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Skripsi Penelitian Zahratul Aini Gani Revisi 2
Skripsi Penelitian Zahratul Aini Gani Revisi 2
ANALISIS KESALAHAN TEXT RECOUNT YANG DITULIS OLEH SISWA KELAS DUABELAS
DI SMA NEGERI 16 MAKASSAR
PERSETUJUAN PEMBIMBING
Judul : AN ERRORS ANALYSIS (EA) OF RECOUNT TEXT
WRITTEN BY YEAR 12 STUDENTS OF SENIOR HIGH
SCHOOL 16 MAKASSAR
Nama : Zahratul Aini Gani
NIM : 1652042002
ProgramStudi : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
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Bahasa Inggris Program Studi
Fakultas Bahasa dan Sastra Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT
Praise be to Allah, the Lord of the worlds who has given the writer a good
chance to finish this Thesis even though it is very simple and then to express her pray
to prophet Muhammad saw who has brought us from the darkness to the lightness, so
The writer would like to express her sincere thanks to the Rector of
Universitas Negeri Makassar, the Dean of language and literature faculty, the
Lecturers of English education department, and their staff who have guided the
writer from beginning up to the end of her study at the Universitas Negeri Makassar.
The writer would like to extent thanks to Prof. Dr. Haryanto, M.Pd her first
consultant for his guidance and valuable spent time to read and correct this Thesis
and also thanks for her second consultant Munir, S.Pd.M.Ed, TESOL for his
Finally, the writer would like thanks to her parents (Drs. H. Abdul Gani
Ibrahim, M.Pd.I. & Hj. Zaenab Longgari S.Pd., M.Pd.I), her brother (Muhammad
Zulfahmi Gani Ibrahim) and her classmates (English Education 2016) who have
encouraged her during study at the Universitas Negeri Makassar until she can finish
The writer
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CONTENTS
TITLE PAGE ..................................................................................................... i
LIGALIZATION................................................................................................. ii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT.................................................................................. iii
CONTENTS........................................................................................................ iv
LIST OF TABLE................................................................................................ vi
CHAPTER I. INTRODUCTION
A. Background........................................................................................... 1
B. Problem statement................................................................................. 5
C. The Research question.......................................................................... 5
D. The objective of research...................................................................... 6
E. The Organization of Writing................................................................ 6
F. Scope of the Research.......................................................................... 7
CONCEPTUAL FRAMEWORK
A. Definition of Analysis........................................................................... 8
B. Type of Analysis................................................................................... 9
C. Functions and Objectives Analysis....................................................... 9
D. Errors and Mistakes Analysis............................................................... 11
E. Writing.................................................................................................. 25
F. Purpose of Writing................................................................................ 27
G. The Types of Writing............................................................................ 28
H. Recount Text......................................................................................... 33
I. The Purpose of Recount Text............................................................... 34
J. Features of Recount Text ..................................................................... 34
K. The Types of Recount Text .................................................................. 35
L. Generic Structure of Recount Text ...................................................... 36
M. The Process of Writing......................................................................... 38
N. Aspect of Writing ................................................................................. 41
O. The conceptual framework................................................................... 42
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P. Hypothesis ......................................................................................... 43
A. Research Design................................................................................. 44
B. The Place And Time Of The Research............................................... 44
C. Research Variable............................................................................... 44
D. Operational Definition........................................................................ 45
E. Population and Sample....................................................................... 45
F. Instrument of the Research................................................................. 46
G. Procedure of Collecting Data............................................................. 47
H. Data of Analysis................................................................................. 47
I. Procedure Errors analysis (EA) In Writing........................................ 48
J. Technique of Data Analysis............................................................... 49
A. Research Findings................................................................................. 50
B. Discussion............................................................................................. 64
A. Conclusion............................................................................................ 66
B. Suggestion............................................................................................. 67
Appendix.......................................................................................................... 68
Bibliography.................................................................................................... 91
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LIST OF TABLE
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LIST OF FIGURE
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. Background
languages is very necessary, especially English because most of the scientific books are
written in it. Therefore, the government of Indonesia has placed this language in the
curriculum not only at the junior high school or senior high school but also at the
universities or institutes.
As a matter of fact, in learning English the students begin by learning the words
of the language. They do not realize that English is different from their native language,
such as the vocabulary, sound system, listening, reading, speaking, writing and
structure.
international language but today English has become a language that is in every
place, and it has become a must for everyone to be able to understand English to
make people easier in this activity, English frequently found in many public
it is wrong if the English is interpreted as intended for people who plan to travel
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abroad only in the country but also English language are often encountered in
daily activities.
and express ideas or opinion between the speakers and the listeners or the writers
and the readers. To be a good speaker, listener, writer and reader, someone has to
of symbols that are meaningful and articulate sound (generated by said tool)
(Wibowo,2001:3).
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Speaking Skill, Reading Skill and Writing Skill. One of language skills that is
important for learner is writing, because by writing, people can express his or her
ideas in written form. So that, writing skill is important to teach the students at
Senior High School that the students are to communicate in English either
written or oral. It means that these skills should be interrelated and supported
one another. The result of interview by English teacher before that commonly
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they think that study writing is difficult. Beside that when the students wanted
are to make an oral and written to solve their problems (They cannot distinguish
between present tense and past tenses, they haven’t had many vocabulary) and
they must know English is very important because it is used in all aspects of the
Based on the year 2013 National Curriculum of English Language that they
are to know and or understand to create the functional text such as recount text,
procedure text, narrative, report text and descriptive text, so that the writer would
like to choose the Recount Text as a research object in the medium teaching
about Recount Text , the students often make errors in the process of writing
English texts, especially in English grammar, they think it is boring when they
learn it so they avoid it because it confuses and makes them difficult. In the other
tenses some of them make errors in writing English and they have difficulty in
the sentences. So, it can be a big problem if the teachers do not find the solution
to solve the students’ Errors in writing. Therefore, the students should be thought
Recount Text is a text which retells past event. Recount Text basically it is
224).
