Activity: Finalization of Chapters 1 – 2
Instructions:
 Revise the Chapters 1-2 of your research paper based on the comments of your previous teacher.
 As you revise your paper, complete the table below with the list of suggestions, action taken, and specific
parts of the paper where action has reflected.
Summary of Suggestions, Comments and Action Taken/Response to
Questions Made by Reviewers Questions
What are the suggestions, comments, What have you done to attend
and/or questions in your paper? to the suggestions, comments,
and/or questions in the paper?
If no changes were made,
justify here.
Remove Sir Eleias Escora’s name from the Removed the name Eleias
paper and replace it with the appropriate Escora and added Ms. Noon
name of the current research teacher. Elzeiber and added Ms. Shirley
Pena
Correct the formatting of other descriptions Corrected the formatting to
(Logos, photos, figures, etc) match the appropriate format
(Changed font size, bold,
Indention)
Include photo visualizations for the planned Inserted photo visualization for
products our abaca face mask & face
shield.
Increase the size of photos in the paper Adjusted the size of the photo
of the business model
Elaborate some details of the paper Further elaborated the initial
especially in chapter 2 process based on the business
model
Proofread and correct grammatical Deleted some redundant words
mistakes of the paper and changed phrases
Adjust the design of other visualizations Adjust the hierarchy of the
management team
Make changes to the SWOT Analysis Added one more strength of
the business
Add the missing GANTT Chart from the Added GANTT Chart on the
paper latest draft
Task Details:
 Submit your work on the submission link that will be provided by your teacher through Teams (or
Canvas, if available).
 Deadline of Submission is next week January 11, 2021
Specific Parts Reflected
In which part of the paper
is/are the change/s
located/reflected?
(Chapter > Section >
Paragraph / Number /
Bullet)
Chapter 1 > Endorsement
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.1.2
Enterprise logo
Chapter 2>Chapter 2.1.4.1
Abaca Face Mask
Chapter 2>Chapter 2.1.4.2
Bamboo Face Shield
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.5
Business model
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.5
Business model
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.6.2
Promotion Strategy
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.8.1
Background of the
management team
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.10>
Chapter 2.10.1 SWOT
Analysis of the business
Chapter 2> Chapter 2.11
Rubric:

Criteria Outstanding Good Fair Needs Ratin Multiplie Score

(4) (3) (2) Improvement g r
(1)
Acting on All (1-5) (6-10) (More than x12
Panel’s comments / comment(s) / Comments / 10)
Comment suggestion suggestion(s) suggestions Comments /
s from the from the from the suggestions
panels are panels are panels are from the
actioned upon; NOT actioned NOT actioned panels are
changes upon and did upon and did NOT actioned
reflect on the not reflect on not reflect on upon and did
revised the revised the revised not reflect on
research research research the revised
paper. paper. paper. research
paper.
Quality of The summary (1-5) entry(ies) (6-10) (More than x9
Summary of corrections on the entry(ies) on 10) entry(ies)
of is complete, summary of the summary on the
Correction “action done” corrections is of corrections summary of
s column is clear either missing, is either corrections is
and detailed, unclear, and missing, either
“specific parts not detailed. unclear, and missing,
reflected” not detailed. unclear, and
column entry not detailed.
leads to the
part of the
paper that
needs to be
checked.
Group Smooth Good Connection Connection x4
Rapport connection, connection and and
and harmonious and communicatio harmonious
Punctualit communicatio communicatio n are at least communicatio
y n, and active n, active observable in n are not
participation participation, the group. observable in
and and Some the group.
cooperation cooperation of members do They do not
among the most of the not actively exhibit active
members of members of participate participation
the group are the group are and and
evident which noticeable cooperate. cooperation
facilitate very which create The group in
fluid and effective struggles to approaching
effective teamwork for pose and
teamwork most teamwork in completing
towards parts/aspects their the task in
completion of of the task at completion of general.
the task. hand. Submits the task. These reflect
Submits work work on time. Submits work the absence
on time. 1 day beyond of teamwork
the deadline. in the group.
Submits work
more that 2
days beyond
the deadline.
Total: ___/10
0