EXPERIENCE IN QUARENTINE BUT CORRECT

This year has been extremely difficult for me and my family. My university's classes started at march, but
three days later begun the quarantine. So I had to return to my city, Chincha. I had many plans to do with
my friends in Lima, I was going to go to a concert, but all those plans past away because of the pandemic.
Here in Chincha, some members of my family almost died because of coronavirus, me and my father
travelled all the time to Ica and Pisco to get the oxygen my family needed for surviving. Fortunately, they
are here today and they are healthy.
Now I’m in the 8th semester of my career, this last month I have been studying all I can and helping to my
family all I can too. Once a week I visit to my girlfriend and we watch movies and ask some food for
delivery. I hope this year ends soon and next year I can return to my university and get together with my
friends. First thing I'm going to do with them is playing basketball. I will enjoy all the time I can with my
loved ones.

CORRECCION:
This year has been extremely difficult for me and my family. My university's classes started in march, but
three days later the quarantine began. So I had to return to my city, Chincha. I had many plans to do with
my friends in Lima, I was going to go to a concert, but all those plans never happened because of the
pandemic.
Here in Chincha, some members of my family almost died because of coronavirus, my father and I travelled
all the time to Ica and Pisco to get the oxygen my family needed for surviving. Fortunately, they are here
today and they are healthy.
Now I’m in the 8th semester of my career, this last month I have been studying all I can and I’ve been
helping to my family too. I visit to my girlfriend once a week and we watch movies and we ask some food
for delivery. I hope this year ends soon and next year I can return to my university and get together with
my friends. First thing I'm going to do with them is playing basketball. I will enjoy all the time I can with my
loved ones.