According to siahaan and shinosa (2008:9) stated that the purpose of social
Recount text retells events that have occurred in the past and evaluates them. In
happened, who did it, why it happened, where it happened and how it happened.
Recount text has an expression of attitudes and feelings made by the narrator
http://iosrjournals.org/iosr-jhss/papers/Vol19-issue1/Version 12/J0191125664.pdf , 15
June 2019
Based on the problem and definition above that the writer would like to
carry out a research under title an errors analysis (EA) of Recount Text written
Previous study that the result of the research show that there were eighty
nine errors in the students' writing based on surface strategy taxonomy, the first
category was omission. there were plural 8.3% errors, irregular past 59.7%
errors, main verb 8.3% errors, regular past 8.3 errors, copula 4.1%, article 1.4%)
the second category was addition, they were article 50% errors , preposition 25%
errors, regular past 25% errors), the third category was misinformation they were
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regular past 58.3% errors, preposition 41.7% errors, the last category was
This research is related to previous study but the difference in this research
the title of the research " title An errors analysis (EA) of Recount Text written by
B. Problems Statement
Based on the description above, the writer would like to identify and analyze
as follow:
1. What are the students’ errors in writing recount text by year 12 of Senior
2. What are the students’ causing the errors in writing recount text by year 12 of
follows:
2. To know the students’ causing the errors in writing recount text by year 12
follows:
The second chapter explains the theoretical frame work, those are the
writing, definition of recount text, the purpose of recount text, features of recount
text, the types of recount text, generic structure of recount text, the process of
method of research, research design, the place and time of research, research
In the fourth chapter discusses research findigs and the discussion and the
from this research, researcher can discover the rule causes errors of students’ in
CHAPTER II
A. Analysis
distinguishing, sorting things to be grouped to certain criteria and looking for the
relation and then interpreting the meaning. Analysis can also be interpreted as an
of something to gather with thoughts and judgments about it. (Professor Sir
to reveal errors found in writing and speaking. EA also is the study of errors made
by the second and foreign language learners. EA may be carried out in order to (a)
find out how well someone knows a language, (b) find out how a person learns a
EA as the process to observe, analyze, decide, judge, consider, and classify the
deviations of the rules of the second language and then to reveal the systems
operated by learners. Based from the definitions above, the writer would like to
(conversation) or in writing.
B. Types of Analysis
There are several types of analysis that we can choose it. The methods taken
by each type of analysis are also different. Here are some types of analysis:
1. Logic Analysis
2. Realist analysis
An analysis that in carrying out the analysis process will use the order
1. Function of analysis
situations that require strategy because it can find out in detail about the
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current state of the environment. The analysis aims to collect data which can
be used for various purposes of the analysis agent. Usually it will be used to
Not only data that can be analyzed but writing also needs to be analyzed.
grammar are common. The writers often do not focus on their writing so that
there are some sentences that are not complete, vocabulary errors, misuse of
conjunctions, misuse of terms etc. and the writing results will be incompletely
and will not be understood by the reader. Therefore, the writers have to read
many references in the book or in the journal, then make a concept to develop
creative ideas, the writers also needs to analyze the right language or sentence,
2. Objectives Analysis
The objectives analysis express the future stated that would occur if
problems can be turned into positively defined goals. The scope of this
because most of the students couldn’t distinguish between present tense and
teachers. According to Jenner stated that errors can show how carefully plan
teachers. Consequently, it can give the teacher valuable feedback on his own
teaching, what particular strategies are most likely to lead a learner to the
making of errors. A study of errors than in the long run points out the way to
Based on the definition above that the writer would like to conclude
that EA for measuring the ability student's writing in Recount Text. Based on
analyzing the errors, they will get the correct one and understand English. EA
has advantages for the students and their teachers. For the students, EA is
required to describe them in what grammar aspects are difficult for them, to
show their errors, to know the source of the errors and how they can learn
their errors, so that they will not make the same errors and what strategies to
know and understand a second language. For teachers, errors show to them
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what extent their students know the grammar to achieve their goals.
explain, analyze, consider, show and decide on their errors in the second
When we talk about errors, they are always associated with mistakes.
Most of the people even think that the meaning of errors and mistakes is the
same even though they are different and they can't even see the difference
between the two. Mistakes usually refers to a choice that turns out to be
wrong. These mistakes are usually for unintentional mistakes and you know
In other words, it is based on actions that have been taken, and can be
repeatedly without realizing it. They don't know what they did was wrong and
they don't accept that it was they made. Errors is a lack of knowledge and
mistake is the students, it possess knowledge of the correct form and it is just
deviation from the adult grammar of a native speaker, reflects the competence
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of the learner and mistake is slip, a failure to utilize a known system correctly.
Based on the above opinion, it can be concluded that errors occur when
especially in English grammar, they do not realize their errors if other people
do not correct it and even they could not recognize it. Meanwhile mistakes
or typos). The students actually know what they wrote but they just forget or
typos in their writing so that when other people correct their mistakes they
3. Types of Errors
There are four descriptive taxonomies that are most useful for the
taxonomy, (b) surface strategy taxonomy, (c) comparative taxonomy, and (d)
linguistics and surfaces can give a lot of evidence for researchers related to
Dulay said that make us realize that students' errors are based on some
logic. They are not the result of laziness or careless thinking but from students'
use of interim principles to produce new languages (Dulay et.al: 1982, 150).
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Through the linguistics category taxonomy and surface strategy taxonomy will
phenomena. It is based on the procedure for selecting units from the text
and for reading the features in terms of their order and distribution.
and the correlation that exists between these classes and the language
constituents themselves.
into one general category, for example, passive voice or the perfective
aspect.
