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A musical analysis and poetic interpretation of Ned Rorem’s


“Ariel”

Claflin, Beverly Hubbard, D.M.A.


Arizona State University, 1987

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A MUSICAL ANALYSIS AND POETIC INTERPRETATION

OF NED ROREM'S ARIEL

by

Beverly Hubbard C la flin

A Research Paper Presented in P a rtia l Fu lfillm en t


o f the Requirements fo r the Degree
Doctor o f Musical Arts

ARIZONA STATE UNIVERSITY

December 1987

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A MUSICAL ANALYSIS AND POETIC INTERPRETATION

OF NED ROREM'S ARIEL

by

Beverly Hubbard C la flin

has been approved

December 1987

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D irecto r, S o h o o lo f Music

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ABSTRACT

The main purpose of this study was to examine the song cycle

A riel by Ned Rorem. The study was divided in to three main

sections: 1) musical analysis; 2) poetic in te rp re ta tio n ; and 3)

compositional in te rp re ta tio n .

In analyzing the musical elements, attention was given to

horizontal m a te ria l, v e rtica l structures, and formal aspects.

The poetry was examined to determine the theme or central idea,

and to id e n tify imagery, metaphors, and other poetic devices.

The compositional in terp re ta tio n contained an examination of the

relationship between text and music. Consideration was given to word

expression, poetic atmosphere, and poetic meaning.

This study serves as a reference guide for performers of A r ie l.

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DEDICATION

This study Is dedicated to my parents, Charles and Rekah

Hubbard, whose continuing support has helped make possible the

attainment o f this degree.

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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS

The w rite r wishes to extend her appreciation and thanks to a ll

the members o f her doctoral committee. Special thanks are extended to

Dr. James DeMars. His appreciation fo r the topic as well as his

advice and encouragement were o f great value.

Lastly, a heart f e l t thank you to my husband, Craig, whose love

and constant encouragement helped bring th is project to successful

completion.

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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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LIST OF EXAMPLES ............................................................................................ v i i i

CHAPTER

I. INTRODUCTION ..................................................................................... 1

Statement o f the Problem ................................................. 6


Significance o f the Study ................................................. 7
Specific Questions Answered ............................................ 8
Lim itations ............................................................................ 9

II. REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE...................................................... 10

III. PROCEDURE......................................................................................... 21

Musical Analysis ................................................................. 21


Poetic In terp retatio n ......................................................... 21
Compositional In te rp re ta tio n ......................................... 21
Organization ......................................................................... 22

IV . MUSICAL ANALYSIS ............................................................................. 23

V. POETIC INTERPRETATION.................................................................. 66

V I. COMPOSITIONAL INTERPRETATION...................................................... 88

V II . SUMMARY...................................................................................................112

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TABLE OF CONTENTS, continued

BIBLIOGRAPHY...........................................................................................................114

APPENDIX A Personal Correspondence ........................................................ 118

APPENDIX B The Hanged Man ............................................................................ 123

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LIST OF'EXAMPLES

Example Page

1. "Words" measures 1 - 2 ......................................................................... 25


2. "Words" measures 2-4 . . . ......................................................... 25
3. "Words" measures 7 - 8 ......................................................................... 26
4. "Words" measures 30-34 ..................................................................... 27
5. "Words" measures 5 - 6 ......................................................................... 27
6. "Words" measures 1 4 - 1 6 ..................................................................... 28
7. "Words" measures 1 ............................................................................. 29
8. "Words" measures 9 - 1 1 ..................................................................... 30
9. "Words" measure 2 4 ............................................................................. 31
10. "Words" measures 27-29 ..................................................................... 32
11. "Words" measures 36-37 ..................................................................... 33
12. "Words" measure 2 5 ............................................................................. 33
13. "Words" measures 3 1 - 3 2 ..................................................................... 33
14. "Words" measures 39-42 ..................................................................... 34
15. "Words" measures 38-39 ..................................................................... 35
16. "Poppies in July" measures 1 - 3 ..................................................... 35
17. "Poppies in July" measures 12-14 ................................................. 36
18. "Poppies in July" measures 4 - 5 ..................................................... 37
19. "Poppies in July" measures 7 - 1 0 ................................................. 37
20. "Poppies in July" measures 25-26 ................................................. 38
21. "Poppies in July" measures 4 - 7 ..................................................... 38
22. "Poppies in July" measures 17-19 ................................................. 39
23. "Poppies in July" measures 27-30 ................................................. 40
24. "The Hanging Man" measures 1 - 3 ..................................................... 40
25. "The Hanging Man" measure 4 ......................................................... 41
26. "The Hanging Man" measures 22-24, 30-33 .................................. 42
27. "The Hanging Man" measures 8-13, 25-27 ..................................... 43
28. "The Hanging Man" measure 1 4 ......................................................... 44
29. "The Hanging Man" measures 17-21 ................................................. 44
30. "The Hanging Man" measure 2 6 ......................................................... 45
31. "The Hanging Man" measures 4-7 . ; ......................................... 46
32. "The Hanging Man" measures 34-38 ................................................. 46
33. "Poppies in October" measures10-13 .......................................... 47
34. "Poppies in October" measures 1 - 1 0 ............................................. 48
35. "Poppies in October" measures1 9 - 2 0 .......................................... 49
36. "Poppies in October" measures1 6 - 1 8 .......................................... 50
37. "Poppies in October" measures27-32 .......................................... 51
38. "Poppies in October" measures35-42 .......................................... 52
39. "Poppies in October" measures48-49 .......................................... 53
40. "Lady Lazarus" measures 1 - 3 .......................................................... 54
41. "Lady Lazarus" measures 4 - 6 .......................................................... 55
42. "Lady Lazarus" measure 7 .................................................................. 56
43. "Lady Lazarus" measures 1 1 - 1 2 ...................................................... 57

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LIST OF EXAMPLES, continued

44. "Lady Lazarus" measures 13, 2 3 ..................................................... 58


45. "Lady Lazarus" measures 1 6 - 1 9 ..................................................... 59
46. "Lady Lazarus" measure 3 9 ............................................................. 60
47. "Lady Lazarus" measures 58-62 .................................................... 61
48. "Lady Lazarus" measures 83-85 .................................................... 62
49. "Lady Lazarus" measure 5 7 ............................................................. 63
50. "Lady Lazarus" measures 47-48 ...................................................... 64
51. "Words" measure 1 .............................................................................. 89
52. "Words" measures 4 - 6 .......................................................................... 90
53. "Words” measures 6 - 8 .......................................................................... 90
54. "Words" measures 1 6 -1 7 ...................................................................... 91
55. "Words" measure 1 8 .............................................................................. 91
56. "Words" measures 31-34 ...................................................................... 92
57. "Words" measures 27-29 ...................................................................... 93
58. "Words" measures 35-42 ...................................................................... 94
59. "Poppies in July" measures 7, 1 3 ................................................ 95
60. "Poppies in July" measures 1 7 - 2 1 ................................................. 96
61. "The Hanging Man" measures 8 - 1 0 ................................................ 97
62. "The Hanging Man" measures 1 6 - 1 7 ................................................. 98
63. "The Hanging Man" measures 28-29 ................................................. 98
64. "The Hanging Man" measures 1 1 - 1 3 ................................................. 99
65. "Poppies in October" measures1 5 - 1 9 .................................................100
66. "Poppies in October" measures1 0 - 1 3 ................................................ 101
67. "Lady Lazarus" measures 3, 8, 9 ........................................................103
68. "Lady Lazarus" measures 1 9 - 2 0 .......................................................... 104
69. "Lady Lazarus" measures 36-37 ...................................................... 104
70. "Lady Lazarus" measure 4 3 ......................... 105
71. "Lady Lazarus" measure 53-54 ..................... 105
72. "Lady Lazarus" measure 5 6 ...................................................................106
73. "Lady Lazarus" measures 68-71 ...................................................... 106
74. "Lady Lazarus" measures 83-84 ...................................................... 107
75. "Lady Lazarus" measures 21, 38,57, 58 ........................................ 108
76. "Lady Lazarus" measures 47-48 ...................................................... 109
77. "Lady Lazarus" measure 8 5 ...................................................................110

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CHAPTER I

INTRODUCTION

Ned Rorem, American composer, d ia r is t and essayist, was born 1n

Richmond, Indiana on October 23, 1923. Referred to In Time Magazine

as " . . . undoubtedly the best composer o f a r t song now liv in g

. . ." 1, Rorem has hundreds o f songs in p r in t, many o f which have

been sung and recorded by leading a r tis t s .

His ea rly tra in in g 1n piano and composition was augmented by the

study of recordings o f the music o f Debussy, Ravel, Varfese, and the

blues singer, B i l l i e Holiday. His formal education includes the study

of composition with Leo Sowerby a t The American Conservatory in

Chicago (1938-1940), Northwestern U niversity (1940-1943), The C urtis

In s titu te in Philadelphia (1943), and J u illia r d School of Music

(1945-1948) where he received both Bachelors and Masters Degrees in

Music. His teachers o f composition included Bernard Wagenaar, Aaron

Copland, V ir g il Thomson, Arthur Honegger, and David Diamond.

Rorem has been the recipient o f several awards. In 1948, his

The Lordly Hudson was voted the best published song of th at year by

the Music Library Association. He has also received the Gershwin

Memorial Award (1948), Li 11 Boulanger Award, Prix de B ia r r it z , two

* "Frozen In te rp la y ", Time. November 1965, p. 83.

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Guggenheim Fellowships (1957 & 1977), and the P u litz e r Prize fo r his

A ir Music (1976).

In 1949, Rorem studied with Honegger in Paris on a Full bright

scholarship. A fte r two years o f musical composition in Morocco, Rorem

returned to Paris under the patronage of Viscountess Marie Laure de

N o ailles. Included in his social circles were Poulenc, Auric, and

Cocteau, and his lite r a r y in terests found release in song settings,

upon which his recognition la rg e ly rests. "C ertain ly i t is in the

solo songs, of which there are l i t e r a l l y hundreds, th a t Rorem makes

his bid fo r consideration beside the creators o f German and French

lie d e r . . .

Much o f Rorem's popularity as a songwriter perhaps is due to his

ly r ic a l s ty le o f vocal w ritin g and his g i f t of melody. "Like Barber,

he w rites in a tonal and somewhat eclectic s ty le , which has helped

make his songs accessible and pleasing to performers and


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audiences." "Rorem . . . perhaps because he tends to specialize in

song, w rites in a musical language th at is d ire c t, communicative,


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personal and engaging."

The v a rie ty of styles in Rorem's total songwriting output is

extensive. According to Bennie Middaugh this s t y lis t ic v a rie ty can be

a ttrib u te d to " . . . the d iv e rs ity o f influences and compositional

2 V ir g il Thomson, American Music Since 1919 (New York: H olt,


Rinehart & Winston, 1971), p. 87.
3 Charles Hamm, Music in the New World (London, New York:
W.W. Norton and Company, 1983), p. 458.
4 Charles Osborne, The Concert Song Companion. A Guide to the
Classical Repertoire (London: V ic to r Gollancz LTD, 1974), p. 243.

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elements which he has incorporated in to his s ty le ," and p rin c ip a lly ,

"to the wide v a rie ty of his chosen te x ts . To these - - to th e ir poetic

meters and in fle c tio n s , and especially to th e ir verbal meanings and

d erivative moods — he always appears to subjugate his musical

resources."5

Rorem's regard fo r poetry has been a dominating influence in his

compositions.

I am drawn to poetry, to words. At the age of


fifte e n I was setting e. e. cummings and Geoffrey
Chaucer. I have set French, some Ita lia n and L a tin ,
even two in ancient Greek. But I w ill never w rite
music to a foreign language again — only American
L ite ra tu re .6

In his e a r lie r years he used the poetic works o f Paul Goodman.

Later he turned to Theodore Roethke and Walt Whitman. At certain

times Rorem concentrated on single poets; George D arley, Tennyson,

Demetrios Capetanakis, Kenneth Koch, Howard Moss, Wallace Stevens, and

Sylvia P lath. His wide range o f in te re s ts , is thus exem plified in his

music.

To confirm his consideration o f poetry, Rorem has, upon numerous

occasions, stated his philosophy o f choosing appropriate texts for

song w ritin g . "The composer's i n i t i a l job is to fin d an appropriate

6 Bennie Middaugh, "The Songs o f Med Rorem: Aspects o f Musical


S ty le ," The NATS Journal 24-25 (May 1968): 39.
6 Arthur Satz, "Ned Rorem: Musician o f the Month," High
F id e lity . Aug. 1976: p. MA-5.

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poem. The te x t of th is is a poem's fin a l enhancement bymusic


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Rorem outlined in d e ta il the various elements necessary in

defining a song, and the significance of u tiliz in g choice poetry in an

essay delivered by the composer a t a Symposium on Contemporary Music

sponsored by the American Music Center in New York.

My three mottos fo r songwriting: Use only good


poems — that is , convincing marvels in English o f a ll
periods. Write g ra c efu lly fo r the voice — th a t is ,
make the voice lin e as seen on paper have the arched
flow which singers lik e to in te rp re t. Use no tric k s
— th a t is , since singing is already such a r t i f i c e ,
never repeat words a r b it r a r ily , much less ask the
voice to groan, shriek, or rasp. I have nothing
against special e ffe c ts , they are ju s t not in my
language. I betray the poet by framing his words, not
by d is to rtin g them.8

In 1971, Rorem composed a song cycle fo r soprano, c la rin e t and

piano, based on fiv e poems from the Ariel collection w ritte n by the

American Poet, Sylvia Plath. The work was premiered November 1971, at

the Library o f Congress, Washington, D.C., by P hyllis C u rtin , soprano,

David G lazer, c la rin e t, and Ryan Edwards, piano. Like many of his

compositions since the 1960's, the piece is w ritten in an cyclic form,

and stresses rhythmic v a rie ty as well as a disjunct vocal lin e .

A rie l is a compilation o f poems by Plath which were published

two years posthumously. These poems were w ritten during the la s t

7 Phi l i p Lieson M ille r , "The Songs o f Ned Rorem," Tempo 127


(December 1978): 25.
8 Ned Rorem, "Why I compose the Way I Do," High F id e lity .
September 1974, p. MA-17.

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months of her life , and are f ille d with elements of su fferin g ,

violence, and death. "The poems written during the la s t months o f her

l i f e (collected in the volume, A r ie l) are f i l l e d with a quiet rage and


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desperation." "In her la s t and best poems, . . . emotions take

over in appalling outbursts o f madness and f u r y ." 10

The paradox o f her b r ie f l i f e , and her suicide in London a fte r

one o f the worst snowstorms o f the century, has unalterably fused the

facts of her biography to the in terp re ta tio n o f the A riel poems.

" ( I t ) is quite d i f f i c u l t to read Sylvia P la th 's poetry and fic tio n and

not think o f her s u ic id e ."11 "Sylvia Plath would have been a good

poet even i f she had not committed suicide, but not exactly the poet

she has since become. Our knowledge o f her suicide comments on the

poetry as we read i t . The image of the poet th a t rises out o f the


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poetry as we read it wears the aspect o f her fa te ." Thee n tire

assemblage consists o f fo rty three poems which were " . . . rushed out
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at the rate of two or three a day." Rorem chose fiv e of these

poems and preserved the t i t l e A riel for his cycle o f songs: "Words",

"Poppies in July", "The Hanging Man", "Poppies in October", and "Lady

Lazarus".

