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English Prep G 12 Writing PDF
English Prep G 12 Writing PDF
English Prep G 12 Writing PDF
ុ ភាសាអង់តគ្េស
English Baccalaureate
Preparatory Course
តសៀវតៅត េះតតោរត ៖ើ
Essay Organizations
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1. Content 4pts
2. Grammar 3pts
3. Spelling 3pts
I. Essay Writing:
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay Outline
3. Brainstorming
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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II. Essay Writing:
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay Outline
3. Brainstorming
The Causes of Traffic Accidents
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…………………………………………………………………………………………………………..…………
Therefore, there are …………………………………………..and we will discuss these as the follow:
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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III. Essay Writing:
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay Outline
3. Brainstorming
The Causes of
Traffic Accidents
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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IV. Essay Writing:
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay outline
3. Brainstorming
4. Parts of Essay: Introduction
(How many times have you heard about the causes of accidents? Have you taken them into
account?) Traffic accident is one of the major problems in society. The causes of this accident are really
different ways. Many people used to have traffic accidents, and they found out the reason why they had
accidents; that is the thing we need to know. Therefore, there are some factors causing traffic accidents and
we will discuss these as the follow:
Introduction:
Hook: (Optional)
1. General Statements (1-2 sentences)
2. Elaboration
3. Thesis statements
Hook: (Optional)……………………………………………………………………………………..
1. General statements: …………………………………………………………………………………….
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2. Elaborate …………………………………………………………………………………………………
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Practice:
Topic: “What makes a good heath?”
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
Worksheet: Introduction
Practice:
Introduction:
Hook: (Optional)
4. General Statements (1-2 sentences)
5. Elaboration
6. Thesis statements
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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V. Essay Writing
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay outline
3. Brainstorming
4. Parts of Essay (Part 1): Introduction
5. Parts of Essay (Part 2): Body Paragraphs
First, traffic accidents are caused by humans. Some people get drunk and drive so it easily has accidents as
the saying “if you drink, don’t drive and if you drive, don’t drink”. Some are careless during driving or riding such as
listening to music, talking on the phone, playing Facebook, and paying no attention to where they are going.
Especially, they don’t adhere to morality and understanding each other. Another thing is that they over speed and
don’t respect the traffic lights, sings, or traffic rules. Also, vehicles are overloaded and they try to compete each
other. Therefore, we must be careful with the above activities to avoid traffic accidents.
Second, traffic accidents are caused by vehicles. Some vehicles are too old and it is difficult to drive as their
lights, brakes, wing mirrors, and tires are not good in all conditions. And the steering wheel which has problem and it
is hard to order during traveling. Furthermore, some vehicles are added surplus things which also cause difficult
driving as it is not standardized. So we must check our vehicles properly before we go anywhere.
Third, traffic accidents are caused by roads and natural disasters. Roads are bumpy, narrow, busy, up and
down, and bending, and they are difficult to use for driving or riding. Roads are not equipped with enough traffic
lights or traffic signs and some roads which have a lot of animals coming across are not easy to travel. Moreover,
accidents caused by the weather as it foggy, rainy, too hot and too cold so on. One more thing is caused by storm,
thunder and lightning as well. Totally, the two reasons above are really related and caused traffic accidents.
Body Paragraphs
1. Main point (Topic sentence = Topic + controlling idea) (1 sentence only)
2. Elaboration (Supporting ideas + Details)
3. Conclusion (Optional)
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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Forms of Body Paragraphs:
First, traffic accidents are caused by humans. Some people get drunk and drive so it easily has accidents as
the saying “if you drink, don’t drive and if you drive, don’t drink”. Some are careless during driving or riding such
as listening to music, talking on the phone, playing Facebook, and paying no attention to where they are going.
Especially, they don’t adhere to morality and understanding each other. Another thing is that they over speed and
don’t respect the traffic lights, sings, or traffic rules. Also, vehicles are overloaded and they try to compete each
other. Therefore, we must be careful with the above activities to avoid traffic accidents.