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into two categories they are morphology and syntax as the following
table:
Table 2.1
Morpheme
1. Indefinite article incorrect
Indefinite a used for an before vowels a ant
An used for a an little ant
b. Use of progressive
He going
Omission of be
The bird was shake his head
Replacement of-ing by the simple verb form
Substitution of the progressive for the
Then the man shooting (shit?)
simple past
with a gun
c. Agreement of subject and verb
Disagreement of subject and verb person
You be friends
Disagreement of subject and number
The apples was coming down
Disagreement of subject and tense
I didn’t know what it is
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3. verb–and–verb construction
1) Omission
2) Addition
the target language rules and they often use certain rules that
cause errors.
verb 1. So, the correct sentence is “He does not meet his
children”.
3) Misformation
rule regularization.
home. (Incorrect)
go home”.
4) Misordering
c. Comparative Taxonomy
comparative taxonomy:
1) Development Errors
Example:
2) Interlingual Errors
For example:
Dog eat it
form
3) Ambiguous errors
pronunciation:
I no have car
grab bag for items that don’t fit into any other
He sleepy
miscommunication and those that are not. There are two types of
1) Global Errors
used English"
correct sentence is: I buy a new dress even though I love my old
dress.
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is limited.
2) Local Errors
errors that does not significantly influences the structure and the
following errors:
When I was nine year old, I live in Medan, but then I move to
past form are left out). The correct sentence is: When I was
father.
Based on the definition above that the writer would like to focused in
linguistics there are morphology and syntax that discuss about words and
E. Writing
Writing is one of the important skills of the four basic skills in learning
English, it could make someone think to create creative ideas in writing, writing is
not just a writing but it will be a good work if the contents contain positive things
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that can be read by everyone. writing can make us absorb more information in it.,
journal first and then he makes a summary without looking at the journal so it will
because we have to make good ideas, choose the right words, good grammar,
However, writing is a scary thing for students, especially when students make
scientific work, Recount Text, writing essays, theses and even writing in IELTS
test. Some students do not like it because they think that writing to be related to
Grammar and it is very difficult especially writing is using formal language and
problems that make writing skills difficult to understand and know namely
linguistics, cognitive, and content difficulties. The first problem is Linguistic. This is
related to our shrewdness in the revision of the correct structure and it is agreed that
the sentences arranged will be able to unite with each other. The resulting text could
better used by the reader. The second problem is cognitive that related to our
mastery of the forms of language, structure, grammar which are useful for effective
communication in writing. The third is a problem about ideas, this is related to what
we can discuss in writing. Often we lose ideas in the middle of the writing process.
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writing is a skill that is required in many contexts throughout life. For instance,
you can write an email to a friend or reflect on what happened during the day in
your personal diary. (Jeremy Harmer, 2004. p 33). It means that if someone
has many problem sort ell what happened, writing an email or in diary book is
students time to think up ideas rather than having to come up with instant fluent
opinions, something that many, especially at lower levels, find difficult and
creative and it makes students able to think up ideas that it can be implemented
Based on the definition above the writer would like to conclude that
concentration and insight into what will be written. It can develop ideas,
writing. If we often write something, it can add more knowledge and inspiration
in writing.
F. Purpose Of Writing
Writing has the purpose of creating works that can be useful for
1. To Inform
As for The purpose of writing is to inform facts (news, events and gossip) and
2. To Explain
As for The purpose of writing is to describe what, why, when, where, who and
something.
3. To Narrate
As for The purpose of narrative writing is to tell a story. The story can be
fiction or fact, the form of narrative writing has a beginning, middle, and end.
For Examples are fiction (fairy tales) and personal narratives (true stories)
4. To Persuade
Writing that aims to persuade, stated opinions or goals and support them with
will choose the type or style depending on what he/she wants. The material to be
discussed, and the effect desired by the reader. There are four types of writing as
below:
1. Narrative
(often your own) to reach a certain point in his life. A narrative paragraph or
essay tells a story, like a narrator in a play (although it has to be a true story,
not like a short story or drama). As a result, it is usually written in the first
person of view
2. Descriptive:
personality, characteristics etc. the aim of descriptive text to guide the reader
3. Expository
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events that occur). To achieve that, it is best developed using clear reasons,
4. Persuasive
convince the reader that the point of view or action recommended by the
author is valid. In this case, the writer must develop a limited topic that is well
defined and debatable, and has more than one side. It is important for the
writer to understand the other side of the topic so that the most powerful
to persuade, entertain, inform and produce various kinds of prose. The most
common is prose which informs the content namely narrative, description, and
a) Exposition explains.
people get divorced. History why Custer attacked at the Little Big Horn.
like therefore, however, and so, besides, but, not only, more important, in
b) Description
c) Persuasion
includes fiction, personal essays, and sketches. Such prose will receive
Fachrurrazy (1990: 38) also says that there are five types of writing, as follow:
1. Narration
Narration tells "what happened". It tells a story. It is the kind of writing found
in novels, short stories, and biographies. Narration usually follows time order.
2. Description
Description tells how something looks or feels or sounds. It talks about such
space order.
3. Exposition
what, how, and why. Its purpose is to present ideas and to make them as clear
as possible. It can be said that exposition follows logical order. This means
that paragraphs are arranged in such a way that the reader can understand the
writer's thought. In logical order, the writer guides the reader from one idea to
another.
4. Recount
Recount to tell past event for the purpose of informing or entertaining. Event
journals, diary, personal letter, biography, travel report, police report, sport
5. Letter writing.
There are three main types of letter, namely: formal letter, business letter, and
dinner, dance, or other ceremony and is phrased in the third person. Business
letter must be above everything clear and easily understood. They should be
Based on the definition that the writer would like to choose recount
text as kind of writing in this research because it is a text that retells event or
their experiences in the past by writing. It’s more excited for students to write
their experience and it is easy to describe their ideas in the writing, they can
practice their memories of event they experience and they can understand
H. Recount Text
out to make a report about an experience of a series of related event (2005: 224).
