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Writing task 1- map

Draft 1

The pictures give information about the innovations of a place of Lakeside in 2000
and 2009.

Overall, the place witnessed a wide range of significant developments over nine
years. Particularly, the town had less green space; therefore, there was more
accommodation to the built.

Regarding considerable innovation, the Disused warehouses were converted into

car park; similarly, an office with a large scale replaced the old town in 2009.
Moreover, a multi-screen cinema was introduced in the place of art center, but with
a bigger size. Therefore, the school near by art center was smaller; however, the
quantity of it increased. Notably, the period of nine years experienced a remove in
housing area to make way for a shopping center.

When it comes to some minor transformations, a university was constructed to the

right of office in 2009. Noticeably, in the south-east of the river, not only the
residential area was demolished, but the lake and woodland were shrunk. This is
because the demand of more space to widen the industrial area.