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Untitled: General Metrics
Untitled: General Metrics
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by Suneet Godara
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In India, agriculture accounts for around 17% GDP and 50% employment. The
stark difference between its share in GDP and employment shows the grim
situation of agriculture. Keeping in mind this the Government of India has
formed a committee namely the Ashok Dalwai committee which has been
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tasked to suggest measure to double the farmers income by 2022.
Since independence agriculture output has increased manifold but the farmers
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remain in poverty trap. There are many reasons for this situation. Lack of
institutional credit, lack of quality seeds and fertilizers, erratic monsoon and
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weather condition, small land holding, illiteracy, vicious cycle of poverty etc.
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are few among many others. Although green revolution has proved to be a boon
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to many farmers but its impact are limited to a small part of the country. Small
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and marginal farmers couldn’t get bene t from this. Economic slowdown
caused by recent lockdown could be a major hindrance to achieve this.
To double the income of farmer by 2022, a 10% annual
growth is necessary. To achieve this government must ensure that its policies
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should implement effectively at ground level. Timely availability of quality
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seeds and fertilizers, institutional loan at affordable interest rate, awareness
about government policies, insurance of crops, use of technology are the main
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areas where government should works. Apart from this allied sector activities
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like poultry, shing, mixed farming etc. also encouraged. Adapting to climate
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change is also necessary. Amount should be increased in PM-KISAN scheme to
boost the demand which is slow down by lockdown.
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So, doubling farmers income by 2022 is not a distant dream. It could be
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achieved by a holistic and integrated approach of government. Central and
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state government should act in co-ordinate manner to uplift the lives of “ann-
data”.
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