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CW Module SPM 2020 PDF
CW Module SPM 2020 PDF
CW Module SPM 2020 PDF
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
Look at this picture. Think of words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
Example: water, boat These are common words that are used in essay related to flood.
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Read the sample essay below. Type of essay: Narrative Paper 1: Section B: Continuous writing
QUESTION: Your town was hit by a major flood during the rainy season last year.
Begin your story with, “It had been raining all day …”
You must begin your essay with words given
It had been raining all day. I was doing my homework in the living room. My two
brothers were playing in front of our house. The rain became heavier and heavier.
Just as I had finished my homework, my brothers ran to the living room and told
me that there was water everywhere. I went outside and noticed that the water in the
drain had overflowed! The water was flowing into the parking space. I quickly called my
parents. Within ten minutes, the water had already risen to our doorstep. My parents
quickly took some important things. The water level rose swiftly. Soon, we had to move
to the rooftop.
Some of my neighbours were already on the roof with their possessions. Most of
them were using umbrellas as it was still raining. It had turned dark and we hoped for
the best. We prayed for some assistance.
A few hours later, we saw flashes of light. To our delight, we discovered that it
was the rescue squad. We were overjoyed to see them coming to our rescue in boats.
Our family and all the other victims were brought to a relief centre which was located
in a school not affected by the flood.
For SPM, you are required to write at least 350.
This sample is to give you ideas on how to write your story. (204 words)
You should elaborate more on certain parts to make it longer.
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
1. noticed observing or • observed • take notice You should take
paying • detected of notice of the situation
attention to • noted around you.
something • spotted
• sit up and Please sit up and
take notice take notice as the
teacher speaks.
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A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
4. possessions things that you • belongings • in The book is now in my
own • goods someone’s possession.
possession
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A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
8. victims people who are • sufferers • fall victim Many families have
harmed, • injured to fallen victim to the
injured or parties flash flood.
killed as a • casualties
result of a • fashion Sarah is a fashion
crime, accident victim victim who always
or other event needs to wear branded
or action items.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
QUESTION: Your town was hit by a major flood during the rainy season last year. Begin
your story with, “It had been raining all day …”
It had been raining all day. I was doing my homework in the living room. My two
brothers were playing in front of our house. The rain became heavier and heavier.
Just as I had finished my homework, my brothers ran to the living room and told
noticed/saw
me that there was water everywhere. I went outside and ____________ that the water in
over_ _ _ _ _ _
the drain had ______________! The water was flowing into the parking space. I quickly
called my parents. Within ten minutes, the water had already risen to our doorstep. My
sw_ _ _ _ _
parents quickly took some important things. The water level rose ______________. Soon,
we had to move to the rooftop.
poss_ _ _ _ _ _ _
Some of my neighbours were already on the roof with their _______________. Most
of them were using umbrellas as it was still raining. It had turned dark and we hoped for
assist_ _ _ _
the best. We prayed for some _____________________.
del _ _ _ _
A few hours later, we saw flashes of light. To our _______________, we discovered
res _ _ _
that it was the ______________ squad. We were overjoyed to see them coming to our
vic _ _ _ _
rescue in boats. Our family and all the other _______________ were brought to a
rel_ _ _ cen_ _ _ aff_ _ _ _ _
__________________ which was located in a school not _______________ by the flood.
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Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes
Practice
for Expansion
1. Where was the rain? It had been raining all day (1) ___________ in my hometown, Kedah.
2. Why were you doing your It was bright and sunny the day before and we did not expect to be
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confined in the house on that day.
homework in the living room? I was doing my homework in the living room
3. Add a describing word or (2) because
_______________________________________
I did not want to be distubed by my overzealous siblings.
I had to finish few sets of maths exercises before the school started.
phrase. __________________________________________
Introduction
Questions/Notes
Practice
for Expansion
1. How did you move to the The water level rose swiftly. Soon, we had to
rooftop? by climbing up the ladder.
move to the rooftop (1) _________________
Example: quickly We helped one another to reach the top as it was the safest place
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to avoid from the strong current.
2. What kind of possession? Some of my neighbours were already on the roof
Body 2
Example: such as documents Like us, they brought few bags packed
with their possessions. (2) ____________________
and valuables/that will be with documents and valuables. My mom warned us to sit still while
__________________________________________
useful my dad looked for rescuers. I was scared looking at a few houses that
(3) _______________________________________
3. How did you feel? were covered in water and mud. There were also some goods
Example: frightened/ anxious and overturning car that had been washed away by the heavy rain.