Second, traffic accidents are caused by vehicles. Some vehicles are too old and it is difficult to drive as their
lights, brakes, wing mirrors, and tires are not good in all conditions. And the steering wheel which has problem and it
is hard to order during traveling. Furthermore, some vehicles are added surplus things which also cause difficult
driving as it is not standardized. Thus, we must check our vehicles properly before we go anywhere.
Third, traffic accidents are caused by roads and natural disasters. Roads are bumpy, narrow, busy, up and
down, and bending, and they are difficult to use for driving or riding. Roads are not equipped with enough traffic
lights or traffic signs and some roads which have a lot of animals coming across are not easy to travel. Moreover,
accidents caused by the weather as it foggy, rainy, too hot and too cold so on. One more thing is caused by storm,
thunder and lightning as well. Totally, the two reasons above are really related and caused traffic accidents.
Body Paragraphs
1. Main point (Topic sentence = Topic + controlling idea) (only 1 sentence)
2. Elaboration/ Supporting sentences (Supporting ideas + Details)
3. Conclusion (Optional)
Practice:
Topic: “What makes a good health?”
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
Body paragraph Review:
Body Paragraphs
4. Main point (Topic sentence = Topic + controlling idea) (only 1 sentence)
5. Elaboration/ Supporting sentences (Supporting ideas + Details)
6. Conclusion (Optional)
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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Tips while writing:
Practice:
Write the body paragraphs of the following topic given:
Topic: “What makes a good health?”
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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Parts of Essay: Body Paragraphs
Coherence: using linking devices (See the sample essay on page 1)
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
Unity:
Practice
Read the following sentences, and identify an irrelevant sentence in the
paragraph given.
Answers: __________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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VI. Essay Writing
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay outline
3. Brainstorming
4. Parts of Essay (Part 1): Introduction
5. Parts of Essay (Part 2): Body (s)
6. Parts of Essay (Part 3): Conclusion
In conclusion, the causes of traffic accidents are related to humans, vehicles, roads,
and weather. All these are the reasons why people have accidents and they also affect
people’s life in all aspects. Therefore, I hope that all travellers must pay much more attention
to traffic before and during their traveling to escape from the accidents.
Conclusion:
1. Summary / Paraphrasing/ Restatement: Introduction/ Body (s)
2. Comment/ Final thought: Suggestion, advice, prediction, …
5. Final thought…………………………………………………………………………………………….
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Forms of Conclusion:
Practice:
Write a conclusion of the the following topic given:
Topic: “What makes a good health?”
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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Worksheet: Conclusion
What makes a good health?
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..…………
Therefore, there are …………………………………………..and we will discuss these as the follow:
First, _________________________________________________________________________________
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Second, _______________________________________________________________________________
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Third, ________________________________________________________________________________
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In conclusion, .………………………………………………………………………………………………
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រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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V. Essay Writing:
1. Essay Organization
2. Essay outline
3. Brainstorming
4. Parts of Essay (Part 1): Introduction
5. Parts of Essay (Part 2): Body (s)
6. Parts of Essay (Part 3): Conclusion
7. Put them all together
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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ថ្នារ់រ ៀនរក្រៀមក្បឡងបារ់ឌុប
Each paragraph should support or expand the central idea of the paper. The
idea of each paragraph should be explained and illustrated through examples,
DEVELOPMENT details, and descriptions.
Every paragraph in an essay should be related to the main idea. Each paragraph
UNITY should stick to its main point.
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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VII. Essay Writing:
7. Put them all together
Put them all together:
Essay Sample:
The Causes of Traffic Accidents
How many times have you heard about the causes of accidents? Have you taken them into account?
Traffic accident is one of the major problems in society. The causes of this accident are really different ways.
