic improved. Besides,
Composition test Post- Post- before the action researcher there were
test test some problems in learning writing, such
Content 10,9 14,1 18,2 as; (1) in differentiating the tense, (2)
Organization 11,1 16,4 19,5 building sentence structure, (3) appllying
Grammar 9,5 13,7 15,8 spelling and punctuation as well as, (4)
Vocabulary 11,7 13,7 18,4 remembering the vocabularies and
Mechanics 11,6 14,5 15,3 composing words into the sentences or
paragraphs, and using transitional signal
or conjunction to arrange their ideas.
After doing the action research, the
students skill increased in vocabularies;
the students also used the words in
correct spelling and punctuation. Besides,
the students could use the grammatical
froms structure in making sentences. arrange their ideas to put in writing
They could produce sentences in correct forms.
structure. Then, the students could The data result above also proved that
the using of picture series could increase
students score to pass the minimum The research was conducted in two
standard score of English, especially in cycles. Each cycle consisted of one
writing explanation text. In the meeting. In every cycle, some research
preliminary stage, none of the students steps namely planning, action and
that pass the minimum standard score of observation, and reflection were
English. In the first cycle, some of the included. In cycle I, the researcher
students’ score were still low. In the last implemented picture-series and some other
cycle, none of them did not pass the actions, such as giving a model of
standard. explanation text and listing difficult
Based on the analysis and explanation words and giving rewards. Some picture
of the data above, it can be conluded that based activities such as sequencing
the use of picture series in explanation jumbled pictures and video were also
text could improve the students writing implemented in order to make the
skills. The researcher considered that learning situation was not monotonous.
most of the students could write Pair work and group work activities were
explanation texts. It can be seen from the also done. In addition, the students also
students’ test results. It indicates that wrote explanation texts individually. In
they could produce a text, and identify cycle II, four sets of picture series were
the generic stucture of explanation text. provided. The students got the
The researcher also asked the English opportunity to write two explanation
teacher as collaborator to observe and texts based on the pictures. The process
evaluate the action while learning of writing namely drafting, revising, and
process ran in the classroom. So, by producing the final product were
considering the improvement, the successfully done by the students. The
researcher concludes that picture series researcher also conducted interview with
technique has improved the eleventh one of the students after the
grade students’ writing skill of SMA N 8 implementation of picture series
Bengkulu. technique to know their responses about
the implementation of picture series. The
CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTION result of the interview was that they
1. Conclusion enjoyed the writing class. The students
Based on the research findings, it was also said their self-confidence built and
indicated that the writing ability of increased and that pictures could help
Eleventh Grade Science 1 students of them to make an explanation text because
SMA N 8 Bengkulu improved after the the explanation would be more lively and
implementation of picture series in clear. The use of picture series
writing explanation text. The teaching accompanied by picture based activities,
writing using picture series could worksheets, and giving feedback brought
improve the students’ skills in writing some significant improvements to the
explanation text. The response of the students’ writings especially in the aspect
students’ about the implementation of of contents, organization, language use,
picture series were they enjoyed in the vocabulary, and mechanics.
writing class. The students made a quite much
improvement in the aspect of content.
Picture series could help the students to
stimulate the ideas about what they had
to write. As the result, they could
develop their ideas into long paragraphs.
They also could write fluently.
Furthermore, in the aspect of
organization, picture series could help the ideas. The students could arrange the
students organize their ideas. By studying ideas based on the generic structure of
some series of pictures, the students explanation text. As the result, the students’
could understand the sequence of the writing were well written. Picture series
could also improve the students’ use of picture series also promoted the
vocabulary mastery. By looking at the students‟ positive behaviour during the
pictures, the students knew the vocabulary teaching and learning process. The
that they wanted to use and then they learning using picture series was able to
checked in the dictionary to find the enhance the students’ interests and
words in English. The worksheets also preference to do writing activities. Second,
provided some key words to help the The students should manage themselves to
students write. In addition, the students’ always have positive attitudes towards
writing skills also improved in the aspect English. They also should have motivation
of language use. By the explanation and in learning for their own benefits. It is
worksheet given by the teacher the important for them to always practice
students had a better mastery of the use writing so that they could improve their
of simple present tense and passive voice skills. In addition, they should always
in writing explanation texts. They could actively participate in the process of
produce simple but meaningful sentences. teaching and learning and do the tasks
In addition, during the whole class given by the teacher. They should also
discussions the students corrected each manage themselves to work in pairs, in
other so they could realize their mistakes. groups, or individually. Last, This
The research findings also indicated that research is only a small study in
the students’ mean scores in writing improving students’ writing skill. This
increased cycle by cycle. The increase of study was done by implementing picture
the students writing skill was also series as the technique in teaching-
supported by the result of the test scores. learning process. It is expected for the
The mean scores of pre-test was only 55, other researchers that this study can be
it improved to 69,7 and in the final test, it used as additional reference in the future
increased 87,2. It can be concluded that in order to create better teaching learning
the use of picture series in narrative text process, especially for writing skill.
does improve the students’ writing skill.
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