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"More Analysis" Next To Where Deeper
"More Analysis" Next To Where Deeper
"More Analysis" Next To Where Deeper
Criteria 1 2 3 4 Feedback
If not a 4, tell them what to
improve upon, specifically.
If a 4, tell them what they
have done well specifically.
It does not bring in new information that is 4 You stay very focused while
not supporting the argument or hop onto
at the same time bringing
other random topics. Organization makes
sense and there are varied transitions. If up other topics that are
the essay contains random info or topics,
relavent and important to
write “random” next to them.
your argument. Good job
READ THE ESSAY ONCE OVER WITHOUT MARKING ON IT.
Second Essay ONLY- CONCLUDING SENTENCE AND PARAGRAPH ANALYSIS
1. Read the concluding sentences and concluding paragraph, slowly and carefully.
Scale: 1 = standard not met; 2 = standard partially met; 3 = standard met; 4 = exceeds expectations
Criteria 1 2 3 4 Feedback
If not a 4, tell them what to
improve upon, specifically. If a 4,
tell them what they have done
well specifically.
Criteria 1 2 3 4 Feedback
If not a 4, tell them what to
improve upon, specifically. If a
4, tell them what they have
done well specifically.
The author uses too many $10 words 4 You used some good words that
and obscures his or her point. If so
were spaced out and far
write, “K.O.!” (knock out!) next to place
where it’s too much. between and I don’t think it
ever obscured your point
This is more subjective: The essay was 4 It was interesting to read your
an enjoyable read. There was
had good ideas, I wish you had
something interesting or unique about
it. If so, write “Gold!” next to where that third body paragraph
those moments in their essay are.
finished cuz it seems like it is
going to be pretty good
Write your own observation here about I fixed some of your formatting,
anything you think they should add or
the way it was formatted before
take away in general:
made it difficult to read a lot
and try to review so consider
changing it on your final draft