2. Add words/phrases. to spend our night out in the cold. Dad calmed us down by telling us
_________________________________________.
Example: from the Fire and that the rescuers from Fire and Rescue Department would come
(2) _______________________________________
Rescue Department/ any time soon. He reasoned out that it took a while for the authorities to reach
_________________________________________.
us as there were many victims that need to be rescued.
from the authorities
Example: relieved/happy coming to our rescue in boats. Our family and all
the other victims were brought to a relief centre
which was located in a school not affected by the
I felt so relieved because my family and I were no longer in
flood.(2)___________________________________
danger. We hoped and prayed that the flood would be over so that
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we could start our life back again.
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Now you are ready to write an essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are advised
to spend about one hour to complete this task.
You experienced a landslide that occurred in your housing area. Write a story ending
with, “… I was glad the day had come to an end.”
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
Look at this picture. Think of any words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
balanced diet
avoid negative
avoid junk food/fast food thinking
mix with positive
exercise people drink enough
plain water
food be grateful
no smoking or drinking
regular medical check-up
enjoy life to the fullest
listen/watch to health programmes
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Read the sample essay below.
introduction Maintaining a healthy body is neither easy nor difficult. There is a need to be
healthy. Here, we will give some tips on how to have a healthy life.
Use sequence connector for a better flow 1st Main idea/topic sentence
One of the most important tips for a healthy body is to have a healthy diet. Avoid The topic
sentence is
In this para, junk food. Your diet should contain food which has nutrients. Try to include leafy having a
you should only healthy diet.It
elaborate on vegetables, fresh vegetables, fruits, milk, and fish in your daily diet. Make sure you have is followed
your topic sentence by sentences
which is your breakfast every day. Skipping your breakfast regularly will definitely affect your on how/what/
having a when/
healthy diet. health. You need to drink enough water so that you will not get dehydrated. Therefore, related to
healthy diet.
make sure you drink eight glasses of water daily.
2nd topic sentence
You should Exercise also plays a vital role in keeping your body healthy. Regular exercise will Try to justify/
only write explain
or elaborate keep you fit. You can jog or cycle daily. Find some free time to exercise. It is nice to how exercise
on exercise can maintain
in this para. have a medical check-up to get an idea about your health. a healthy
body.
3rd topic sentence.
Sequence connector
Apart from these, you should always try to manage your stress. Most people have
only elaborate health problems due to stress. By managing your stress, you can maintain a healthy body.
how managing Bad habits like smoking and staying up late at night should be avoided. These habits have
stress
can help side effects on your health. Your body should get sufficient rest. Make sure you sleep at
to maintain
a healthy body least 8 hours daily. A good sleep is very important to maintain a healthy body.
The tips above can help you to have a fit and healthy body. You must be You only
Conclusion. need to
determined to practise a healthy lifestyle to get a healthy body. summarise
It is better what you have
for you not mentioned
to add any and give
new point/topic
(258 words) words
sentence in of encourage-
conclusion. ment.
Adapted from Essays, UK. (November 2013). How to Keep Yourself Healthy Essay. Retrieved from https://www.ukessays.com/essays/physical-education/how-to-keep-
yourself-healthy-physical-education-essay.php?vref=1
If you write like a sample above, your essay will be more organised.
It is easier for your examiner to understand and follow you ideas.
Besides, it prevents you from 'beating around the bush' or repeat the same
ideas.
In real SPM, expand/elaborate more as you have to write not less than 350 words.
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the
sample essay in Let’s Discover.
A B C D E
No.
Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
1. tips a piece of • suggestions • a free bit of I would like to share
advice • advice advice with you a free bit
of advice on how to
be healthy.
4. skipping to miss out • ignoring • skip out on I should not skip out
doing • missing out on having breakfast.
something • leaving out
• skip over She always skips
over lunch to lose
weight.
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A B C D E
No.
Synonyms Phrases/
Meaning in
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
7. vital necessary • important Losing 20 kg is vital
• essential to be healthy.
• necessary
8. manage to be in • handle If you think you
charge of • control cannot handle
stress, you should
see the counsellor
before it gets worse.
Her determination
was the key to her
success in losing
weight.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
One of the most important tips for a healthy body is to have a healthy
and balanced diet
______________. junk food.like
Avoid chips and salted snack
Your diet should contain food which has
good and essential nutrients
______________. Try to include leafy vegetables, fresh vegetables, fruits, milk,
and fish in your daily diet. Make sure you have your breakfast every day.