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is text function as for telling an incident in the past. Recount is to tell “what
event with a purpose to inform or entertain the readers. Recount tells a series of
event and evaluate their significance in some way. It is also to give audience a
descriptions of what occurred and when it occurred. The story recount has
expressions of attitude and feeling, usually made by narrator about the event.
http://iosrjournals.org/iosr-jhss/papers/Vol19-issue1/Version-
text is type of English text that recounts event or experiences in the past.
Recount Text using past tenses in writing, there are three types of past tenses
that are often used in it are Simple Past Tense, Past Continuous Tense and Past
Perfect Tense. However, some students were not aware of the use of past tenses
in the Recount Text, some of them used present tenses in it. They cannot
distinguish present tenses and past tenses so that a grammar errors occurs in the
Recount Text.
which happened to social function is to retell event for the purpose of informing
or entertaining.
The purpose of recount text tell the event that someone used to
event in the order in which they happened. Recount text also can be used to
significance in some way (Jokowo Priyana 2008.p 10-11). It means that the
student writes the event that used to experience. The student writes recount text
by following the sequence of generic structures in the form of the past tense.
The recount text type retells past event, usually in the order in which
they happened, the steps to construct a written recount text, they are as
follow:
a) The first paragraph that provides basic information about who, what, why,
2. Language features
b) Descriptive words to provide details about who, what, when, where and
how.
d) Words indicating the sequence of event (for example, first, next, then).
(Uci Mulyani and Muh.Al-Hafizh, 2012). P.227) stated that the types of recount
a. Factual recount : concerned with recalling event accurately such as news that
Based on the definition of personal recount above that the writer would
like to choose personal recount in this research because it is easy and more
excited for students to write their ideas when they had holiday school.
In Rosyadi’s opinion (2011) stated that there are three generic structures and
Generic Structure
Table 2.2
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Generic Structure
Language features
Table 2.3
Language Features
time
Using action verb look, go, bring, etc.
Using simple past tense Looked, went, brought, etc.
Social function
Table 2.4
Yesterday we went to the trans studio park (TSM). We got to the TSM, we
The first game I choose a roller coaster, my brother and I were very excited
to ride it and it made us very happy. When the roller coaster was running,
my heart was beating fast and my brother screamed beside me. After the
game finished, my head got a little dizzy and my father told me to rest and
accompany her to try “Dunia Lain”, this game is very horror and tests our
just a setting.
Reorientation
After that, my mother came to tell us to rest and had lunch. After that, we
left the studio then my mother and father went shopping at lottemart. I, my
sister and brother went to buy a bag and parfum in miniso and then we went
home.
M. The Process Of Writing
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Oshima & Hogue stated that the main stages in the writing process as
follow:
a. Prewriting
In this step, the writer narrows the topic into the specific topic
too large explained. So, the writer can narrow this topic into the
Brainstorming
Listing
Free writing
Clustering
specific describing.
2. Planning
a) Making sub-lists
the ideas in the topic lists further into sub-lists and to cross out items
c) Outline
main points and sub-points in the order in which someone plans to reports
stage to write and revise some drafts so that you have provided a final
After writing the rough draft and then revised it. In revising
well-structured manner.
doing proof reading or analyzing the writing at the second time. This
N. Aspect Of Writing
According to Jacobs et al.’s (1981) stated that there are five aspects
1. Content
2. Organization
3. Vocabulary
4. Language use
5. Mechanics
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research in detail. The conceptual framework will be the basic form of this
Students’ writing
Conceptual framework
Notes:
O. Hypothesis
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The students can distinguish present tense and past tense, improve their
English vocabulary and their creative ideas in other writing trough Recount Text.
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
ideas in writing recount text well at Senior High School 16 Makassar. So that, this
To collect the data of this research, the writer would like to take a
At the school
C. Research Variable
The writer would like to choose two variables in this research, they
used Recount Text as a medium. There are two dependents variables, they are:
the students’ produced in writing composition based on the free title of Recount
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D. Operational Definition
1. Recount Text is the students retelling their event or experiences in the past
recount text
teachers.
1. Population
2. Samples
the population that can consider representative of all objects became the
have same chance of being a part of the sample. In this sampling method, a
simple random sample is made from the different clusters in the population.
are used in the final sample. It means that the sample is written Recount
The writer used test instrument for collecting the data, the fore the
process is easier. The process of this research are the students write recount
text in the paragraph by free title and they collected their assignments. By this
test the writer will analyze and know students’ Errors in writing Recount Text.
The writer would like to collect the data through administrate a test of
the first series activity of the research. The writing text is administered to
measure the students’ progress and achievement after the writer giving the
writing.
2. Interview
students or mistakes.
H. Data Of Analysis
Naimatul (2014, P: 24) they are: according to Arikunto (2006:109) stated that
Based on the definition above, the writer would like to conclude that
the sample of this research is all the year 12 students of Senior High School 16
Makassar.
In linguist Corder’s opinion described that there are five steps of typical EA, they
are:
Errors collection are the nature and quantity of errors are depending on the
natural data and spontaneous use of language or use of provoked language. There
are two kinds of elicitation, they are: clinical and experimental elicitation. Clinical
elicitation involves getting the informant to produce data of any sort, for example
involves the use of special instrument to elicit data containing the linguistic
features such as a series of pictures which had been designed to elicit specific
After classifying the types of errors, the frequency was determined by this
formula:
Total Errors
× 100 %=… %
Total Words
(Nation,
1981:58)
CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDINGS AND THE DISCUSSION
The writer would like to describe the Students’ errors in writing recount text
written by year 12 students of senior high school 16 Makassar. .
