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【写作指导】
本次写作要求根据 Tony 写给 Daming 的邮件,以 Daming 的身份给 Tony 写一封回
信。根据提示可知,要从以下几个方面展开描写:
1.我经常做什么来表达对家人的爱。表达经常做什么要用一般现在时。
2.和家人在一起的最好的方式。和家人在一起的最好的方式,应该用一般现在时。
注意:1. 主要人称为第一人称;2. 主要时态为一般现在时。

【写作提纲】
I'm glad that we both have a family time these days.
引出话题
Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my , too.
所做的事情 I
often help Mom with , such as sweeping, washing and so on. My
parents are to see I'm growing.
As for the common time with the family together, I think the best way is to do
最好的方式 something . Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film , and
then shared our feelings.

【范文展示】
Hi Tony,
I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love,
I try to do something to show my love, too. As you know, I'm a lazy boy. ①But now things
change a lot. ②I often help Mom with housework, such as sweeping, washing and so on. Can
you believe I can cook now? ③My parents are proud to see I'm growing.

④As for the common time with the family together, I think the best way is to do something
alike. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then shared our feelings.
⑤What a brilliant time!
Hope this helps!
Yours,
Daming

【同义替换句】
1. However, things change a lot now.
2. I often help Mom to do housework, like sweeping, washing and so on.
3. Both of my parents feel so proud when seeing I’m growing.
4. As for the common time with the family together, in my opinion, it is the best way to
do something alike.
5. How brilliant the time we had was!

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