Intentionaly skipping
______________ your breakfast regularly will definitely affect your health. You
dehydrated which can cause headaches, lethargy and
need to drink enough water so that you will not get ______________.
constipation. Therefore,
or more daily
make sure you drink eight glasses of water ______________.
vital
Exercise also plays a ______________ role in keeping your body healthy.
and reduce your risk of getting heart attack.
Regular exercise will keep you fit. You can jog or cycle daily. Find some free time
Even if it is only takes 10 minutes, you are doing your body a huge favour.
to exercise. It is nice to have a medical check-up to get an idea about your health.
Your doctor will let you know of your current health condition and advise you further on how to keep
dangerous disease at bay. manage
Apart from these, you should always try to ______________ your stress. Most
people have health problems due to stress. By managing your stress, you can
maintain a healthy body. Bad habits like smoking and staying up late at night
It will take a huge toll of your body as it can weaken your immune system.
should be avoided. These habits have side effects on your health. Your body should
enough
get ______________ rest. Make sure you sleep at least 8 hours daily. A good sleep
is very important to maintain a healthy body.and should not be taken lightly
The tips above can help you to have a fit and healthy body. You must be
determined
______________ to practise a healthy lifestyle to get a healthy body.
As an old and famous adage states 'Health is wealth'.
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Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes
Practice
for Expansion
1. Replace with another describing Maintaining a healthy body is neither
word/phrase. simple
(1) ______________ complex
nor (2) __________________
Example: simple We need to accomplish
There is a need to be healthy. (3) ___________
many things in life and it requests a sound body and mind. When our
_________________________________________
health is being compromised so do our quality of life.
2. Replace with another describing Here we will give some advice to have a happy
Introduction
3. Add a sentence.
Why is it important to be
healthy?
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Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes for
Practice
Expansion
You should exercise frequently and consistently at least 3 times a week for 30 minutes.
Set an exercise reminder if you are afraid of forgetting. 30 minutes might be ardous
session be? ________________________________________
to some especially the beginners.
d. How many times a year Find some free time for you to exercise. (1c) __
Thus you can start with 10 or 15 mins and build your stamina from there.
________________________________________
should you go for a medical Just remember that small steps do count.
check-up? ________________________________________
It is advisable to have a medical check-up to
get an idea about your health. (1d) __________ Depending on your health condition,
you should be seeing your doctor for
________________________________________ general check-up annually. One prominent
benefit of doing this is they can detect if there is any life-threatening disease such
as cancer earlier. Some unfortunate people had lost their lives just because
they only knew about their cancer at later stage. By taking a proactive measure like
seeing your doctor regularly may help to increase your lifespan and quality of life.
1. Add three sentences. Apart from these, you should always try
a. What causes stress? to reduce your stress. Most people have health
b. Suggest two ways to problems because of stress. (1a) ____________ Never-ending workload or achieving
manage stress. one's dreams can be the main cause
________________________________________ of stress and it is inevitable since we are living
in a highly competitive world where everyone wants to be the best.
c. Suggest two other By managing your stress, you can maintain a
unhealthy habits. One of the ways is to stop comparing yourself with others
healthy body. (1b) ________________________
especially those who are greater than you. Give yourself time to develop according
________________________________________
to your own pace. Besides, take some time off and go for a vacation. It helps your
Body 3
1. Add one or two sentences to The tips above can help you have a fit
conclude. and healthy body. You must be committed and
Conclusion
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Now you are ready to write another essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are advised
to spend about one hour to complete this task.
Describe how healthy habits are important in our life. You should write about the healthy
habits and explain why they are important.
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
Look at this picture. Think of any words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
supportive
caring active
prioritise family
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It is best if
you introduce
a family
member of
Read the sample essay below. your choice in the
first para
rather than
mention only one family member of your choice writing a para
about yourself.
QUESTION: Describe a family member who has inspired you.
(250 words)
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
A B C D E
No.
Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
1 inspire to make • motivate • inspire She motivated us
someone feel • persuade someone with with heroic stories.
they want to • encourage something
do something You inspire
and can do it. • inspire patriotism in me.
something in
someone
2 lanky tall and thin • slender • lanky kid The lanky kid
and move • slim transformed almost
rather • lean overnight into a
awkwardly • skinny handsome young
• bony man.
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A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
4 kind having or • concerned • kind-hearted She is a kind-
showing a • considerate person hearted teacher as
friendly, • benevolent she likes to help
generous, poor students in
sympathetic, her school.
or warm-
hearted
nature.
