Beauty Standards

by Kennedy Dewalt

Submission date: 25-Oct-2020 09:12PM (UTC-0500)

Submission ID: 1426378181
File name: 113468_98730494_1075878830_Beauty_Standards_.pdf (43.45K)
Word count: 1006
Character count: 5066
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Essay is not to be an analysis of an article. Read the instructions, the textbook,

and watch the videos.

If this is your debatable

issue, what are your two
Second person sides?

WC Remove ALL
second person
"you"
Why are you
telling your
readers what to
do? This essay is
about reporting
information
Sources must be annotated, in alpha order, and in hanging
indent
Beauty Standards
ORIGINALITY REPORT

33 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
32%
INTERNET SOURCES
0%
PUBLICATIONS
25%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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inewsnetwork.net
Internet Source 10%
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Submitted to Mattawan High School
Student Paper 8%
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projecthelping.org
Internet Source 8%
4
Submitted to Clackamas High School
Student Paper 3%
5
Submitted to Southern New Hampshire
University - Continuing Education
2%
Student Paper

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Submitted to bne-catholic
Student Paper 1%
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Submitted to College of the Canyons
Student Paper 1%

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

50
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Text Comment. Continue to work on reducing the amount of quoted material. Click on the
second red button to see issues.

Text Comment. Essay is not to be an analysis of an article. Read the instructions, the textbook,
and watch the videos.

Text Comment. If this is your debatable issue, what are your two sides?

QM Second person
Avoid second person "you"

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Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do.
Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come up
 with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool when you're
trying to find a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one you're looking up. However, it
can often introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the same meaning.

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Text Comment. Why are you telling your readers what to do? This essay is about reporting
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Text Comment. Sources must be annotated, in alpha order, and in hanging indent