Peer review form: essay

Name: Siti Komariah

Classmate’s name: m.furqon
Title of classmate’s essay:
Date
1. What is the topic?The impact of global warming on human life and the environment is not a myth.

2. Is the essay expository or persuasive?expository

3. Write the thesis statement …………The impact of global warming on human life and the environment is not a
myth. These impacts have occurred, affect us everyday, whether we realize it or not. The various consequences of
global warming are negative and counter-productive to humans and the biodiversity on earth.

4.How many body paragraphs are there? Two paragraph

5.Does the introduction have a hook? …Yes…………what other information is in the introduction? The various
consequences of global warming are negative and counter-productive to humans and the biodiversity on earth.

6.Underline the topic sentence in each body paragraph. If you can’t fine one. Note it here:
The impact of global warming on human life and the environment is not a myth.
7.Write the number of each body paragraph and then explain what type of support were used for each paragraph.
……explain cause and
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8. Does the conclusion tie back to the introduction?..........what functions does the conclusion

fulfill?..........yes................

…Its function is to reaffirm to the reader the theme presented and a brief explanation of the contents of the

exposition text.

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9. Write a question mark (?) by anything in the essay that you didn’t understand. Write a short note to explain if

possible.

we have to realize is that global warming is not only a natural factor but also a human factor in it, isn't it?
 the earth which should be a comfortable place for humans to live, eat, socialize, also have families, is a threat to

themselves.

10. On the essay, draw a star (*) by the two sentences you liked best.

Any other comments:

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Name : Mohamad Furqon
Nim : 18.02.007

Global Warming
The impact of global warming on human life and the environment is not a myth. These impacts have
occurred, affect us everyday, whether we realize it or not. The various consequences of global warming are
negative and counter-productive to humans and the biodiversity on earth.
1.Although there are several types that benefit from global warming, it is only a small part. *There are
some serious effects when we ignore the threat of globalization which continues to increase in level every day,
humans are partly unaware of how sick the earth is so that it continues to destroy green land which is the lungs of
the earth and also the lungs of humans, some of these effects are. melting g letser, the occurrence of climate
change, Increasing and increasing drought , Widespread disease, Increased storm frequency ,Rising sea levels,
affect agriculture , Heat Wave , forest fire , The duration of the season is longer or shorter, Impact on crops,
Damage to marine ecosystems, Food chains in ecosystems, Increased health risks, Animal extinctions.
2.Of every impact that affects living things on earth. not only affects human life as well as humans but also
other living things on land and in the sea. What we have to realize is that global warming is not only a natural
factor but also a human factor in it, the earth which should be a comfortable place for humans to live, eat,
socialize, also have family, is a threat to themselves. The illusion of paper money becomes a means of validating
the destruction of this earth, for some people it makes the earth a mine that must be digged no matter how deep it
is, no matter the danger that will threaten him, but not only he is threatened but the environment and people in
surrounding felt the impact.
*For this reason, awareness of the dangers of globalization must grow in every human being, because to
protect this ecosystem it cannot be by one person or group alone but it is the responsibility of every human being
they live in. starting from small steps such as limited plastic use and not throwing it anywhere but to the place that
has been provided, it is a small step but if every human being is aware of it it will have a big impact on the
environment.