<Tryheart>

EU - (RP-PVP) - Alliance

Effective raiding guild with a strong social component,emphasizing

on individual improvement and optimal raid performance.

Introduction :

Greetings fellow knights of the realm, I am an emissary send on a

quest by the erudite Grand Master of the Tryheart Order, to find
able bodied heroes for our crusade against the forces of evil that
hide in the darkest corners of Azeroth.

Our goal is to reach the center of the evil undead scourge,

Naxxramas and slay the lich known as Kel'Thuzad and all the evil
minions that dwell within the necropolis.

However, while we are already a viable and strong establishment,

organizing successful weekly purges of BWL and MC, we still
require more champions to aid us in our righteous quest. Seldom
are heroes born this way, more often they are made through
dedication, focus, commitment and sheer will!

So, if you wish to find a family of dedicated and noble defenders

of Azeroth and you are willing to commit yourself to our knightly
order, we're looking forward to hearing from you.

<Tryheart> welcomes YOU all!

Summary :

- (T)eam of experienced 40+ player core

- (R)aiding, PVP and minor RP is what we delve into
- (Y)oung at heart, we look after our people and ask them to
support each other and improve themselves
- (H)elpful, professional, dynamic Guild Banking
- (E)njoying our memes, jokes, RP stories and banter among friends
- (A)imed on improving and optimizing our performance in raids
- (R)esponsible, mature, hands-on approach on guild governance and
problem solving
- (T)he guild for the rational and relaxed player that wants to
enjoy the Classic experience and avoid all nonsense and drama

Raid Schedule :

40-man raiding on every Wednesday, official server time 19-23. BWL

& MC usually done within 3 hours.

ZG and Onyxia done on every reset, with ZG runs being hosted at

both 20 and 22.

Check us out at https://discord.gg/qgGJUt or whisper our

recruiters, Naathalié and Sundarion.

character count : 1990 limit 2000

response back from Zoria :

''Naathalie and me have worked out the details of the recrutment

message, here is how it would look like on discord with the final
version of the pampflet in there too''

Good job! I like it very much!

First problem I see: you only have one Discord message that you're
allowed to post
that means you're limited to 2000 characters
current post is longer than that
I'd cut the addons out completely
The "currently looking for" as well. We're looking for everyone
who will turn out to be a good fit for us
Other than that the raid schedule can be shortened a lot. I could
just be the important information:
"40-man raiding on every Wednesday, official time 19-23. BWL & MC
usually done within 3 hours.
ZG and Onyxia done on every reset, with ZG runs being hosted at
both 20 and 22."
Even with that you most likely need to shorten it a bit more.