What makes a good beginning?
Do you havea fivourite book which you think begins in a
wna? Tt may be vomething you are
‘book you read when you
particularly compelling
reading at the moment, or perhaps
were younger?
Hove important ist to know where to start your narrative?
Think about this from the point of view of being present at the
time, or looking back toa period when something happened.
“This could be a chance event, or an exciting new opportunity
} that had a big impact on your life
Fiction
From Reefby Romesh Gunesekera rathmal is rhododendeon a
beautiful ed fowering sia
Jasmineisa climbing plant
with heavy sented fone
The folowing extract from the novel Reef starts cut in SriLanka inthe
1960s, where the author, Romesh Gunesckera, grewup. inthis extract,
«we follow the author's account ofthe curious first day when he enters
the big house where he is to be a houseboy, or general servant, to
Mister Salgado.
Wordpool
untroubled (33)
to blurt out (35)
The ie boy was bows
like this in Si LanRot eect
FO Mister Salgado ce
ister Salgado is a real gentleman. You must do whatever
tells you.’ My unele pulled my ear."
it
ou understan
as leven years old.(My uncle was escorting me toa house
town)l had never been to before. Ar the base of the two
columns at the front of the house were beds of scarlet rathmal
and white jasmine. The big windows were shielded by shutters {
painted in mildewy gretn. My uncle took me into the back
of the house through a side entrance. Inside,a doar squeaked
behind us, closing automatically. A crumpled old woman
fs sitting on a small wooden stool with her feet in the sun.
She looked up. “You are back again?" she said ro my uncle.
What is all this coming and going?” Her mouth collapsed
round her empty gums.
fy uncle told her we were there to see Mister Salgado! She
got up and slowly made her way into the main part of the
house.
will ask, she mumbled.
We saton the floor and waited. My ear hurt from my uncle's
1g. When the sun sank behind the rooftops, we were
Summoned by a voice from somewhere deen inside rhe house,
1 last rays of light spiintered through the trees. My fincle
shed me forward, ‘Let's go."
\t first Mister Salgado said nothing. My uncle too was a
is and they were both silent for a while.
an of few word
Sventually Mister Salgado nodded towards me. ‘So, this is
the b
"Yes, this is the boy. My uncle shifted his weight from one
foot to the other.
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| 30 He offered the bag of sree? mangos we hel rout i
| ig the one f wens telling about. He is the hoy. He ean
| very quickly?
‘A smooth untroubled face stared at school? Did you
go?
435. “Yes? Pbfureea out.‘ went co school Fifth standard. Fean
read and write. I had even learned some English from my
ne poor schoolmaster who lived in a bung: Jow near my father’s
fields.
‘And now?”
he can
led next to me. ‘As I told before,
home any more. That
sl
40 My uncle wi
Jearn quickly but he cannot live at
trouble
Thad burned the thatched roof ofa hut in the schoolyard
by accident. J only dropped a single match. Bue flame hac
ight the thatch. My father went mad Tran
45 shot outand cau
anew life for
away co my uncle who promised t0 arrange
ne. He told me I would never have to go back again. “Lam
doing this only because I think your mother ~ if she were
‘live -would have wanted me to, Do you understand?” he
50° had said.
Mister Salgado sighed. He spoke slowly. Ihad never heard
language so gently spoken. Ever after when Mister Salgado
spoke, | would be captivated.
ROMESH GUNESEKERA
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41. Which words tell you that the old woman does not have any teett
2 How do you know that the uncle and the
ater boy had to wait along time to see
3 Howrdo you know that the uncle had vis
yor had visited Mister Salgado previously? ~
—~ 4 How does the boy fee! about his schoo! record?
404 5 How do you think the boy wl get on as houseboy to Mister Salpad of
ister Salgado? g
oeRo areas
Toolkit
Winen you are wating at
boy uncle says Mister Salgado sa Yea gentleman
What evidence is therein the story thatthe uncle froma
ister Salgndo?
What impression does the descr
make on you?
talking about a book you
different social class than M, have enjoyed reading, tis,
good tobe able to use
expressive vocabulary For
example:
ition ofthe ald woman
+ for interesting you could
‘What Sort of man does Mister Salgado seem tobe?
say intriguing,
How does the uncle recommend his nephew to Mister captivating, fascinating, 1
Salgpio? absorbing {
+ abook you cant put
down might be described
as compulsive read,
ripping enthrling
‘dd these words to your
ite your own dialogue for a meeting between two characters
bea dramatic conftontation, asin the opening scene of coeur essai ion
3 Expectations ofa nor pole intervie asin thessene | earings rte
escribed in ‘Mister Salgado. ‘words to make your writing
hich you meet. Was it an ore exciting and dramati.
Interview fora job ora new school? Had you done
Something wrong, or had you been accused of something
You didrit do? Was it an exciting new opportunity that you
desperately wanted?
Provide notes on staging and the cast of characters, Describe
the time and place, and provide details of any props
required.
‘Use adverbs and descriptive past participles for the stage
Girections to give the actors more information on the *
feelings and actions of the characters.)
Describe the circumstances in w
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Journal,
Have you ever been in trouble? Was ik
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