9 Ronald De Feo,Contemporary L ite ra ry C ritic is m , ed. Carolyn


Riley 43 Vols. (D e tro it: Gale Research Company, 1985), 1:270.
10 Martha Duffy, "The Triumph o f a Tormented Poet," L if e .
November 1971, p. 38B.
11 De Feo,Contemporary Literary C ritic is m . 1:270.
12 George Stade, Foreword to A Closer Look a t A rie l: A Memory
of Svlvia P la th . by Nancy Hunter Steiner (New York: Harper's Magazine
Press, 1973), p. 3.
13 Robert Lowell, Foreword to A rie l: Poems of Svlvia P la th .
by Sylvia Plath (New York: Harper and Row, 1965), p. v i i .

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Statement of the Problem

Over the past few years a welcome trend has begun in vocal

music: to learn and perform 20th Century American music. " I t seems

there is an increased in terest in new music on the part o f performers


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and directors o f music fe s tiv a ls ." This movement has led to an

increase in the number of American composers using American poetry to

create a n a tio n a lis tic song s ty le . This evolution is supported by

Ruth Friedberg, " . . . a p a rtic u la r aesthetic strength emerges from

the cultu ral reinforcement o f American composers setting the work of


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American poets."

With th is outpouring of lite r a tu r e there appears to be very

l i t t l e accompanying source material fo r the performer. "A source book

w ritten by a singer/musicologist is rare indeed."16

Often singers neglect to perform a work because of the lack of

understanding of the text and of the new styles of musical

composition. "Frequently exaggerated awe fo r the formidable task of

learning and understanding the compositions o f this century leads to

an avoidance o f th is re p e rto ire ."17

^ S h a r o n Mabry, "New D irections: A Recital o f 20th Century


Music fo r Soprano," The NATS Journal 43 (January/February 1987): 26.
Ruth C. Friedberg, American A rt Song and American Poetry:
Vol I America Comes of Aae (Metuchen, New Jersey and London:
Scarecrow Press, In c ., 1981), p. 4.
16 S h irlee Emmons and Stanley Sonntag, The A rt o f the Sona
Recital (New York: Schirmer Books, 1979), p. 172.
17 Ib i d . , p. 212.

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This a ttitu d e can create e ith e r an absence o f the lite ra tu re on

r e c ita l programs, or poor performances of the contemporary works. If

performers are to give q u a lity interpretations and performances, they

must examine the lit e r a r y , as well as the musical dimensions of the

musical works. "Literary research supplies singers with a rich source


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of in te rp re tiv e ideas." Understanding the poetic te x t and its

meaning, is necessary to successfully in terp re t the music to which the

te x t has been set. Paula F rijs h , one of the great in te rp re te rs , has

said th a t whenever she decided to add a song to her re p e rto ire , she

began by memorizing the words. In this way she shed lig h t upon the
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composer's work.

In summary, resource m aterial is b eneficial in order to

in te rp re t and perform 20th century music e ffe c tiv e ly . Musical

analysis and the discussion of poetical in te rp re ta tio n is mandatory

fo r performance. Although Ned Rorem's work has been acclaimed, there

has been no analysis done fo r in terp reters of A r ie l.

Significance o f the Study

This study makes av aila b le to performers of 20th century

contemporary music a reference guide to the song cycle A rie l by Ned

Rorem. Rorem's works have in general, been given much attention by

performers as well as c r it ic s . However, the song cycle A rie l has been

overlooked. The avoidance of th is p a rtic u la r cycle by performers

TO Ib id . , p. 172.
19 P h illip M ille r , Foreword to The Ring o f Words. An Anthology
o f Song Texts (NewYork: W.W. Norton & Company, 1963), p. x x v ii.

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conceivably is due to the lack of resource m a te ria l, as well as to the

nature o f the poetry. This paper serves as a musical, p o e tic , and

in te rp re tiv e reference fo r performers o f A r i e l.

Specific Questions Answered

I. What was the result of musical analysis with regard given

to:

A. Horizontal Elements

1. Melodic Construction

2. Range

3. Tessitura

B. V e rtic al Elements

1. Harmonic Structure

2. Texture

3. Tonal Center

C. Formal Aspects

II. What was the result of poetic in terp retatio n with regard

given to:

A. Theme or central idea

B. Use o f imagery, metaphors, and poetic devices (word

rhythm, word sound, word rhyme)

III. Through musical analysis and poetic in te rp re ta tio n , what

compositional in terp retive elements were presented?

IV. What were the musical and poetical relationships of the

individual songs to the e n tire cycle.

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Li mi tatio n s

The study was lim ited to the investigation o f a contemporary

American song cycle, A rie l, composed by an American composer, Ned

Rorem, and based on the poetry o f an American poet, Sylvia P la th . It

did not attempt to analyze or discuss any additional works by Rorem or

P lath.

The musical analysis was w ritte n from a performers perspective.

H o rizo n ta l, v e r tic a l, and formal elements were examined. An extensive

analysis o f dynamics was omitted in order to focus the observations on

less obvious structural devices.

The poetry was examined in order to assist future performers

with in te rp re tiv e ideas. No attempt was made to o ffe r a comprehensive

poetic analysis.

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CHAPTER I I

REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE

The primary focus o f th is study was to o ffe r a musical and

poetical analysis of Rorem's A r ie l. The categories o f reviewed

lite r a tu r e and the c r it e r ia fo r th e ir inclusion are as follow s.

Regarding Ned Rorem p a rtic u la rly ; a rtic le s and books were

reviewed th at mentioned s p e c ific a lly the A riel cycle, or th at offered

insight in to his compositional s ty lis tic t r a it s . A d d itio n a lly , books

and diaries w ritten by Rorem th a t s p e c ific a lly mentioned the composing

or performing of the A rie l cycle, as well as dissertations that dealt

with the vocal works o f Rorem were examined.

Dissertations were reviewed to investigate previously used

methods o f research and discovery, with specific regard to musical

analysis and textual in te rp re ta tio n .

Selected a rtic le s and books about Sylvia Plath th a t mentioned

s p e c ific a lly the A rie l poems were reviewed. P a rtic u la r attention was

given to structural elements o f and in terp retatio n o f the fiv e poems

used by Rorem.

Although much has been w ritten by Rorem and about Rorem, very

little has been said about the composition A r ie l. In the a r tic le "The

Songs of Ned Rorem", found in Tempo magazine, the author P h ilip M ille r

examined b r ie fly the dominant influence of Rorem's in terest in

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poetry. Sylvia Plath was mentioned as one of the many poets whose

works were used by Rorem in composing song cycles. Short musical

excerpts were given as examples o f the composer's concern fo r textual

s e ttin g and it s in fle c tio n . M ille r stated that the composer achieves

his s ty le through syncopation, time changes, and displaced stresses.

The conclusion was drawn th a t the poetry was the major fa c to r in the

determination o f melodic lin e . I t was in this section th a t A riel was

mentioned as an example o f Rorem's alleged “bow toward s e ria lis ts " .

The a r t ic le concluded with a short examination of both form and


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p ia n is tic elements found in his songs.

Bennie Middaugh, author o f the a r tic le "The Songs o f Ned Rorem:

Aspects o f Musical S tyle", analyzed compositional techniques prevalent

in Rorem's songs. Much o f the a r t ic le concentrated on the composer's

regard fo r contrapuntal or lin e a r considerations rather than

homophonic te xtu re. Middaugh examined various contrapuntal devices

such as ostin ato , parallelism , im ita tio n , and contrary motion. The

a r t ic le proceeded in analyzing Rorem's use of v e rtic a l harmonic

s tru ctu res, including chords based on superimposed th ird s , chords

arranged in fourths, polyharmony, the trito n e , and harmonic uses which

emphasize tonal contradictions. A short section d e a lt with the

s tru ctu ral elements of the songs, and a strong emphasis was placed on

the importance o f the te x t and the ro le it assumed with regard to

20 M ille r , "The Songs o f Ned Rorem," p. 25.

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formal structure and variety 1n s ty le . Written 1n May o f 1968, the


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a r tic le was published before A rie l was composed.

In An Introduction to the A rt Song by Barbara M eister, a b rie f

paragraph was w ritte n about the cycle A r ie l. Meister examined, 1n a

general manner, some o f the compositional elements found 1n the work.

The analysis was w ritten 1n an attempt to demonstrate Rorem's "taste


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fo r the macabre".

As a re s u lt o f the lit e r a r y output o f Rorem, much has been

published about his musical philosophy as well as his personal l i f e .

The published books include The Paris Diarv o f Ned Rorem (1966), The

New York Diary (1967), Music from Inside Out (1967), Music and People

(1968), C r itic a l A ffa irs (1970), Pure Contraption: A Composer's Essavs

(1974). The Final Diary (1974) contains a short journal entry 1n

which A riel was mentioned.

Having composed my settings from A riel I no


longer need Sylvia Plath. People bring me essays
about, o r newly recovered verses by, Plath; I am no
longer in tere s ted . Not th a t having once live d
"within" her I now find her less good; i t ' s simply
that the urge is exhausted . . . 23

An extensive search fo r related doctoral studies completed to

date revealed approximately fifte e n dissertations on Rorem. Three of

the documents re la ted s p e c ific a lly to his songs.

21 Middaugh, "The Songs o f Ned Rorem,", p. 39.


22 Barbara Meister, An Introduction to the A rt Sona (New
York: Taplinger Publishing Company, 1980), pp. 192-93.
23 Ned Rorem, The Final D iarv. 1961-1972 (New York: Holt,
Rinehart, and Winston, 1974), pp. 382-83.

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The most recent dissertation was w ritten by Mary Lois Sumners

e n title d The Songs of Ned Rorem on Religious Texts and Themes (1982).

The paper provided an 1n-depth analysis of Rorem's songs on religious

texts and themes. Conclusions were drawn about s ty le characteristics,

e ffects of Rorem's a th e is tic beliefs on his sacred music, and

performance preparation. Although Plath refers to the presence o f God

in the A rie l poems, the poems cannot be Included 1n the category o f


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religious te x ts .

Marvin Robert Bloomqulst wrote a dissertation e n title d Sonas o f

Ned Rorem: Aspects o f the Musical Settings o f Sonas 1n English fo r

Solo Voice and Plano (1970). The paper analyzed Rorem's published

songs fo r solo voice and piano. An attempt was made to determine his

basic s t y lis t ic t r a it s . Bloomqulst Included a d e ta ile d study of vocal

melody, poetry, and accompaniment. Because of the date of the

d is s e rta tio n , A riel was not mentioned as it had not yet been

composed.25

The dissertation, Ned Rorem As A Twentieth Century Song

Composer, by William S ills Wright North, (1965), was a comparison o f

th irty -tw o o f the songs o f Ned Rorem with selected songs of twelve

acknowledged leaders in the f ie ld o f contemporary song. The paper was

w ritten from the point o f view o f the a rtis t-s in g e r rath er than that

23 Mary Lois Summers, "The Songs o f Ned Rorem on Religions


Texts and Themes" (D.M.A. dissertation, Southwestern Baptist
Theological Seminary, 1982).
25 Marvin Robert Bloomquist, "Songs o f Ned Rorem: Aspects o f
the Musical Settings of Songs in English fo r Solo Voice and Piano"
(D.M.A. d iss e rtatio n , U niversity o f Missouri, 1970).

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of the th e o re tic ia n . Emphasis was placed upon relationships between

poetry and music. Although w ritten before A rie l was published, the

paper offered in sig h t to performance practices o f Ned Rorem's music.

V ir tu a lly hundreds of dissertations of this nature have been

w ritten about other composer's works. Four were chosen as guidelines

fo r procedure and content.

The Relationship Between Poetry and Music in the O riginal

Solo-Vocal Works of Beniamin B ritten Through 1965 by Robert Gene

Brewster (1967) explored two facets o f B ritte n 's compositions. F ir s t ,

the poetry and it s re la tio n to music; and second, the purely musical

aspects. The follow ing d etails were addressed: overall form, melodic

organization, rhythmic aspects, harmonic p ractices, and accompaniment

in relationship to the vocal lin e .27

Analyses and Interpretations o f Selected Sonas of David Diamond

by Raymond Friday (1984), though s im ila r to the work of Brewster,

placed more emphasis on the relationsh ip of text to music. It

examined the follow ing categories: e x p lo ita tio n of word sound fo r

26 W illiam S ills Wright North, "Ned Rorem As A Twentieth


Century Song Composer" (D.M.A. d is s e rta tio n , University of I l l i n o i s ,
1965).
27 Robert Gene Brewster, "The Relationship Between Poetry and
Music in the O riginal Solo Vocal Works o f Benjamin B ritten Through
1965" (Ph.D. d is s e rta tio n , Washington U n iv e rs ity , 1967).

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mood and textu re, word evocation o f chord or key change, relationsh ip

o f word rhythms to musical rhythms, changes o f in te n s ity , and location


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o f climaxes.

The following two dissertations were w ritte n as manuals to be

used by singers, teachers, and coaches fo r guidance in the preparation

and performance of specific words.

A Performer's Commentary on To Be Sung Upon the Water bv

Dominick Arqento w ritten by T ru c illa Marie Sabatino (1980) stated it s

th re e -fo ld purpose: 1) to examine each song fo r structural cues;

2) to study how closely the music and poetry are intertwined in the

cycle; and 3) to demonstrate the logical construction of the cycle in


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order to expedite the learning and teaching process.

A Performer's Manual To The Solo Vocal Works of Frank Martin

(1890-1974) by Craig Norris Hodges (1983) examined the eight published

solo vocal works by Frank M artin. The chapters each contained a

contextual setting of the work, a textual analysis including

tran s la tio n s and tran scrip tio n into In ternatio nal Phonetics
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Association symbols, and a musical analysis.

ZERaym ond Friday, "Analyses and In terp retatio n s of Selected


Songs o f David Diamond" (Ph.D. dissertation, New York U niversity,
1984).
29 T ru c illa Marie Sabatino, "A Performer's Commentary on 'To
Be Sung Upon the Water' by Dominick Argento" (D.M.A. d iss e rtatio n ,
Ohio State University, 1980).
30 Craig Norris Hodges, "A Performer's Manual To The Solo
Vocal Works o f Frank Martin" (D.M.A. d is s e rta tio n , Southern Baptist
Theological Seminary, 1983).

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The four dissertations provided two main insights: 1) the

importance o f the examination o f thete x t to the music; and 2) the

appropriate level o f musical analysis fo r a paper w ritten from a

performers perspective.

Innumerable books and a rtic le s have been w ritten on Sylvia

P lath. Unfortunately, many o f these resources were the re s u lt o f

in te re s t in her suicide. The lite ra tu re is divided into three

sections: 1) orig inal or primary sources; 2) biographies; and

3) c r it ic a l reviews o f P lath 's work.

Primary sources other than her actual published works are The

Journals o f Svlvia P la th . edited by her husband Ted Hughes and Francis

McCullough, and Letters Home, a collection o f correspondence between

the years 1950-1963, edited by Plath's mother, A u relia Plath-Schober.

These books o ffe r in sig h t in to the personality o f Plath, but they

illu m in a te only a short period o f her l i f e , and they were edited


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versions.

Two biographies which are considered by many to be highly

questionable with regard to th e ir academic c ritic is m are Edward

Butscher's Svlvia Plath. Method and Madness, and Svlvia Plath. The

Woman and the Work. Some analysis of the poetry was offered, but the

Ted Hughes and Francis McCullough, ed s., The Journals o f


Svlvia Plath (New York: Dial Press, 1982); A u relia Schober-Plath,
e d ., Letters Home. Correspondence 1950-1963 (London: Faber & Faber
L td ., Paperbacks, 1978).

