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Assignment 1-Inquiry Bus
Assignment 1-Inquiry Bus
Assignment 1-Inquiry Bus
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Dear Tonya,
My name is Larissa Fuller, the Office Manager of XYZ Sign Co. I'm excited to share our most
recent accomplishment of completing the installation of our solar panels on top of our
office/manufacturing facility. These solar panels not only supply enough electricity for our
building but generate electricity to 1,000 average homes within our community. This significant
investment in our facility demonstrates our loyalty to remaining in Paradise, Ohio, and protecting
the environment. In celebration, XYZ Sign Co. is planning a media event and it would be such
an honor and bring the president of XYZ great joy if you would attend.
Would you be willing to speak at the event? The opening ceremony is scheduled for September
25th at 10:00AM, which should only run for about 30 minutes. Please consider being a part of
this grand event with us!
If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to reach me. I look forward to
hearing back from you.
Thank you,
Larissa Fuller
Paradise, Ohio
Teacher comments: You should have included the date at the top. "Dear Tonya" is not
formal enough; should have been "Dear Mayor Hughes." Pretty good first paragraph but
it would be better to have the event details at the end of that paragraph. I think you need
more details in paragraph two after your question. At the end, you should have politely set
a deadline to hear back by.