A. Research Findings
students of Senior high school 16 Makassar. The writer classified errors into 2
been analyzed from document analysis and interview. There are 140 students
Table 4.1
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VERB PHRASE
2 a. Use of progressive:
Omission of be I (was)helping parents I was helping my parents
I (was)playing I was playing cellphone
cellphone
We (were) watching We were watching drama
dramas
The tasks (were) The tasks were making us to
making us feel bored feel bored
They (were) making They were making cake
cake
b. Agreement of
subject and verb
Disagreement of We *make* *cakes* We made cake
subject and
number
QUESTION TRANSFORMATION
5 Omission of How (did) you go to How did you go to Toraja
auxiliary Toraja
What (did) you see at What did you see at Korea
Korea
THREE TRANSFORMATION
6 Use of is instead of There *is* a lot of to There were a lot of to do at
are do at home home
Use of Non past There *are* more There were more holiday
tense holiday,
There *are* still a lot There were still a lot of
of people out, people out,
We *are* very excited, We were very excited,
They *are* not calm, They were not calm,
If we *are* assigned to If we were assigned to
certain lesson, certain lesson,
When the teacher *is* When the teacher was not
not in class, in class,
It*’s* so boring, It was so boring,
We *are* presented We were presented with a
with a beautiful view, beautiful view,
There *are* several There were several
N Linguistic category and Example of students Correct sentences
O errors type errors
obstacles… Obstacles…,
Which *is* the quota Which was the quota
factor, factor,
The ingredients *are* The ingredients were flour,
flour, sugar and butter sugar and butter
Subordinate Clause Transformation
7. Use of indicative for So Ali *don’t* kill the So Ali didn’t kill the snake
conditional snake
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Based on the table 4.2 show that the students often make errors in morpheme
because they cannot distinguish between present tense and past in writing recount
text, especially in substitution of simple non past and omission of-ed, so they write
recount text in the present tense.
These following chart provide the result of the data analysis above.
Morphological errors
0.38; 2%
0.760.76%0
Syntactical Errors
3% 3% 3% 3%
6% 31%
14%
The writer has collected and analyzed the data, so that the writer found
that students’ errors of 260 of 6441 total words or 4.03% in morphological
and there were errors 97 of 554 total sentences or 17.5% in syntactical. The
highest frequency of errors based on morphological in Linguistic Category
Taxonomy was Omission of-ed with total frequency errors 22 or 8.46%,
Substitution of simple non past with total frequency errors 18 or 6.92%.
Omission of’s incorrect with total frequency errors 2 or 0.76% ,Wrong
attachment of’s with total frequency errors 2 or 0,76% and Wrong
attachment of’r incorrect with total frequency errors 1 or 0.38%.
From on the table 4.3, it showed that from 30 texts that there are 4
words that are incorrectly used to be in the past continuous tense in the
recount text and the total errors from omission of to be is 13.3%
OMISSION OF-ED
Table 4.4
NO Example students errors Correct sentences
1 I play game I played game
2 I watch Korea Dramas I watched Korea Dramas
3 I finish the homework I finished the homework
4 My family and I plan to go to the My family and I planned to go
village to the village
5 I helping parents I helped my parents
6 I prefer spend my time at home I prefer spent my time at home
7 It feels really disappointing It felt really disappointing
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OMISSION OF CUNJUCTION
Table 4.5
NO Example students errors Correct sentences
1 I sometimes feel bored, feel I sometimes feel bored and feel
tired of the routine tired of the routine
2 I was only at home I was really I was only at home and I was
bored at home really bored at home
3 I was with friends going to I and my friends going to malino
malino
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Table 4.5 above, it showed that from the 30 texts that there are 3
words that do not use conjunction in the past continuous tense in recount
text and the total errors from omission of conjunction is 13.3%
b. ADITTION
Table 4.6
NO Example students errors Correct sentences
1 I was making cakes I was making cake
2 We make cakes We made cake
3 I stays at my grandparent’s I stayed at at my grandparent’s
house house
4 I can carry out Friday prayers I could carry out Friday pray
From on the table 4.6, it showed that from the 30 texts that there are 4
words that do not need to be added, for example cakes, stays and prayers.
They add other words that do not need to be used in the sentence. The total
errors of the addition is 13.3%
c. MISFORMATION
Table 4.7
NO Example students errors Correct sentences
1 The monkey eat banana when the The monkey ate banana when
gardener home the gardener went home
2 There is a lot of homework There were a lot of homework
3 We are very excited We were very excited
4 The foods is a little expensive The food was a little expensive
From on the table 4.7, it showed that from 30 text that there are 4
words with the wrong form of morpheme. It means that one or more of
sentence’s aspect has wrong formation. It can be caused by rule
regularization and the total errors of misformation is 13.3%.
d. MISORDERING
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Table 4.8
NO Example students errors Correct sentences
1 We finally returned to Indonesia Finally, we returned to
Indonesia
2 The online school started The school started online
3 Will quickly pass It would pass quickly
From on the table 4.8, it showed that from 30 texts that there are 3
wrong words because of the wrong placement of the morpheme or group
morpheme in a speech. This means that the sentence structure is not arranged
correctly. The words are structured incorrectly and the total errors of
misordering is 13.3%
3. Interview
In this section, the writer tried to analyze and clarify whether errors or
mistakes in recount text written by year 12 of senior high school 16
Makassar. The writer took five students to be interviewed. The transcription
could be seen in Appendix 1.
B. Discussion
This research was conducted through Google classroom to take
samples, the writer did not carry out in the school because of COVID 19. In this
process, the writer would like to make material and instructions so that students
could read it before writing recount text and then the English teacher directed the
students to join in the Google classroom then they write recount text according to
the instructions given by the writer and upload it after that the writer took 30
recount texts from 144 text to be sampled (6 classes) and also the writer
interviewed 5 students through whatsapp to clarify whether errors or mistake in
writing.
The writer analyzed the text based of Dulay on the linguistics category
taxonomy and surface strategy taxonomy. The result of the table 4.2 shows that
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the errors often made by students was Morpheme with the total errors of 260 or
4.03% meanwhile the lowest errors made by students was syntax with a total
errors of 97 or 17.5% especially in subordinate clause transformation and use of
is instead of are because students cannot distinguish between present tense and
past in writing recount text, so they write recount text in the present tense.