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m ajo rity of the lit e r a t u r e contained only information on P lath's

childhood and college days, and recollections o f her school teachers


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and boy friends.

The book, A Closer Look at A r ie l. A Memory of Svlvia Plath by

Nancy Hunter S teiner, is a recollection o f the author's memories and

impressions of P lath. Steiner was P lath's roommate a t Smith College,

and presented us with a catalogue of events, p a rtic u la rly the crucial


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period a fte r the poet's f i r s t suicide attempt.

In the area o f c r it ic a l reviews o f P la th 's work, three books are

to be mentioned. The A rt of Svlvia P lath . A Symposium, edited by

Charles Newman, is a c o lle ctio n of a rtic le s by various authors which

are divided in to fiv e parts: 1) a r tic le s about Sylvia Plath;

2) analysis of S y lvia P lath's work through imagery and meter;

3) biographical re fle c tio n s with regard to specific poems; 4) short

reviews o f various persuasions; and 5) essays which deal with single

works not s p e c ific a lly discussed in preceding contributions. Also

included is an appendix o f some unpublished, uncollected poems and

prose, pen drawings by P la th , and an extensive bibliography.34

32EdwardButscher, Svlvia Plath. Method and Madness (New


York, Seabury Press, 1976); EdwardButscher, e d ., Svlvia P lath. The
Woman and the Work (New York: Mead & Company, 1977).
33 Nancy Hunter Steiner, A Closer Look a t A rie l: A Memory of
S v lvia Plath (New York: Harper's Magazine Press, 1973).
3^ Charles Newman, ed., The A rt o f Svlvia Plath. A Symposium
(Bloomington: Indiana U niversity Press, 1970).

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A continuation of Newman's book is Svlvia P la th . New Views on

the Poetry edited by Gary Lane. This collection o f current a rtic le s

is divided into three parts; 1) Achievement and value; 2) Process and


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in flu en ce; and 3) Personal and public contexts.

A rie l Ascending, edited by Paul Alexander, is one of the most

recent collections o f w ritings about Plath. Published in 1985, this

anthology re fle c ts a sampling of current c r it ic a l thinking about the

author, S ylvia Plath. The e d ito r's intent was to provide essays which

would not sensationalize her l i f e and death, but would only examine
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the c r a f t o f her poetry and prose.

Because of the unusual circumstances surrounding the publication

o f her work a fte r her suicide, many readers and c r it ic s have studied

P la th 's work with the hope o f explaining more completely the facts and

d e ta ils o f her personal life , and o f unearthing in her writing some

motives fo r the way she chose to end i t . Consequently, this has led

to an outpouring o f commentary on Plath's work with regard to specific

themes. David Holbrook's Svlvia Plath Poetry and Existence attempts

to use in terp retatio n s from psychoanalysis and kindred disciplines to

improve the understanding o f the poetry of P la th . Holbrook isolates

her poetry from biographical and sociological contexts, and views i t

35 Gary Lane, e d ., Svlvia Plath. New Views on the Poetry


(B altim ore, London: Johns Hopkins University Press, 1979).
36 Paul Alexander, e d ., A riel Ascending (New York: Harper &
Row, 1985).

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as a c o lle c tio n of mad confessions. The investigation of her

psychological state leads him to diagnose that the author was

schizophrenic, and suffered a c h a ra c te ris tic sense of e x is ten tia l


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in security.

Svlvia P la th . by Susan Bassnett, is a resu lt o f the alleged

neglect of the study of women's w ritings by a "male c r itic a l


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establishment". The book, w ritte n by a female, is designed to

o ffe r a fem inist review o f a female poet's work. The book is

concerned with such subjects as P la th 's poetry, God, nature, fam ily,

love, and the struggle to survive.

Two studies contemplate the poetry fo r Plath fo r it s own sake,

and follow s im ila r concepts of a mythic structure behind the fin a l

poems. Judith K ro ll's Chapters in a Mythology. The Poetry o f Svlvia

Plath deals b a s ic a lly with the A rie l collection. The book is a

systematic in terp re ta tio n of every c o lo r, object, and fig u re . Kroll

distinguishes three sets of p o la ritie s behind P lath 's mythology:

1) the male as god and d e v il; 2) the fa ls e s e lf and the true s e lf; and

3) the death in l i f e and l i f e in death.

3 7 Da v i dHol br ook , Svlvia P lath. Poetry and Existence


(London: Athlone Press, 1976).
38 Susan Bassnett, Svlvia Plath (Houndmills, Basingstoke,
Hampshire and London: MacMillan Education LTD, 1987).
39 Judith K ro ll, Chapters in a Mythology. The Poetry of
Svlvia Plath (New York: Harper & Row, 1978).

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S vlvia Plath. The Poetry o f I n it ia t io n , by Jon Rosenblatt

perceives the d is tin c t elements in Plath's work to be b irth and death,

creation and destruction, and death and r e b irth . In the analysis of

some o f Plath's poetry, Rosenblatt studies two aspects of her work

which are powerfulimages and rhythms, and r itu a l or q u a s i-ritu a l

p a tte rn s .4®

The review o f lite r a tu r e on Plath would not be complete without

mention o f the hundreds o f a rtic le s found in the Contemporary L ite ra ry

C ritic is m volumes. The wide variety of c ritic is m covers a ll aspects

o f P la th 's writings and l i f e . Many of the a rtic le s are included in

the books previously discussed.41

^ J o n Rosenblatt, Svlvia Plath. The Poetry o f In it ia t io n


(Chapel H i l l : University o f North Carolina Press, 1979).
41 Carolyn R ile y , e d ., Contemporary L ite ra ry C ritic is m . 43
vols. (D e tro it: Gale Research Company, 1985).

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CHAPTER I I I

PROCEDURE

The procedure for the study of each o f the fiv e individual songs

in A rie l was divided into three steps: 1) musical analysis; 2) poetic

in te rp re ta tio n ; and 3) compositional in te rp re ta tio n .

Musical Analysis

In the musical analysis, attention was given to the s a lie n t

compositional features o f each song, those musical elements which,

made apparent to the reader, contribute to a more knowledgeable

performance o f the song. The musical relationsh ip o f the individual

songs to the en tire A riel cycle was examined.

Poetic In terp retatio n

The poem in its o rig in a l form was presented and analyzed to

determine what the w rite r was attempting to express, and what, i f any,

were the poetical devices used. The poetical relationship of the

in divid ual poems to the e n tire A rie l song cycle was examined.

Compositional In terp re ta tio n

The relationship of te x t to music with regard to word

expression, poetic atmosphere, and poetic meaning, were considered to

f a c i l i t a t e the preparation o f, and to help strengthen the presentation

o f each song.

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Organization

The body of the study was divided into three chapters:

1) Musical Analysis; 2) Poetic In terp retatio n ; and 3) Compositional

In te rp re ta tio n . Each song o f the cycle A riel was discussed in its

respective order as created by the composer.The fin a l chapter

contains a summary of the research. Appendix A consists o f copies of

personal correspondence with both Ned Rorem, the composer, and with

P h yllis C u rtin , the soprano who premiered the work, and to whom the

work is dedicated. Appendix B is a copy of the ta ro t card The Hanged

Man.

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MUSICAL ANALYSIS

In the musical analysis o f Rorem's A r ie l. horizontal material or

melodic motives were examined f i r s t . The motives were extracted and

surveyed in order to determine th e ir compositional significance.

While closely reviewing the m a terial, the various elements o f pitch,

rhythm, tes situ ra, range, and contrapuntal im ita tio n were considered.

Secondly, the work was examined v e rtic a lly . Tonal centers were

determined by analyzing ‘ harmonic structures, pedal points, and

cadences. The v e rtic a l analysis concluded th a t melodic motives

preceded harmony. The analysis was completed by examining formal

aspects. Form was ascertained through observations o f the melodic

motives, the harmonic im plications, and the poetic te x t.

The A riel cycle consists o f fiv e songs fo r soprano, c la rin e t,

and piano. Through correspondence with P hyllis C u rtin , questions

concerning the instrumentation o f the cycle were answered.

Some months p rio r to a performance a t the Library o f


Congress, in planning a program with David Glaser,
c la rin e te s t, I re a lize d that there was little
repertory fo r piano, c la r in e t, and voice which I had
not often performed. I called Mr. Rorem, an old frien d

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and asked him i f he might have a work fo r th a t


combination lying about in his f i l e s . He said he did
not, but th a t he would w rite a piece for me as a
g ift.4 2

Rorem, when asked why he chose Sylvia Plath's poetry, and why

s p e c ific a lly these fiv e poems, re p lie d , "Plath's verses, which had

ju s t been published at the time, 1970, seemed apt fo r C u rtin 's sound

and s ty le , and fo r my view o f the w orld."43

The fiv e songs of the cycle contain key motives or phrases.

Within the individual songs, the motivesare recycled providing a

sense o f cohesion and formal c o n tin u ity . The motives are varied in

fiv e basic ways: 1) the pitch order is changed; 2) the rhythmic

pattern is changed; 3) the motive is augmented, diminished or

fragmented; 4) the motive is transposed; and 5) the motive is

m e trica lly displaced.

The cycle, while dissonant and no ntrad ition al, consists of

numerous tonal im plications. The tonal centers are vague and quickly

s h iftin g , yet specific key areas reappear.

The formal patterns o f the songs r e fle c t the te x t. There is no

evidence o f c la s s ic a lly defined sections. The duration o f a song is

determined by the length o f the poem. Lines and words are repeated

musically only when they are also repeated p o etica lly .

The most s ig n ific a n t motive o f the f i r s t song "Words" is the

d is tin c t opening c la rin e t lin e . This motive or phrase serves as a

42 P h y llis Curtin, personal le t t e r , August 31, 1987.


43 Ned Rorem, personal le t t e r , August 31, 1987.

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Example 1. "Words" Meas. 1-2

fade /T n

ffi

A x -e s

[very long pau

<T>

basic compositional element to the entire song. Harmonically it

contains a major seventh and a minor th ird . These intervals are

evident in many of the piano chords, as well as in the vocal and

c la rin e t lin e s . The f i r s t vocal statement is a varied fragment of the

c la rin e t motive. M elodically and rhythmically the motive is

inverted. In measure four the e n tire c la rin e t motive is imitated by

the voice. The clarinet repeats the opening motive in an embellished

Example 2. "Words" Meas. 2-4 ^

A f - te r whose stroke the wood rings,

[very long pat se|


iff*
/7\

, . 1
4 4 Ned Rorem, "Words," in A rie l. Five Poems o f Svlvia Plath
(New York: Boosey & Hawkes, 1974), p .4.
45 Ib id .

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version in measures 7 -8 .This example demonstrates the G major emphasis

Example 3. "Words” Meas. 7-8 46

o- chocs! E- chocs

found w ithin the song. The c la rin e t's descending lin e consists of

in te r v a llic leaps which emphasize an arpeggiated G major chord. G

major chords are also outlined in both the vocal and piano parts.

Dissonance surrounds these tr ia d ic structures.

The pitches of the opening motive, D, E*7 and B are found

extensively throughout the piece in every instrument. Every new

melodic entry begins on one of these three pitches with the exception

of measures 30-33. This section demonstrates im ita tiv e counterpoint

of the i n i t i a l vocal phase.

4 6 fbi dT

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Example 4. "Words" Meas. 30-34 47

rid-' er-less, ihie in-de - f a t - i-g»-blehoof-taps.


¥ Mrtt rfrv a m l

■ | T = -------------------- Bjfg t -—

r 1 It tfcjfT
U ■- - L . -1Ldt -----------------------------------------------
W'- ----------------- 'L i t 1 ^1

The three pitches are occasionally used as pedal tones,

(measures 9-11, measures 20-21). When the pitches are employed w ithin

a chord, they are usually placed a t the top or the bottom which allow

them to be e a s ily heard. In measure 1, D Is the lowest note o f the

second piano chord and Eb Is near the highest (example 1 ). The l e f t

hand piano chord in measure 5 consists o f the two outer notes o f E*?

and 0.

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Example 5. "Words" Meas. 5-6

A nd the

I b i d . , pp. 6-7
48 I b i d . , p. 4.

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3 b 5
The range of the vocal lin e is B to Av however, the
I? 4 5
tessitura is EK to F . The vocal lin e throughout the piece

consists o f in tervals of major sevenths and minor thirds which are

consistently repeated. Measures 14-16 demonstrate the in terval lie

usage.

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Example 6. "Words" Meas. 14-16

14 15 16

like the W a-ter striv - ing To r c - e s - tab-lish its m ir-ro r O

» -— ■
-p f-* i
- r -— ■■■; r - - ■ ■ t -------- M -
m mr
The overall key center of the song appears to be G, although not

c learly major or minor. The opening chords of the fir s t measure


5 6
provide a strong G orientation with B and D in the c la rin e t and
4 4
G D and F# in the piano. A coustically, the root o f the second

piano chord based on the lowest most stable interval is G.

4 9 I bi d. , p. 5.

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Example 7. "Words" Meas. 1 50

In measure 10 the word "horses" outlines an A^Mm7 arpeggio.

This chord is surrounded by two pedal tones. in the c la rin e t and D

in the piano. The section is consequently a harmonically varied

re ite ra tio n of the opening motive.

5U ib id ., p. 4.

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Example 8 . "Words" Meas. 9-11 51

7 * 1 ' ~ '■ ' '.»■ ~ - = t | <■■■

0 (T from th e c e n - tr e like h o r - s e j.

An additional reference to the D, Eb motive is seen in measures

7-8 (example 3 ). The rig h t hand of the piano im plies a G to n a lity as

do the vocal and c la rin e t lin e s . The le f t hand o f the piano is

s im ila r in construction to the rig h t hand; however, i t is transposed

and implies an P? tonal center. The relatio n sh ip o f P? to G is a

transposed version o f the D to opening motive.

^ Ib id ., p. 5.

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The repeated use of the trito n e A E^ , (measures 3-5 voice,

measure 7-piano rig h t hand, measures 9-10 voice, measure 2 4 -c la rin e t),

is instrumental in determining a G tonal center. The significance of

the trito n e lie s in its resolution found in measure 24.

Example 9. "Words" Meas. 24 52

The trito n e resolves to a perfect fourth or an inverted perfect

fifth . The sustained tone of D implies the dominant G. A G to n a lity

c le a rly appears in measure 27. The resolution to the tonic s ig n ifie s

the conclusion o f the A section o f the song.

The B section is based on a pentatonic scale embodied within the

vocal lin e . C#, D#, F#, G#, A#.

52 I b i d . , p. 6.

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Example 10. "Words" Meas. 27-29 53

•optn~)

Yean la-ter I En-coun-ter them on th e _

Within the f i r s t measure a B tonal center is implied and then quickly

s h ifts to a continuous chromatic motion. Harmonic s h iftin g provides

movement fo r what would otherwise be a s ta tic B major presence. ‘

The f i r s t vocal lin e o f the codetta (measures 36-37) u tiliz e s

motivic m aterial from both the A and B sections. M elodically i t is

comparable to the c la rin e t lin e of measure 25 and rhythm ically

comparable to the vocal lin e o f measures 31-32.

b3 ibidT

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Example 11. "Words" Meas. 36-37 54 Example 12. "Words" Meas. 25 55

25/T

W hile From th e b o t- to m o f th e p o o l.

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Example 13. "Words" Meas. 31-32

rid* er-le ss. te in - d e - f a t - i-g a -b !e h o o f-u p s.