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A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words Idiomatic Examples of use
context
Expressions
8 dedicated wholly • purposeful • dedicate to The song was
committed to • committed someone dedicated to me.
a cause • devoted
• dedicate to He devoted
something himself to writing
songs.
9 loving feeling, • caring • tender loving Children just need
showing, or • affectionate care a little tender
indicating love loving care and
and affection they'll be happy.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
hard
My father inspires me because he works _________for our family. My father
is working in Subang Jaya. He goes to work at 7 a.m. and comes back at 6.00 p.m.
complains He is a very ___________man.
He works far from home but he never ___________. dedicated
That is why he inspires me a lot.
loving and kind man. He buys food and clothes for us. He
My father is a ________
also helps my mother to wash the dishes and helps us with our homework. He is the
presents for
reason why I can complete my homework every day. He also buys ____________
our birthdays although he does not have a lot of money.
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Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes for
Practice
Expansion
father. tall
father is _________, well-built
____________ handsome too
and _____________.
fair complexion black
He has a __________ and ___________ hair. He is
Add details: a loving father to all of us He likes to eat ____________.
___________. home-cooked mealHis hobby
a. When does he do his travelling around the globe while trying all sort of new activities.
is _____________________________________________
hobby? My father is an adventurous man and he always brings us
(a) ____________________________________________
b. Why does he like his to many places whenever he has a chance. He told us once that it
(b) ____________________________________________
was his childhood dream to explore the world and get to know other
hobby? _______________________________________________
cultures and people. According to his travel journal, he has been to
20 countries up till now.I enjoyed looking at his old photos with my
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mother when they were travelling together.
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Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes for
Practice
Expansion
Fill in the blanks with My father inspires me because he works hard for our
the
Body 2
What values have you In conclusion, I have learnt a lot of from my father.
learnt from your father? He teaches me to be compassionate towards others especially
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among family members. He always reminds me to not forgetting
Conclusion
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of my root wherever I go or who I would become in the future.
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inherit
I_______________________________________________
believe most of my good traits I enherit from him and I am
proud to be called as his son. I pray my father will be blessed
_______________________________________________
and stand by me until his last breath.
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Now you are ready to write another essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are advised
to spend about one hour to complete this task.
Describe someone you know who does well in life. Write about his/her achievements and
explain how he/she has overcome the challenges in life.
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s
Replace, Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
Look at this picture. Think of any words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
togetherness
respect reward
share
teach honest
cooperate
exemplary praise
tolerance
selfless Kindness practice
at home look up
thoughtful
good habit
cultivate
early years empathy
compliment
family members elderly
task
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Read the sample essay below.
You need to write on the relevant ways parents can instill kindness at home
Quotation
QUESTION: Kindness begins at home. How can kindness be nurtured by parents at
home?
In conclusion, summarise role of parents. Do not add new point. You can include
(228 words)
the impact of kindness being nurtured at home to the society.
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in
Words Synonyms Idiomatic Examples of use
Context
Expressions
5. elders older people • seniors • your elders You may not want
and betters to go, but your
elders and betters
think you should.
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A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in
Words Synonyms Idiomatic Examples of use
Context
Expressions
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Table II:
Read the words and phrases in the table below. They will help you to organise your ideas
clearly.
• Next
• To start off
• Besides
First reason/ • To begin with
Next reason/ • Another
opinion • The first reason
opinion • Furthermore
• First and foremost
• In addition
• One important reason
• It is also found that
• Thus
• As a result • Yet
To emphasise • Due to this • By contrast
earlier • Therefore To introduce • In comparison
other possible
reason/ • Consequently • In other words
opinion
opinion • In view of this • On the other hand
• In other words • Another possibility is
• To put it simply
• Finally
• To sum up
• For example
• To conclude
• For instance
• In conclusion
To introduce • … mainly
To conclude • On the whole
examples • … such as …
• My final reason
• … in particular
• Last but not least
• An example of this is
• It can therefore be
concluded
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I and from Table II
of Let’s Learn.
At home, children first start to learn, talk, and express their feelings and parents
behaviour
act or train them to follow such _____________. Educating children about love,
empathy acceptable
____________, kindness, and socially _______________behaviour is a must at home.
elders
Children learn by imitating the behaviour of their _______________. Parents can teach
obey
their children to _________, be honest, be loyal and respect others.
needy
In addition, children should be taught to help the ___________members of our
community. Parents can teach their children about social responsibilities effectively
through their actions. For example, if a father helps a blind person to cross the road,
his children will likely do the same.
guidelines
Parents should also provide their children with ____________on how to behave
and have good manners. Therefore, children grow up to become confident with strong
good values. At the same time, children will learn to deal with day to day matters and
respond to difficult situations.