The result of the table 4.3 shows that the students didn’t use to be in
their sentences, for example: I helping my parents, it should be: I was helping my
parents. In the table 4.4 shows that the students didn’t use ed in main verb
because they only used V1 in their sentences, for example: I play game, it should
be: I played game. In the table 4.5 Shows that the students didn’t use conjunction
for example: I was only at home I was really bored at home, it should be: I was
only at home and I was really bored at home.
In the table 4.6 show that the students added unnecessary words in the
sentences for example: I can carry out Friday prayers, it should be: I could carry
out Friday pray. In the table 4.7 shows that the students made errors of wrong
form of morpheme. It means that one or more of sentence’s aspect has wrong
formation, it can be caused by rule regularization. For example: the monkey eat
banana when the gardener home, it should be: the monkey ate banana when the
gardener went home.
In the table 4.8 shows that the students made errors with the wrong
placement of the morpheme or group morpheme in a speech. This means that the
sentence structure is not arranged correctly. The words are structured incorrectly,
for example: will quickly pass, it should be: it would pass quickly. Those are
related with Coffin, et al (2003:32) stateds “there are some aspects of English
grammar that become ESL/EFL students’ difficulties”. The students are choice of
article, pronoun, verb tense, sentence agreement, etc.
In addition, according to Farooq, et al (2012:186) described that
“grammar is the most difficult part for L2 writers”. Students get difficulties to
write sentences in the correct structure. To support this errors we can see from
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the result of a case study by Al-Buainain (2006). He had found many errors of
verb tense in their writing because the students are not able to know and
understand well about tenses in English. The students cannot select correct verb
(regular verb or irregular verb) on the tenses they use in their writing. Thus, they
difficulties in writing are not only in produce their ideas but the students are to
know how to put verbs into correct sentences.
According to Brown, (2000:224) there are two major causes in
English; interlingual and intralingual transfer (Brown, 2000:224). In addition,
interlingual transfer is a significant source of errors for all learners. He explains
that interlanguage is learner language, which emphasizes the separateness of a
second language learners’ system. He also defines interlingual as a system that
has a structurally intermediate status between the native and target language.
Interlingual is when the students of foreign language make structure deviation by
the effect of their mother tongue. In other words, it is called language transfer.
The difficulties occur because the features of source language and target
language are different.
Brown, (2000:224) explained the second cause that can cause
students’ difficulties and errors in writing is intralingual transfer. Intralingual
derives when they make ungrammatical structure since they do not have a little
knowledge of their second language.
From the explanation above that they have lack second language
knowledge and lack of grammar knowledge of the second language. So that, they
found difficulties in arranging words became sentences in a paragraph.
The students’ causing of errors in writing recount text by year 12 of
Senior High School 16 Makassar, it is Interlingual are errors which are caused by
the influence of first language of the students. Form the data analyzed, the writer
found several sentences which contain errors because of Indonesian structure
influence. They translate Indonesian into English without knowing the structures
(verbs, tenses) in the sentence.
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A. Conclusion
School 16 Makassar, from 30 students, there are 17 students that used verb 1
as a simple tense in their recount text because it's influenced by this pandemic
which is still ongoing today, they tell their activities at home and outside
during this pandemic, it's not they tell about their past (school holiday).
Sometimes amount of them don’t use subject before verb, the placement of the
High School 16 Makassar, it is Interlingual are errors which are caused by the
influence of first language of them. From the data analyzed, the writer found
errors of 260 of 6441 or 4.03% and there is 97 of 554 sentences with total
errors 17.5% in syntax. In the surface strategy taxonomy, there are omissions
with total errors 13.3%, addition with total errors 13.3 %, misformation with
B. Suggestion
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1. The English teachers should teach to their students about Verb 1 Verb II
and Verb III and they give assignments to students to compose recount text
2. The students have to practice composing recount text even though there are
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Appendix 1
INTERVIEW
First Participant (Syahrial Alamsyah)
I : Assalamualaikum dek, boleh saya minta waktunya sebentar untuk di
interview?
P1 : Walaikumsalam boleh kak
I : Saat mengerjakan recount text, apakah kamu dapat mengerjakannya
dengan baik?
P1 : Iya kak, saya dapat mengerjakannya dengan baik.
I : Pada waktu selesai mengerjakannya, apakah kamu memeriksa kembali
pekerjaanmu?
P1 : Iya kak. Saya memeriksa kembali untuk memastikan apakah ada salah atau
tidak
I : Menurutmu, apa kira-kira yang membuatmu sulit mengerjakannya?
P1 : Saya belum tau tentang verb dan saya juga kurang ide dalam
mengekspresikan kalimat saya
I : Oh iya dek, saya perhatikan dilembaran hasilmu ada kalimat begini “I start
my day by getting up at 4:46 a.m for down prayers” coba diperhatikan kata
prayers apakah menurutmu pray dan prayers itu sama?
P1 : Menurut saya sama-sama artinya sholat/berdoa
I : Bagaimana penggunaan pray dan prayers dalam kalimat?
P1 : Saya tidak tau kak.
I : Oh iya, pada saat kamu menulis recount text, apakah kamu masih
terpengaruh dengan bahasa Indonesia?
P1 : Masih terpengaruh kak
I : Menurutmu, apakah kamu mengalami kesulitan ketika kamu ingin
mengekspresikan idemu dalam bentuk tulisan bahasa inggris, berikan
alasanmu!
P1 : Biasanya saya menerjemahkan bahasa Indonesia ke bahasa inggris dan bagi
saya susah, kadang saya harus menggunakan google translate
I : Oh gitu, oke dek terima kasih atas waktunya
P1 : Iya kak.