The song's conclusion Is to n a lly ambiguous. A simultaneous

presence o f tonic and dominant chords is evident. The la s t three

measures the piano and c la rin e t lin es suggest both the dominant o f G

major, (DMm7, D F# A C ), and the dominant of G minor, <Dmm7, D F A C).

The F natural in the voice and the Bb of the piano's l e f t hand in the

la s t measure indicates a tonic G minor chord (G Bb D F) as well as a

dominant o f G minor (D F^ A C ).

~o¥ Ib id ., p. 7.
55 Ib id ., p. 6.
56 Ib id ., p. 7.

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Example 14. "Words" Meas. 39-42 57

ilow cr

VP PPP
PP

1" : P ff
p- =— pp
frp- ft
=t • * hjT.
r

The musical form of "Words" is AA'B Codetta. The sections are

as follows: A - measures 1-11, A' - measures 12-27, B » measures

28-34, and Codetta - measures 35-42. The A' section u tiliz e s the same

motivic and harmonic material as the A section; however, the motivic

material is varied rhythmically and in pitch order. The extensive

c la rin e t solo in measures 21-26 helps to divide the A' and B sections.

The division between the A* and B sections is fu rth e r supported

harmonically as discussed e a r lie r (example 10). The codetta beginning

at measure 35 harmonically returns to a G to n a lity . The opening

c la rin e t motive reappears in the vocal line of measure 38.

u/ Ib id .

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Example 15. "Words" Meas. 38-39 58

i l : i

0 -----------1 ^ . ,
Q lf p J *
fu e d stars G ov- ern~— _ a life--------------

l> "I
| ----------- -- --------------- ------- ------ ^
P -
P

L = u J
iS L

Two important horizontal elements are evident in "Poppies in

July". The fir s t is a motive consisting of a major second which

functions as a lower a u xiliary tone.

Example 16. "Poppies in July" Meas. 1-3 59

C larinet

Voice

L it-tie pop-piej. Lit • tie hell flam es. Do you do You

Piano

The lower a u x ilia ry tone is apparent a t the end of nearly every vocal

lin e . This motive is repeated in an augmented version in the piano's

bass lin e in measures 12-14.

to Ib id .
59 Rorem, "Poppies in July," in A r ie l. p. 8.

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Example 17. "Poppies in J u ly " Meas. 12-14 60

12

A mouthjua bloodied. Lit-tieblood -y skirts! There

1 — mp

The second notable horizontal element is the employment o f three

motives: 1. G E A D C, 2. F Eb B, 3. D C Bb G. These motives or

pitch series are found in the piano and c la rin e t lines. Their f i r s t

appearance is in measures 4-5.

bU I b i d . , p. 9

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Example 18. "Popples 1n Ju ly" Meas. 4-5 61

Dick - er. I ca n -n o i to u ch you. I p u t my hands * -i

The pitch series emerge in d iffe re n t registers and in d iffe re n t

instrumental lines throughout the song. The order o f the pitches is

generally unbroken; however, the motives are frequently augmented and

diminished rhythmically, and are occasionally fragmented.

Example 19. "Poppies in July" Meas. 7-10 62

N oth - ing bum s. And it ex-hausts me to watch you Flick-er-ing like th a t. wrink- ly and clear red ,

(series 1. - rhythmically augmented)


(series 3. - fragmented and rhythmically augmented)

o'Ibid., p. 8.
62 ib id .

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Example 20. "Poppies in July" Meas. 25-26 63

(series 1. - rhythmically diminished)

The application of the motives within the accompanying lines

cultivates im itative counterpoint.

The range of the vocal lin e is F4- D^5 . The small range

lim its the interval lie movement within the lin e . The majority of the

lin e is repeated C3 .The vocal line c le a rly demonstrates the C

to n a lity through continual use of the perfect f i f t h C - G.

Example 21. "Poppies in July" Meas. 4-7 64

I put my hands a-m o n g _ the flames.

Ib id ., p. 10.
64 Ib id ., p. 8.

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The overall key center o f the song appears to be C but not

c le a rly a major or minor to n a lity . A pedal tone of G is evident in

measures 10-14. The prolongation of the dominant of the tonic

to n a lity confirms the key center of C. In measure 17 the to n a lity

changes to D major. The tonal change is apparent through two

methods. Harmonic analysis o f the f ir s t chord o f the measure and

observance of the sustained D pedal tone in the clarin et line

throughout the following three measures.

Example 22. "Poppies in July" Meas. 17-19 65

yo u r n au -seo u s c a p - sulcs?------ I could

l loco

The harmonic "brightening" of this section strengthens the

assertion of the Bsection beginning at this point. At the codetta

the vocallin e repeats a G which serves as an extended dominant

to n a lity o f the returning C tonal center. In measure 17 a G M7 chord

appears in the piano lin e . This dominant chord is resolved to the

tonic in the vocal lin e in measure 28. The song ends with the
5
re p e titio n of a C pitch.

55 ib id ., p. 9.

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The formal structure o f "Poppies in July" is A B Codetta: A=

measures 1-16, B = measures 17-23, Codetta = measures 24-30. The song

is seamless with no instrumental cadential gestures. However, as

previously mentioned, formal structures are apparent through analysis

o f key tonal centers.

The opening clarin et lin e of "The Hanging Man" reveals a

s ig n ific a n t motivic element. The interval of the trito n e F-B. The

in terval is accentuated through in terv a l lie leaps w ithin the line.

The use o f a trito n e in the f i r s t three measures foreshadows the

reappearance of the interval throughout the song.

Example 24. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 1-3 67


F tM (J)tiM )

Solo

Piano

po Ib id ., p. 10.
67 Rorem, "The Hanging Man," in A r ie l. p. 11.

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A second motlvlc element is the melodic phrase th a t fir s t
*
appears in the c la rin e t lin e of measure 4.

Example 25. "The Hanging Han" Meas. 4 68

*8 ibidT

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This phrase reappears within the same instrumental lin e in measure 23,

denoting the A' section, and measure 30, indicating the Coda.

Example 26. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 22-24, 30-33 69

Ib id ., pp. 13-14.

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The vocal lin e 1n measures 8-13 and measures 25-29 1s derived

m elodlcally and rhythmically from th is same motlvlc phrase.

Example 27. "The Hanging Han" Meas. 8-13, 25-27 70

By theroctjcfm yhiir lomegod got hold— of me.

tff
Se

siz-zled ui his blue volts like a des-ert pro

Mite

A
* «p ssssssss3 «»

25-1

i t ■J ° l - T l i e ' l l ‘g f c i
A vul-tur-ouj bore • daRipmedme in this tree._ If he were I, he would

w I b i d . , pp. 12-14

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A s lig h t variation of the c la rin e t's motive reappears in a

transposition o f a minor th ird (measure 14). The change o f to n ality

marks the beginning o f the B section.

Example 28. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 14 71

The vocal lin e in measures 17-21 follows in the same manner as a

varied transposition of this phrase.

Example 29. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 17-21 72

The nights snapped out A world o f b ald white— days in a shade-less sock-

Ib id . , p. 12.
72 I b i d . , p. 13.

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At this po int, the sforzando chord of measure 19 represents the

middle o f the song, as well as the middle o f the entire cycle.

Measures 20-21 are an exact retrograde of measures 17-18 (example 29).

The vocal range of "The Hanging Man" is C4 - B^5. The wide

range is re fle c tiv e o f the large interval li e leaps found within the

angular vocal lin e .

Harmonically, the chord in the piano lin e o f measure 4 functions

as a characteristic chord that is used throughout the entire song

(example 25). A ll single piano chords and tremelos are derived from

this characteristic chord. The chord is occasionally transposed

(measure 14) and/or voiced in a d iffe re n t manner (measure 11, measure

17). Through the use of dissonance the chords are harmonically

designed to destroy any sense of acoustic roots. Tonal key centers of

sections are never e x p lic itly confirmed. Consequently, the to n a lity

of the song is vague. The interval of a tr ito n e , which was previously

mentioned, is one of the few recurring harmonic elements of the entire

song. The characteristic chord as i t normally appears emphasized the

trito n e A - E^.

Example 30. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 26 73


26________________

J_______ m pc

_ in tills tree If

t* Ib id ., p. 14.

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In the c la rin e t lin e , many A - tritones are apparent.

Example 31. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 4-7 74

The use of the F - B trito n e reappears in the fin a l c la rin e t statement

(measures 34-38).

Example 32. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 34-38 75

/4 Ib id ., p. 11.
75 ib id ., p. 14.

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The la s t t r i tone D - outlined in the fin a l three measures leaves

the song to n a lly unresolved. However, the A appears to establish a

relationship with the following song which begins on an A in a G minor

to n a lity .

Formally, the A A' B Coda sections can only be affirmed in two

ways. F ir s t, by transpositions o f a th ird , and secondly, by the use

of long instrumental passages which in it ia t e the beginning of

sections. The divisions of sections are A = measures 1-13, B =

measures 14-22, A' = measures 23-39, and Coda = measures 30-38.

The fourth song of the cycle, "Poppies in October" is sim ilar to

the previously analyzed "Poppies in July". The most obvious

connection, with the exception o f t it le s , is the use of the lower

a u x ilia ry tone at the end of the musical phrase. This motive

consisting o f a major second is found throughout the song in a ll three

of the instrumental lines.

Example 33. "Poppies in October" Meas. 10-13 76

mp

whose red heart blooms through her coat so as - tound- mg - ly.

7b Rorem, "Poppies in October," in A r ie l. p. 15.

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The f i r s t vocal line is an example o f the long scalar recurrent

phrases which are apparent throughout the piece. The recurrent

phrases or fragments of the phrase usually appear as a v a ria tio n of

the o rig in a l phrase. The varied elements are pitch order, rhythmic

structure, range, and instrumentation. When restated, the recurrent

phrases are consistently applied in a contrapuntal im ita tiv e manner.

Example 34. "Poppies in October" Meas. 1-10 ^


.1 R e m a in e d , but d o n 't drag ( J . 36)
C la rin et
gn sounding)

V oice

E - vcn the sun - clouds this m om - ing can • n o t-

Piano

m an • ag e such skins. N or the worn - an in th e am - bu-lance

w hose red heart

H Ib id .

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The vocal range of the song is D4 to A5 , however, the


4 5
te s s itu ra is F - D . The extended vocal lines move in stepwise

motion and, as previously mentioned, are usually answered or preceded

by another instrument.

The employment of ostinatos is apparent in the l e f t hand o f the

piano lin e . The ostinatos imply to n a lity but are quickly s h iftin g .

The ostinato phrases are m etrically displaced. This technique aids in

the seamless design of the song by varying the strong and weak beats.

Example 35. "Poppies in October" Meas. 19-20 78

and

Harmonically, the song is f il le d with tonal im plications that

are also consistently s h iftin g . The opening of the piece begins in G

minor. The G^ reference found in the vocal and piano lines serve as

leading tone reinforcement o f the G minor key center (example 34).

78 Ib id ., p. 16.

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In measure 6 , a reference to an E to n a lity 1s Indicated (example

3 4 ). The reference 1s a tonal anticipation o f the major key center

which becomes apparent 1n measure 16, denoting the beginning o f the B

section. The f i r s t three measures o f the B section strengthen the B*7

major to n a lity through the use o f a dominant F pedal in the l e f t hand

piano lin e .

Example 36. "Popples 1n October" Meas. 16-18 79

~46 JJ 48^ . _

gift, a love gill Ut-tef - ly un-asked for By a

jfc fc p
%

F f
Within th is section many key areas are im plied. Measure 21 - E#

minor, measure 22 - Gif minor, measure 25 - D major. Two o f these

tonal im plications E# (F) and D are reinforcements of the i n i t i a l l y

established B^ major to n a lity . The reinforcement 1s obvious when the

key centers are arpeggiated; B^ D F.

At measure 27 a F# harmonic emphasis a n tic ip a te s the return o f G

minor.

™ Ib id .

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However, at measure 31 the anticipated return is delayed by the

appearance o f Bb major.

Example 37. "Poppies in October" Meas. 27-32 80

h ill. u it - d e r bow T^ e n .

mp

p ertsc. molto

G minor reappears in measure 39 preceded and followed by tonal

references to Gb and E*7.

80 I b id . , p. 17.

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Example 38. "Popples In October" Meas. 35-42 81

I that these late mouths should cry_

^ al 1 J

for - est frost,

of com - flowers.

ai Ib id ., p. 17-18.

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The la s t harmony o f the song is a B^ major chord. This cadence

can be interpreted in two ways. F irs t, as a plagal cadence (IV - I)

in Bb major or secondly, as an unresolved cadence on the dominant (V) .

of Eb.

Example 39. "Poppies in October" Meas. 48-49

The ambiguous ending o f the song is perhaps best understood in

re la tio n s h ip to the follow ing piece "Lady Lazarus". The D in the

fin a l c la r in e t line a n ticip ates the opening vocal pitch of "Lady

Lazarus" while the Bp major chord resolves to the tonic o f Eb in the

f i r s t measure o f "Lady Lazarus".

The formal structure o f "Poppies in July" is A B A '. A »

measures 1-15, B ■ measures 16-30, A1 » measures 31-49. This form was

derived from the previously mentioned harmonic analysis.

w I b id . , p. 18.

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The fin a l song, "Lady Lazarus", consists of recurrent phrases

which have been analyzed as a series o f episodes. The fiv e episodes

within the song are frequently varied by fragmentation, pitch order,

rhythmic structure, transposition, and instrumentation. The sequences

of these episodes are likewise varied throughout the song.

The fir s t episode is the opening statement introduced in

measures 1-3.
*

Example 40. "Lady-Lazarus" Meas. 1-3 83

J mjk J>.J)
,1 Fast and frantic, but mechanical.
C larinet
(as sounding)

fs e m p n

Voice
w »
I have done it a - g a in . One year in cv-cry ten I man-agc it* A sort o f

Piano

bn

walk - - ingmir- a-cle.

Rorem, "Lady Lazarus," in A r ie l. p. 19.

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The vocal lin e consists o f small interval li e steps with the range

extending from B^3 to Db 5 . The c larin et lin e is interspersed with

the vocal lin e in a motivic fragment that consists o f two consecutive

h a lf steps. The piano lin e establishes a pedal point of . The

episode reappears numerous times within the song. As previously

mentioned, the reappearances are often varied. Measures 4-5

demonstrate a varied version.

Example 41. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 4-6

My right foot

a4 Ib id .

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The pitch order of the motive as well as its rhythmic structure have

both been changed. The c la rin e t's motivic fragment has been extended

while the piano's pedal point has been transposed.

The second episode begins in measure 7. This short episode

derives it s interval lie fragments from the c la rin e t line of episode

one. The piano line is an inversion of the motivic fragment and each

instrumental lin e shows a v a riatio n of the rhythmic structure. The

piano's Eb pedal tone remains although i t is veiled within a great

amount o f dissonance.

Example 42. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 7

7 (a) ^
tetteg
jQBQr violent

jg jg r marcatissimo

ab Ib id ., p. 20.

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The third episode appears at measure 11. This episode is

characterized by the use of a wide range in each of the three

instrumental lines. The vocal lin e is doubled by the clarin et and by

the piano. The motive is played in contrary motion between the two

hands o f the piano lin e . Contrary motion is fu rth e r noted between the

vocal and c la rin e t lines and the vocal and piano lin e s .

Example 43. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 11-12 86

i n 1 i ai '
van - - ish in a day.
full act o f teeth? T h e sour— breath W ill.

