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Making A Difference With Better English
Making A Difference With Better English
Writing in the
Workplace
Writing in the
Workplace
Basic business writing
The writing process
Analyzing the purpose for writing and the audience
Anticipating the audience
Adapting to the task and audience
1. Basic Writing
• Audience-oriented
• Concentrate on looking at a problem from the receiver’s
perspective instead of seeing it from your own.
• Purposeful
• You will be writing to solve problems and convey
information. Definite purpose to fulfill in each message.
• Economical
• Try to present ideas clearly but concisely. LENGTH IS
NOT REWARDED.
2. The Writing Process
1.Prewriting
2. Writing 3. Revising
Analyzing
Anticipating
Revising
Adapting Researching
Proofreading
Organizing
Evaluating
Composing
3. Analyzing The Purpose for
Writing and The Audience
• Identifying Your Purpose
• 1. Why am I sending this message?
• 2. What do I hope to achieve?
• Your response will determine how you organize and present your
information.
• Telephone call
• Deliver or gather information quickly
• When nonverbal cues are unimportant
• When you cannot meet in person
• E-mail
• Need feedback and not immediately
• Effective for communicating with a large, dispersed
audience
Choosing Communication
Channels
• Face-to-face group meeting
• When group decisions and consensus are important
• Not efficient - distribute information
• Video or teleconference
• When group decisions and consensus and interaction
are important but members are geographically
dispersed
Choosing Communication
Channels
• Memo
• When you want a written record to explain policies clearly,
discuss procedures, or collect information within an
organization
• Letter
• When you need a written record of correspondence with
customers, the government, suppliers, or other outside and
organization.
• Report or Proposal
• When you are delivering considerable data internally or
externally.
4.Anticipating the Audience
• Profile the audience
• Helps you make decisions about shaping the message
• Considering the possibility of a secondary audience.
• B)
• Pertaining to your order, we must verify the sizes that
your organization requires prior to consignment of your
order to our shipper
• We’ll send your order as soon as we confirm the sizes
you need.
5. Adapting to the Task and
Audience
• Levels of Diction
Unprofessional Conversational Formal
(Low -level Diction) (Mid-level Diction) (High-level Diction)
Badmouth Criticize Denigrate
Memoranda
MEMORANDA
• A memo consists of:
• Heading
• Body
• Closing (Optional)
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• Heading
• should include:
• The date
• To whom the receiver is, including the designation or a
department if appropriate
• From the sender, including the designation. A reference
(Optional)
• A clear, short heading/subject that captures exactly
what the memo is about
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• Example 1
• MEMORANDUM
• MEMORANDUM
• SALES REPORT
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• Because it is an internal document, you do not
need to include your organisation’s address and
contact details.
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• Body (Message)
• Introduction
• States the purpose and summarize the most
important point. (main point)
• Deals with 1 issue at a time.
• Once purpose is established, succeeding
paragraphs can fill in the necessary details.
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• Memos may or may not be indented; most are not.
• Salutation or complimentary close not necessary.
• Single-spaced with double-spacing between
paragraphs and 2 spaces between heading and the
1st paragraph.
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• BODY
• Contains facts, arguments, questions to be
answered, historical background, charts,
enumerated items or other relevant materials.
• Details should be presented logically preferably in
lists.
MEMORANDA (cont…)
• Conclusion
• often overlooked
• should leave readers with ideas of follow-up.
• may give reader sthg to think about or do;
• may ask for a response by a given date;
• may ask reader to present ideas in writing;
• may get in touch with the sender.
• Frequently, the conclusion consists of an IF
statement that will give the recipient some idea of
the next step in the process.
• E.g.
• If you cannot attend the meeting, please send a
substitute.
• If you have any questions, please contact me at 03-
70809762.
• May conclude your memo with
• a) a complimentary close
• Eg. If our quarterly sales continue to improve at
this rate, we will double our sales expectation by
2003. Congratulations!
• and/or
• b) a directive close
• Eg. Next Wednesday (12/12/07), Mr. Jones will
provide each of you a timetable of events and a
summary of accomplishments.
• Closing (Optional)
• AUDIENCE RECOGNITION
• Memo – in-house audience ( usually low tech ; high tech).
You often can use more acronyms and internal
abbreviations.
• GOLDEN RULE :
Business Letter
LETTERS
• Mr Doug Allen
• Eagle Press Inc
• 24 South Bank
• Toronto
• Ontario
• M4J 7LK Canada
The Opening (cont.)
• SPECIAL MARKINGS
• Eg.
• CONFIDENTIAL
• Dear Sirs
The Opening (cont.)
• b) Salutation/Greeting
• Your reader’s last name, preceded by Dear and courtesy
title
• Eg. Dear Mr Smith Dear John
• To organization, use formal salutation
• Eg. Dear Sirs
• To head of dept/organization
• Eg. Dear Sir or Madam
• To a dept, Dear would be inappropriate
• Eg. (Dear) Accounting Department
The Opening (cont.)
• Mr, Ms, Miss or Mrs - distinguish gender
• Ms is always correct for women unless they prefer
to be called as Miss or Mrs (marital status)
• NOTE:
• Do not use “To whom it may concern”
• trite & imprecise
• CALL THE COMPANY TO FIND OUT BEFORE
WRITING
The Body of the Letter
• a) Subject Line (optional)
• - A brief indication of the content of a letter.
• - Usually placed one clear line after the salutation
• - Written in upper case/initial capitals with underscore.
• Yours faithfully
• Shirley Taylor
• Shirley Taylor
• pp Edward Nathan
• Chairman
Closing (cont.)
• Enclosure notation
• - anything that is included in the envelope with the letter.
• - type ‘Enc’ or ‘Encs’, one line after the sender’s
designation.
• Eg.
• bcc Mr Gordon Clark, Chief Executive
Section 5
Report
MAJOR DIFFERENCES BETWEEN
LONG & SHORT REPORTS
• Less need for introductory material
• Read critically
• Be prepared to :
• revise language and structure
• rewrite parts that don’t work
ORDER OF INFORMATION
• Direct order
• Indirect order
• Routine order
• If readers are:
• informed
• supportive
• keen to know results first
• DIRECT ORDER
• If readers:
• need to be informed
• need to be persuaded
• may be disappointed or hostile
• INDIRECT ORDER
• If readers need to:
• grasp information quickly
• make decisions
• ROUTINE ORDER
REPORT FORMATS
• The frequently used formats are:
• Formal format
• Letter format
• Memo format
• Manuscript format
Meeting
CONDUCTING EFFECTIVE
MEETINGS
The Chairperson
The Secretary
Members
ROLES OF MEETING
PARTICIPANTS
The chairperson
-Plays a neutral role in the session and does not join
in
discussions and contribute ideas.
-Assist the group in generating a successful meeting
outcome and in achieving the meeting objectives
ROLES OF
MEETING PARTICIPANTS
Meeting notice
Meeting agenda
Meeting minutes
MEETING NOTICE
- Date
- Time
- Venue
- Date of nextmeeting
MEETING MINUTES
• A record of items that have been discussed at a
• meeting.
• Recorded by the secretary.
• Content:-
• - Who was present and who are the
absentees.
MEETING MINUTES
- Topics discussed.
Telephone
Skills
Effective Telephone
Skills
A standard greeting