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And Used Twice To Display Continuation: World Literature Set Texts
And Used Twice To Display Continuation: World Literature Set Texts
OVERALL: The fact that the lines and sentence lengths increase with every line underscore the
buildup of the significance of storytelling and the whole process before it takes place. Shortness
of initial lines conveys how bluntly depressing the setting was.
The poet commences the poem with an extremely simple sentence: ‘she sat down,’ which serves to immediately
underscore the simplicity and rudimentary nature of the setting and the storyteller herself. The fact that she does
not capitalize ‘she’ depicts how seemingly insignificant she is in the grand scheme of things, and is merely an
ordinary woman. It subtly depicts the routineness of the storytelling: the lack of any sort of extravagance or
grandeur from the verb ‘sat’ shows that this was nothing out of the ordinary. The visual image of a woman ‘sitting’
at a table in a kitchen gives an illusion of someone willing to share their ideas/stories in front of a group of
listeners; the act of ‘sitting’ heralds a routine session of story-telling, putting a full-stop to all sorts of other activity.
Age-divide very clearly established, esp. when children can yet dream: storytelling is a shield,
while adults are held in the clutches of poverty.
FRATERNIZING FORCE: Spinning, weaving bit, 5 or 40 fingers stitched conveys number of people
ALLOWS ONE TO DREAM, ESCAPE MECHANISM: Talk about age divide, ‘hung’ denotes rush of
blood to head or nocturnal nature of stories; strongest at night.
HOW VITAL IT IS: Job, actual work for storyteller, magical realism
ENTERTAINMENT: no tech
How does the poet strikingly portray the significance of storytelling in ‘Storyteller’?
Storytelling has always proved to be a medium to transmit ideas, often between generations; it is the
way we have gained the experience of enjoying the myths and tales we love today. ‘Storyteller’ by
Scottish poet Liz Lochhead, however, presents a vastly differing view of storytelling to the audience, in
its portrayal of storytelling as something that brings people together, allows one to escape from reality,
and is, most importantly, vital to ones’ existence. The poem makes this depiction of the significance of
storytelling all the more striking and evocative through the rampant use of figurative language, stylistic
devices, and metaphors – all culminating in an immaculate magical realist piece that sheds light on a
non-mainstream narrative: the lives of poor women, at a time when the advent of technology was far in
the future.
Firstly, Lochhead conveys storytelling as an entity that serves to fraternize; it brings people together in
one place at one time to listen to a story in harmony: an overarching blanket under which the
impoverished can let go the over-exhaustion of a day and step into another realm. This is clear right
from the opening line of the poem, which establishes an image of the setting: ‘she sat down.’ The
utilization of the simple, unadorned verb ‘sat’ subtly underscores the routineness of the exercise; the
sentence provides the illusion of the narrator sitting at a table in front of a multitude of eager listeners,
putting a full-stop to any other activity. The number of people who pose as an audience is also explicitly
stated as ‘five to forty’, giving the reader a very insightful sense of the number of people who listen to
the stories, which can vary between five and even as large as forty people at times: the immense
number of people crammed into one small space, perhaps in a kitchen, strongly highlights the subpar
living conditions experienced on a daily basis, but also the staunch intent of the people to listen: they
will flock in ludicrous numbers just to revel in the spirit of storytelling, turning the undesirable image of
claustrophobia into one characterized by harmony. The idea of fraternity and unity is further reinforced
through the poet’s rich metaphorical comparisons of the flow of the story to the ‘spinning’ of a thread,
as seen in stanzas 2 and 3. The fact that the narrator ‘spins’ her tales to form the ‘single
strongest/thread’ is a profusion of poetic devices: the enjambment of the word ‘strongest’ lays an
indubitable emphasis to it, a testament to perhaps the wilfulness and collective power possessed by
each member of the listening audience when accrued together: they stand united and are bound by a
single ‘thread’: a thread of their overarching hardships and predicaments of daily life. The sibilance
utilized further harmonizes the flow of the poem to the reader, giving rise to a rhythmic effect. These
sounds, when read aloud, significantly contribute to both the flow of the poem – and the story being
hypothetically told in the poem – keeping both the poetic and real audience drawn in.
Secondly, Lochhead brilliantly
TRIBULATION
MAGICAL REALISM: enchants readers despite harsh reality: magical element in whorl of ear.
Inclusion of fictional, mythical and fantastic elements into a realist piece
Fricative F sounds are strong at the end of the
poem: first, fire, feet felt, flat fields. F is a soft sound suiting the washed-out
feel of this tepid grey morning.