The fourth episode consists of rapid scalar material in the

piano and clarin et lin es. The beginning and ending notes of the runs

vary with each reappearance of the episode. The p a ra lle l motion of

the runs also varies with each reappearance.

Ib id ., pp. 20-21.

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Example 44. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 13, 23 87

13

The fin a l episode begins a t measure 16. The vocal lin e is

markedly more ly ric a l than in many o f the previous episodes. In

a d d itio n , i t Is doubled harmonically, and w ritte n in p a ra lle l motion

to the rig h t hand o f the piano. This episode contains many o f the

same rhythmic structures as episode three (example 4 3 ).

I b id . , p. 21-22.

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Example 45. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 16-19 ®®

1 am on - ly ihir-ty. And likethe cat lhmnme.timn.la

Measure 39 appears to be new motivic m a te ria l. However, i t is

ac tu a lly derived from episode two. The three note clusters in the

bass lin e o f the piano are the o rig in a l t r ip l e t fig ures o f measure 6

(example 42) but are struck as a chord.

88 ib id .

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Example 46. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 39 89

39

Measure 58 establishes new m aterial which is c o n tin u ally mixed

with combinations and variations of the preceding episodes. The

episodes become increasingly fragmented. Within the fir s t fiv e

measures o f the new material the use o f im ita tiv e counterpoint is

evident.

83 Ib id . , p. 25.

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Example 47. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 58-62 90

*-------------------- ' 1---- 7— ---------


R>r_ the eye - ing of my scais.'lhenLU a charge Foc—lhe hear- ing of my heart

mp

It real - lygoeaAndthae.it actaige,a ver-ylatgc For aw otdor a touch O r a bit of blood

vtp
sccco

yu I b id . , p p . 28-29.

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The song ends with a varied motive from episode three in the

vocal lin e . The phrase spans the range of E^3 to B^5 . The last

two measures o f the piece are s trik in g ly sim ilar to the beginning of

the song. The c la rin e t's motivic fragment appears in the same manner

as i t did in the opening statement. The voice begins the la s t line

with the same intervals as were seen in the f i r s t measure. F in a lly ,

the piano bass line sustains an E^ pedal tone.

Example 48. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 83-85 91

ravage
(A bud gasp)
Freer

with my red hair And 1 eat men like air.____

The e n tire range o f the song is E^3 to C6 . The use o f the

voice expands from repeated tones to large in te rv a llic leaps. The one

consistent use o f to n ality o f key center stems from the E^ pedal tone

o f the piano. E^ to n ality is consistent throughout the e n tire piece

with the exception of measures 47-57 where C to n a lity is implied by

the movement of the descending bass lin e , and also implied

harmonically in measure 57.

yi Ib id ., p. 31.

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Example 49. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 57 92

hairyelled

mir a - del*

"Lady Lazarus" is the longest poem o f the fiv e poems set by

Rorem, consequently the musical setting of this poem is the longest of

the fiv e songs. The piece moves in a continuous manner, with numerous

presentations of the fiv e episodes. I t might possibly be divided into

A A' B C.

The A section, measures 1-23, begins with episode one and

incorporates a ll fiv e of the episodes. The A' section, measures

24-46, begins with an exact re p e titio n of episode one. Throughout the

A1 section a ll fiv e episodes recur. The B section, measures 47-57, is

marked by three main factors: 1) the eventual change o f to n a lity from

to C; 2) the specific I meter marking; and 3) the d is tin c tiv e fiv e

note pattern in the piano's rig h t hand.

M I b i d . , p. 28.

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Example 50. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 47-48 93

(JJ)47

pp "p

The C section, measures 58-85, begins with new melodic material and

the in it ia t io n o f a canon. This section, as was previously discussed

(example 4 7 ), u tiliz e s a ll of the fiv e episodes in various

combinations and fragmentations.

C yclical Relationship
i
A study of the cycle as a whole is appropriate fo r four reasons:

1. T itle d a "song cycle", the group is designed to form a

musical e n tity .

2. The ending to n a lity and/or note o f three songs indicates

the beginning to n a lity of the next piece.

3. The songs are symmetrically arranged suggesting an overall

arch form.

4. The th ird song, "The Hanging Man", c le a rly marks the middle

o f the cycle through the use o f retrograde motion.

^ Ib id ., p. 26.

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"Words", "The Hanging Man", and "Lady Lazarus" share sim ilar

c h a racteristics as do "Poppies in July" and "Poppies in October". The

correlations between "Words", "The Hanging Man", and "Lady Lazarus"

are: 1) a l l three songs incorporate the usage of instrumental

passages th a t serve as sectional breaks; 2) the vocal lines of the

three songs are angular phrases th a t contain wide in terv a l lie leaps

and u t i liz e an extensive range; and 3) each song discourages a strong

sense o f aural to n a lity through considerable use o f dissonance.

The second and fourth songs, "Poppies in July" and "Poppies in

October", are comparable in the following areas: 1) the tempos o f

both songs are slow and d ir e c tly re fle c t the moods o f the te x ts ;

2) the use o f the motivic fragment containing a lower a u x ilia ry tone

is found at the end of the musical phrases of both songs;

3) h o riz o n ta lly , both songs incorporate im ita tiv e counterpoint; and

4) the vocal lines of the songs are scalar and narrow in range.

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CHAPTER V

POETIC INTERPRETATION

S ylvia Plath was born on October 27, 1932, the oldest child of

German and Austrian emigrants. When Sylvia was e ig h t, her fath er,

Otto P la th , died o f complications from a severe d iab etic condition

which had been mistakenly diagnosed as lung cancer. Understandably,

his death had an immeasurable impact on her. Edward Butscher, in his

biography of her, calls the death of her fa th e r the "central


Q4
obsession" of her life and a rt. In the A riel poems, Plath

explores her ambivalent feelings toward her fa th e r in such works as

"Daddy", "Lady Lazarus", and the beekeeping poems.

In September o f 1950 Plath entered Smith College. Her academic

career was f i l l e d with the winning o f poetry prizes and contests, with

scholastic scholarships, and with the steady publication o f poems and

short sto rie s in periodicals lik e Seventeen. The C hristian Science

Monitor and Mademoiselle. In the summer of her ju n io r year a t Smith,

a fte r a d iffic u lt month 1n New York C ity as a guest e d ito r for

Mademoiselle. Plath attempted suicide. A fter swallowing a large

number o f sleeping p ills , she hid in the c e lla r beneath her mother's

home in Winthrop. Her discovery two days la t e r , was followed by

^ Edward Butscher, Svlvia Plath: Method and Madness (New


York: The Seabury Press, 1976), p. 1.

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hospital treatment including electro-convulsive therapy. A fte r fiv e

months in a p riv a te in s titu tio n , she was pronounced f u lly recovered.

In 1955 she graduated from Smith, summa cum laude, and was awarded a

Fulbright scholarship to Cambridge, England. In 1956 she married the

B ritish poet, Ted Hughes.

During the follow ing years, shecontinued to publish her poetry

at a s tead ily increasing ra te . Her f i r s t book, The Colossus, was

published in 1960. By the summer o f 1962, her marriage had begun to

fa il. Ted Hughes had moved to London, and Sylvia had in itia te d

arrangements fo r an agreement of legal separation, to be followed by

divorce. A fte r an a lte rn a te ly depressing and hopeful time in Devon,

Plath moved to London. By this point she had completed t h ir t y poems

which she compiled as her second volume. Her health was poor. She

fought the combined hardships of f lu , high fe v er, and cold, damp

weather. However in her la s t days she wrote more urgently than ever

before; I am "w ritin g lik e mad — have managed a poem a day before
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breakfast. A ll book poems."

On February 11, 1963, Plath was found with her head in the gas

oven of her apartment, and was taken to the University College

Hospital where she was c e rtifie d dead on a r r iv a l. Four days la t e r ,

the coroner's v e rd ic t was returned, 'While suffering from depression

she did k i 11 h e r s e lf .'

The A riel c o lle ctio n was published posthumously in 1965 by Faber

& Faber. The m ajority o f the poems were w ritte n between the end of

™ P la t h - S c h o b e r , Letters Home, p. 466.

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September 1962, and the date of her death, February 11, 1963.

Specific dates o f composition o f most o f the A riel poems were noted

with the help of Ted Hughes' "The Chronological Order of Sylvia

Plath's Poems". According to the chronological dates, the fiv e poems

of A r ie l. set musically by Rorem, were w ritten by Plath in the

following order. Between October and November of 1962, "Lady

Lazarus", "Poppies in October", "The Hanging Man" and "Poppies in

July" were w ritte n . "Words" was w ritten between January 1963 and

February 11, 1963. This order is an exact reversal o f the order in

which Rorem composed the song cycle A r ie l.

In te rp re tiv e ly , these poems have been unalterably fused with the

facts o f P la th 's life . Although there is admittedly an in terestin g

relationship between the subject matter of her la te poetry and the

unique emotional experience o f her fin a l year, in te rp re ta tio n on this

basis alone is re s tric tin g . Susan Bassnett in the book S vlvia Plath

aptly w rites,

A reading of P lath's poems that hunts fo r


prefigurations o f her suicide is an obviously tempting
approach and many c r itic s have chosen to do ju s t
th a t. But i t is nevertheless ju s t one kind o f reading
and i t is restricted reading a t th a t. The poems are
f u ll o f pain, o f references to suffering and death as
release from suffering but to read them as coded
references to her suicide seems unfair. B etter to
read the poems, as Ann Sexton suggests, fo r th e ir own

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sake, fo r what they say to those who read them, rather


than in an attempt to use them in the making of the
te x t o f Sylvia P lath's l i f e . All th at is clear in any
reading is the fluency o f expression and the force of
emotion behind the words on the printed page."9®

The poetry was examined to determine the theme or central idea.

Technical poetic devices such as the use of imagery, metaphor, word

rhythm, word sound, and word rhyme were considered.

WORDS

Axes
A fte r whose stroke the wood rings,
And the echoes!
Echoes tra v e lin g
O ff from the centre lik e horses.

The sap
Wells lik e te a rs , lik e the
Water s triv in g
To re -e s ta b lis h its mirror
Over the rock

That drops and turns,


A white s k u ll,
Eaten by weedy greens.
Years la t e r I
Encounter them on the road -

Words dry and riderless,


The in defatigable hoof-taps.
While
From the bottom of the pool, fixed stars
Govern a l i f e . 97

Bassnett, Svlvia P la th . p. 25.


97 Sylvia Plath, "Words," in A riel (New York: Harper & Row,
1961), p. 85.

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The poem "Words" 1s included 1n the group o f poems w ritten 1n

the la s t week of P la th 'slife . Considered to be one o f her most


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b r illia n t, yet desperate poems, i t was w ritte n on February 1 s t,

ten days before her suicide. "Words" is an example o f P lath's use o f

the follow ing technical elements; metaphor, word rhythm, word

placement, and word rhyme. A ll of these elements are used in

combination to assist 1n the in terp retatio n o f the poem.

The major technical element 1s the use o f metaphor. There are

two metaphoric equations in the f i r s t stanza o f the poem: language as

an ax s trik in g against liv in g trees (th e body); and language as the


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echo of the ax stroke rid in g o ff lik e a horse (p o etry). The

essential subject o f the poem is the re la tio n s h ip o f the poet to the

poetry which she creates. "Her poetry had fa ile d her as w e ll, i t had

separated from her, going o f f lik e horses' hooves. Words only provide

echoes and re-establish m irrors, they no longer serve the

c re a to r." 100

In the second stanza the imagery converges as the sap and

te a rs . Both are " lik e th e / Water s tr iv in g / To re-establish it s

m irro r/ Over the rock . . ." .

98 Sylvia Lehrer, The Dialectics o f A rt and L ife . A P o rtra it


o f S vlvia Plath as Woman and Poet (Salzburg: In s t it u t Fur A n g lis tik
und Amerikanistik, 1985), p. 251.
99 Rosenblatt, S vlvia Plath. The Poetry of In it ia t io n , p.
137-138.
108 Lehrer, A P o r tr a it of Svlvia Plath as Woman and Poet, p.
251.

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In much of P lath's poetry the m irror is a symbol fo r the "true

s e lf of the persona."1®1 Within th is poem the m irro r, lik e the

surface o f the water, has been shattered; ju s t as the s e lf has also

been shattered by the power o f words.

The beginning o f the th ird stanza introduces the image o f death;

"A white s k u ll,/ Eaten by weedy greens". Plath draws a s im ila rity

between the white skull thrown in to the water and the cut o f the axe

in the bark of the tre e . Both the tree and the water attempt to

regain th e ir original status.

Metaphorically, it is language that introduces death into

personal r e a lity ; cutting the liv in g body, as an ax cuts a tre e , and

as the skull breaks the w ater's surface.


Words damage the original
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wholeness o f the body by making death a conscious thought.

The la s t part o f the poem demonstrates the hopelessness of the

poet who can no longer id e n tify with her own language o f an e a rlie r

period; "Poems are "words" th a t rid e o f f away form the o rig in a l act of

thought th a t gave b irth to them."10^

The fin a l lines of the poem return to the image o f water. Here,

Plath suggests a fundamental philosophy of doom and f a t a l i t y : L ife is

ruled by stars, fixed stars th a t are permanent and unchanging rulers.

f O l M a r i l y n Rae Hubbard, "Transcending technique: Sylvia


P lath 's A r ie l" (M.A. thesis, Wichita State U niversity, 1978), p. 28.
102 Rosenblatt, S vlvia Plath. The Poetry o f In i t i a t i o n , p.
138.
103 ibid., p. 139.

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When the end is near there is no escaping i t . There is no re b irth , no


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transform ation, only death.

Another technical element th a t demonstrates P la th 's poetic

a r tis t r y is found in the comparison between the rhythm o f the words,

and the re fle c tio n upon the content. Within the f i r s t two stanzas,

the use o f trochaic ( - V / ) and d a c ty lic fe e t heightens the

imageo f the reverberating echoes whichare the re s u lt o f the stroke

o f the axe.

A x^
— \_y — v_/ — \_y
A fter whose stroke the wood rings,
— — \_ y
And the echoes!
_ - r \_ / —
Echoes trav e lin g
— \_ /\y - V V —
O ff from tne centre lik e horses.

S pecific words of the poem are stressed by stanzaic division.

Many o f these words are key images w ithin the poem: "axes", "echoes",

"horses", "m irror", and "stars".

TO2* L e h r e r , A P o rtra it o f Svlvia Plath as Woman and Poet.


252.

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Also demonstrated within the poem is a s e n s itiv ity to sound.

The consistent use of assonance, rep etitio n of vowel without

re p e titio n o f consonants, a u ra lly weave the poem together: “axes" and

" a fte r" , "stroke" and "echoes", " lik e " and " s triv in g ", "mirror" and

"over", "rock" and "drop", "that" and "and", "eaten", "weedy" and

"green", "dry" and "riderless", "from", "bottom", and "govern".

The technical elements demonstrated by Plath work together in

subtle, yet e ffe c tiv e ways. The re s u lt is a poem th a t portrays the

e te rn a lly destructive power o f words against a backdrop o f human

destiny which is changeless.105

POPPIES IN JULY

L i t t l e poppies, l i t t l e h ell flames,


Do you do no harm?

You f lic k e r , I cannot touch you.


I put my hands among the flames. Nothing burns.

And i t exhausts me to watch you


F lic k erin g lik e that, w rinkly and clear red, lik e the skin of
a mouth.

A mouth ju s t bloodied.
L i t t l e bloody skirts!

There are fumes that I cannot touch.


