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POST – TEST

Spot and list at least 10 errors in the mail given below

To: Jai.singh@xyz.net
Cc: Vinay.saxena@xyz.net; rajiv.khan@xyz.net

Subject:

Dearest Vinay,

This email is because to Let you know tht, you cannot enter the NOCS area, that is a
secret location and will be forbidden for you to go. If you go again, it will mean your
the Supervisor will be informed to give Warning. Take this Matter seriously.

Sakshi Jha

1. No Subject
2. Dearest- Dear is appropriate
3. That- Spelling mistake
4. Longer sentence with redundancy- This email is because to Let you know tht, you
cannot enter the NOCS area, that is a secret location and will be forbidden for you to go.
5. Supervisor- unnecessary capitalization
6. Warning- unnecessary capitalization.
7. Matter- unnecessary capitalization.
8. No closing greetings.- Regards
9. Let- unnecessary capitalization.
10. Grammatically incorrect sentence- If you go again, it will mean your the Supervisor will
be informed to give Warning.

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