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Material Barber
Material Barber
Material is by Ros Barber and is about the changing role of a mother in the family unit. The
speaker contrast her mother with the way she looks after her children now. It is a personal
poem that concentrates on one woman’s experience of realising the importance of a mother
figure in a child’s life and the nostalgia surrounding this and things from the past. The poem
moves from this past into the present and a consideration of the narrator’s own role as a
mother and how this differs from the experience of earlier generations.
STRUCTURE
The poem has a very strong structure made up of 9 stanzas of 8 lines each. There is consistent
use of half rhyme to suggest the uncertainty felt by the poetic voice.
Barber half rhymes words such as ‘cloth’ and ‘shops’ showing not only uncertainty
but also the informality of poetry in the modern day. Poetry used to rhyme, it was part of
the formality in which people lived in those days, echoing the message of the rest of the
poem to show how the role of the mother has changed.
This is also some strict alternate line rhyme in the second stanza especially, ‘lace’ and
‘face’ – suggesting that although some things have changed, there are still some
similarities.
Repetition in the line “step-together, step together, step-together”, this structure shows
how there was formality in the old days
LANGUAGE TECHNIQUES
Proper nouns show how the people in her youth were very important to her
upbringing “George with his dodgy foot”, this is a very personal poem to her
Concrete nouns creates more of a sense of nostalgia, “The fishmonger whose marble
slabbed”. Things are disappearing from her youth and this makes her sad as she sees the
world changing before her eyes.
Rhyming triplet at the end ‘disposable/material/will’
IMAGERY
Contrast between hanky and tissues show the change in the role of the mother to the
poetic voice. A hanky used to be made od durable material (relating to the title), were
given as gifts which often had a lot of thought put into them – embroidered with personal
initials. However now, people tend to use paper tissues which are disposable and weak.
They are often a rushed thought and can be bought anywhere. This juxtaposes how the
mother’s role has changed and that now, the poetic voice is not as present as she perhaps
should be to her children.
There is the use of an extended metaphor of the hanky “My mother was the hanky
queen, when hanky meant a thing of cloth”. The extended metaphor allows the reader to
understand how the speaker feels that her mother was a constant figure in her life. She was
a gift, whereas tissues are disposable – how the role of the mother changes
‘Material’ as the title refers to the actual material the hanky is made from but also
how we are shaped by our mothers and shape our children in turn. The phrase ‘raw
materials’ is important here, reminding us of the importance of nurture in creating
character.
TONE
The tone throughout the poem is quite reminiscent and sad. She is nostalgic about her
youth and her mother. She ponders how everything now is materialistic and throw away,
perhaps she thinks that people take things for granted.
There is also a sense of frustration with herself in the 8th stanza when the poetic voice
reflects on her own performance as a mother, “I raised neglected-looking kids, the kind
whose noses strangers clean” – she is not a constant mother figure for her children – raises
the question, is today’s parenting style lazy? Do we tend to stick children in front of the
television as a virtual babysitter? However the fact that she acknowledges this gives the
reader hope that she may change her ways.
“marble that slabbed” could suggest a morgue and that her youth is dying away
creating a sad tone
CONCLUSION