Andres Moncada

Walter Ortiz
Zaira Bolivar

My first suggestion is simply just help to pick up trash in the beaches (comma), it may be
annoying specially during vacations but is a small action that can help in the long term also
just don’t throw trash in the ocean and tell the people that are throwing trash at the ocean to
not do it.
My second suggestion is that big companies focused in the ocean pollution should go
around in boats with nets (comma), so that they can collect trash and also free fishes that
are trapped inside big trash balls.
And my third suggestion is move the rubbish islands back to land so that all that trash could
be recycled.
In conclusion the ocean is very polluted because us but with a bit of money and dedication
we can undo the damage we did.
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