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Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes
Practice
for Expansion
of kind acts done by good Samaritans around the globe and how it has affected people lives
children at home? __________________________________________________.
to be better.
It is important for children to be good members of society
2. Why is it they will shape the future of the world by behaving in civilized manner.
because (2) ________________________________________
World will be a peaceful place to live if everyone is playing their role and parts by being
important for __________________________________________________.
responsible, respectful and selfless. This can be achieved with the right upbringing
children to be
from home especially during the early years.
good members of
the society?
1. What are some At home, children first start to learn, talk, and express
other examples of their feelings. Parents act or train them to follow such
behaviour that behaviour. Educating children about love, empathy,
parents can teach kindness, and socially acceptable behaviour is a must at
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can give to the their actions. For example, if a father helps a blind person
needy people. to cross a road, his children will likely do the same. Another
example that children can give needy people is (1) _______ by helping them carrying
their heavy stuffs or even holding the door for them to go out safely. It might seem
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a small act but it reflects one's attitude of being considerate. Children also can learn to be
mindful towards the needy by giving up their seat in the LRT or bus when they see
the elderly or pregnant lady is standing nearby them. They should be taught not to turn
a blind eye when encountering such situation.
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1. What are other Parents should also provide their children with
benefits of being guidelines on how to behave and have good manners.
kind to others? Therefore, children grow up to become confident with
strong good values. At the same time, children will learn to
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Now you are ready to write an essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are
advised to spend about one hour to complete this task.
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UPPER SECONDARY SCHOOL SUPPORT MATERIAL FOR CONTINUOUS WRITING SECTION OF
SPM ENGLISH LANGUAGE 1119
ESSAY TYPE
THEME:
Instructions:
1. This module is divided into 6 sections: Let’s Recall, Let’s Discover, Let’s Learn, Let’s Replace,
Let’s Expand and Let’s Create.
2. You MUST attempt each section in sequence. DO NOT skip any section.
3. READ and understand all the instructions given.
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QUESTION: Write about a girl who lost her parents but managed to achieve success
in life. Begin your story with: “Marina’s plans shattered into a million
pieces when…”
Look at this picture. Think of words or phrases that are related to it.
Write your words or phrases in the Circle Map below.
sad clueless
identity
grief
struggling lost
suicidal thought
freedom confused
lonely Teen pressure
Problems losing hope
finding support
move on disatisfaction
immature
rebellious disappointment
reckless
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Identify the storyline and the characters involved.
Your story must contain a female character who lost her
parents, and a story of her success in life despite losing her
parents. Success in life can be she had a good job/ she
managed to open her own company/ she became the
Read the sample essay below. founder of product etc.
Start by Marina’s plans shattered into a million pieces when her mother and father You must
introducing use the sentence
main character passed away. She was alone with only a rabbit to keep her company. Marina’s given to
and her rabbit was called Fluffy. Fluffy was very dear to Marina because her father had begin your story.
struggles Do not
bought it for her. It was a difficult time for her since she would soon be sitting for change the
words.
her SPM. Luckily, she had her Aunt Amy who was willing to help take care of her
after her parent’s death.
Develop the One day, a tractor ran over her little rabbit. Now, she felt sadder than ever.
story by Include the
showing
Aunt Amy saw her crying and walked over to console her. “Do not let sadness rule obsctacles she
how main you. Remember dear, you will be sitting for SPM soon. Be strong and you will had to overcome
character
found succeed.” A wise advice from Aunt Amy. Marina remembered those words and
source of recited them throughout the night. She hoped that it would be a better day
strength
tomorrow.
From that day onwards, Marina started to study hard. She stayed focused in Be clear on
Elaborate school with Aunt Amy giving her support and motivation. When the SPM results were how
on how she worked
the main announced, Marina received the surprise of her life. She had passed her exam with her way through
character
finally flying colours.
succeeded
despite
her painful (195 words)
situation.
Adapted from: yourstories: An unexpected death, https://www.theguardian.com
For SPM, you need to write longer, at least 350 words. Expand the
storyline above to meet the required number of words.
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Table I:
Read the information in the table below. The information in the table is from the sample
essay in Let’s Discover.