Where are your opiates, your nauseous capsules?

I f I could bleed, or sleep! ------


I f my mouth could marry a hurt lik e that!

Or your liquors seep to me in th is glass capsule,


D ulling and s t illin g .

But colo rless. Colorless.106

TO5 Hubbard, "Transcending Technique," p. 29.


106 p ia th , "Poppies in J u ly ," in A r ie l. p. 81.

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Two main Images are apparent in "Poppies in July". The f i r s t is

the use o f the flower as a central symbol fo r the poet's inner

s itu a tio n .1®7 The second is the red color o f the flower, which,

according to Judith Kroll in Chapters in a Mythology, "is n a tu ra lly

associated with blood, danger and violence, as well as with

v i t a l i t y . " 108

The image o f the flower stresses the id e n tity o f nature and the

human body. When combined with the image o f the color red, the re s u lt

is a representation o f l i f e with great in te n s ity . Metaphorically,

Plath compares the red poppies to "hell flames". The sight of the

poppies, and th e ir in te n s ity , seem too great fo r the speaker to bear.

"And i t exhausts me to watch you/ Flickering lik e th a t, wrinkly and

clear red, lik e the skin o f a mouth." The desire o f the speaker is to

forget her own existence in one o f two ways; by becoming the flow er,
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or by swallowing the opium which the flower produces. At th is

point two possible kinds o f death are suggested. “I f I could bleed,

or s l e e p ! / I f my mouth could marry a hurt lik e th a t!" One is a

bloody physical death; a natural a f f in it y fo r the poppies as "hell

flames" and "bloody s k irts ." The other is the kind of death that is

pale and colorless. The swallowing o f the poppie's opium offers the

^ Rosenblatt, Svlvia P lath. The Poetry of In it ia t io n ,


p. 102.
108 K ro ll, Chapters in a Mythology. The Poetry of Svlvia
Plath. p. 103.
109 Rosenblatt, Svlvia P lath. The Poetry of In it ia t io n ,
p. 103.

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speaker a dulled and s t ille d death.110 In e ith e r case, death 1s an

escape from the awareness o f suffering, and would allow the speaker to

merge with the natural world.

In te rp re tlv e ly , the e n tire poem centers around the concept of

death, and the resu lt o f death. Rosenblatt summarized the message In

th is way: "Death can be e ith e r s e lf-la c e ra tio n or salvatio n , agony or

peacefulness."111

The poem appears to be fre e from any kind of m etrical pattern or

arrangement, although the f i r s t stanza is predominantly trochaic.


— vy — \y — \y — —
L it t le poppies, l i t t l e hell flames,
— \y — \y —
Do you do no harm?

Hubbard, in the thesis "Transcending Technique: Sylvia Plath's

A r ie l" , claims that this m etric and syntactic arrangementechoes the

form and rhythm of a nursery rhyme which, ir o n ic a lly , heightens its

impact.
— \ y —\ y — v y —
"Dandelion, yellow as gold,
— vy \ y — —
What do you do a ll day?"

Hubbard asserts that the in ten sity o f the i n i t i a l v io len t image

o f the poem is increased by P lath 's use of the m etrical arrangement of


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a nursery rhyme.

TT® K ro ll. Chapters in a Mythology. The Poetry o f Svlvia


P la th . p. 18.
1'1 Rosenblatt, S vlvia Plath. The Poetry o f In it ia t io n , p. 30.
112 Hubbard, "Transcending Technique," p. 11.

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THE HANGING MAN

By the roots o f my h a ir some god got hold o f me.


I s izzled 1n his blue volts lik e a desert prophet.

The night snapped out o f sigh t lik e a liz a rd 's e y e lid :


A world o f bald white days 1n a shadeless socket.

A vulturous boredom pinned me 1n th is tree .


I f he were I , he would do what I d id .113

The t i t l e "The Hanging Man" is borrowed from the Tarot cards.

The cards are a set of twenty-two playing cards which are used 1n

fortune t e llin g . The hanged man usually suggests a p o s itiv e fortune.

However, i f the card is d ealt upside down, as Plath is re fe rrin g , i t

is a negative fortune (Appendix B).

The poem was w ritten between October and November o f 1962, and

refers to the e le c tric shock treatments which Plath received during a

time o f depression in the summer o f 1953, and a fte r her f i r s t suicide

attempt on August 24, 1953.

The f i r s t series of shock treatments was an experience which was

la te r described in Plath's novel, The Bell Jar.

Then something bent down and took hold of me and shook


me lik e the end o f the world. Hhee-ee-ee-ee-ee, i t
s h r ille d , through an a i r crackling with blue lig h t ,
and with each flash a great j o l t grabbed me t i l l I
though my bones would break and a sap f ly out o f me
lik e a s p lit plan t. I wondered what te rr ib le thing i t
was I had done.114

TI3 P la th , "The Hanging Man," in A r ie l. p. 69.


114 S y lvia Plath, The Bel 1 Jar (London: Faber &
Faber, 1968), p. 151.

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In P lath 's Incarnations, by Lynda K. Bundtzen, the author claims

Plath fe lt th a t such punishment implied selection. She was being

chosen fo r some special oracular task. However, la te r in the poem she

discovers th at God's smiting is a rb itra ry , and when the v e il between

her and God is to rn , there is no revelation, but a v o id .115"A

world of bald white days in a shadeless socket./ A vulturous boredom

pinned me in his tre e ."

An important technical element is the use of specific words that

also incorporate specific sounds. "Words are more expressive when

they are somehow lik e what they mean: fa s t or slow or g ru ff or

s h r ill , . . . ". "These are e ffects beyond mere onomatopoeia - which

we can find too in Plath when i t is called fo r, . . Numerous

such words are apparent in "The Hanging Man": "sizzled ", "snapped",

"volts", "boredom". These words a ssist in the description of the

shock treatments, which adds to the in te n s ity of the poem.

The use of a llite r a tio n and consonance also help to r e fle c t the

violence o f the act i t is describing.

A llit e r a t io n , or the re p e titio n o f the in it ia l consonants, is

evident in the follow ing examples: "By the roots of my h a ir some god

got hold of m e.", "The night snapped out o f sight lik e a liz a rd 's

eyelid", "A world o f bald white days in a shadeless socket.", " I f he

were I , he would do what I d id ." .

TT5 Linda K. Bundtzen, P lath's Incarnations (Ann Arbor: The


University of Michigan Press, 1983) p. 177.
116 John Fredrick Nims, "The Poetry o f Sylvia P la th ," in Ariel
Ascending, ed. Paul Alexander (New York: Harper & Row, 1985), p. 49.

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Consonance, or the paring o f words In which the fin a l consonants

agree while the vowels d if f e r , is recognizable in the following

lin e s : "By the roots o f my h a ir some god got hold o f me.", "I sizzled

in his blue volts lik e a desert prophet.", "The nights snapped out of

sight lik e a liz a rd 's e y e lid :" , "A world of bald white days in a

shadeless socket.", " I f he were I , he would do what I d id ."

POPPIES IN OCTOBER

Even the sun-clouds this morning cannot manage such s k irts .


Nor the woman in the ambulance
Whose red heart blooms through her coat so astoundingly —
A g i f t , a love g i f t
U tte r ly unasked fo r
By a sky

P alely and flam ily


Ig n itin g it s carbon monoxides, by eyes
Dulled to a halt under bowlers.

0 my God, what am I
That these la te mouths should cry open
In a fo re s t of fro s t, in a dawn o f cornflowers.117

As in "Poppies in July", "Poppies in October" incorporates the

flower image as a central symbol fo r the poet's inner situatio n. With

the exception o f the t i t l e , the actual flower is never mentioned.

However, the magnificence and b r illia n c e of the red poppy is described

in contrast to the paleness o f its surroundings. The pale background

is discovered in both the natural world, "In a fo re s t o f frost" and in

the death-haunted human world, “Nor the woman in the ambulance". 118

Tn P lath, "Poppies in October," in A r ie l. p. 19.


1111 Rosenblatt, Svlvia Plath. The Poetry o f In it ia t io n , p.
102 .

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According to K ro ll, "What is expressed in Poppies in October . .

. [ i s] . . . a state o f being; in this case, the state of being is

d e a th - in - lif e , or the dominance o f the false s e lf , which coexists with


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the suppressed true s e lf." Kroll continues in claiming these

opposing elements appear in the poem as the v it a l red poppies th a t

rebuke the c h illy landscape, the deadened men w ith "eyes/ Dulled to a

h a lt under bowlers;" and the speaker h erself. The red poppies c a ll to

th e ir counterpart, the dormant true s e lf o f the speaker, and awaken

her, making her aware o f t h e ir sim ilar s itu a tio n s . The poppies are

surrounded by the paleness o f nature, ju s t as the true s e lf is

surrounded by the paleness o f the false s e lf.

The poet, existing in a world of death and fe a rs , gives thanks


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th at she can witness the b rillia n c e s of the poppies. "0 my God,

what am 1 / That these la te mouths should cry open/ In a forest of

fr o s t, in a dawn of cornflowers." In a memorial broadcast on Sylvia

Plath, Alvarez states "In 'Poppies in October' . . . what starts as a


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description finishes as a way o f defining her own state o f mind."

The most s ig n ific a n t technical elements o f the poem are the use

of s ib ila n c e , the sound resembling that of an "s" or "sh" and

resonance, a quality imparted to voiced sounds by the resonating

Tin Krol 1, Chapters in a Mythology. The Poetry of Svlvia


P la th . p. 15.
120 Rosenblatt, Svlvia Plath. The Poetry of In it ia t io n ,
p. 102.
121 A. Alvarez, "Sylvia Plath," in TheA rt o f Svlvia P la th .
ed. Charles Newman (Bloomington: Indiana U niversity Press, 1970),
p. 60.

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chamber o f the mouth & pharynx configurations. Within the fir s t

stanza these technical devices are demonstrated. The sounds add to

the "hypnotic1 q u ality of the poem. "Even the sun-clouds th is morning

cannot manage such s k ir t s ./ Nor the woman in the ambulance/ Whose red

heart blooms through her coat so astoundingly — ".

The use o f a llit e r a t io n , which also provides a soothing t r a i t to

the poem, is exhibited within the following lin es: "Even the

sun-clouds th is morning cannot manage such s k ir ts ." , " u tte rly unasked

fo r" , "in a fo re s t of fro s t, in a dawn o f cornflowers."

LADY LAZARUS

I have done i t again.


One year in every ten
I manage i t —

A sort o f walking m iracle, my skin


B right as a Nazi lampshade,
My rig h t foot

A paperweight,
My face a featureless, fin e
Jew lin e n .

Peel o f f the napkin


0 my enemy.
Do I te r r ify ? —

The nose, the eye p its , the f u l l set o f teeth?


The sour breath
Wi l l vanish in a day.

Soon, soon the flesh


The grave cave ate w ill be
At home on me

And I a smiling woman.


1 am only th ir ty .
And lik e the cat I have nine times to die.

This is Number Three.


What a trash
To a n n ih ila te each decade.

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What a m illio n filam ents.
The peanut-crunching crowd
Shoves in to see

Them unwrap me hand and fo o t —


The big s trip tease.
Gentlemen, ladies,

These are my hands,


My knees.
I may be skin and bone.

Nevertheless, I am the same, id en tical woman.


The f i r s t time i t happened I was ten.
I t was an accident.

The second time I meant


To la s t i t out and not come back a t a l l .
I rocked shut

As a seashell.
They had to call and call
And pick the worms o f f me lik e sticky pearls.

Dying
Is an a r t , lik e everything else.
I do i t exceptionally w e ll.

I do i t so i t feels lik e h e ll.


I do i t so i f feels r e a l.
I guess you could say I ' v e a c a ll.

It's easy enough to do i t in ac e ll.


It's easy enough to do i t and stay put.
It's the theatrical

Comeback in broad day


To the same place, the same face, the same brute
Amused shout:

"A m iracle!"
That knocks me out.
There is a charge

For the eyei ng of my scars, there i s a charge


For the hearing of my heart —
I t r e a lly goes.

And there is a charge, a very large charge,


For a word or a touch
Or a b it o f blood

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Or a piece o f my hair or my clothes.


So, so, Herr Doktor.
So, Herr Enemy.

I am your opus,
I am your valuable,
The pure gold baby

That melts to a shriek.


I turn and burn.
Do not think I underestimate your great concern.

Ash, ash —
You poke and s t ir .
Flesh, bone, there is nothing there —

A cake o f soap,
A wedding rin g ,
A gold f i l l i n g .

Herr God, Herr Lucifer,


Beware
Beware.

Out o f the ash


I ris e with my red hair
And I eat men lik e a i r . 122

In 1962, the B ritish Broadcasting Corporation aired a discussion

of confessional poetry by a number o f poets and c r it ic s . One o f the

poems presented was Sylvia P lath 's "Lady Lazarus". Introducing her

poem, Plath said:

The speaker is a woman who has the great and


t e r r ib le g i f t o f being reborn. The only trouble i s ,
she has to die f i r s t . She is the Phoenix, the
lib e rta r ia n s p ir it , what you w i l l . She is also ju s t a
good, p la in resourceful woman.123

122 P la th , "Lady Lazarus," in A r ie l, pp. 6-9.


123 Bassnett, Svlvia P la th . p. 115.

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According to Rosenblatt, the Lady of the poem 1s a

quasi-mythological fig u re , a parodic version o f the b ib lic a l Lazarus

whom C h ris t raised from the dead.124

The speaker 1n the poem acts out various fantasies o f suicide

and resu rrection In a dramatic monologue. She speaks spontaneously

out o f her pain, and enacts her death repeatedly In order to cleanse

h e rs e lf o f the anguish th a t torments her. According to Susan Bassnett

In S v lv ia P la th . Lady Lazarus, " . . . transcends her torments and

exacts revenge fo r her s u fferin g on men." Bassnett Id e n tifie s Lady

Lazarus as a "fighter" and a "survivor". "The anger . . . 1s directed

against men who wrong women and against the world which stands by and

allows them to do 1 t .1,125

The speaker describes h e rs e lf as four d iffe r e n t Images within

the poem. The f i r s t , a cloth or m aterial; a lampshade, a linen, a

napkin, the second, a body; hand, knees, skin and bone, h a ir. The

th ir d , a physical object; gold, ash, a cakeo f soap; and f in a lly , the

resurrected red-haired demon. The entire suicide resurrection act is

presented to the public. The observers change as each death occurs:

"enemy", "gentlemen and la d ie s ", "Herr Doktor", and "Herr God" and

"Herr L u c ife r " .126

123 Rosenblatt, Svlvia P la th . The Poetry o f I n i t i a t i o n , p. 38.


125 Bassnett, Svlvia P la th . p. 116.
126 Rosenblatt, Svlvia P la th . The Poetry o f I n i t i a t i o n , p. 38.

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The speaker boasts o f her a b il it y to continually ris e from the

dead, " I have done 1 t again./ One year 1nevery ten/ I manage 1 t — " ,

and speaks 1n a language of acidic comedy. "And I a smiling woman./ I

am only t h i r t y / And lik e the cat I have nine times to d ie ."

The la s t lin es of the poem serve as a warning to a ll men, and to

the society th a t 1s dominated by male values. "Beware/Beware./Out of

the ash/ I r is e with my red h a ir / And I eat men lik e a ir ."

