REFLECTION FORM 1

Name : Amy Lim Jia Hui

Matric No.: 177485 Group: 25

Complete the table below by referring to your outline in WRITING FORM 1 (DRAFT).

Thesis Statement Strengths Weaknesses and Improvement

Focuses on a specific aspect of
the topic I did focus on a specific topic which is the
disadvantages of eating junk food regularly.

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Sets the writer’s position/point of I did set my point of view which I talk about the
view effect that will bring if we consume junk food
regularly.

Sets the pattern of organisation
for the academic text by
indicating the main points that
will be developed in the
paragraphs
I did indicating the main points that will be
developed in the paragraphs
For example, Eating junk food regularly will lead to
deficiency of nutrition that we needed and deteriorate
ours health.
Topic Sentences
Use keywords or phrases from
the thesis statement to indicate
the part of the thesis that will be
discussed
Have clear topics and controlling
ideas
Signal to the reader where the
paragraphs have been and
where they are headed through
transition signals such as first,
second, etc.
Supporting Points
Strengths Weaknesses and Improvement
I did not use a good phrase from thesis statement.
For an example, Junk food will deteriorate our
health as it bring diseases such as obesity,
cardiovascular diseases and so on.
I have a clear topic but did not have a clear
controlling idea.
I do use the signal. For example, foremost and
besides this.
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Strengths Weaknesses and Improvement
Relevant to the main idea in the
topic sentence
Develop, clarify and support the
main idea in the topic sentence
The supporting detail I used is relevant to the main
idea in the topic sentences.
For an example , Consuming junk food will easily
raise cholesterol levels and causes arteries clog,
which may led to heart attacks.
I did not give a good supporting detail on the main
idea in the topic sentences.
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Concluding Sentences Strengths Weaknesses and Improvement
Begin with a suitable concluding I did not begin with a suitable conclusion. I will
signal improve it by using another sentences. For an
example, As a conclusion, junk food brings a lot of
impact.

Summarise or restate the main I did refresh the main idea.

idea of the paragraph For example, Eating junk food will cause poor
nutrition.

Do not introduce new points in I did not introduce new point in the concluding
the sentence sentences.
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