Rough Draft

by Frida Rosales

Submission date: 20-Sep-2020 11:03PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1392508761
File name: FridaRosales_RA_RoughDraft.docx (25.11K)
Word count: 1033
Character count: 5471
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Rhetorical Analysis Word Count 1302

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Length a
2

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ORIGINALITY REPORT

29 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
7%
INTERNET SOURCES
23%
PUBLICATIONS
2%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

1
Sandra Davidson Scott. "Beyond reason: A
feminist theory of ethics for journalists", Feminist
20%
Issues, 1993
Publication

2
nasw.org
Internet Source 3%
3
Submitted to GradeGuru
Publication 2%
4
Submitted to Moody Bible Institute
Student Paper 1%
5
law.wustl.edu
Internet Source 1%
6
documents.mx
Internet Source 1%
7
journalism.missouri.edu
Internet Source 1%
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

/100 Instructor

PAGE 1

QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

Comment 1
This assignment is an academic essay. You MUST write in third person. Eliminate all forms of “I,”
“we,” and “you” from your essay.

QM Rhetorical Analysis Word Count 1302

Your word count:

Minimum required: 1000

Maximum: 1400

Additional Comment

985

QM head
improper heading format--See the "How to Set Up a Word Document in MLA Format" handout in the
Instructions with Screen Shots folder in the Information area of Blackboard.

QM Length a
This paper is a little too short.

Comment 2
Use the due date.

QM plag
plagiarized
 QM plag
plagiarized

QM 7
Incorrect citation form
Additional Comment

Cite every source every time you use it. Check your paper for quotations and paraphrases that are
not cited.

QM cap2
capitalization error, Section P-8, Capitalization, p. 347-349

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

PAGE 2

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

QM plag
plagiarized

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

QM plag
plagiarized

QM plag
plagiarized

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

QM plag
 plagiarized

QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation for each quotation or paraphrase.
Additional Comment

Cite every source every time you use it. Check your paper for quotations and paraphrases that are
not cited.

PAGE 3

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis blue cards

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See assignment—You are NOT following instructions

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

PAGE 4

QM PFI3
Please follow instructions.
Additional Comment

See rhetorical analysis green cards

Comment 3
I have not marked grammar and sentence structure errors. Make sure to eliminate the errors listed
below: (Look for other errors as well; all errors count against you in the final draft.

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)
 QM frag5
fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM fused5
fused sentence, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM sv5
subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
Blackboard

PAGE 5

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.