A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning Synonyms
Words idiomatic Examples of use
in context
expressions
1 shattered break or smashed shattered My heart was
cause to broke into a shattered into a
break burst million million pieces when I
suddenly pieces heard the shocking
and news.
violently
into shatter one’s I became a lawyer
pieces. hopes after my parents
shattered my hopes of
becoming an artist.
4 walked move at a went over walk out She quickly walked out
over regular ambled of the house when she
pace heard the news.
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A B C D E
No. Phrases/
Meaning in Synonyms
Words idiomatic Examples of use
context
expressions
5 console comfort comfort Aunt Amy
(someone) at a calm comforted Marina
time of grief or soothe when her mother
disappointment passed away.
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Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases from Column C in Table I of Let’s Learn.
QUESTION: Write about a girl who lost her parents but managed to achieve
success in life. Begin your story with: “Marina’s plans shattered into
a million pieces when…”
shattered
Marina’s plans ______________ into a million pieces when her mother and
father passed away. She was alone with only a rabbit to keep her company. Marina’s
special
rabbit was called Fluffy. Fluffy was very _________to Marina because her father had
bought
_______________ it for her. It was a difficult time for her since she would soon be
sitting for her SPM. Luckily, she had her Aunt Amy who was willing to help take care
of her after her parent’s death.
One day, a tractor ran over her little rabbit. Now, she felt sadder than ever.
Aunt Amy saw her crying and ______________ walked over
_______________ to
console sadness
____________________ her. “Do not let _______________ rule you. Remember dear,
you will be sitting for SPM soon. Be strong and you will succeed.” A
wise
_________________ advice from Aunt Amy. Marina remembered those words and
recited
____________________ them throughout the night. She hoped that it would be a
better day tomorrow.
study
From that day onwards, Marina started to ______________________hard. She
stayed focused in school with Aunt Amy giving her support and motivation. When the
SPM results were announced, Marina received the surprise of her life. She had
passed
__________________ her exam with flying colours.
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Read the essay you have completed in Let’s Replace. Expand the essay in Column 2 by
answering the questions in Column 1.
Column 1 Column 2
Parts
Questions/Notes
Practice
for Expansion
were very close. Aunt Amy did not hesitate to look after
Marina and be her guardian as she always doted on her niece
since she was a baby.
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1. What was Marina doing in the Marina was feeding Fluffy
One day, (1) _____________________________
garden with Fluffy the with his favourite carrot.
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rabbit? He hopped happily around and did not notice he was too near the roadside.
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2. Think of an incident that Suddenly
(3) _______________, big and huge
a (4) ____________________
could cause the rabbit to tractor ran over her little rabbit. Now, she felt
jump to the middle of the She was not ready for another loss.
sadder than ever. (5) __________________________
road. Tears rolled down her cheeks and she sobbed uncontrollably.
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Questions/Notes
Practice
for Expansion
1. Why did Marina start to study From that day onwards, Marina started to
hard? Give at least two reasons. She knew that was what her parents wanted her
study hard. (1) ____________________________
2. What was the activity that she to do if they were still alive. Besides, she got nothing to lose by being
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successful. She could make people around her happy and contented.
could do with her friends in She stayed focused in school with Aunt Amy
school? giving her support and motivation. (2)
3. How did she react when she got Most of her time was filled either with study group or doing extra exercises.
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her SPM results? Marina's friends were kind and supportive as they always accompanied
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her in the library or at the canteen. They hardly left her alone.
When the SPM result was announced, Marina
received the surprise in her life. (3)
Marina looked at the transcript and saw string of As written on it.
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There was no other letter than A itself. Marina counted
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her lucky stars.
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She had passed her exams with flying colours.
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1. What did Marina do after getting Marina eagerly ran back home to share the good news with
(1) _____________________________________
her SPM results? her beloved Aunt Amy. Aunt Amy had been waiting for Marina anxiously.
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ran home – hugged – Aunt She regretted not following Marina to take the result as Marina insisted her
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Conclusion
Amy - thanked – support to stay home. She was startled when Marina hugged her once
(2) _______________________________________
2. What was Aunt Amy’s reaction she arrived home. Aunt Amy could not hold back her tears of
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when she heard the good news? happines. She thanked God for blessing them with good news and
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happy – cried – thanked God – wished Marina a good and happy future life.
wished - future
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Now you are ready to write an essay. Do your best!
Instructions: Write a composition of about 350 words on the following topic. You are
advised to spend about one hour to complete this task.
Write a story about a boy who had to face many challenges after his parents passed
away in an accident. End your story with, “…that was the reward for my patience and
hard work.”
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