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Second Participant (Meifa halwiah)
I : Assalamualaikum dek, boleh saya minta waktunya sebentar untuk di
interview?
P2 : Walaikumsalam, iya kak
I : Saat mengerjakan recount text, apakah kamu dapat mengerjakannya dengan
baik?
P2 : Iya saya dapat mengerjakannya
I : Selama mengerjakan apakah kamu mengalami kesulitan?
P2 : Kesulitan saya adalah saya susah mengekspresikan ide saya karena selama
corona ini saya hanya melakukan kegiatan dirumah saja
I : Pada waktu selesai mengerjakannya, apakah kamu memeriksa kembali
pekerjaanmu?
P2 : Saya nda sempat periksa kembali karena saya dikerja deadline
I : Apa yang membuatmu sulit mengerjakannya?
P2 : Jujur kak, saya masih minim pengetahuan saya tentang bahasa inggris
terutama dalam grammar, saya belum tau penggunaan verb
I : Apakah kamu tau tentang past tense dan present tense
P2 : Tidak kak
I : Saya perhatikan dilembaran hasilmu ada kalimta begini “ I hope this
epidemic” coba diperhatikan, apa itu epidemic?
P2 : Maksud saya disitu pandemic kak bukan epidemic. Disitu saya salah ketik
I : Okey bagaimana dengan “ I go to the cafeteria dan I also go to exchange
stories with mokay” apakah kamu tau “go” itu berbentuk Verb 1 atau
Verb2 ?
P2 : Verb 1
I : Apa verb 2 dari kata Go?
P2 : Tidak tau kak
I : Okey dek, terima kasih waktunya.
P2 : Sama-sama kak
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Third participant (Aisyah Ramadhani)
I : Assalamualaikum dek, boleh saya minta waktunya sebentar untuk di
interview?
P3 : Walaikumsalam, iya kak
I : Saat mengerjakan recount text, apakah kamu dapat mengerjakannya dengan
baik?
P3 : Iya kak, saya dapat mengerjakannya
I : Pada waktu selesai mengerjakannya, apakah kamu memeriksa kembali
pekerjaanmu?
P3 : Saya nda sempat periksa kembali karena saya hal lain yang saya harus
kerjakan
I : Selama mengerjakan apakah kamu mengalami kesulitan?
P3 : Saya masih kurang dalam menguasai grammar sehingga saya menulis
kalimat itu, saya harus membuka kamus grammar terlebih dahulu
I : Apakah kamu terpengaruh dengan bahasa Indonesia?
P3 : Iya kak, saya masih terpengaruh dengan bahasa Indonesia sehingga saya
terlebih dahulu harus membuat konsep dalam bahasa Indonesia terlebih
dahulu kemudian menerjemahkannya ke dalam bahasa inggris.
I : Saya perhatikan dilembaran hasilmu ada kalimat begini “I spend my time at
home” apakah kamu tau “spend” termasuk Verb apa?
P3 : Verb 1 kak
I : Apakah kamu tau jika dalam kalimat past tense seharusnya kita
menggunakan V2?
P3 : Tidak tau kak
I : Okey dek, terima atas waktunya
P3 : Iya kak
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Fourth participant (Maria Zena)
I : Selamat malam dek
P4 : Malam kak
I : Boleh saya minta waktunya untuk interview?
P4 : Boleh kak
I : Saat mengerjakan recount text, apakah kamu dapat mengerjakannya dengan
baik?
P4 : Iya kak
I : Apakah ada kesulitan dalam menulis recount text?
P4 : Saya tidak tau penggunaan verb dan vocabulary jadi saya harus
menerjemahkan satu per satu ke dalam bahasa inggris
I : Saya perhatikan dilembaran hasilmu ada kalimat begini “helping, playing
and watching. Kata tersebut termasuk dalam verb apa?
P4 : Verb 1 kayaknya kak
I : Helped, played dan watched termasuk verb apa?
P4 : Tidak tau kak
I : Helped, played dan watched itu verb 2 dek dan digunakan dalam kalimat
past tense
P4 : Oh iya kak, saya baru tau
I : Okey dek makasih atas waktunya
P4 : Iya kak sama-sama
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Fifth participant (Cahya Tahir)
I : Assalamualaikum dek, boleh minta waktunya untuk di interview?
P5 : Boleh kak
I : Saat mengerjakan recount text, apakah kamu dapat mengerjakannya dengan
baik?
P5 : Tidak kak, saya merasa kesulitan karena banyak kata yang saya tidak tau
dalam bahasa inggris
I : Apakah kamu memeriksa kembali pekerjaanmu?
P5 : Tidak, karena pada saat itu saya harus mengerjakan hal tugas matematika
yang bersamaan pengumpulannya.
I : Oh iya, apakah kamu terpengaruh dengan bahasa Indonesia?
P5 : Iya kak, makanya saya memakai google translate untuk menerjemahkan
bahasa indonesia ke bahasa inggirs
I : Menurutmu, apakah kamu kesulitan dalam mengekspresikan idemu?
P5 : Sulit, selama korona ini saya hanya menghabiskan waktu di rumah jadi
tidak ada ide untuk menulis recount text dengan tema holiday school it
I : Oke dek, jadi saya banyak menemukan kalimat yang berbentuk present
tense Seperti “many people are afraid, all students are very happy, I spend
my time at home and there are students who are already planning a
vacation”
P5 : Are dan spend adalah verb 1, apa verb 2 dari kata are dan spend?
I : Tidak tau kak
P5 : Iya dek, seharusnya dalam recount text itu kita menggunakan kalimat past
tense yaitu verb2, jika adik memakai verb 1 itu salah karena karena
berbentuk present tense.
P5 : Iya kak, saya baru tahu, saya masih kurang salam grammar tertumaverb
jadi Saya tidak tau membedakan verb1, verb 2 dan verb3.