Many people used to have traffic accidents, and they found out the reason why they had accidents; that is
the thing we need to know. Therefore, there are some factors causing traffic accidents and we will discuss
these as the follow:
First, traffic accidents are caused by humans. Some people get drunk and drive so it easily has
accidents as the saying “if you drink, don’t drive and if you drive, don’t drink”. Some are careless during
driving or riding such as listening to music, talking on the phone, playing Facebook, and paying no
attention to where they are going. Especially, they don’t adhere to morality and understanding each other.
Another thing is that they over speed and don’t respect the traffic lights, sings, or traffic rules. Also, vehicles
are overloaded and they try to compete each other. Therefore, we must be careful with the above activities
to avoid traffic accidents.
Second, traffic accidents are caused by vehicles. Some vehicles are too old and it is difficult to drive as
their lights, brakes, wing mirrors, and tires are not good in all conditions. And the steering wheel which has
problem and it is hard to order during traveling. Furthermore, some vehicles are added surplus things which
also cause difficult driving as it is not standardized. So we must check our vehicles properly before we go
anywhere.
Third, traffic accidents are caused by roads and natural disasters. Roads are bumpy, narrow, busy, up
and down, and bending , and they are difficult to use for driving or riding. Roads are not equipped with
enough traffic lights or traffic signs and some roads which have a lot of animals coming across are not easy to
travel. Moreover, accidents caused by the weather as it foggy, rainy, too hot and too cold so on. One more
thing is caused by storm, thunder and lightning as well. Totally, the two reasons above are really related and
caused traffic accidents.
In conclusion, the causes of traffic accidents are related to humans, vehicles, roads, and weather. All
these are the reasons why people have accidents and they also affect people’s life in all aspects. Therefore, I
hope that all travellers must pay much more attention to traffic before and during their traveling to escape
from the accidents.
រ ៀបរ
រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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LINKING WORDS and PHRASES
Linking words and phrases in English (also called 'connective' or 'transition' words) are used to
combine two clauses or sentences presenting contrast, comparison, condition, supposition, purpose,
etc.
They enable us to establish clear connections between ideas.
Most linking words can either connect clauses within a sentence, or start a sentence to form
a link with the previous statement.
Below you will find some examples of linking words and how to use them. This is not a
comprehensive list.
You may want to add your own linking words and phrases.
Even if He is poor and has no house, but even if he had money, he wouldn't buy a house.
(Supposing he had the money, he still wouldn't buy a house.)
In spite of/Despite In spite of/despite the rain, she walked to the station.
In spite of/despite being blind, he walked to the station.
(without being affected by the rain or by being blind.)
So that She arrived early so that she could help her colleagues.
(She arrived early for the purpose of helping her colleagues.)
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រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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LINKING WORDS and PHRASES
Examples of linking words that connect two separate sentences or two clauses:
Note:
If linking words start a sentence, they are followed by a comma.
When they are used to connect two clauses, a semi-colon is used at the end of the first
clause, and a comma is often used after the linking word(s).
Besides The trip is too expensive. Besides, I don't really like hot weather.
Furthermore Computers are cheaper nowadays; furthermore, they are lighter.
In addition You haven't paid the rent yet. In addition, you owe me money.
Moreover The report is badly presented. Moreover, it contains inaccuracies.
However The hotel was open. However, nobody came to the reception desk.
Nevertheless He had severe injuries; nevertheless, he completely recovered.
Nonetheless The weather was bitterly cold. He went hiking nonetheless.
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រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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References
1. https://www.learn-english-today.com/lessons/lesson_contents/grammar/linking-words.html
2. https://www.allthingsgrammar.com/
3. http://languagelearningbase.com/20630/list-of-useful-linking-words
4. Great Writing 3 From Great Paragraphs to Great Essays, 3rd Edition by Keith S. Folse, Elena
Vestri Solomon, David Clabeaux
5. Academic Writing: From Paragraph to Essay by Dorothy E. Zemach, Lisa A. Rumisek
6. A Source taught by Sreng Vanouk
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រ ៀបរៀងចងក្ រងរនិងងនិបរក្
ៀងចងក្ ងបរក្ងៀនរោយ៖
ងៀនរោយ៖ឡុរោរក្
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