"Lady Lazarus" has often been considered an example o f P lath's

"confessional” w riting s ty le . Many elements of the poem are

biographical, but sole analysis of the poem on th is level is

lim itin g . P la th 's technical a b il it y is demonstrated in numerous

methods. An in te n s ity is derived from the serious te x t set in a

controlled and impudent tone. The poem is w ritten in colloquial

language and incorporates poetic lin e s th a t are fragmented by stanzalc

d ivis io n . This technique gives the impression of an informal

conversation delivered by a spontaneous speaker.However, the

speaker's approach to the subject o f suicide is stra ig h t forward and

d ire c t. "This 1s language poured out o f some burning Inner f i r e ,

though i t re ta in s the rhythmical precision th at we expect from a much


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less in ten sely f e l t expression."

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Another technical element 1s the re p e titio n of key words and

phrases.

I do I t so 1 t feels lik e h e ll.


I do 1 t so 1 t feels re a l,
I guess you could say I ' v e a c a ll.

I t ' s easy enough to do 1 t 1n a c e ll.


I t ' s easy enough to do I t and stay put.
I t ' s the th e a tric al

The re p e titio n strengthens the power o f the te x t. "As she speaks,

Lady Lazarus seems to gather up her energies fo r an assault on her

enemies, and the staccato repetitions of phrases build up the

In te n s ity o f fe e lin g s ." 12®

The use o f rhyme In "Lady Lazarus" Is obvious, and runs from

stanza to stanza with Id entical rhyme. Six o f the f i r s t ten lines end

In an "n" sound, followed by a series o f long "e". This process is

continued throughout the poem. Nims, in The Poetry of Svlvia P la th .

labels th is device "compulsive rhyme". "The poet seems to carry on a

sound about as long as she can, although not in consecutive lin e s ."

This compulsive rhyme is " . . . deeper than a mere lit e r a r y device,

. . . " and 1s " . . . somehow related to needs of the exacerbated


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psyche.

L a s tly , Plath Incorporates the use o f p o litic a l imagery 1n order

to express v ic tim iz a tio n . The reference to the Nazis and Jews 1s used

as a h is to ric a l reference to the "greatest contemporary example o f

l2B Rosenblatt, Svlvia Plath. The Poetry o f In it ia t io n , p. 40.


129 Nims, "The Poetry o f Sylvia P la th ", p. 52.

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b r u ta lity and persecution". The speaker is then portrayed as an

eternal v ic tim , thus drawing the reader away form the personal

m aterial o f the poet into a wider theme o f social c ritic is m .

Cyclical In te rp re ta tio n

The fo rty -th re e poems o f the A rie l collection are published in a

semi-chronological order. Because the poems were published a fte r the

author's death, there is no way o f determining i f th is was the order

of appearance Plath would have chosen. In addition, i t is unknown i f

Plath intended th a t the fo rty -th re e poems appear as a c o lle c tio n . In

"The Chronological Order of Sylvia P la th 's Poems", Ted Hughes dates

most o f the A rie l poems. Of the f iv e poems set musically by Rorem,

Hughes gives dates to only three. "Lady Lazarus" and "Poppies in

October" were w ritten between October and November of 1962, and

"Words" was w ritte n during the la s t week o f Plath's l i f e . 131 The

other two poems, "The Hanging Man" and "Poppies in J u ly ", used by

Rorem and not mentioned by Hughes, are considered. by many to belong

with the poems w ritten between October and November o f 1962 because of
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s im ila rity of subject and s ty le . The order of publication for

the fiv e poems o f the Ariel c o lle ctio n is "Lady Lazarus", "Poppies in

October", "The Hanging Man", "Poppies in July", and "Words".

Rosenblatt, Svlvia P lath. The Poetry of I n i t i a t i o n , p. 42.


131 Ted Hughes, "Notes on the Chronological Order o f Sylvia
Plath's Poems," in The Art o f S vlvia Plath A Symposium, ed. Charles
Newman (Bloomington: Indiana U niversity Press, 1970), pp. 187-195.
132 carol ine King Barnard, Svlvia Plath (Boston: Twayne
Publishers, 1978), p. 74.

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The s im ila ritie s and differences o f the fiv e poems are c le a rly

demonstrated by the comparison o f "Popples 1n October" to "Popples In

July", and o f "Lady Lazarus" to "Words". The speaker In "Popples 1n

October" describes the flowers 1n b r illia n t terms. She voices her

appreciation fo r th e ir beauty, and considers them to be presents. "A

g i f t , a love g i f t / U tte rly unasked fo r / By a sky . . ." This a ttitu d e

Is 1n contrast with the a ttitu d e o f the speaker 1n "Popples 1n July".

Here, the speaker grows weary from observing the b r i l l i a n t flowers o f

nature. "And 1t exhausts me to watch you/ F lickerin g lik e th a t,

w rinkly and clear red, lik e the skin of a mouth." Instead of

appreciation, the speaker voices a cry of desperation. She asks fo r

release from her pain through the opium of the poppies. "Where are

your op iates, your nauseous capsules?/ I f I could bleed, or sleep!


II

The speaker of "Lady Lazarus" is a woman f i l l e d with boldness.

She faces her oppressors, and rises above them by resurrecting from

her death. "Out of the ash/ I ris e with my red h a ir / And I eat men

lik e a ir ." The fighting a ttitu d e o f "Lady Lazarus" is absent from

"Words". The speaker in "Words" is a t peace with her pain and her

death. She quietly surrenders to the knowledge th a t life is

preordained, and her destiny is inescapabale. "While/ From the bottom

o f the pool, fixed s ta rs / Govern a l i f e . "

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CHAPTER VI

COMPOSITIONAL INTERPRETATION

In the a r t ic le , "Poetry and the Composer", Oliphant discussed

three s p e c ific areas that must be addressed by the composer to ensure

a successful composition. The composer should enhance the poetry by

expressing the sense of the words, reproducing the atmosphere of the


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poem, and revealing the meaning o f the te x t.

These requirements appear to be met in Rorem's composition,

A r ie l. Rorem demonstrates expression o f the sense o f a word in a

va riety of ways; melodic contour, interval l i e usage, rhythmic

structure, use o f range, s y lla b ic stress, and specified vocal and

instrumental techniques. The reproduction of the atmosphere of the

poem is derived by specifying tempo, meter, dynamics, te x tu re , and key

center. The above musical elements combine to reveal the meaning of

the poetry, however, the in te rp re ta tio n of the meaning wi l l vary by

virtu e of the in s tin c tiv e differences of the performers and the

performances. A r ie l. Rorem said, was written fo r soprano Phyllis

Curtin. When questioned about her in terp retatio n of A r ie l. she

re p lie d , "As to performance, I do not believe th at I have ever thought

T 3 3 e .H.C. Oliphant, "Poetry and the Composer," Musical


Q uarterly. 8 (1922): 227.

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of an In te rp re tiv e position. Living with the te x t 1s my e n tire

direction . . . The absolute presence o f the te x t and the musical

delineations o f the te x t 1s the primary m otivator. . . . The work 1s

so e x p lic it, so rich 1n Its revelation o f the various voices and

thoughts o f S ylvia Plath that devotion to the work It s e lf and release

o f its te x t and music w ill present i t q u ite c le a r ly ." 134

The f i r s t song 1n the A riel cycle contains numerous examples of

musical word expression. The fir s t example is the opening vocal

phrase.

Example 51. "Words" Meas. 1 135

The descending major seventh and the rhythmic structure o f the phrase

r e fle c t the f a l l o f an ax stroke.

■ 3 4 Phyl l i s Curtain, personal le t t e r , August 31, 1987.


135 Rorem, "Words," in A r ie l. p. 4.

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A second example in measures 4-5 is seen on the word "rings".

Example 52. "Words" Meas. 4-6 136

the wood tings And the

Due to the re s u lt o f the rhythmic duration o f the word, the voice

"rings" out musically ju s t as the wood "rings" out p o e tic a lly .

The following areas demonstrate the d iffe r e n t usages of syllabic

stress and rhythmic structure. In measure 7 the word "echoes" is set

in a melodic lin e consisting o f major th ird in te rv a ls .

Example 53. "Words" Meas. 6-8 ^37

_ And the o-
DE-I; ffiFT
chocs! E* chocs. tiav - ell • in |

The unstressed syllable of the word is elongated. This technique

results in a vocal im itation o f an echo.

'36 ib id .
137 ibid.

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The same melodic contour is found in measure 17; however, the rhythm

is changed.

Example 54. "Words" Meas. 16-17 138

Within the phrase, the stressed s y lla b le o f the word is musically

accented and rhythmically augmented. Consequently, the musical

setting re fle c ts the movement o f the water over the rocks.

In measure 18 the composer sets the phrase "that drops" in a

descending p a tte rn , and marks the notes as stressed staccatos.

Example 55. "Words" Meas. 18


18

_T nat drops and—.

Again, the voice reflects the actual action referred to in the poem,

as well as the sound o f the word.

I b i d . , p. 5.
!39 ib id .

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Many times throughout the cycle, the composer employs the use of

the accompanying Instruments when m usically describing the te x t. An

example o f th is technique 1s evident 1n measure 32.

Example 56. "Words" Meas. 31-34

■rtrnr~n,r7i
The in-de • Tat- i-ga-ble hoof-ups.

The musical phrase on "Indefatigable hoof-taps" continues 1n the piano

lin e . The re s ta tin g of the descending major sixth in te rv a l reflects

the u n tirin g movement of the hoof-taps. The rhythmic pattern o f even

eighth notes Im itates the rhythm o f the hoof-taps.

As previously discussed, the atmosphere of the poem is peaceful

and r e fle c t iv e . The composer's choice o f tempo ( J » 72 Not fa s t)

confirms the serene atmosphere. The serenity is emphasized by the use

o f sustained v e rtic a l chords on the piano lin e .

•40 i b i d . , p. 7,

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The atmosphere of the poem transforms in measure 28. The key

center of the song changes from G to B.

Example 57. "Words" Meas. 27-29 141


29
ft27
rr\ ^ ^e rap o

-P & 3 i d
ft /T\ mp esiitf'(-open-) j

Yean la-ter I En-coun-ter them on__ ihe__ road-

ft /a ------ T+ ..hJ-- .... -1


.... ^
1 mp apr. r

The change o f to n a lity reflects the emotional change o f the speaker.

The poet re fle c ts , a fte r years of separation, on words th a t, a t one

time caused pain. The speaker's emotional detachment from these words

evoke the change o f to n a lity .

The song closes with one la s t musical remembrance o f the ax

stroke (measure 35). The voice lin e , apparently unaffected by the

memory, continues in peaceful and quiet resignation.

141 Ib id ., p. 6.

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Example 58. "Words" Meas. 35-42 142

© 36

Freer

While— From (he bot-tom of the pool.

lower

PP PPP
wit.
m p™ PP

fued stars Gov- crn* a life..


JL

f it .

The most apparent musical enhancement of poetry in "Poppies in

July" is the vocal lin e , which centers around a single note. The lack

of contour within the vocal lin e reflects the lack of emotion within

the voice o f the speaker. Occasionally the contour of the voice lin e

descends, indicating the emotional state of the speaker which is also

expressed by the range. These notes are placed in the middle o f the

singing range, a range s im ilar to the speaking voice.

Ib id ., p . 7.

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The musical use of syllabic stress is demonstrated throughout

the song. Two of these examples are c le a rly seen in measure 7 and

measure 13.

Example 59. "Poppies in July" Meas. 7, 13

lit-tie blood -y skirts!

The small descending melodic movement of the vocal phrase enables the

performer to sing the words with the same s y lla b ic stress that would

be evident in speech.

An element that aids in the production o f effective atmosphere

is the contrapuntal w ritin g between a ll three instruments. The

contrapuntal textures create a sense of constant movement re flectin g

the drug induced state of mind. At measure 17 the intensity of the

poem increases.

I4^ Rorem, "Poppies in July," in A r ie l. pp. 8 -9 .

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Example 60. "Popples in July" Meas. 17-21 144

Where ire your o • p i-B n , your I codd

loco

H IP
bleed,_____ or. ___ sleep!__

The in te n s ity is heightened musically by the contrapuntal w ritin g o f

the piano and voice. The syncopation between these two lin e s , and the

increased dynamic levels r e fle c t the increased anxiety the speaker

feels as she cries out to the poppies. The lin e climaxes on the

phrase "bleed or sleep" representing a choice between a v io le n t or

calm death.

The song ends m elodically as i t began. The voice contin u ally


5
repeats a C . The word "Colorless" is marked with increasingly

lower levels of dynamics. The fading of sound indicates the

hopelessness of the speaker.

144 Ib id ., pp. 9-10.

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The tempo is marked Languorous ( J » 5 8 . ) The slow tempo suggests

the e ffe c t o f a drug induced state of mind.

The contour of the melodic lines in "The Hanging Man" relates

d ire c tly to the meaning o f the te x t. As discussed e a r lie r , the piece

refers to ele c tric al shock treatments. The reference is made apparent

m usically by the shape o f the melodic lines of both the c la rin e t and

the voice. The opening vocal lin e consists of wide in te rv a llic leaps

consecutively placed.

Example 61. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 8-10

By the roots ofmy hair some god_ got hold ■■of me.

trem.

Consequently, the l i ne' s contour resembles that of an e le c tric b o lt.

145 Rorem, "The Hanging Man," in A rie l, p. 12.

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Musical expression o f the te x t is seen in measure 17.

Example 62. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 16-17 146

The nighs sopped out

The word "snapped" is marked as an accented staccato. The range of

the word, as well as the staccato marking allow an accurate expression

of the sound and meaning of the word.

The fin a l lin e of the poem is expressed in defense of the

speaker's actions. The range, increased dynamics, and rhythmic

elongation on the word "I" represent the speaker's s e lf ju s tific a tio n

for the attempted suicide.

Example 63. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 28-29 147

28

did.,

The c la rin e t lin e serves an important role in the expression of

the te x t. A choice example is measure 11.

I4t> Ib id ., p. 13.
147 Ib id ., p. 14.

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Example 64. "The Hanging Man" Meas. 11-13 148

jfct.

m p su b.

The verb o f the poetic lin e is "sizzled". The t r i l l in the clarinet

aptly re fle c ts a sizzling motion.

Also incorporated into the song is the use o f anti phonal voicing

between the c la rin e t and the vocal lin e . The c la rin e t in itia te s the

e le c tric b o lt. The vocal lin e answers as the re su lt o f the b o lt. The

piano lin e is added to the texture when the in te n s ity of the poem

increases.

The tempo marking for "The Hanging Man" is Fast (J *= 184.) The

rapid tempo produces an e ffec t which is representative o f the movement

of e le c t r ic it y . The dynamic markings indicate the in te n s ity of the

e le c tr ic ity . The song ends with a c la rin e t solo. The c la rin e t moves

rapidly over a wide range. The range gradually decreases as does the

dynamic level and the rapid movement. The fin a l phrases o f the song

are marked, " rita rd molto". Consequently, the la s t lin e is a slow and

quiet statement indicating the fade of e le c tric ity . The atmosphere of

<48 Ib id . , p. 12.

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"Poppies in October" is indicated immediately by the contrapuntal

motion between the voice and piano. The motion continues and is

expanded throughout the song. Each entering melodic lin e re fle cts the

increasing thoughts and emotions o f the speaker. The melodic lines

are long and overlapping. This compositional device creates an

endless and varied stream o f musical sound. The overlapping texture

represents the endless and varied stream of the speaker's thoughts.

Atmosphere is again established in measure 16. The key center

changes from 6 minor to B major. The change of to n a lity from minor to

major is re fle c tiv e of the speaker's a ttitu d e . The speaker, at

measure 16, is expressing her appreciation for the g ift of the

poppies. Her appreciation culminates on the word "sky".

