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    This document contains feedback from an instructor on a student's rough draft of a paper. The instructor notes several issues: 1) The paper contains plagiarism that must be eliminated. 2) At least one quotation is required but none are included. 3) The paper is not double spaced as required. 4) The file is not named correctly. 5) The paper does not meet the minimum length requirement. 6) First person pronouns are used when third person is required. 7) The title does not directly reflect the thesis. 8) Instructions on guide cards were not followed. 9) Parenthetical citations are missing. 10) Grammar and sentence structure errors need to be fixed. 11) Works cited entries contain errors and are

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    This document contains feedback from an instructor on a student's rough draft of a paper. The instructor notes several issues: 1) The paper contains plagiarism that must be eliminated. 2) At least one quotation is required but none are included. 3) The paper is not double spaced as required. 4) The file is not named correctly. 5) The paper does not meet the minimum length requirement. 6) First person pronouns are used when third person is required. 7) The title does not directly reflect the thesis. 8) Instructions on guide cards were not followed. 9) Parenthetical citations are missing. 10) Grammar and sentence structure errors need to be fixed. 11) Works cited entries contain errors and are

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    Rough Draft

    by Syed Hasnain

    Submission date: 26-Sep-2020 04:17PM (UTC-0500)


    Submission ID: 1397416634
    File name: Rough_Draft.docx (18.24K)
    Word count: 723
    Character count: 3408
    page number
    1

    spacing file name


    Length b
    Review Essay Word Count

    PFI3
    3

    no pc

    thesis in

    ts

    no pc
    5
    page number

    ts

    no pc

    ts

    no pc

    6
    page number

    cs5 frag5 fused5 ss5 sv5


    wce
    page number
    wcp

    PFI3
    not cited in paper

    not cited in paper


    Rough Draft
    ORIGINALITY REPORT

    4 %
    SIMILARITY INDEX
    4%
    INTERNET SOURCES
    0%
    PUBLICATIONS
    3%
    STUDENT PAPERS

    PRIMARY SOURCES

    1
    d2f5upgbvkx8pz.cloudfront.net
    Internet Source 3%
    2
    www.researchgate.net
    Internet Source 1%

    Exclude quotes Off Exclude matches Off


    Exclude bibliography Off
    Rough Draft
    GRADEMARK REPORT

    FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

    /100 Instructor

    PAGE 1

    QM page number
    Your last name and the page number must be here.

    Comment 1
    You MUST eliminate the plagiarism in your paper.

    Comment 2
    no quotations--You must have at least one quotation in your paper to demonstrate that you know
    how to introduce a quote properly and to quote properly. Check the Quotations and Paraphrases
    handout in the Research folder, which is in the Information & Books area of Blackboard.

    QM spacing
    You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
    assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

    QM file name
    Please use the assigned naming format when you save your file.

    QM Length b
    This paper does not meet the minimum length requirement of the assignment.

    QM Review Essay Word Count


    Your word count:

    Minimum required: 850

    Maximum: 1200

    Additional Comment

    699
    QM PFI3
    Please follow instructions.
    Additional Comment

    This assignment is an academic essay. You MUST write in third person. Eliminate all forms of “I,”
    “we,” and “you” from your essay.

    Comment 3
    Use the due date.

    QM 3
    Your title needs to reflect the main idea of your thesis more directly.

    Comment 4
    You must follow the instructions on the yellow cards.

    QM no pc
    no parenthetical citations
    Additional Comment

    Make sure that you provide a parenthetical citation for every quotation, paraphrase, and summary in
    your essay. If you fail to do so, you are plagiarizing.

    QM thesis in
    inadequate thesis
    Additional Comment

    You must follow the instructions on the yellow cards.

    QM ts
    The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
    Additional Comment

    You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 1.

    QM no pc
    no parenthetical citations

    Comment 5
    You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 1.

    PAGE 2

    QM page number
    Your last name and the page number must be here.

    QM ts
    The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
    Additional Comment

    You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 2.

    QM no pc
    no parenthetical citations

    QM ts
    The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
    Additional Comment

    You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 3.

    QM no pc
    no parenthetical citations

    Comment 6
    You must follow the instructions on the Blue Card for Body Paragraph 3.

    PAGE 3

    QM page number
    Your last name and the page number must be here.

    Comment 7
    You must follow the instructions on the green cards.

    Comment 8
    I have not marked grammar and sentence structure errors. Make sure to eliminate the errors listed
    below: (Look for other errors as well; all errors count against you in the final draft.

    QM frag5
    fragment, Section S-2, Fragments, pp. 256-257 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

    QM cs5
    comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
    on Blackboard

    QM ss5
    faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

    QM fused5
    fused sentence, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
    on Blackboard

    QM sv5
    subject-verb agreement, Section S-5, Subject-Verb Agreement, pp. 273-276 and Grammar Unit III on
    Blackboard

    PAGE 4

    QM wce
    Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.

    QM page number
    Your last name and the page number must be here.

    QM wcp
    Your works cited page is not in the correct format.

    QM PFI3
    Please follow instructions.
    Additional Comment

    From the assignment page: “You must use two or three of the following sources for your paper [see
    list on assignment paqge], and the sources must be documented through correctly formatted MLA
    parenthetical citations and works cited entries.”

    QM not cited in paper


    You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

    QM not cited in paper


    You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

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