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Appendix 2
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MEIFA HALWIYAH NUR NABILA
XII IPA 1
hello everyone I am meifa halwiyah nur nabila, during my daily life during
the pandemic I was only at home I was really bored at home, all I did was go online,
eat and sleep. I miss going to school offline, greeting each other with friends,
exchanging stories and laughing together. I hope this epidemic will pass quickly so
that I and my friends can meet. and I also miss meeting mothers and fathers, I want to
explain directly without being explained on the cellphone screen.
I also want to go around school together with my best friend, go to the
cafeteria together and buy toast at Om Bet, and I also want to go exchange stories
with the mokay and the bureng gang haha it was really fun school days before the
pandemic. somehow I hated my adolescence after the covid-19 pandemic, and I pray
that this pandemic will pass quickly and I can meet my friends aamiin allahumma
aamiin. sorry mam I just had time to send this test because there is a problem with my
internet, once again I'm sorry
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Name: AISYAH RAMADHANI.
Class: XII MIPA 3.
Hi, everyone. Good night, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is aisyah
ramadhani,I will tell a little about my experience during this pandemic Studying at
home is as fun as studying at school. Just as we miss going home at school, at home
there is also a longing to go to school and meet friends. Studying at home allowed me
to help my parents and spend a lot of time on my hobby. This covid-19 outbreak
provides a lot of wisdom. Now I can have a long vacation even I don't know how
long. Can linger with family and stop the chain of spreading the virus. However, I
still hope that this epidemic will end soon, so that life can return to life. Aamiin
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Nama: Maria Zena Tomarere
Kelas: XII MIPA 6
Here I will tell you about my activities while at home, because of the virus
outbreak we are dismissed from school, maybe the start of a holiday at home is fun
but as time goes by it starts to get boring because it's just at home and can't do many
things For the first time at home, I felt very happy because I didn't have a job, I could
spend more time with my family and so on.
My activities while at home may not be much, it's just that it repeats itself.
Like exercising every morning, helping parents, playing cellphones, watching dramas
or tv and sometimes making cakes. Sometimes feeling tired because there is a lot to
do at home but it has become a habit since the pandemic, especially eating, eating
may not be an activity but a necessity, but here since at home, my activities are also
mostly eating because there is nothing else to do so eating is a substitute.
I really wanted to go on vacation but because of the virus outbreak, the case
was getting wider so it was forbidden to go anywhere so I didn't go. time goes by, the
holidays have ended and started learning again but there is something different about
this time because it is not face-to-face but online, so there are more holidays. There
are more and more activities, not only helping parents but also learning online via
cellphones and working assignments.
Every day I pass through many tasks and make me tired because there are
more activities done at home. It makes me happy and it's fun but it shouldn't be done
every day. I sometimes feel bored, feel tired of the routine. I want to do a lot of things
outside. I hope this pandemic ends soon and we can get back to normal activities.
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Nama : Cahya Tahir
Kelas : XII MIPA 5
NISN : 0033433951
Today and the days before I was just at home. Sometimes when I want to
leave the house I feel terrified. all of this because of the pandemic that is currently
happening. all of my days don't feel the same as last year. But what can I do? I am
just a student who can only see on the news what is happen to this country. but I think
all students in this country feel the same way with me.
The first day when the information was delivered. all students are very happy
because they can take a vacation for a long time. And maybe there are some students
who are already planning a vacation somewhere including me, but two days after that
it was reported that the corona virus had entered Indonesia, And the spread of this
virus is quite extensive.
in the days after that. many people are afraid to leave their house, including
me. I prefer to spend my time at home. what I do at home is clean the house, finish
the homework, play games, watch Korean dramas and so on. after the fourth semester
passed I finally went up to the twelfth grade, school this time only through google
meet without meet the teachers. it feels really disappointing. Because I only have one
year left in high school. but what can i do ?, This pandemic is really dangerous so it is
too dangerous to carry out daily activities normally.
So the days I passed during this vacation were only doing activities at home.
It's quite boring and disappointing not to be able to go to school as usual. but I'm still
grateful because I can still relax and enjoy my days. Because there are still a lot of
people out there who want to have a day like me.
For example, like a doctor who does not have time to rest to take care of
patients or the police who are still working to maintain security and order the public
to always be careful during this pandemic. And also the teachers who have to go to
school to give lessons even though only through google meet. I hope This pandemic
will end soon. And people can resume their activities normally.
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Classification errors made by students based on the interview
1. Syahrial saputra
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around school around school
together with my best together with my best
friend friend
I also want to go I also wanted to go
exchange stories with exchange stories with
mokay mokay
MISTAKES
I hope this epidemic I hope this pandemic
3. Aisyah Ramadhani
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There are more There were more
activities activities
There is nothing else There was nothing
to do so eating is a else to do but eating
substitute
Three transformation There is a lot to do at There were a lot to
(use of is instead of are) home do at home
Omission of-ed Every morning Every morning I
helping parents, helped my parents,
playing cellphones , played cellphones
watching dramas and watched dramas
Omission of conjunction I sometimes feel I sometimes felt
and substitution of bored, feel tired of bored and felt tired
simple non past the routine routine
Addition It’s just it repeats It just repeated itself
itself I sometimes felt
I sometimes feel bored and tired
bored, feel tired of routine
the routine
Omission of to be Sometimes we Sometimes we were
making cakes making cake
5. Cahya tahir
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There are some students There were some
who are already students had already
planning a vacation planned a vacation
somewhere including somewhere included me
me Many people were afraid
Many people are afraid to leave their house
to leave their house
Three transformation (use It’s quite boring and It were quite boring and
of is instead of are) disappointing disappointing
Addition School this time only This time only through
through Google meet Google meet
What I do at home is I cleaned the house
clean the house
Misformation of past tense They can take a vacation They could take a
modals for a long time vacation for a long time
Omission of-ed Finish the homework, I Finished the
play games, watch homework, played games
Korean dramas and watched Korean
dramas
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