149
Example 65. "Poppies in October" Meas. 15-19

A a love gift Ut - ter - ly un-asked for By a sty.

mp

The ascending contour of the lin e follows the thought o f the speaker.

149 Rorem, "Poppies in October," in A rie l. p. 16.

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Word evocation o f key center 1s also displayed 1n measure 31.

The speaker's cry to God 1s established In a B major to n a lity . The

in ten sity 1s Increased by dynamics and the ascending melodic lines of

a ll three Instruments.

An example o f word expression Is shown 1n measure 11. The word

"blooms" is lengthened, and placed on a higher pitch than any

preceding pitch es. Musically, the note "blooms” ju s t as the text

suggests.

Example 66. "Popples in October" Meas. 10-13 150

jjjy 11 ,,i %ip=^==g= i"13 »r r ^ ,


t i „ r . i“* * ? r _ _ . i |
----------- «.-----------
. w h o se re d h e a rt b lo o m s th ro u g h her COM m ««- fnimrf- m g . I f

u ■ d fcl J J
f - L»r r — = ----- = --------- 4 - L ...... *J. JT\
1" i ...........
- f ------I f — «—
if
3 — £ —1— *t<. - i j hj j j j

The composer's tempo markings fo r "Poppies in October" are

"Restrained, but don't drag" ( J - 5 6 ) . The slow tempo, s o ft dynamics

markings, and the consistent use o f a narrow range in the vocal line

re fle c t the emotional removal of the speaker from her surroundings.

Her sense of observation changes to emotional re a liz a tio n a t two

points w ithin the song. As previously mentioned, the two points are

represented by the change of key centers and the extension o f the

lbU I b i d . , p. 15.

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vocal range. The song ends as it began. The emotional re s tra in t

returns as do both the narrow range o f the vocal lin e and the soft

dynamic markings.

"Lady Lazarus'" most Important expressive element 1s determined

by the tempo marking; "Fast and fr a n tic , but mechanical", J >132

(-P> J* always). In te rp re tlv e ly , the tempo marking produces a

controlled emotional atmosphere to which a highly emotional te x t Is

set. The use o f repeated In va ria b le eighth-note patterns adds to the

controlled atmosphere, and accents the colloquialism o f the speech.

Several examples of musical syllabic stress through rhythmic

notation are evident within the piece. Three o f these examples are

seen 1n the f i r s t nine measures; measure 3 - "m iracle", measure 8 -

"enemy" and measure 9 - " te r r if y " .

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Example 67. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 3, 8, 9 151

Jjj H r j y i
3
walk -
' n rJ I
- injm ir- t-de.
Peel o ff the nap - kin 0 my en - e-my.

(Ha

I ter - ri-fy? - The—

Ibt korem, "Lady Lazarus," in A r ie l, pp. 19-20.

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An example of musical word expression is demonstrated in

measure 19 on the word "die".

Example 68. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 19-20 152

19 GD ^ ----- 20

Jj j m arcatissim o

jjj violent ____ ____

Jk !)7

The word is set in a melodic lin e that descends over an e n tire measure.

The same concept of word expression is shown in measures 36 and

43. Measure 36 includes the phrase "la st i t out". The entire phrase

is rhythm ically lengthened through the use of quarter notes and a

t r ip le t marking.

Example 69. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 36-37 153

T he sec-ond time I. . To last it out and n o u co cn e back at alL—

m pp

iw I b id . , p. 22.
153 ib id . , p. 24.

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In measure 43 the melodic contour of the phrase on the word

"sticky", 1n addition to the staccato marking, In d ic a te the sense o f

the word.

Example 70. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 43 ^

pack the warns d i m e lite stick • y p a i k

There are many musical examples which display the exploitation

of word sound. Four o f them are: 1) measure 54, the word "broad" set

to an in te rv a l l i e leap o f an octave;

Example 71. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 53-54 155

■=53 54

It's th e th e - a - tri-calCane-bacfcin breed day to the same—

p HP
f — — —

I b i d . , p. 25.
I b i d . , p. 27.

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2) measure 56, the word "shout", set on a h a lf note which increases

the duration o f the sound;

Example 72. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 56 156

shout: “A

3) measure 69, the word "shriek" set to a descending interval li e leap

of an octave;

Example 73. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 68-71 157

68 70 71

T h e p a t-g o td — ba - by Thai mefcs______to ashricfc__ I Dim and bum.

P a DBS

and 4) the word "rise" in measure 83 set to an ascending arppegiated

tria d .

I5b ib id ., p. 28.
157 ib id ., p. 30.

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Example 74. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 83-84 158

Throughout the song, the composer Indicates s p e c ific attitudes

o f d e liv e ry . The directions are designated in both the c la rin e t and

vocal lin e s . Directions fo r the c la rin e t are in measure 7 "vio le n t",

and in measure 83 "Savage". The vocal lin e is marked in measure 40

"gently", and in measure 31 "h y s te ric a l".

Five additional indications are found within the vocal lin e ;

measure 21 "parlando", measure 38 "shouted", measure 47 "portamento",

measure 57 " h a lf yelled"; and measure 85 "A loud gasp". These

markings in dicate the incorporation o f specific vocal techniques.

I b id . , p. 31.

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Three of the illu s tr a tio n s are s im ila r, measures 21, 38 and 57.

Example 75. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 21, 38, 57, 58

I ja r la n d o

half yelled

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The composer notates pitches fo r a ll three phrases; "what a tras h ",

" a ll" , and "that knocks me out". However, the small crosslike

symbols, as well as the w ritte n directions, in d ic a te the vocal use o f

a speech-like q u a lity . Two of these phrases contain slang

terminology. Consequently, the speech q u ality o f the voice heightens

the impact o f the te x t.

The fin a l illu s tr a tio n s , measure 47 and measure 85, also contain

s im ila r d ire c tio n s . In measure 47, the term "portamento" implies a

gradual g lid e from the E p itc h to the octave below. The subsequent

lengthening o f the word "fe e ls " adds to the e x p lo ita tio n of the sound

o f the word.

Example 76. "Lady Lazarus" Meas. 47-48 160

I do it so i reds like hell. 1 do it so it feels te d .

y
pppsetnpeelegato

A s lig h tly d iffe re n t instruction is indicated in measure 85.

The composer notates a descending gliding motion between G and E fo r

the voice. The w ritten d ire c tio n of "A loud gasp" indicates the use

o f a vocal sound other than a singing tone. The vocal q u ality o f a

gasp is re fle c tiv e o f the word " a ir" to which the notes are set.

i&u ib id . , p. 26.

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Example 77. "Lady Lazarus” Meas. 85 161

(A b ud p sp)

And I cat men fike a i r . _ W


• __

'& 1 Ib id ., p. 31.

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CHAPTER V II

SUMMARY

The resu lts of the study contain the follow ing information.

Examination of the horizontal motives in the music concluded that

melody preceded harmony. V e rtic a l analysis indicated the extensive

use o f contrapuntal w ritin g . In addition, many tonal implications

were evident; y e t the im plications were veiled by extensive use of

dissonance. Formal analysis o f the en tire cycle concluded that an

arch form was evident. This was substantiated by the symmetrical

placement o f the songs, and the tonal connections between the songs.

The form o f the individual songs was determined by the te x t.

The poems by Plath are from the posthumous c o lle c tio n e n titled

A r ie l. The fiv e poems used in Rorem's song cycle were w ritten the

la s t months o f the poet's l i f e . The general theme o f the poetry is

death and pain. A ll of the poems u t iliz e metaphor, imagery, word

rhythm, and word rhyme.

The in terp re ta tio n of the composition revealed musical

expression o f word meaning and word sound. The atmosphere of the

poetry was portrayed through the composer's choice o f meter, tempo,

and dynamic markings. On s p e cific occasions, the composer u tiliz e d

various vocal and instrumental techniques which aided in the

expression o f the te x t and it s meaning.

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In summary, the Information gathered serves as reference

material fo r the performer o f A r ie l. This type o f source material 1s

necessary I f a q u a lity performance o f the work is to be expected.

In determining re la tiv e success or fa ilu re o f a work such as

th is , two questions were asked: 1) Does the poetry co n stitu te good

lite ra tu re ? 2) Has the composer m usically enhanced the poetry, or

conveyed it s meaning?

One may argue th a t Sylvia Plath has been remembered more because

of her suicide than fo r her poetic achievements. However, a fte r close

examination o f the fiv e poems set by Rorem, her mastery o f poetic

technique is revealed. This technique embodies an a b il it y to subtly

express and support the poetic meaning. The results are w e ll-w ritte n

poems o f great emotional in ten sity.

This in te n s ity is also re fle c te d musically by the composer.

Rorem's mastery o f song writing is evidenced through his compositional

in terp re ta tio n o f the poetry as discussed in Chapter V I. He has been

acclaimed as one o f the most important and p r o lific song composers of

our day. This cycle exemplifies his a b il it y to set poetry e ffe c tiv e ly

for the voice.

Nonetheless, individual students and performers of A rie l are the

ones who must determine the essence and worth of P la th 's poetry and

Rorem's music. The subjectiveness o f th is evaluation allows for a

v a riety o f equally expressive in te rp re ta tio n s .

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As a r e s u lt, an in-depth study o f both poetry and music, such as

th is one, reveals a work worthy o f serious consideration by the

performer.

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APPENDIX A

Personal Correspondence

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August 20, 1987

H iyllis curtin, Dean


School of the A rts, School of Music
Boston university
855 Ocumcnuealth Awe.
Boston, Massachusetts 02215
Ms. curtain:
My name is Beverly Q a flin and I an currently in the process of
w riting a research paper fa r my D.M.A. degree a t Arizona State
university. My major eephasis is in vocal performance.
Because I have performed Ned Rorem's ccnpositicn ARIEL numerous
times, I chose to w rite on the topic, "A Musical Analysis and
Poetic interpretation o f Nad Rorem's ARIEL". I t is fa r thin
reason, I am writing to you in regard to scna questions th a t have
surfaced in ay research and w riting. I would sincerely appreciate
your assistanoe in answering the following:
What were the circumstances surrounding the dedication o f ARIEL?
As a performer of ARIEL, what interpretive position do you assume?
Is i t one of poet persona, the narrative voice, both o r neither?
Interpretatiwely, do you consider the clarin et's ro le to be one of
acccnpaniment or cue th a t is equal to the voice?
Was ycur premier performance of the work in Washington, O.C.
reviewed? i f so, where can I locate a copy of th at review?
Any other insights o r experiences you can give to me about ARIEL
wwld be very helpful. Enclosed is a self-addressed, stamped
envelope for your convenience. Thank you fa r your and
assistanoe. I t is sincerely appreciated.
Cordially,

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BostonUniveisity
School for the A m
855 Commonwealth Avenue
Boston, Masiachuietts 02215

Phyllis Cuihn, Dean

August 31, 1987

Hiss Beverly Claflin


518 B. Kerry Lane
Phoenix, AZ 85024

Dear Hiss Claflin:

I am glad to know of your interest In Ariel, and I am sure that with your experi­
ence in performance there is really not a great deal I have to add of any signifi­
cance.

There are these following facts. Some months prior to a performance at the
Library of Congress, in planning a programwith David Glaser, clarinetist,
I realized that there was little repertoryfor piano, clarinet, and voice
which I had not often performed. I calledHr. Rorem, an old friend, and asked
him if he might have a work for that combination lying about in his files. He
said he did not, but that he would write a piece for me as a gift. That, as
you can understand, has become a most Important gift to the world of musicians
as well as to me.

The premiere performance at the Library was indeed reviewed. I am sure I have
copies, but they are buried deep in boxes in my cellar and I have not time to
set about finding them. Perhaps consulting the libraries of the Washington
Post and other dailies might be helpful.

As to performance, I do not believe that I have ever thought of an interpre­


tive position. Living with the text is my entire direction. In these texts
it could be the poet, but in all cases the absolute presence of the text and
the musical delineations of the text is the primary motivator. The clarinet's
role is certainly equal to the voice. Indeed, this is a work for three voices.
The clarinet seems often to be the real delineator of madness quite apart from
the specificity of words.

I chink that you need no more from me. The work is so explicit, so rich in
its revelation of the various voices and thoughts of Sylvia Plath that devo­
tion to the work itself and release of its text and music will present it
quite clearly.
Sincerely,

Phyllis Curtin

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August 20, 1987

Nad Earem
18 W. 70th
New York, New York 10023
Mr. Horen:
My nams is Beverly C laflin and I am currently in the process of
writing a research proj ect fa r my D.M.A. degree a t Arizona sta te
University. K f major esphasis is in vocal performance.
Because I have performed your ccnpositicn ARIEL numerous times, I
chose to w rite cn the topic, "A M isical Analysis and Poetic
Interpretation o f Ned Rorem's ARXEU1. I t is fa r this reason I am
w riting to you in regard to some questions th a t have surfaced in my
research and writing. I would sincerely appreciate your assistanoe
in answering the following:
How did you f ir s t become acquainted with and or interested in
Sylvia P la th 's poetry and ARIEL in particular?
Why aid how did you choose the fiv e selections in your composition
fran a l l o f the ARIEL poems?
Ear what purpose or reason did you choose the combination of
soprano, clarin et and piano as opposed to other voice or
instrumental combinations?
Was there an in terpretative reason fo r choosing the clarinet as the
accompanying instrument?
Was there an Interpretative reason fa r choosing the voice
classi f icat ion of soprano as opposed to the mezzo-soprano voice?
Any other insights or experiences you can give to me about ARIEL
would be very helpful. Enclosed is a self-addressed, stamped
envelope fa r your convenience. Blank you for your time and
assistanoe. I t is sincerely appreciated.
Cordially,

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NED ROREM
31 August 37

AHI3L was composed as a g i f t fo r my dear fr ie n d ,


P h y llis S u r t in , and the choice o f instrum ents was h e r s.
P la th 's v e r s e s , w hich had ju s t been published
; rtiO)
a t th a t t i a e \ . seemed apt fo r C u r tin 's sound and s t y l e , and
f o r my view o f the world . rtadriarimtjaaat
In my various books I 'v e w r itte n a t len gth about
my e s t h e t ic regarding words & m u sic, a ls o jqc about ARI31 in
p a r t ic u la r . Forgive me, but I haven’ t the tim e to answer
your q u e s tio n s more d eep ly. Srarrnw-Mnrhi Nor are th ere deeper
answ ers. I t ' s fo r you t o decide w hether th e piece succeeds or
f a i l s on i t s own terms.
Good lu ck .
Send me your paper when f in is h e d .

Best

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APPENDIX B

The Hanged Man

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THE HANGED M AN.

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BIOGRAPHICAL SKETCH

Beverly Hubbard C la flin was born in W ichita, Kansas, on


September 26, 1957. She received her elementary and secondary
education in the Derby Public Schools, graduating from Derby High
School. In 1975 she entered Friends University o f W ichita, Kansas,
and was awarded a Bachelor o f Music Education in 1979. In 1982 she
received a Master of Music in Vocal Performance from Wichita State
U n iversity. She moved to Arizona and was accepted in to the doctoral
program in vocal performance a t Arizona State U niversity in 1982. She
has been the recipient o f numerous vocal and operatic scholarships as
well as the 1985 winner of the Metropolitan Opera Auditions in the
Arizona D is t r ic t . She curren tly performs throughout the United States
and Mexico, teaches voice, and serves as President to the Arizona
Central-Northern Chapter o f the National Association o f Teachers of
Singing.

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