Main themes/bullets:
Metaphors and symbolism: of bees and implicit references to rich lifestyles;
Structural features: rhetorical qs creates emotion; hyphens to create pauses;
antithetical parallelism used in stanza 6 w/ lines separated by pauses to convey
juxtaposing thoughts
Imagery: brutal visual and kinaesthetic imagery to magnify the oppression
Firstly, Shelley uses metaphors and symbolism to efficaciously shed light on and portray the
grave oppression of those languishing at the bottom of the Medieval Feudal hierarchy: the
Serfs. The bee metaphor is the most prominent among these; the frequent comparisons to
‘drones,’ who are the undisputed heads, or leaders at the very top of the hierarchy, implicitly
references the fact that the overlords above take advantage of those below, and are quite
‘ungrateful,’ showing no gratitude or even acknowledgement of serfs. In stanza 3, overlords are
‘stingless,’ perhaps intrinsically elucidating the fact that these people have already ‘stung’ and
caused immense pain to the lower classes, and have no real authority or competence. Thus,
through this comparison, Shelley tries to evoke a sense of defiance in the serfs, conveying that
those in power are not capable enough, and they are being oppressed like the worker bees in
the beehive, in order for the despotic, tyrannical ‘drones’ to benefit. They are explicitly referred
to as ‘Bees of England,’ where the capitalization of ‘B’ is especially powerful, as Shelley may
possibly be suggesting that those people at the lowest levels of this oppressive, regressive
system need more significance and respect in society. This also inherently depicts their reliance
on serfs; without their pain and tribulations, they cannot survive, giving them a very diabolical
effect; they are akin to vampires – who ‘suck on the blood’ of those below – another metaphor
so brilliantly utilized to buttress the fact that the lieges use them to the fullest, giving them
nothing to sustain themselves, instead profiting off their misery. This hence evokes a sense of
pity and empathy in the reader; the use of metaphors, and comparisons to bees makes it more
relatable and amplifies its impact to the maximum. Distinct income gap displayed through these
metaphors conveys Marxist undertones: the reader realizes that Shelley calls for equality,
noting the plight of the poor.
CALLS FOR A SUBVERSION OF THE OVERLORDS AND FEUDAL HIERARCHAL STRUCTURE; A
DEFENESTRATION OF THEIR AUTHORITY AND MIGHT
Main points:
Historical contexts and references
Visual imagery (‘entombed’, etc)
Structural features
Pathos and feelings of guilt as a medium of relay; man v/s. nature conflict?
Lament
For the green turtle with her pulsing burden,
in search of the breeding ground.
For her eggs laid in their nest of sickness.
For the cormorant in his funeral silk,
the veil of iridescence on the sand,
the shadow on the sea.
For the ocean’s lap with its mortal stain.
For Ahmed at the closed border.
For the soldier with his uniform of fire.
For the gunsmith and the armourer,
the boy fusilier who joined for the company,
the farmer’s sons, in it for the music.
For the hook-beaked turtles,
the dugong and the dolphin,
the whale struck dumb by the missile’s thunder.
For the tern, the gull and the restless wader,
the long migrations and the slow dying,
the veiled sun and the stink of anger.
For the burnt earth and the sun put out,
the scalded ocean and the blazing well.
For vengeance, and the ashes of language.
Main points:
Use of visual imagery
‘for’ and other diction choices made
Portrayal of war as something that wrecks earth and people: human dimension explored
The Flower-Fed Buffaloes
The flower-fed buffaloes of the spring
In the days of long ago,
Ranged where the locomotives sing
And the prairie flowers lie low:—
The tossing, blooming, perfumed grass
Is swept away by the wheat,
Wheels and wheels and wheels spin by
In the spring that still is sweet.
But the flower-fed buffaloes of the spring
Left us, long ago.
They gore no more, they bellow no more,
They trundle around the hills no more:—
With the Blackfeet, lying low,
With the Pawnees, lying low,
Lying low.
MAIN POINTS
Age differences
Carpet Weavers, Morocco
by Carol Rumens
Idea of parochialism: her focus on one particular area and case-study of children
MAIN POINTS:
Irony
Visual imagery (dark-rose veins evokes danger and health risk posed) + metaphors
Structural features (the, their, their and its repetitive effects; full stops serves to depict
bluntness of their lives and how bleak they are)
Cultural differences = pathos + parochialism; her attention to detail gives insight into
social aspects that contribute to plight of children such as exploitation