Date:

Name: ​ ​Amr Shareef 9.E ​   

14-9-2020​    
 
WORD CHOICE
A Quilt of a Country
Anna Quindlen

An author’s ​word choice​ refers to his or her selection of particular words to

convey meaning and to express specific ideas and attitudes. Like writers of fiction
and poetry, nonfiction writers also use ​vivid language​, or strong, precise words.
In “A Quilt of a Country,” Anna Quindlen uses ​strong verbs​ and ​precise
adjectives​ to help readers picture descriptions and actions and make the writing
more interesting.
For example, the sentence ​Tolerance is a boring word​ is not very exciting. By
contrast, in “A Quilt of a Country,” the author writes ​tolerance is a
vanilla-pudding word, standing for little more than the allowance of letting others
live unremarked and unmolested​, which is much more specific and vivid.

A. DIRECTIONS: ​Revise each sentence by replacing ordinary verbs or

adjectives with stronger verbs and precise adjectives.
1. The quarterback almost dropped the ball during the last minute of the
game.
    ​The quarterback almost relinquished the ball during the last minute of the
game.
 
2. Laura worked at her family’s store every weekend and vacation.
    ​ ​Laura toiled at her family’s store every weekend and vacation.

3. We drove through two states to see the autumn foliage.

    ​We navigated through two states to see the autumn foliage​.
4. The teacher was disappointed by the lack of class participation.
    ​ ​The teacher was disenchanted by the lack of class participation.
5. Ben left his biology book at home yesterday.
    ​Ben abandoned his biology book at home yesterday.
 
6. William bought expensive shoes that are too small.
    ​ ​William bought exorbitant shoes that are too small.

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